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Sep 15, 2016
Writing Feedback / Poverty Among Seniors has dropped - Summary Article from Times [4]

hai classmate
I have several suggestions for you
there are too many percent maybe you can use it in another word for instance 10% can be replaced by one in ten.

Based on the latest research, census bureau (...) had been decreased at 1.2% in 2015 from it is previous record of 10% in 2014.

... a slightly increase of median household income aboutat 5.2% compared to data in 2007.

... and supplemental record, which showed that 11

break a leg bro

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