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Name: SELAMI COBAN
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scoban   
Aug 17, 2016
Writing Feedback / Writing Task 1 (unit 3 Workbook CECI) Survey about the essential of communication skill for job [4]

Hello, @ZiadRasyid24

I am a learner as you are. I can not correctly feedback about the grammatical errors. But, I can check whether it is understandable or not. As you know, it is also an important key point that the examiner will score you.

From the eksxternal community, it is result that the most important skills in communication is dealing with people with 60 and 65 in both year respectively (Who is dealing? I think you wanted to say something else). While the skill on selling product or service is the most insignificant with around twenty people. In addition the middle priority of communication skill are knowledge about the product service and advising or caring the customer with 35-41 people.(Do the middle priority of communication skill knowledge?I think you wanted again say something else).

Second paragraph has also the same mistakes.

I hope my comment does not have grammatical error. :)

Bests,
scoban   
Aug 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Essay about : What does StockBroker do? [5]

I am glad to be hepful. Thanks for your feedback. @Beauty17.

@justify03

Thanks for valuable feedbacks. I am really happy to see my mistakes. I have been accepted as a graduate student. I do not have English qualification, therefore the university will allocate an exam in few weeks later. I have to write at least 450 words. It is likely to write more than 3 paragraphs.

I believe that I am going to success in the exam with your valuable feedbacks.

Bests,
scoban   
Aug 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / Essay about : What does StockBroker do? [5]

A stockbroker is a person who buys or sells shares in a stock market. In this article, I would like to give some useful facts about the daily life of the stockbroker.

Before diving into the details about the stockbroker's daily life, I give you a necessary information how the broker features are. As you might know, the stock market is all about numbers and analytical thinking. You must be far from it unless you are good at numbers. It is also required that the one must have ability to think strategically.

It is clear that being a stockbroker is a challenging process. Because, There are lots of parameters which make you decide whether you buy or sell shares. Some of parameters are company's future plans, its annual incomes, its future investments, market's offer and demand, price of raw materials and so on. All arguments must be dissect carefully, and inference and conclude where it is the right time to trade or not. For instance, The price of raw materials play a prominent role when deciding to sell or buy shares. Let's think about a building sector. If there is a decrease in prices of cements, the expenditure of constructing a house is going to fall down significantly, consequently, there will be a rapid buying power growth in building sectors. People who dream to own a house is likely to demand mortgages from banks. Therefore, shares of both companies and banks are going to rise up quickly. As a result, as long as you buy shares in low price and sell them high, you may double or triple your money. Of course, it is possible, vice versa.

It is obvious that the wast majority of stockbrokers play fairly. However, plenty of them manipulate the stock market. There are different ways of manipulations that they may do. In the stock market, shares are priced naturally. It means that the prices are determined by offer and demand. A bad broker can illegally make shares grow up, as a result of it, innocent people will buy it. Once prices are increased, our bad guy sells all of them, earns a very huge amount of money.

The most of countries' stock markets are regulated by the law. No manipulations are allowed. There are really though punishments who does not obey the law such fines, forbid to make a trade or jail. In my opinion, no bail is allowed. Because, It is a really ugly situation that a government loose its prestige and trust.

It can be concluded that being a broker is a long-term learning process. If you do not have required skill and patient, it can be clearly seen that it does not fit for you. Probably, the best option is to discover another way of investments.
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