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|Make an enquiry (formal letter) - looking for a garment manufacturer
3 - The letter is one form of the Task 1 test. Therefore, it falls under the same word requirement of...
Lettersanna212 - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|Email Admission officers to update English Language Test Results
2 - Please, avoid using exclamation points in your formal inquiry letters. Use only periods, question marks, commas, and other non...
Lettersjinziyan33 - Jul 1, 2020 / Holt - Jul 1, 2020
|Motivation letter of a PhD program in Material sciences and material nanoanalysis
LettersTheEvilMonk - Jun 29, 2020 / TheEvilMonk - Jun 29, 2020
|Write an email to Simon, an English friend, describing your family home.
4 - Dear Cheryl, First of all your writing is quite good, but there are some ambiguous sentences like: ...
Letterscheryl03 - Jun 15, 2020 / DInda Amalia - Jun 17, 2020
|A letter for a penfriend in Australia to tell her about my last journey.
LettersKhangquynh257 - May 29, 2020 / Khangquynh257 - May 30, 2020
|Recommendation Letter for MFE Program
2 - In the paragraph that describes your passion for a topic, the professor should relate this passion to the program...
LettersRiley L - May 27, 2020 / Holt - May 28, 2020
|Letter of explanation for study permit in Canada
2 - I am reading this from the point of view of a visa officer. Frankly speaking, the letter of explanation...
LettersKyryloLvov - May 21, 2020 / Holt - May 21, 2020
|Writing a letter to apply for joining an oversea language traing
2 - The letter has a misrepresentation of information from the original prompt. Organising a language study program is different from...
Lettersrofdroot - May 13, 2020 / Holt - May 13, 2020
|Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum Programme (Bachelor)
6 - It still isn't clear. When you talk of Design Engineering, you are speaking of combining several engineering concepts to...
Lettersjulialisboa - May 10, 2020 / Holt - May 11, 2020
|MOTIVATION LETTER. I am applying for law degree B.A program in Italy. Need proofread.
2 - The first thing your letter should be doing, as a motivation letter, is explain why you would like to...
Lettersakumon - May 7, 2020 / Holt - May 8, 2020
|Write a letter to the students in your school.
2 - Are you sure that you gave the complete instructions for the writing of this essay? You cannot give the...
LettersHafsa257 - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 2, 2020
|"Hectic visit" - Write a letter to your friend.
6 - I think you also have to tell about something that makes you also enjoy during your holiday. And you...
LettersHafsa257 - Apr 30, 2020 / chrisfellach - May 1, 2020
|Write a letter to the head of your neighborhood.
2 - I think you should be reminded of the differences between UK and American English. The two countries spell their...
LettersHafsa257 - Apr 29, 2020 / Holt - Apr 30, 2020
|Provide good arguments for why you want to do this master's programme at UM
2 - Remove the references to your weak points. The instruction clearly states that you are to highlight only your strong...
Lettersamelia_qian - Apr 29, 2020 / Holt - Apr 29, 2020
|Motivational letter for Master degree at Freiberg University of Mining and Technology --
2 - Remove the reference to your IELTS results. It doesn't flow well with the rest of the paragraph. However, you...
LettersSukhrob - Apr 28, 2020 / Holt - Apr 29, 2020
|Motivation letter for a master program called English linguistics in Tübingen Germany
2 - Your motivation letter should accomplish a clear goal, that is, to explain why you decided to study English linguistics...
Letterssimogr - Apr 28, 2020 / Holt - Apr 29, 2020
|Application Letter to Master's Program in Environmental Science in Germany
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for catching that and for the feedback :) It is a motivational letter written...
Letterskarto002 - Apr 28, 2020 / karto002 - Apr 28, 2020
|Letter of Motivation - Master in Materials Science, specialization Functional Materials
3 - @Holt Thank you very much, I really appreciate the help. I agree the letter was vague, so I'll focus...
LettersTheDoctor2020 - Apr 25, 2020 / TheDoctor2020 - Apr 26, 2020
|Apology letter for being late in submission
3 - I sincerely apologize for late submission of assignment. I was unable to submit in time because I was really...
LettersHieuthuan - Apr 23, 2020 / DeZhi - Apr 24, 2020
|Master of Science in Big Data - Motivation Letter for Applying Scholarship and University
2 - You have to shorten the motivational letter. Try to keep it within 5 paragraphs. Remember, you have the instructions...
