Graduate / "Applying for a masters in management as an accounting student" - Statement of Intent [4]

Hi! Im Sebastian, and Im currently writing my statement of intent to enter The University of Melbourne's business school, in the Master of Management program. I am also currently an undergraduate at Unimelb.

This is the description for the statement: Please provide a personal statement of no more than 500 words. The statement should describe your personal motivation to undertake further study and can include details of your personal circumstances as well as your life and work experiences. It should emphasise any aspect of your personal history that may enhance your application, including extracurricular activity, community involvement, relevant personal characteristics and any outstanding achievements.

Any and all feedback would be appreciated :) Thank you!

In an increasingly competitive global workplace, I strongly believe the need to differentiate oneself from the rest of the crowd has never been more important. My current undergraduate studies in the Bachelor of Commerce at the University of Melbourne have provided me with a strong comprehension of the theories underlining many of the concepts within the fields of accounting and finance. I am applying to the Master of Management because I believe that, in addition to broadening my academic scope beyond accounting and finance, this program will equip me with the practical skills I will need in order to fully utilise my acquired knowledge in a real-world setting.

During my current undergraduate program, the only management subject I needed to complete was the compulsory subject, Organsational Behaviour; in which one of the assessments was an analytical case study done in groups. Ironically, it was over the course of this assignment that I experienced firsthand the importance of effective management through the leadership of my leader. He demonstrated various management skills, including role delegation, effective time management and motivational support. Under his guidance, our focus never wavered throughout the duration of the assignment, and ultimately, the final result yielded a satisfying grade. Through this, my eyes were opened to the significance of the role effective management played in achieving successful outcomes.

Outside of the classroom, my previous 2 summer breaks away from my studies in Australia have provided me with valuable work experience in a management-accounting environment. I worked as a management accounting intern in an import company, in which my duties included day-to-day inventory management, cost accounting and interacting with customers. Over the course of my employment, I improved my time management, learnt the importance of adaptability in different situations, and managed the needs of different customers. In particular, this skill was essential for the company, as a failure to grasp a customer's specific needs would lead to incorrect decisions being made from sourcing up to the point of delivery. As such, this allowed me an opportunity to directly observe the impact of management in a real business, and its potential to result in undesired consequences.

The University of Melbourne ranks amongst the best in the world, and as an undergraduate here, I have been taught by esteemed professors, studied with like-minded peers and encouraged to think inquisitively; all of which have cultivated a firm foundation to prepare me for the workplace. I firmly believe that the Master of Management program would be ideal in further building up this foundation. In addition to challenging me to apply knowledge beyond the pages of a textbook, this program will push me to excel in a new field of study, improve my teamwork and networking skills and foster a strong work ethic. Most importantly, I believe this program will equip me with the management acumen I will need throughout my professional career to effectively tackle, and manage, the problems faced by different businesses in today's ever-changing, dynamic economic climate.

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