mina_banoo
Jul 21, 2015
Writing Feedback / It's more important to work at a job you enjoy , even if the salary is low. [7]
i think you must use fit to instead of fit.
i think you must use fit to instead of fit.
mina_banoo
Jul 10, 2015
Graduate / Similarities and differences between me and my cousin [2]
I remember when I and my cousin were child, Everyone who has seen we for first time, they think we are sister; however, I think there are some differences between us. Considering the appearance of us, although both of us like to play with boys, unlike her, I like to cut my hairs on boys' style. I am very much been in my privacy; in contrast, she loves parties and social activities. Furthermore, I watched much more movies than she did.
The similarities between us, however, outweigh our differences. We have also a lot in common. Considering the appearance both of us have black hairs, white skin and brown eyes. We are both hard working and industrious about our assignments and responsibilities. Not only does she like doing exercises like swimming and playing tennis, but, just like me, she enjoys dancing and listening to music. I like my cousin a lot and hope to be health and happy forever.
I remember when I and my cousin were child, Everyone who has seen we for first time, they think we are sister; however, I think there are some differences between us. Considering the appearance of us, although both of us like to play with boys, unlike her, I like to cut my hairs on boys' style. I am very much been in my privacy; in contrast, she loves parties and social activities. Furthermore, I watched much more movies than she did.
The similarities between us, however, outweigh our differences. We have also a lot in common. Considering the appearance both of us have black hairs, white skin and brown eyes. We are both hard working and industrious about our assignments and responsibilities. Not only does she like doing exercises like swimming and playing tennis, but, just like me, she enjoys dancing and listening to music. I like my cousin a lot and hope to be health and happy forever.
