Undergraduate / My aim is to become a Cardiovascular surgeon. Personal statement for a US student exchange program. [6]

I have written a personal statement for a US student exchange program. The essay (250 words) should be based on:

Your interests and personality
Your academic objectives
Your goals related to your field of study and personal development
The reasons why you wish to pursue them in the U.S.A and how it relates to your interests and future objectives

Heres my statement, tell me what u guys think?

As a student I have always kept a proper balance between my social and academic life.I have always been an outgoing person,sharing my experiences with people from all walks of life,going new places and meeting new people,learning different cultures and exchanging ideas.Cricket and football has been my favorite sports since childhood.Presently my interests include the sport of bodybuilding.

My aim is to become a Cardiovascular surgeon.I have learned from my childhood experiences that one has to work hard in order to become a good Doctor.With these goals in my mind,taking the medical field was an appropriate choice.From my first grade till my matriculation I topped my school and was also in the list of top 30 students of my college and now have the same kind of positive mentality for my university life.

My ultimate goal in life is to become a good doctor.Charity begins at home so I want to help the poor and NEEDY people of my country first.It would be a great opportunity to further polish and refine my skills,as the volume of good doctors in my appointed field is scarce in Pakistan.Later in life,my dream is to establish a hospital and facilitate people on a larger scale.

As it is said that the United States of America is the land of opportunities,so it would be a great chance for me to avail it. Secondly,America has one of the world's finest and prestigious universities,therefore,this program would further contribute to my resume and help me to have a more practical and on hand experience.