Writing Feedback / Getting a job, earn your own money, have a happy family... how to make work-life balance work? [2]

there is no doubt that you have a good skill in writing, yet there are several mistakes you ought to fix it

Getting a job, earnearning your own money, havehaving a happy family, are things ... (parallel words)
the methods have been tryingtried(always use verb 3 for passive sentence) .

Bases d on Nigels Marsh experience (miss spelling, i think)
He was did ???? (double verb) better if only use did, indeed
he said isthat it was the best day ever! Suddenly he realized that something he looking for long time actually he already had it.

Sometimes, the problem solution is surrounded us (make clear what you mean)
Find the way to enjoy everything you have (spoken language) and you will be finding (must be verb 3)

correct me if i'm wrong

best regards, pak dur