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Name: Joshua Villacorta
Joined: Oct 13, 2015
Last Post: Oct 14, 2015
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School: North Gwinnett High School

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Oct 14, 2015
Undergraduate / Georgia Tech acceptance essay (Max: 150 words) - such a great college that's so close to my home [4]

Thank you so much for the elaborate feedback! I've thought about what you said and I edited my answer. Tell me what you think:

Georgia Tech provides a challenging, yet rewarding college experience that combines a rigorous coursework with scientific research and developmental opportunities. After taking computer science classes in high school, I can further explore my interest in computer science at the acclaimed College of Computing, where I can participate in groundbreaking undergraduate research and student organizations such as the Association for Computing Machinery and MAKE. I like to apply what I've learned and through the Co-Op and International Study programs, I can gain real-world experience and valuable life skills that will help me succeed in the global marketplace. As someone who values a balance between an academic and social life, I admire Georgia Tech's commitment to creating a safe and diverse community, where students can participate in recreational activities, Greek organizations, and student organizations. I think Georgia Tech will offer me the quintessential college experience that will pave my path to success.
joshuav523   
Oct 13, 2015
Undergraduate / Georgia Tech acceptance essay (Max: 150 words) - such a great college that's so close to my home [4]

Georgia Tech provides a challenging, yet rewarding college experience that combines a rigorous coursework with scientific research and developmental opportunities. After taking computer science classes in high school, I can further explore my interest in computer science at the acclaimed College of Computing, where I can participate in groundbreaking undergraduate research and student organizations such as the Association for Computing Machinery and MAKE. As someone who wants to apply what I've learned, the Co-Op program can allow me to apply my knowledge into the real world while the International Study program can help me gain international experience and learn valuable life skills that will help me succeed in the global marketplace. With its acclaimed computing and engineering programs, diverse student body, advanced research facilities, multiple professional opportunities, and various student organizations, Georgia Tech will offer me the quintessential college experience to help me succeed in the future.

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I live about half an hour away from Georgia Tech and I'd be thrilled to get accepted to such a great college that's so close to my home. I want to make sure all my essays and supplemental questions are good enough. I'm open to all criticisms and suggestions. Thanks!
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