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|Coffee vs. Tea for the English - an attempt for summing-up the text into one sentence
6 - Really appreciate your excellent sample and bearing my poor writing Mary:) I will practice with the test set, and...
Lettersfoyuliu - Feb 22, 2017 / foyuliu - Yesterday
|Write a letter to your friend to tell him about how to protect the environment in your area
5 - thank you very much for your comments. They are so helpful for me . In fact, my letter hasn't...
Lettersconanhy - Feb 20, 2017 / conanhy - Feb 22, 2017
|You took your family to a nearby restaurant. Disappointed with the meal and complain to manager
4 - @jaikrishna Dear Jaya, let me give some inputs, more less about the "writing." My name is Jaya...
Lettersjaikrishna - Feb 20, 2017 / sehatdinati - Feb 20, 2017
|Planning to meet a stranger and asking him his interests.
3 - @Holt Thanks, Holt. Yes, putting the question mark is always an issue for me. I know we can still...
Lettersmastindersingh - Feb 19, 2017 / mastindersingh - Feb 19, 2017
|Writing a pitch for discover magazine - would it be accepted by an editor?
8 - @Holt thank you so much!...
Letterscolumbiabound - Feb 9, 2017 / columbiabound - Feb 12, 2017
|He has sterling communication skill - giving approval for talent of a student
8 - @Holt Thank you very much for your help. May God bless you....
Lettersbagusetyawan - Feb 7, 2017 / bagusetyawan - Feb 8, 2017
|Statement of Purpose - My Motivation to Join Information System in University of Melbourne
10 - Hi Bagu, I hope you won't mind if I kick in here with the difference in the meaning of...
Lettersbagusetyawan - Feb 3, 2017 / Holt - Feb 7, 2017
|Study and Future Plan about KGSP program
2 - Julian, you can only post one essay per thread buddy. So I will only respond to the Study Goals...
LettersAlbUnal - Feb 3, 2017 / Holt - Feb 3, 2017
|Letter of Recommendation from Supervisor - expressing support for a student
8 - @Holt Thanks bud. May God bless you....
Lettersbagusetyawan - Feb 2, 2017 / bagusetyawan - Feb 2, 2017
|My motivation letter for a scholarship purpose - expressing interest in studying at the University
2 - Asma, since this motivation letter is for a scholarship, you need to present the essay in such a manner...
LettersAsma08 - Feb 2, 2017 / Holt - Feb 2, 2017
|Oracle technical skills, diagnosis expertness and other abilities. MS in Data Science recommendation
5 - @ashivash Hi Ashivash, I will correct the grammar part a little bit. --has been appreciated by...
Lettersashivash - Jan 23, 2017 / Streetwalker - Jan 31, 2017
|A most undervalued candidate misjudged by many of his counterparts - recommendation letter
2 - Ashwin, you need to clarify paragraph 2 of this letter of recommendation. It is highly confusing and doesn't really...
Lettersashivash - Jan 30, 2017 / Holt - Jan 30, 2017
|Reference Letter for my employee teacher
2 - Sari, your reference letter is improperly written. It does not contain the correct references, structure, nor information that is...
Lettersbuahati - Jan 26, 2017 / Holt - Jan 26, 2017
|Letter of postponing job appointment on November 15th.
2 - Jay, the letter that you wrote is good. It gets the message across to the reader but has a...
Lettersjaijkrishn12 - Jan 24, 2017 / Holt - Jan 24, 2017
|U.S. Naval Officer Motivational Statement Essay - Navy's core values in order to protect USA
2 - Alexander, I am wondering if your motivational statement essay came with some guide questions as most military officer school...
LettersCookieMonster666 - Jan 23, 2017 / Holt - Jan 23, 2017
|My friend need some information about my country for visiting
5 - the transportation-> The transportation (I think you should add "Furthermore, Apart from, etc. So I think the letter will...
LettersTrang Le - Jan 10, 2017 / nguyenlykimngan1 - Jan 14, 2017
|Cross Culture Internship 2017 - Motivation Letter
5 - Aasma, here is the first rule of writing any sort of paper, always sit down, relax, and then write....
Lettersmujer_loca - Jan 7, 2017 / Holt - Jan 8, 2017
|Play Submission Letter-I wrote a cover letter for a play titled "White Mama"
2 - I believe that this is enough if you include a motivation. Everybody loves to be flattered, so why Shakespeare...
Lettersgmuturi - Dec 29, 2016 / TVLAERE - Dec 29, 2016
|'A great future awaits him' - This is a Letter of recommendation from a Math teacher
4 - Good letter, but some changes He is the one who always wanted to learn. ... and Vedic...
Lettersabdon786 - Dec 15, 2016 / gmuturi - Dec 29, 2016
|Doctoral Program at Birmingham Website Application - Letter to supervisor candidate
4 - Thank you all for your suggestions. I would like to pursue professor as supervisor candidate to continue my degree...
Lettersahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 27, 2016 / ahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 28, 2016
|ERASMUS MUNDUS Scholarship - great honour, great responsibility and an obligation to work hard
11 - @Holt Thanks, Mary, I think that the current version of the essay is way better than the initial draft...
Lettersserikbar - Dec 18, 2016 / serikbar - Dec 26, 2016
|Cover letter for a School Counselor?
4 - Yes, you can use that statement that I wrote as an example for you. Just remember that you need...
Lettersngokhoa99 - Dec 21, 2016 / Holt - Dec 21, 2016
|Counselor's Letter of Recommendation for MIT
8 - Holt, thank you very much, you've been very helpful. I will add those things you suggested, I'm really happy...
Lettersluisgonzalo - Dec 12, 2016 / luisgonzalo - Dec 14, 2016
|He has always been consistent and punctual in classes. LoR on behalf of Mathematics teacher.
11 - I would suggest you to convince your teachers to prepare the letters on their own because universities can easily...
LettersPallaw - Nov 27, 2016 / sus_007 - Dec 8, 2016
|Music Resume: Identifying Points of Confusions & Possible Solutions
4 - Zhang, there is no right or wrong in writing, especially in writing a resume / curriculum vitae about yourself....
LettersFaithfulEnya - Dec 5, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Dec 7, 2016
|Study plan for my Canada study permit - to Global Business Management PGC.
20 - @Holt I really don't know how to thank you! You're so patient and kind, damn I should buy you...
Lettersdunno_EF - Nov 22, 2016 / dunno_EF - Nov 24, 2016
|Architectural Engineering to enrich my education and lead to a start of a successful career
1 - Dear Selection Committee, My name is - , - years old, currently in the 5th and last year...
Lettersketi93 - Nov 16, 2016 / — -
|Unipdu FT D - Fakhrizal Mabruri - I hope you're okay
3 - Letter to my friend Fakhrizal Hi Fakhrizal, how are you? I hope you're okay rizal! If you have time...
LettersHalmy - Oct 26, 2016 / Halmy - Nov 15, 2016
|My house has been renovated from the front to the back. FT D - Balasan surat untuk jeri
2 - Hi Affan, I have some minor corrections for your letter. In terms of sentence structure and grammar, you obviously...
LettersAffan_Nafis - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|My dispatch is fine! Unipdu_FT_D A Letter to kiki
2 - Inna, your letter is really difficult to understand as you were not able to properly develop your letter. You...
LettersInna Waffi - Nov 4, 2016 / Holt - Nov 15, 2016
|Conversation about living in a house - Unipdu_FT_D A Letter to Affan
2 - How are you affan? I hope you are fine there, what is the situation in your house?how about the...
LettersJeri_Asidik - Nov 13, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 13, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D letters to Halmy ijul. Beautiful city
3 - Hi Fahrizal, I have some suggestions for you I have a lot of stories to be told in...
LettersFahrizal Mabruri - Nov 10, 2016 / Hujjatul19 - Nov 10, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D Balasan surat Anggi - it's been a long day we haven't meet each other
3 - Hello Anggi, I've recavedreceived your letter and ... ... life here, I hashave adapted well. I've already getgot...
LettersFebyputri - Oct 26, 2016 / hitam_manis - Nov 10, 2016
|My house in a crowded neighbourhood. UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Wiwit Krisdiyanti
3 - Hi Ais. it seems you have problems with grammar, it is okay as long as you are determined enough...
LettersAIS SALIMATUS S - Oct 26, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 9, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D A letter to Wakid; I heard you are working in Tanggerang
4 - @ichanpants89 thank you mate, i'll learn everything about my mistakes :) and i hope you do not mind if...
LettersErsaN - Oct 26, 2016 / ErsaN - Nov 9, 2016
|Application for the position of PhD student subsidized by CSC
3 - @Holt Thank you for you edit, I think your recommend very useful to me...
Letterskukujide - Nov 9, 2016 / kukujide - Nov 9, 2016
|I hope you are always in good condition. UNIPDU FT_D - Letter To ms.Inna
4 - @ichanpants89 @Holt Thank you very much.....
Letterskikiyanti - Oct 26, 2016 / kikiyanti - Nov 4, 2016
|unipdu FTD-letters to Fera - I will tell about my house
3 - Hi! I have some feedback for you! ...in the way manggis... should be ...at Manggis Road... ...
LettersEni dwi - Oct 26, 2016 / kiki23 - Nov 3, 2016
|It has been awhile since the last time we met, how are you there? Letter to M. Sigit Varendra
3 - Hi here are my suggestions. remember that a good sentence always contains Subject and Verb, or in bahasa,...
LettersIrsyad - Nov 1, 2016 / amrillahmk - Nov 1, 2016
|'I am from Madura Island.' This Is a Letter To Bima - Unipdu FT C
2 - Please refer to this cleaned up version of your letter for corrections to your original work: Hi, ...
Lettersbimabayu666 - Nov 1, 2016 / Holt - Nov 1, 2016
|How are you? this is a letter to Naufal - Unipdu FT C
2 - Achmad, your letter is not good at all. Your letter could very well be considered offensive in some circles...
