JosephLopez99
Oct 30, 2016
Undergraduate / What peculiarity or unique distinctives do you possess that will allow you to contribute to UF [4]
@Holt
Hi Holt, thanks so much for the suggestions! I see exactly what you mean and see where you are coming from, however, I feel as if I did answer the prompt through the context but that may just simply be because I myself wrote it. What I hoped readers would get out of this essay was that I am capable of finding appreciation in even the simplest of tasks, I enjoy challenges and am not afraid to get out of my comfort zone. I'm resourceful and capable of dealing with my problems in a mature manner rather than get fully frustrated about it. I'm disciplined, great at managing time, appreciative and strive to make the best of the hand i'm dealt. I'm persistent, diligent and love learning about myself through my passions. I don't give up, no matter the circumstance i'm put in and have a positive mindset in all tough situations. (: I tried running down a list of attributes and characteristics that I possess that a college/university would expect from a strong student/applicant all while using my experience with running as a channel to do so. I understand I fell short in efficiently describing how I'd be a team player and possibly explaining how this all can help me contribute to UF.
@Holt
Hi Holt, thanks so much for the suggestions! I see exactly what you mean and see where you are coming from, however, I feel as if I did answer the prompt through the context but that may just simply be because I myself wrote it. What I hoped readers would get out of this essay was that I am capable of finding appreciation in even the simplest of tasks, I enjoy challenges and am not afraid to get out of my comfort zone. I'm resourceful and capable of dealing with my problems in a mature manner rather than get fully frustrated about it. I'm disciplined, great at managing time, appreciative and strive to make the best of the hand i'm dealt. I'm persistent, diligent and love learning about myself through my passions. I don't give up, no matter the circumstance i'm put in and have a positive mindset in all tough situations. (: I tried running down a list of attributes and characteristics that I possess that a college/university would expect from a strong student/applicant all while using my experience with running as a channel to do so. I understand I fell short in efficiently describing how I'd be a team player and possibly explaining how this all can help me contribute to UF.