Writing Feedback / Motorways reduce time and distance of arriving to other cities, but they are also dangerous [8]

Hey pluskid, I try to divide and to comment into several part of your essay,

1.Introduction - your introduction is good enough but there are a few mistake in grammar
- use punctuation, (Getting a good result in your IELTS writing test will depend on your punctuation)
In over recent years, many countries.......
- be careful with preposition collocation :)
they will able to reduce time and distance of arriving to (arriving at/in) other cities.I share (an/the) opinion of some ...

2. Body - You need to make it longer :)
- Use article to make it clear
... governments focus on (optional) The/an area, which the least damages for The/an environment.
-misspelling & Verb d/ed
In addition, highways some times(misspelling : without space) are dangerous.
In my opinion ,(remember punctuation) this problem would be solve(solved) if cars companies embedded (...) and also governments have ana striking role in this problem...