Writing Feedback / Summary 7: Hula Dancing in Hawaiian Culture [5]

hallo brother erwin ...
let me give some correction for you ..

1.Hawaii is a group of islands which be ( use "is" )located
2. Hula Dance has been( use article "a" brother..) part of Hawaiian culture and
3. Hula Dance is an ancient tradition that it is impossible to say
4. There were many changes to ( use preposition "in" brother) Hawaiian society
5. It performed near of an altar in honor of Hawaiian gods
6. Hawaiian cultural festival ( where is head sentence ? ) (cultural festival in hawaiian)