madh83
Jul 24, 2007
Grammar, Usage / GRE Pro and Con Essay [2]
I was looking at this practice essay and was wondering if someone could give me feedback on the direction of my thinking:
1) Without Freedom, I would not want to be alive.
and you had to make a Pro or Con argument on it.
Personally, I was thinking the con argument would say that not all freedoms are good. That in order for civilization to have formed some freedoms had to have been given up. Freedoms that let you do anything you want, including stealing and killing.
Etc...
The only problem is I'm not sure if that's interpreting the word freedom too much. Would they only want it to mean that freedom as in all the good freedoms like speech and creed?
What do you think?
I was looking at this practice essay and was wondering if someone could give me feedback on the direction of my thinking:
1) Without Freedom, I would not want to be alive.
and you had to make a Pro or Con argument on it.
Personally, I was thinking the con argument would say that not all freedoms are good. That in order for civilization to have formed some freedoms had to have been given up. Freedoms that let you do anything you want, including stealing and killing.
Etc...
The only problem is I'm not sure if that's interpreting the word freedom too much. Would they only want it to mean that freedom as in all the good freedoms like speech and creed?
What do you think?
