mandeute
Sep 5, 2016
Undergraduate / Common Application - prison rides [2]
... for high school, but thephysical medium security, barbed wire-encased , building. (the word physical threw me off a bit. I had to read twice to understand the "physical medium security" part because I read it as one phrase, so I think it would be a little clearer this way)
The oldest boy then, half-asleep, takes over and our trek to school resumes, ...
As a high school student I may have traded Dunkin Donut runs for the prison, public ...
How has it helped create your personality?
Overall, I really liked this essay! I thought it was really interesting and said a lot about you, and I really liked the descriptions. I'd like to see more about how your morning rides have set you apart from other people at your school, or what you've learned from them and how they have changed you/made you who you are.
... for high school, but the
The oldest boy then, half-asleep, takes over and our trek to school resumes, ...
As a high school student I may have traded Dunkin Donut runs for the prison, public ...
How has it helped create your personality?
Overall, I really liked this essay! I thought it was really interesting and said a lot about you, and I really liked the descriptions. I'd like to see more about how your morning rides have set you apart from other people at your school, or what you've learned from them and how they have changed you/made you who you are.
