MingzeLi
Sep 5, 2015
Writing Feedback / SAT: We learn more from mistakes than our success - I have experienced it myself in the real life [2]
Thanks so much for helping me! I have no experience at all in writhing this kind of essay so I have no idea how to write it. I rewrote the introduction and the conclusion, did what you told me to in 2nd and 3rd paragraph.
INTRODUCTION
Since we are born, we start making mistakes. We figure out why it goes wrong and try to do it again. Some of us give up during this process because they've learned that the results they are approaching is harder to approach than they think, while the others keep correcting their mistakes and trying until they success. Both in these two situation, whether they success or not is just an outcome for what they have learned of the process. Through my own experiences, I have discovered that we learn more from our mistakes than our success.
2ND PARAGRAPH
When I was 8 years old, our teacher always give us a reading mission that due on Friday and there would be a quiz on Friday. Knowing that, I used to delay my reading until the last night. However, one day the teacher removed the quiz day on Thursday. With no wonder, I failed that quiz. After that, I learned to plan things prior and have never delayed anything until the deadline.From making this mistake, I've learned what to do in order to avoid making it again and finally success finding the method not delaying my homework.
3RD PARAGRAPH
CONCLUSION
Success is only a result. Nobody is perfect enough to reach this result at the first time without making any mistakes. In addition, because we all make mistakes and try to figure out why, that is exact how we gain more experience and knowledge. They help us avoid repeating the same mistake in our way to success. Therefore, I believe we learn more from our mistakes than our success.
Thanks so much for helping me! I have no experience at all in writhing this kind of essay so I have no idea how to write it. I rewrote the introduction and the conclusion, did what you told me to in 2nd and 3rd paragraph.
INTRODUCTION
Since we are born, we start making mistakes. We figure out why it goes wrong and try to do it again. Some of us give up during this process because they've learned that the results they are approaching is harder to approach than they think, while the others keep correcting their mistakes and trying until they success. Both in these two situation, whether they success or not is just an outcome for what they have learned of the process. Through my own experiences, I have discovered that we learn more from our mistakes than our success.
2ND PARAGRAPH
When I was 8 years old, our teacher always give us a reading mission that due on Friday and there would be a quiz on Friday. Knowing that, I used to delay my reading until the last night. However, one day the teacher removed the quiz day on Thursday. With no wonder, I failed that quiz. After that, I learned to plan things prior and have never delayed anything until the deadline.From making this mistake, I've learned what to do in order to avoid making it again and finally success finding the method not delaying my homework.
3RD PARAGRAPH
CONCLUSION
Success is only a result. Nobody is perfect enough to reach this result at the first time without making any mistakes. In addition, because we all make mistakes and try to figure out why, that is exact how we gain more experience and knowledge. They help us avoid repeating the same mistake in our way to success. Therefore, I believe we learn more from our mistakes than our success.