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Name: Anamika Tripathi
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anamikam_vns   
Jul 7, 2015
Writing Feedback / In any situation, progress requires discussion among people who have contrasting points of view. [2]

Discussion play an important role to find best solution of any problem. It would be more beneficial when it will be among people with contrasting ideas. Therefore, I believe that people requires conversation among people who have contrasting point of view. I have following reason to support my view.

First, Debate on any problem leads many way to solve them. For instance, when I was in college. Professor assigned project for every group. There was five student in my group. We started our project, every student presented his point of view for that project problem. Finally, we solved our problem with best two way and we secured excellent grade in our project. Thus, In my opinion conversation is good way to progress

Second, discussion can resolves many social issues. For example, we can protect wild life and our environment by different way. For instance, some will suggest that have to cut off use of automobile vehicle and some will say we should use solar energy automobile to cut off smog and to protect our environment. But, it's possible with discussion , to come up with many ideas to solve any issue. So, I will promote conversation among people.

Finally, conversation makes our relationship bond stronger. For example, conversation between husband and wife makes their married life successful. For consideration, there are many points in a couples life on which they have different opinion. But, a healthy conservation resolve their problem and makes their bond more stronger.

In conclusion , I would say that conversation is the key point to resolve any problems or issues.
anamikam_vns   
Jun 27, 2015
Writing Feedback / Students broad spectrum of knowledge? It would be an important step to improve their personality. [2]

Educational is a weapon from which we can do anything. Higher and broad spectrum knowledge make us more stronger and confident person. Therefore, I believe that student should take variety of course to improve their personality. It would be possible if university include under their curriculum. I have few points to support my idea.

Firstly, As I said earlier, broad field knowledge would improve students personality. Thus, they can solve their problems more easily either related to their job or related to their life . For example, if someone working in a multinational company as an engineer and has knowledge about management and mathematics besides engineering then he can solve customer and marketing related problem along with his engineering job. Therefore, knowledge always help to solve problem and improves you personally.

Secondly, variety of knowledge help someone to get high paid job and good position in a company. For instance, if someone has knowledge of different field then he has more possibility to pass interview of high paid job. Because nowadays interviewer check interviewee knowledge very thoroughly by asking different background question. Hence, it is advantageous for students to have knowledge of different field.

Finally, students would be a responsible and good human being. For example, if students get chance to study variety of course outside his field of study then they would have knowledge related to environment and they will know how they can protect earth from global warming. Additionally, they would have knowledge related to human body and they will know how to good diet improves their health. They would have knowledge related to history then they will know how much important historical things are. Therefore, I feel that university should require every student to take variety of courses outside the student's field of study.

In conclusion, I would say that it will be an important step to improve student personality and make them a good and responsible person.
anamikam_vns   
Jun 27, 2015
Writing Feedback / The controversial issue - how to combine spendings for education with sport and recreation? [6]

1> Instead of there you should write there are in writing English.

2> Many places you used short form as there're, you've but in writing English you should use full words.

3> In my point of view, I think it's best to advance these two edges of life, according to the reasons as follows: Instead you should write, In my point of view , I believe that theses two area is also important because of following reasons.
anamikam_vns   
Jun 25, 2015
Writing Feedback / The appreciation for positive actions is the best way to teach [5]

The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones.

Human is a social animal. They lives in society and learn from their surrounding. A person started to learn from his birth and learning continues until the end of his life. Praise enhances enthusiasm to learn anything. Therefore, I believe that praise for positive action is best way to teach. I have few points to support my instances.

Firstly, appreciation makes our moral high for learning difficult things . When we want to achieve something, which is difficult and hard to learn if somebody boost up us then we can get than goal. For instance, when I was in class eighth, I got poor mark in history. I lost my confidence to do better in next exam. At that time my parents inspired to praise my character. Thus, their inspiration boost up my confidence and in next exam I secured excellent mark. So, from my point of view its important to praise someone for positive action .

Secondly, praise for good habit makes us good citizen. For example, a person started learn things form his childhood. Thus, what we teach our child in childhood reflects his future. If we teach him to through chocolates wrappers and plastic bottles in trash bin and teach him to keep environment clean then defiantly they will have same habit in adulthood and even life. But we have to praise him every time for his good action from childhood. Hence, I feel it is important to praise child good actions form childhood then gradually he know which action is good and which one is bad.

Finally, We can find out talents of person by praising him for his work. For example, if a child start learning art then may first few art will not be good. So it does not mean he does not know about art and start criticize. However, we should praise for his talent. May be after some time he will be a good artist.

Therefore, At last I want to say that appreciation for positive actions is best way to teach.
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