Undergraduate / Extracurricular college essay about soccer-SHORT (150 words max) [3]

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In the corner of my bedroom lies a pair of soccer cleats, Clea, boasting her beautiful shine and tender age-lines. For now, she is relaxing off work, replaced by my curling boots during winter. Since day one, we have been through it all, from claiming the game-winning goal that granted us our first provincial title, to suffering through the insults after an embarrassing miss during the big home opener. Clea has even reluctantly endured shielding my feet from the gurgling mud during a rainy day of practice, and withstood being called a "saint" and "nutjob" simultaneously during my first men's game as a referee. Sure, she got frustrated when I didn't let her play, but watching me coach the 12-year olds from the sideline has helped with her patience. I can certainly sense her itching to get back on the soccer field, but until next season, Clea sits tight.