Writing Feedback / Toefl Writing: Governments have done enough to educate people the importance of healthy eating. [3]

Olivia ,Nice to meet you! There are some of my small comment :
Your first sentence is not wrong, but I think that it not very good, you can refer to: " eating plays an essential role in our life", and "always" don't go with the present perfect, you need use present simple tense. Moreover, you shouldn't use " among" with "public" , we often use " in public" more than or you can change your sentense. For example, " Eating plays an essential role in our life. It is an eye-catching topic is becoming popular all over the world". In addition, you should avoid lengthy sentenses in English when you write an essay. From my point of view, you should talk about your opinion in the first sentence or the second sentence. I also think I this phrase"are far from enough" does not appropriate . In written language, please use the phrase to show respect .