Undergraduate / My Study Plan for Australia Student Visa [9]

i found it hard to make a proper study plan since i am not really good in english , but i have made the point, can someone please correct my grammar and how to connect the points???

1. why choose to study in Australia
Australia is the best place to persue my education because australia is not only known as the best couuntry in which has the third highest number of international studentsin the world behind the United Kingdom and Uniyed States, but also Australia is multicultural country where i can be apart of multicultural environment. furthermore many indonesian students study in Australia. its means there is a good relationship between Indonesia and Australia. i want to take benefit for adapting to local students in australia especially their culture and background

2. why choose Brisbane
one of cities in Australia that make me interest in getting best learning is Brisbane, because Brisbane is one of the fasting growing city in Australia, in addition it has best learning and living environment for International Student, very save city to live and has excelent public transport facilities. moreover Brisbane has one of Australia lowest cost of living. Brisbane is perfect place foe me as international student who looking for a safe and affordable place to study.

3. Why choose Chatenburry technical institute
i choose Chatenbury technical institute because CTI is a certainly located campus in the brisbane CBD with excellent facilities and equipment, and the course are offer in accordance with the requirement i want to learn.

4. why choose diploma of leadership and management
the thing that i take is Leadership and management because i find my self lack in advenge knowledge of management, i want to improve managementknowledge and how to be a leader.

5. reason study overseas
i want to study abroad because education system in my countryis different to developed countries especially curriculum, i want to gain new experience such as interacting or addapting to locals and foreignes students, alao i could improve my English ability.

6. what will you do after Graduation ?
after obtaining diploma degree i plan to comeback to indonesia to create my own busines.i have a dream to create job vacancy with the purpose is to decrease a number of unemployment in my country Indonesia.

7. im glad that i have an opportunity to study in Australia because the help of my parrents. They are support me so much to reach my dream. my family are in a strong financial. my father is entrepreneur and he financially sponsor my study in Australia. i am proud of them as my parents and i will do my best to finish my degree with the great academy achievement.