dance88
Nov 29, 2015
Undergraduate / "USC students are known to be involved." - USC Writing Supplement Short-Answer #1 [3]
Hey everyone! I am working on the USC Writing Supplement and I just finished the first short answer question. If you guys could help me edit it, that would be great! I often struggle with having a good voice and word choice in my essays, so feel free to make any recommendations. The prompt is stated first below, followed by my answer. Thank you so much for your help!
USC students are known to be involved. Briefly describe a non-academic pursuit (such as service to community or family, a club or sport, or work, etc.,) that best illustrates who you are, and why it is important to you. (250 word limit)
Words cannot describe the experience I've had working with special needs students this year. Every day, I have the privilege to spend just under an hour mentoring and playing with mentally disabled peers through a program offered to a handful of seniors at my school called BUDS. In just four months, I've developed closer relationships with these students than with most of the other kids at school who have surrounded me for three years. Although the BUDS students may look or think differently from the average teen, they do not let anything stop them from achieving their goals. They embrace each day with an open mind and a huge grin, ready to knock down any obstacle that their disability tries to spit at them.
I entered BUDS believing that I would be a helper to the special needs kids, yet I now see that these kids are just as much a helper to me as I am to them. They have taught me to have a positive outlook on life, that you must take the cards you're dealt and utilize them in the best way possible. They have taught me to be thankful for the small things in life because someone else is always fighter a harder battle. Most importantly, though, they have taught me to love unconditionally, regardless of any differences, because acceptance and affection are the most valuable gifts you can give someone.
Hey everyone! I am working on the USC Writing Supplement and I just finished the first short answer question. If you guys could help me edit it, that would be great! I often struggle with having a good voice and word choice in my essays, so feel free to make any recommendations. The prompt is stated first below, followed by my answer. Thank you so much for your help!
USC students are known to be involved. Briefly describe a non-academic pursuit (such as service to community or family, a club or sport, or work, etc.,) that best illustrates who you are, and why it is important to you. (250 word limit)
Words cannot describe the experience I've had working with special needs students this year. Every day, I have the privilege to spend just under an hour mentoring and playing with mentally disabled peers through a program offered to a handful of seniors at my school called BUDS. In just four months, I've developed closer relationships with these students than with most of the other kids at school who have surrounded me for three years. Although the BUDS students may look or think differently from the average teen, they do not let anything stop them from achieving their goals. They embrace each day with an open mind and a huge grin, ready to knock down any obstacle that their disability tries to spit at them.
I entered BUDS believing that I would be a helper to the special needs kids, yet I now see that these kids are just as much a helper to me as I am to them. They have taught me to have a positive outlook on life, that you must take the cards you're dealt and utilize them in the best way possible. They have taught me to be thankful for the small things in life because someone else is always fighter a harder battle. Most importantly, though, they have taught me to love unconditionally, regardless of any differences, because acceptance and affection are the most valuable gifts you can give someone.