Scholarship / I plan to take all my prerequisite classes and then apply to the Dental Hygiene program. Goals essay [5]

I had to write an essay on my educational and career goals. I need some help editing as it's been 11 years since I've been in school. I prefer putting it online as hopefully no one will judge me and be to harsh!!

Thanks in advance for any help!

My name is Theresa Knight, I am attending Erie County Community College this fall. I plan to
take all my prerequisite classes and then apply to the Dental Hygiene program. After I complete the
Dental Hygiene program my goal is to obtain a position in the dental field, preferably working with
children.
My educational plan is to start my prerequisite classes this fall and not only complete them but,
to do well in the classes also. I want to learn as much as possible and do as well as possible that way I
feel more comfortable when it comes time to applying for the Dental Hygiene program. When accepted
into the program, my goal is to learn everything possible about my chosen field and work as hard as I
can to advance in my field. How I plan to accomplish this is by having perfect attendance and never
missing a class, as well as asking questions if I don't understand, studying as often as possible, and
really focusing all my attention on my study's.
In my career, I have many goals and there are many milestones I dream to achieve. The career
goal that means the most to me is being able to work with children. Once I finished my education I
aspire to get a job in pediatric dentistry. I have a 6 year old son at home who I am very big on teeth care
with and we love to make it fun. I would love to bring my passion of dental hygiene and my love of
working with kids together. I want to be able to ease kids nerves while at the dentist, but the biggest
thing for me is being able to teach our next generation how important it is to take care of themselves.
I know that none of my dreams would be possible without earning my degree in Dental
Hygiene. Therefore, I am committed to working my hardest in school and continuing to look for
opportunities that could help make my dreams a reality.