Scholarship / Yonsei Korean Language Institute program will help me understand the entertainment industry better [4]

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I've always want to go to Korea for study since my high school graduate. But due to some reason I can't fulfill my dream to continue my study in Korea. I'm taking Management Business in one of the University in Indonesia. After obtaining my bachelor degree, I still considering Korea as one of my dream that I have to achieve. Therefore, Korea is one of advanced developed countries so it's a good chance for me if I be able to study in Korea. I believe Yonsei University is a great choice for me because it's one of the best top university in Korea and I've also heard many good reviews from an international students.

Throughout college I maintain a 3.2 grade point average and joined some club. I've also become a part of the committee set of management business school program. Beside activities in university, I also challege myself to join another activities outside. Such as singing, beauty, and modelling contest. I've always enjoyed myself in entertainment activity like singing and dancing. It can be said that Korean Pop also make me more passionate about my hobbies. Many friends I know also because of we have the same passion about Korean. It's not just because of the music and drama, we also enjoyed Korean food together and we also support each other to achieve our dreams.

Since I've always interested in entertainment, I know Hallyu is one of the biggest influence from all of Asia's entertainment. That's why if I join the Yonsei Korean Language Institute program, it will help to understand the entertainment industry better. It also will be a valuabe chance to meet another friends who have the same interest with me and can help me to understand the beauty of Korea. I also want to become a better person that can bring Indonesian entertainment industry a big change.

The other different reasons for my consideration is because the more and more languages we know and master, it will be an advantage to build relations. And seeing such great expansion of the company's in Korean corporate and Korean culture, language acquisition becomes one value for me to enter the global industry.