sedgerton
Oct 19, 2015
Undergraduate / Top Architecture school, so prideful that simply creates a palpable electricity - why to be a Hokie? [4]
This is my essay for Virginia Tech admission. Grammar and content feedback would be appreciative. Thanks so much!!
Virginia Tech has many unique qualities, from their inescapable school colors to their Hokie pride; Virginia Tech makes the college experience a memorable one.
I became interested in this school when I found out it was ranked the top Architecture school in the state. My passion it to become an Interior Designer, and with the help of Virginia Tech's superior faculty, I can fulfill my dreams. While touring the school, I became acquainted with the diversity of the student body. Diversity among students is an important and attractive attribute of going to college because interacting with different kinds of people enriches my understanding of the world. After falling in love with Tech's beautiful Hokie Stone and their comforting town, I signed up to attend the Inside Architecture+Design camp in the summer of 2015. That week at Virginia Tech taught me extraordinary things about the school and made me get a feel of what being a Hokie was all about. It is common knowledge that Hokies do not lack any school spirit. Wherever they may be, Hokies exude so much pride and love for their school that they create a palpable electricity. Hokies bind together forming lifelong friends and remain loyal to their beloved school. Once a Hokie, always a Hokie.
This is my essay for Virginia Tech admission. Grammar and content feedback would be appreciative. Thanks so much!!
Virginia Tech has many unique qualities, from their inescapable school colors to their Hokie pride; Virginia Tech makes the college experience a memorable one.
I became interested in this school when I found out it was ranked the top Architecture school in the state. My passion it to become an Interior Designer, and with the help of Virginia Tech's superior faculty, I can fulfill my dreams. While touring the school, I became acquainted with the diversity of the student body. Diversity among students is an important and attractive attribute of going to college because interacting with different kinds of people enriches my understanding of the world. After falling in love with Tech's beautiful Hokie Stone and their comforting town, I signed up to attend the Inside Architecture+Design camp in the summer of 2015. That week at Virginia Tech taught me extraordinary things about the school and made me get a feel of what being a Hokie was all about. It is common knowledge that Hokies do not lack any school spirit. Wherever they may be, Hokies exude so much pride and love for their school that they create a palpable electricity. Hokies bind together forming lifelong friends and remain loyal to their beloved school. Once a Hokie, always a Hokie.
