Letters / Letter for research opportunity position - collaborative governance [2]

I want to apply for research opportunity, please help me for correcting this letter:

Subject : Prospective research opportunity position - collaborative governance.

Dear Dr....

I am PhD student of public policy in Iran and recently have developed a research about the reasons of the partnership complexities in the collaborative governance considering developing countries especially in xxx.

I have read your journal article "xxxx". And really I was surprised by the framework when I think the 'xxx' may be one of the reasons of collaboration complexities in developing countries. So by inspiration of this framework I have made conceptual framework in my proposal "yyyyy"

I am interested in your field of study and would like to know about research opportunities to work with you.
Looking forward for your reply