tamaraw12345
Jul 6, 2015
Writing Feedback / An essay about Christian Philosophy [3]
I was asked to write a very short essay on how I can relate my school's Christian philosophy to my life as a student. I was wondering if my grammar and style are sufficient for college writing.
"The Christian-inspired pedagogy of ABC University inspires me to put God at the center of my education. This is so because Godliness is the foundation of knowledge. Without revering God, we would most
likely succumb to intellectual effrontery and pride. But when God is
at the center of learning, we are reminded that knowledge should serve
a noble purpose; that is, to inspire and empower everyone to become a catalyst of change. As a communication student, this requires me to use to the gift of speech responsibly. Like the school, my goal is to use
the internet to help improve public awareness on pressing social issues. Particularly, using the social media, I will participate in the growing efforts to promote, above all,
equality and justice."
I was asked to write a very short essay on how I can relate my school's Christian philosophy to my life as a student. I was wondering if my grammar and style are sufficient for college writing.
"The Christian-inspired pedagogy of ABC University inspires me to put God at the center of my education. This is so because Godliness is the foundation of knowledge. Without revering God, we would most
likely succumb to intellectual effrontery and pride. But when God is
at the center of learning, we are reminded that knowledge should serve
a noble purpose; that is, to inspire and empower everyone to become a catalyst of change. As a communication student, this requires me to use to the gift of speech responsibly. Like the school, my goal is to use
the internet to help improve public awareness on pressing social issues. Particularly, using the social media, I will participate in the growing efforts to promote, above all,
equality and justice."
