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Reinhardt   
Sep 17, 2007
Writing Feedback / Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification [4]

here it is, rough draft (Intro paragraph is short I know, I just dont know where to go with it):

Metal music listeners are commonly stereotyped as" Metalheads"; these Metalheads are generally heavily talented, intellectual beings, and the music itself is catalysts towards something greater. However the Metalheads themselves have different styles depending on the sub-genre of Metal. Three most common sub-genres are Heavy, Death, and Nu-Metal.

Most Heavy metal listeners generally listen to the classical Heavy metal from whence it was first developing; Kiss, Metallica, Megadeth, Iron Maiden, and Judas Priest are such bands. This genre sparked one of the most dominant features of a Metalhead, the "Corna" (a hand-signal formed by a fist with the little and index fingers extended, known variously as the "devil's horns", the "metal fist") of which became popular in the 70's from use of artists like Gene Simmons. Metalheads "mosh" (where a group of people would run into each other and push each other away) and/or "head bang" (where the head is vigorously shaken up and down, meanwhile the lower body remains somewhat still); this is a result of the complex rhythms of most metal music that makes more common forms of dance very exhausting. Typically, the early heavy metal fashions comprised tight blue jeans, motorcycle boots and black t-shirts, traditionally adorned with a leather or denim sleeve-less jacket decorated with swag and representations from heavy metal artists. The soon coming Death metal listeners would much change and evolve.

Death metal evolved heavier, deeper, and more distinct than classic Heavy metal, thus the listeners changed with it. Death metal was heavily influenced from the grunge movement. The tight blue jeans began to be replaced with darker colors, if not black jeans that weren't so tight. They grew in size and became a lot baggier and longer, which they would drag past the shoes and become ripped. They were emblazoned with large chains that wrapped around the front and were held up by studded belts. Now that the style of music itself became heavier from its original counterpart, moshing also did such a change. Larger mosh pits would form, more people would join and become more violent, instead of the original pushing, punching, and kicking became a part of the pit.

Nu-Metal is more commonly frowned upon by the Metalheads. The rise of Nu-Metal branched from hip-hop and ghetto cultures. This included the adoption of sportswear, dreadlocks and African-American slang. Unlike the adoption of earlier influences however, these new aspects are particularly disliked as many Metalheads consider Nu-Metal to be a completely different style of music with a totally different culture. This explosion in the popularity of Metalcore (A.K.A. Nu-Metal) has also brought with it changes in fashion specifically as fans of the genre are typically neater in appearance with shorter hair that is usually dyed black, and a favoring of "label" clothing. Many of these newer fans are also seen to be associating themselves with the culture for purely fashionable reasons; otherwise known as "posers".

Influences come from several sources in the average person's life: family, friends, favored attributes, careers, and of course, music. However these influences should be taken with a grain of salt, as each individual should find their own preference. But, there is no stopping the act of stereotyping, thus we have these types such as Metalheads. As a person, they can still be divided further into sub-genres, but that theoretically doesn't change the assumption that they are, a Metalhead.
Reinhardt   
Sep 13, 2007
Writing Feedback / Stereotypes on the music side - Division And Classification [4]

Alright, so this week is a 500 word division and classification essay, I'm having troubles find a way to break subjects down into specific items.

I thought i could do stereotypes on the music side, But theres so many to break it down into. Then I thought I could break that down and focus on one general stereotype, Metalheads. Figuring I could do 1 paragraph about Heavy Metal listeners, 1 about Death/Black Metal listeners, and 1 about Classic Metal listeners, probably in chronological order?

Does this seem ok? Or is there an easier subject maybe?
Reinhardt   
Sep 4, 2007
Writing Feedback / Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative) [8]

Thanks for the help, I seem to be having writers block and you helped.

By the By.. She asked to "Show all the steps in the writing process", anymore hints/tips?
Reinhardt   
Sep 4, 2007
Writing Feedback / Eng101 starting essay (personal narrative) [8]

So i have a personal narrative due soon and I really need help. This is for and Eng101 class that i'm taking as dual enrollment for High School.

I'm having trouble writing a "Describe a time when you went above and beyond the call of duty." type paper.

My main subject is about me learning communication skills from a guitar class. I took the class for an easy credit, and easy hour, and something fun to do during my day because ive already been playing for 3 years beforehand. We ended up getting some seperate groups together from every class period. We all had different music and different groups. I got "stuck" with an intermediate group who really didn't know what they were doing. So I had a month to teach them how to read the songs that we needed to learn, to get them coordinated, and to get them ready and confident. I ended up teaching them not only the songs themselves, but how to play all sheet music, to be confident in their playing, and to get them all coordinated. I wrote easy sheet music at home for them to practice the next day. I, in a sense, had my own little class. We got a silver medal because one of us didn't show up (family problem), and i had to assign someone else the part. I'm happy we got a silver at that, seeing as how we should've not even been in the top 3.

Where do I go from here? What would be the most moving and powerful way to organize this in around 500 words?
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