Graduate / A prospective "OSCAR" winner - Profile writing_MBA application [3]

Hi everyone! Here is my profile. I need you guys opinion on the content and use of words. Thanks!

"A profile is a brief summary of your curriculum vitae or résumé that will grab the reader's attention. Your profile should be 150-200 words and written in the third person."FYI.

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Being obliging, sincere, committed, analytical and resilient, Janet is a prospective "OSCAR" winner in her self-directed life.

With a strong interest in finance and accounting, Janet has extensive internship experience in financial advisory, consulting and public accounting. As a valuation associate working in a global financial advisory firm, she is equipped with valuation technique and strong analytical and problem solving skills. She also demonstrates strong adaptability as well as ability to learn fast and work efficiently under pressure. Having been worked with people from many different countries, she is collaborative in cross-culture communication. Currently, she is completing level one of the CFA designation.

Suffering of physical injury did not defeat her, instead she became more mature and self-motivated with a passion for learning and community. She has been committed to sustainability promotion as well as female leadership development. To live a happy and fulfilling life, she is driven, open-minded and grateful.

Janet is interested in a career opportunity where she could leverage her skill sets, such as investment banking, commercial banking, financial planning, business analysis and corporate development.