Lettersnabilah_hannan - Apr 13, 2020 / Holt - Apr 13, 2020
|Letter writed for responding a request (magazine subscription)
2 - The letter is too general in specifics. Yes, you responded to each prompt instruction, but the letter itself was...
LettersHannah Jamson - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|Motivation letter-fellowship Postdoctoral position
Lettersminasafa - Mar 24, 2020 / minasafa - Mar 28, 2020
|'I like to work on ambitious projects' - cover letter for a PhD in astronomy
2 - You wrote a personal statement, not a cover letter. A cover letter is written in a short 5 paragraph...
Lettersmixren - Mar 22, 2020 / Holt - Mar 23, 2020
|Letter of Intent to Science Research Specialist
2 - Build your qualifications based on your research. Since you are published, then you have something the offer the office...
Lettersshingeki1996 - Mar 11, 2020 / Holt - Mar 12, 2020
|Letter of complaint for the lost luggage in the airport
3 - Be careful with the way you spell. You did not properly capitalize the name of the laptop, MacBook. You...
LettersOlwen Lewis - Mar 11, 2020 / Holt - Mar 11, 2020
|Application for the post of an office assistant
LettersFerdy2020 - Feb 29, 2020 / Ferdy2020 - Feb 29, 2020
|Sustainable and Innovative Resource Management (SINReM) - Motivational Letter
3 - @gamemaker It looks like a Personal statement rather than a letter of motivation. I would advise to outline WHY...
Lettersgamemaker - Feb 17, 2020 / alie_alie - Feb 27, 2020
|My tryst with technology - motivation letter for Erasmus Degree in Medical Imaging and Application
3 - The main problem with this motivational letter is that it does not signify your professional motivation for higher studies....
Lettersks1419 - Feb 18, 2020 / Holt - Feb 19, 2020
|Email to Penpal Friend form Singapore about the studying of English
3 - @Holt Hello Mr Hold, thank you for your presious advice. I will take note all of your comments and...
LettersIAMROSE - Feb 16, 2020 / IAMROSE - Feb 16, 2020
|Double Degree in France (Motivation Letter)
Lettersker - Feb 14, 2020 / Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|Review my Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Master's In Biomedical Imaging
2 - The letter has committed a major crime. You must never use all caps and parenthesis in your presentation. In...
Lettersdpk111092 - Feb 14, 2020 / Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|Study Plan - applying for a Canadian study permit - letter of explanation
2 - At this point, since you already have two degrees to speak of, you need to provide a solid career...
LettersV184ht - Feb 14, 2020 / Holt - Feb 14, 2020
|Motivational Letter to Study in Germany - Master in Computational Mechanics
2 - Pull back on the undergraduate references. Highlight your research ability and thesis, but connect it to a more definitive...
LettersRafaelRGindro - Feb 11, 2020 / Holt - Feb 11, 2020
|Institute of Chartered Accountants - Reference letter - Chevening
2 - Delete the bragging phrase in the first sentence, the one about "Fellow Member of Institute of Chartered Accountants of...
Letterskaramali248 - Jan 27, 2020 / Holt - Jan 27, 2020
|Recommendation letter for PhD application under a Marie-Curie Fellowship
2 - Any recommendation letter must first, inform the reader about the following: 1. Full name and position title of...
Letterscinhn - Jan 20, 2020 / Holt - Jan 21, 2020
|Motivation Letter for a Machine Learning Master at a Swedish University
3 - @Holt Hi Holt, thank you for the feedback! really appreciate it! While yes I'd love to restructure my essay...
Letterschewedmentos - Jan 16, 2020 / chewedmentos - Jan 18, 2020
|Electronics Analysis and Design - Recommendation Letter for erasmus mundus
3 - Start by stating how long you've known the person. Briefly provide details on how you know the person (for...
Lettersshingeki1996 - Jan 6, 2020 / sky004 - Jan 13, 2020
|Erasmus Mundus Master - Public Health Motivation letter; motivations for the course and career plans
2 - Your essay exceeded the word count by 28 words. You will need to do some overall editing to make...
Letterseric_roth - Jan 9, 2020 / Holt - Jan 12, 2020
|Readmission Letter for College
2 - Laura, the letter does not do enough to show that you are better prepared to attend college at this...
Lettersnull_space - Jan 10, 2020 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|I am writing a motivation letter for data engineering master program at Jacob University
2 - Teren, the statement of purpose essay and the motivation letter are often confused by the student applicants. You have...
LettersTeren - Jan 5, 2020 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - answering points one by one
2 - Highlight more about what sparked your interest in civil engineering. Make sure what you write is personal. Talk about...