Lettersachmad naufal - Nov 1, 2016 / Holt - Nov 1, 2016
|UNIPDU FT C. How are you Ikbal? I hope you are always fine and healthy
2 - Your letter is affected by wrong spelling , lack of capitalization, and misdirected grammar. I suggest the following corrections...
LettersMujaki - Oct 31, 2016 / Holt - Oct 31, 2016
|MOTIVATION LETTER, APPLICATION FOR THE BACHELOR OF BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION AT KU Leuven Belgium
2 - Daniel, due to the fact that you have opted to discuss information such as your personal life in this...
LettersDanielBalici - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 31, 2016
|UNIPDU FT C - this is a latter to Achmad Fatchur Roziq
3 - Rizky, you need to work n the sentence structure. The thought process is clear, but you have a problem...
LettersRizkydiwan86 - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 30, 2016
|Unipdu FT C send message Satriyo Utomo to Hendrik Prasetyo
2 - Hi Hendrik, Kindly refer to the improvements I made to your letter: I hope you are doing...
Lettershendrik prasetyo - Oct 30, 2016 / Holt - Oct 30, 2016
|Unipdu FT D-Letter to Deni - missing the rustic atmosphere
4 - The weather here Here, the weather is hot and polluted because ofthe number lots of vehicles a lot of...
LettersDeni - Oct 26, 2016 / saifuddin85 - Oct 30, 2016
|This is my letter - Unipdu FT C Letter to Mochammad Izzul Hidayatulloh
2 - Izzul, please consider the revised letter sample I am sharing with you as an example of a better structured...
Lettersmizzulh - Oct 29, 2016 / Holt - Oct 29, 2016
|This is my hobby now - Unipdu FT C Letter to Rachmat Bagus R.
2 - Hi Hudan, your letter shows a lot of promise with regards to your possible improvement in the use...
LettersHudan Aminulloh - Oct 29, 2016 / Holt - Oct 29, 2016
|My house with rural milieu. Unipdu FT D-Letter to Deni Stiawan
2 - Deni, here is a sample of how to better develop your letter using more complete and informative sentences: ...
LettersDeni dwi - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|UNIPDU FT-D LETTER TO ERSA; I've just moved into my home and live with my parents
2 - Nur, there are so many grammatical errors in your letter that is just best for me to revise the...
LettersLos Galacticos - Oct 27, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|Your new home sounds interesting, but check mine too. UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Uvi
3 - Mifta, here is a cleaned up version of your letter. I hope it helps you better analyze your sentence...
LettersMifta - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|Cover Letter for Resedential Volunteer ( Farmer- Chef) at Heifer International Farm
2 - Danielle, your cover letter should follow the same format as any application cover letter. That means it should also...
Letterscollegebound28 - Oct 26, 2016 / Holt - Oct 27, 2016
|unipdu FT-D_my letters to Deden - detailed description about my homeland
2 - Uhm.. I don't know where to start.. First, there are many grammatical errors in the letter and many...
Lettersirfan ian - Oct 26, 2016 / ichephe - Oct 26, 2016
|What is your new home environment there and are you happy with the atmosphere there? Letter to Feby
3 - Hello Anggi :) Let me check your letter :) Jl.gerilya 08 mancar, ==> Better if you use capital...
LettersAnggi Mega - Oct 26, 2016 / SarlindaDS_27 - Oct 26, 2016
|Unipdu FT-D letter to tell about my house in Belut, Jogoroto Jombang
2 - Hay ais how are you, I hope you're there always be fine, so am i. ... receive this letter,regarding...
LettersWiwit - Oct 26, 2016 / amrillahmk - Oct 26, 2016
|My house is bigger than before after the renovation. UNIPDU FTD- LETTERS TO ENI
2 - I assume that this letter needs major revision, especially with the letter format, grammar, and punctuations. Therefore, I would...
Lettersfera firina - Oct 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 26, 2016
|UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Mifta; I have moved into a new house
2 - Hi Uvi, Welcome to EssayForum :) Due to lots of grammatical issues that need to be addressed, I...
LettersUvi - Oct 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 26, 2016
|A [Job Application] Cover Letter: Why consulting is for me, and why this firm is the right place
4 - Thank you. I am reducing the size a bit...
Lettersdoktorrr - Oct 20, 2016 / doktorrr - Oct 21, 2016
|'Good connection with others' - Write a letter of application to the tourism office
9 - Hi @justivy03 I studied english before , and nowadays I've been studying english again. these days I am improving...
LettersSaharHdi - Oct 16, 2016 / SaharHdi - Oct 19, 2016
|A Letter of Recommendation From My Research Adviser--M.S. Program Application. How To Revise It?
3 - Mary, THX for your kind help. I didn't realize there were as many problems as this. Some revisions...
Lettersyangbowen - Oct 18, 2016 / yangbowen - Oct 18, 2016
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