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Posts by Nihola
Name: Nihola
Joined: Jan 13, 2016
Last Post: Jan 20, 2016
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From: Tajikistan
School: Economic high school for gifted students

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Nihola   
Jan 20, 2016
Writing Feedback / Childhood as a carefree period in the life [2]

Childhood is the happiest time in life.

Childhood is the happiest period in every individual. During this period a person has less responsibilities,obligations, and every problem seems simple to solve , unlike an adult person.Children are so innocent,kind and full of joy.They don't have such problems as adults have. Their mind is simple ,I mean they don't need wealth,precious things , and elegant clothes,the only thing that they need is a happy family and this is fascinating and the most important thing in our life. However adults don't understand it.

In this time of life,children don't have to think about working,studying,business,politics and other problems in our daily life. They sleep,play and enjoy their life.It's so amazing that the children become happy with simple things as, candies,chocolates and with other sweets

In addition , the childhood is also a time of magic.The children believe in Santa,wizard,fairy and many magician beings,as I used to do.This adds joy to the children's childhood.Morever the children don't to bad things ,as do adult people, they don't have bad intentions.

In fact, the children don't think about their future,their job in future and many other problems that concern teenagers.By contast, teenagers have so many problems , as what to wear,what to do to be more beautiful and other factors that don't matter for children.Therefore ,childhood is the happiest time in life.

To sum up, I state that childhood are carefree moments of life. This interval of time doesn't constist of any difficulties,complexity,problems, bad thoughts and other indignations of life.
Nihola   
Jan 13, 2016
Writing Feedback / TOEFL Independent-Technology lessens children's creativity. Do you agree or disagree? [6]

Thank you , for such impressive essay. I respect your opinion , but my opinion is quite the inverse. I think nowadays children became more lazy than in past , because of new technology. New technology as , mobile phone, computer and etc. attract them and all their thoughts are considered on them. The children don't read books and they become losing their ability of creativity. Thank you :)
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