Writing Feedback / Having a job that we love can be simply called as enjoying our hobby and get paid for it. [4]

hello miss kiki..
let me give some corrections for you...
1. Some people believe (use noun clause : that) one of the factors is to have a job
2. one of the factors is to have a job you love doing ( one of the factors which should be had in working is you love doing

3. the other think it is a well-paid job made you happy ( use Structure ( S+V+O+CON+S+V.....)
4. they will not care of the monthly bonuses
5.the more enjoy people doing their job ( the people who more enjoy doing their job),

thank you.

Writing Feedback / Summary 7: Hula Dancing in Hawaiian Culture [5]

hallo brother erwin ...
let me give some correction for you ..

1.Hawaii is a group of islands which be ( use "is" )located
2. Hula Dance has been( use article "a" brother..) part of Hawaiian culture and
3. Hula Dance is an ancient tradition that it is impossible to say
4. There were many changes to ( use preposition "in" brother) Hawaiian society
5. It performed near of an altar in honor of Hawaiian gods
6. Hawaiian cultural festival ( where is head sentence ? ) (cultural festival in hawaiian)