poloniumx
Oct 22, 2015
Undergraduate / A person want to meet - my grandfather. Personal Statement. [5]
Prompt: If you could spend one day with any person (living or deceased) who would it be and why? What would you want them to know about you?
word limit:250
I do not know how to end with my personal statement. With that, check my grammar also. Really appreciate your help.
If I can spend one day with anyone, then I want to meet my grandfather. When I was 9years old, I met my grandfather for very first time. My mother suddenly brought me to the restaurant and while going there, she talked about her father. Before that, I did not even know that my mother's parents were divorced. At the restaurant, my mother and grandfather were mostly talking about something that I did not get, but I still felt mildness from him. After their talking was over, I talked about my school and friends. My grandfather was just sitting with smile on his face. After that, I could not see him again. It is, most likely, because of our family circumstance. However, if someone asks me who I want to spend a day, then my answer would be my grandfather. I When I meet him, I want to talk about my school life and my experience in US, Canada, and Japan. It has been 9years since first time of seeing grandfather. In that time frame, many things happened in my life and I want him to know more about me. I will share what I have done in school, both success and failure, and I also want to get some advice for my concerns as approaching to the adulthood (219)
Prompt: If you could spend one day with any person (living or deceased) who would it be and why? What would you want them to know about you?
word limit:250
I do not know how to end with my personal statement. With that, check my grammar also. Really appreciate your help.
If I can spend one day with anyone, then I want to meet my grandfather. When I was 9years old, I met my grandfather for very first time. My mother suddenly brought me to the restaurant and while going there, she talked about her father. Before that, I did not even know that my mother's parents were divorced. At the restaurant, my mother and grandfather were mostly talking about something that I did not get, but I still felt mildness from him. After their talking was over, I talked about my school and friends. My grandfather was just sitting with smile on his face. After that, I could not see him again. It is, most likely, because of our family circumstance. However, if someone asks me who I want to spend a day, then my answer would be my grandfather. I When I meet him, I want to talk about my school life and my experience in US, Canada, and Japan. It has been 9years since first time of seeing grandfather. In that time frame, many things happened in my life and I want him to know more about me. I will share what I have done in school, both success and failure, and I also want to get some advice for my concerns as approaching to the adulthood (219)
