malabami
Nov 24, 2015
Undergraduate / Wilsonville - for me it's all the world I've ever known [4]
I really like the imagery of your essay!
Just one suggestion, possibly directly address how your experience in the Korean culture enriched you. I know you briefly talk about it in the end but I would expand that a little bit more!
PS thanks for commenting on mine as well :) good luck with your applications
I really like the imagery of your essay!
Just one suggestion, possibly directly address how your experience in the Korean culture enriched you. I know you briefly talk about it in the end but I would expand that a little bit more!
PS thanks for commenting on mine as well :) good luck with your applications
