Graduate / What are your specific expectations from the Master in Management?, My draft is as follows. [5]

While working in my family business I tried to adopt maximum techniques learned during my training which helped the business grow up to an extent. Pursuant to this involvement I realized that i needed to learn some organization management and people skills to expand my uncle's business further. Consequently, upon working with multinationals and understanding how modern firms work, I applied the knowledge and skill-set by leading marketing team of our factory which helped us achieve short term targets. Further this achievement elucidated the reasons of hurdles faced by us in other areas too.

Pursuing European MIM would not only allow me to address these challenges effectively, but also armour me with the skills to take our business to the next level and be the leaders in domestic market. Given the untapped potential of the market, this Triple Degree program and diverse culture can equip me with knowledge to realize the potential to the maximum.Furthermore this experience will enable me to develop solid relations with the business world, wherein i will be exposed to different perspectives about business which will broaden my leadership and management skills, and even enhance my networking skills. As a person being open to people from different cultures, social backgrounds,professions, and industries, it will change me as a human being and will provide me with greater awareness and satisfaction to experience becoming enriched and growing and will increase the inside competence. It is my firm belief and conviction that the academic and professional knowledge associated with this course along with the overall experience will give me an impetus to learn and succeed as a thorough professional in my future ventures.

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