bamabhai
Nov 28, 2015
Undergraduate / Bad Spaghetti - Stanford Supplement (Intellectual Vitality) [5]
Thank you for the critique all. I did post this before but then removed it after deciding I wouldn't be applying for early.
A lot of my friends told me this essay was rather average so I was apprehensive about it. Being an international, Stanford is need aware for me and I need a perfect essay since only a couple of students are taken from my country.
I might just decide to keep it if I'm unable to come up with something better.
Thank you andy_gowa for proofreading it and suggesting grammatical improvements.
Thank you for the critique all. I did post this before but then removed it after deciding I wouldn't be applying for early.
A lot of my friends told me this essay was rather average so I was apprehensive about it. Being an international, Stanford is need aware for me and I need a perfect essay since only a couple of students are taken from my country.
I might just decide to keep it if I'm unable to come up with something better.
Thank you andy_gowa for proofreading it and suggesting grammatical improvements.