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Nov 3, 2016
Writing Feedback / The line graph illustrates the percentages of four different age groups attending Australia's cinema [3]
@septiadara29
Thanks for correcting my essay:D, can I ask you some questions(grammar that I don't understand) about my essay, and please explain it to me?
(1)why can't I write "who attending to", why "who attend to" is correct?
(5)It was predicted that (...), the percentage went upward from 2008 to ... : why I have to use past tense, I thought after year 2000, the figures in line graph indicate the future, so I use simple tense and future tense
@septiadara29
Thanks for correcting my essay:D, can I ask you some questions(grammar that I don't understand) about my essay, and please explain it to me?
(1)why can't I write "who attending to", why "who attend to" is correct?
(5)It was predicted that (...), the percentage went upward from 2008 to ... : why I have to use past tense, I thought after year 2000, the figures in line graph indicate the future, so I use simple tense and future tense