Letters / Letter of Reccomendation for Education Master Program - on behalf of my Professor [8]

Hi, my name is Fadlila, I'm planning to apply to an education graduate program and my professor told me to write this letter of recommendation on his behalf, since he doesn't speak English. English isn't my first language either so my friend referred me to this website, I hope you could help me correcting this letter.

Thank you!

To Whom It May Concern;
It is my pleasure to recommend Fadlila for admission to your graduate program. I have known Fadlila for about four years (2011-2015) as one of the potential students in our undergraduate program. I came to know her better when I became her mentor in her thesis counseling. I'm impressed by her skills and her fortitude in social science field, particularly in elementary school education.

Fadlila was an undergraduate student in Elementary School Teacher Education program at Sebelas Maret University. Over her learning period in the undergraduate program, she showed her quality by constantly kept her excellent grades and consistently placed above her peers in terms of analyzing skills, critical thinking, and understanding the course material. She also maintained a GPA of 3.4 or better throughout the course and managed to graduate as top 5% in her batch with the CGPA of 3.71.

Her prominent traits are enthusiastic, ingenuous, and exceptionally dedicated as an education learner. Her devotion towards education is shown by her commitment when she did the internship as an elementary school teacher in XX Elementary School of Surakarta from September to November 2014. She performed not only as a teacher, but also manager of student extracurricular activities, counselor to the students with special needs, and she did it splendidly. Outside her activities in the campus, she built her experience to teach children by tutoring a student from XX Elementary School of Surakarta and a student from XX Junior High School as a part-time private teacher.

I consider her as a creative educator and still have so much potential in the subject; it is shown by her choice in her thesis to design the rarely used diorama media in her classroom action research, made of colorful clay into various objects according to the learning material to spark the interest of elementary school students and succeeded in attaining the better learning process and result. Fadlila has a promising writing skill and in overall good communication skill as well. She states her ideas clearly and examines her writing subject by doing an elaborate back-up research from various points of view, all written in a concise and comprehensive manner.

I am pleased that Fadlila is planning to enroll on graduate school to make the most of her potential. I believe that she has the competency and enthusiasm in the education world, and she is capable to complete a master's degree in a timely fashion with excellent result. I have no doubt that Fadlila will be a determined and dedicated student and she will grow into a capable academician.

I recommend her very highly and please feel free to contact me for any further information.

Regards,

Prof. XXXXX