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Jul 13, 2016
Writing Feedback / Water used for different purposes in six wide territories all over - IELTS. ACADEMIC WRITING, TASK 1 [3]
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The pie charts illustrate percentage of water consumption for three purposes in six parts of the world.
Noticeably, in countries of northern hemishphere, particularly in North America and Europe, half of the water used
is aimed on industrial purposes. This is no surprise, considering developed industry and advanced economy of these states.
Also, it's seen from the pie charts that regions such as Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia predominantly
consume water for agricultural use, which constitutes more than 80% of the total water usage. This kind of high
dependence on agriculture can be explained with cultural background of these nationalities and the climate conditions suitable for arable farming.
Though similarly to Africa and South East&Central Asia, the usage of water prevailingly has its agricultural purpose (71%) , the people of South America suprisingly are the leaders in domestic use of water (19%) across the world.
Generally from the pie charts it is explicitly can be deduced that in all parts of the world water is mostly used for agriculture and industry.
Please read and comment) If it's possible, please also give a score.
The pie charts illustrate percentage of water consumption for three purposes in six parts of the world.
Noticeably, in countries of northern hemishphere, particularly in North America and Europe, half of the water used
is aimed on industrial purposes. This is no surprise, considering developed industry and advanced economy of these states.
Also, it's seen from the pie charts that regions such as Africa, Central Asia and South East Asia predominantly
consume water for agricultural use, which constitutes more than 80% of the total water usage. This kind of high
dependence on agriculture can be explained with cultural background of these nationalities and the climate conditions suitable for arable farming.
Though similarly to Africa and South East&Central Asia, the usage of water prevailingly has its agricultural purpose (71%) , the people of South America suprisingly are the leaders in domestic use of water (19%) across the world.
Generally from the pie charts it is explicitly can be deduced that in all parts of the world water is mostly used for agriculture and industry.
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