LettersLindsay2000 - Jan 1, 2020 / Ulaai - Jan 4, 2020
|Motivation Letter for Smart Systems Integration Erasmus Mundus scholarship program
3 - @Maria Thank you for the review, I appreciate it. I will start making changes on the letter. Thanks...
Lettersshingeki1996 - Jan 2, 2020 / shingeki1996 - Jan 2, 2020
|"Stipendium Hungaricum" program - Motivation letter
2 - @Munkhuu9969 Hi. Welcome to the forum. Here is my feedback. First and foremost, try to stick with language...
LettersMunkhuu9969 - Dec 25, 2019 / Maria - Dec 28, 2019
|Motivational letter for stipendum hungaricum scholarship, Bsc Biochemical Engineering
2 - @Ahmadjb225 Welcome to the forum! I hope my feedback gives you a clearer idea on how you can improve...
LettersAhmadjb225 - Dec 9, 2019 / Maria - Dec 12, 2019
|Medical Exchange Program - searching for fix a letter of recommendation
2 - @Tutti green Welcome to the forum! I hope my feedback gives you insight on how to improve your writing....
LettersTutti green - Nov 21, 2019 / Maria - Nov 22, 2019
|Write an email to your English friend. In your email, tell your friend about your favourite film
4 - @Maria Thank you for your comment. This writing is limited by 90 words so actually, I don't know how...
Lettersemme4665 - Nov 17, 2019 / emme4665 - Nov 21, 2019
|Write formal letter of invitation (special event at an university)
2 - @ngocbich Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that my feedback is helpful for your writing endeavors. Don't...
Lettersngocbich - Nov 19, 2019 / Maria - Nov 19, 2019
|Write to Matt and tell him what you will do to improve your English in this new school year.
2 - @Archie97 Hey, welcome here. Hopefully, my feedback is sufficient in giving you insight on how to improve your writing...
LettersArchie97 - Nov 12, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|I have to write an email to all the employees to announce the office renovation plan.
2 - Hey SoulPanCake, Congrats for the new office in 2020.That is a really well draftred email with to do points....
Letterssoulpancake - Nov 10, 2019 / TutorMaryJones - Nov 11, 2019
|"Evident talent" - Reference letter to Chevening
3 - @Maria Thank you for your feedback. I will amend the letter and rewrite it again and resend it...
Lettersreemanoaman - Oct 24, 2019 / reemanoaman - Oct 26, 2019
|Letter of motivation | Master's Degree in Sound and Music Computing ; UPF Barcelona
2 - @IValdivia Welcome to the forum. I'm going to evaluate and give feedback on this essay, and I hope this...
LettersIValdivia - Oct 23, 2019 / Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|The excelled student. Letter of Recommendation from my Principal for Scholarship application
2 - @HaiderAli Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will give you an idea on how to revise...
LettersHaiderAli - Oct 22, 2019 / Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|Letter of recommendation for The Master of Information System
LettersThaiHoangLoc - Oct 3, 2019 / prmchpra7 - Oct 22, 2019
|Motivation Letter for Double Degree DAAD Scholarship for Integrated Urbanism and Sustainable Design
LettersLilliputian - Oct 17, 2019 / Lilliputian - Oct 20, 2019
|Letter of motivation for Msc environmental risk and human security
Lettersjohnsavy - Oct 9, 2019 / johnsavy - Oct 13, 2019
|A recommendation letter for my student from Information and Communication Technology teacher
2 - @asifulislamshant Hi, welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you see here helps you somehow in your...
Lettersasifulislamshant - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|SOP/Motivation Letter for PhD in Environmental Economics
3 - @Maria - Thanks for response. I am new to this forum and not aware about the policy. Posting the...
Lettersumedkejariwal - Sep 15, 2019 / umedkejariwal - Sep 20, 2019
|Work in Switzerland; Motivation Letter / Administrative Programme
3 - Thankyou @maria for your feedback. It's my first attempt towards writing big letters so can you please point out...
Lettersmuawia786 - Sep 11, 2019 / muawia786 - Sep 12, 2019
|I am an intelligent hard worker. Readmission Letter.
2 - @snapbacks Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope to provide you with substantive writing feedback for your essay....
Letterssnapbacks - Jul 29, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|LoR proposed by my recommender for admission to Master of Public Policy
2 - @Rahula Hello there. I'll provide you with feedback on this writing. Firstly, while it's great that you had...
LettersRahula - Jul 14, 2019 / Maria - Jul 16, 2019
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