The internship program with Bloomberg - cover letter

Dear Recruiter:
I am very interested in the internship program with Bloomberg, since the position directly fits
very well with my educational experience, interest, and skills.
My personal experiences plus my diverse background demonstrate my strong sense of innovation
and motivation. As the co-founder of "Greatking computers" a B2B company, I was responsible
for daily operating decisions for the division hiring and recruiting new stuff, for strategic planning,
and for creating service enhancements that kept us ahead of the competition. Through a teambased
approach and open lines of communication, we offered our clientele an expansive service
portfolio and a seamless work environment.
Those practical experiences allowed me to develop a strong communication as well as team leader
skills by working directly with customers and firms and gained valuable first-hand experience .
Throughout my college career I have excelled in all of my finance as well as economics courses. I
learned about the intricacies of the market including options, dividends, bond valuation, financial
behaviour, and the economics of foreign exchange rates. My courses have provided me with a
strong background in the methodologies required for successfully analyzing and synthesizing
important financial information and risk management. I am a quick learner, a hard working
person and always try to view problems from different perspectives that in turn allows me to take
calculated risk. I also enjoy the challenges of doing comparative, quantitative, and especially
exchange rate volatility analysis in addition to financial modelling.
My unique background and goals seem to match your requirements well. I am confident that I can
perform the job effectively and contribute significantly to Bloomberg's reputation as a leader in
"financial service and communications". I am looking forward of working for a dynamic,
internationally recognized company.
At your convenience, I would appreciate the opportunity to discuss the position and my candidacy
with you.
Yours sincerely,

the phrase "I am very interested" is sort of cliche

Yes, actually the word "very" is always weak, because you always have the option to show the extent of something with good words rather than just using the word very.

I am very interested in the program because... .
This program is exactly right for me at this stage of my process, because...

... the position directly fits very well with my educational experience, interest, and skills.
My personal experiences ...

Through the use of a teambased approach and open lines of communication, we offered our clientele an expansive service portfolio and a seamless (I think a different word would be better here) work environment.

Those practical experiences allowed enabled me to develop a strong communication as well as ...

I am a quick learner, a hard working employee, and someone who always tries to view problems from different perspectives. That, in turn, enables allows me to take calculated risks .

I am looking look forward of working for a dynamic, internationally recognized company.

Good luck!! This is very professional and respectful.

excellent sir

thank you very much