Undergraduate / Georgia Tech undergraduate application prompt. Apply for chemical engineering [7]

Hi~ Thanks for the amazing comments and suggestions! I feel ashamed lol >< Even u applied GT long long ago n you still know GT much better than me !

I change some your suggestions cuz the word limits ;V;

Here is the new one:

The academic environment and curriculum at Georgia Tech fascinate me. Instead of simply "getting out", I desire to take full advantage of the fascinating programs and coursework in the ChBE school.

The ChBE school at Georgia Tech can stroke my passion for chemical engineering with its special courses and cutting-edge research. I can learn the integrated bioprocesses of biotech industries in the Bioprocess Engineering Course and explore prototypes with real world applications in Capstone Design Course. I can share my research with school fellows and gain valuable experience in Spring Symposium. I can also collaborate with outstanding professors and students in the laboratory. I want to join the research team who developed new membranes to significantly reduce manufacturing energy. I look forward to developing improvements to industrial scale through hands-on research.

I seem to hear George P. Burdell shouting at me: "Go my Yellow Jacket. Think big and solve big!"

Undergraduate / Georgia Tech undergraduate application prompt. Apply for chemical engineering [7]

Hello Stanford fellow! Thank you so much! Your advice really helps !! ^^^

I will try to make the essay more specific ^^

I have a small question. For "getting out", that seems kinda like a GT jargon: Graduates say "getting out" because GT's school work is very heavy.

Do you think I should change this?

Thx :D