Andre kusuma
Nov 18, 2015
Writing Feedback / Australian people like watching movies in cinemas. IELTS WRITING TASK 1 [2]
A comparison of the propotion of places visited by different people living in Australia is illustrated in the bar chart. Overall, it can be seen that, Cinema is the popular place which are visited by people born in Australia and new migrants people born in Englih-speaking countries, while new migrants people born in other countries prefer to visit the library.
Zoo and theatre have been dominated by visitor from people Born in Australia, by 50% in zoo and 25% in Theather, wich are followed close behind by new migrants from English-speaking countries with around 10% differences, while new migrant born in other countries is the lowest visitor percentage in this places. In contrast, people born in other country show a superiority in the propotion resident who are visited library, exceeding 50%.
In cinema, People Born in Australia is by far the most visitor of the three group of Australian. Breaking a record of visitor by 70%, it is noted as the highest propotion of people who are visited some places. New migrants people stand at the second and third position with 65% for migrants born in English-speaking countries and 50% for the others.
A comparison of the propotion of places visited by different people living in Australia is illustrated in the bar chart. Overall, it can be seen that, Cinema is the popular place which are visited by people born in Australia and new migrants people born in Englih-speaking countries, while new migrants people born in other countries prefer to visit the library.
Zoo and theatre have been dominated by visitor from people Born in Australia, by 50% in zoo and 25% in Theather, wich are followed close behind by new migrants from English-speaking countries with around 10% differences, while new migrant born in other countries is the lowest visitor percentage in this places. In contrast, people born in other country show a superiority in the propotion resident who are visited library, exceeding 50%.
In cinema, People Born in Australia is by far the most visitor of the three group of Australian. Breaking a record of visitor by 70%, it is noted as the highest propotion of people who are visited some places. New migrants people stand at the second and third position with 65% for migrants born in English-speaking countries and 50% for the others.
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