Letters / "Breaking The Limit 2016" competition - cover letter about audit internship recuiterment [3]

you should keep your sentence be simple. It will help your words easier to understand clearly. I know my edit is still not perfect but i hope it mays help you a little bit.

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When I participated in the ACCA career fair workshop. , I learnedrealized that the competition "Breaking The Limit 2016" was replaced the Deloitte Intership Program. I was impressed by the cultural and environmental in Deloitte and I really wanted to start my career path in here. For the reasons , I am writing to express my ...

... Economics Ho Chi Minh City, whereand my major is accounting.
So, I am confident that I am a ...
I have a strength(replace it with other adj) to working a team either a leader or a member. You will find me to beI am a responsible, motivated, and hard-working person ...

Beside, I have a good command of English and ready to learn the new things.(Beside, I am good in English and I am so exciting to ready to learn new things)

Attached with this cover letter is my resume which would detailwhich might help you regarding my ...