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|I have to write an email to all the employees to announce the office renovation plan.
3 - This is a business letter. Therefore, it must use all formal and professional forms of address. It is incorrect...
Letterssoulpancake - Nov 10, 2019 / Holt - 4 hrs ago
|Erasmus Mundus cover letter: GLOCAL Programme Global Markets and Creative Industries Pathway
3 - @Holt Thanks! Below is my revised draft. Grateful for more inputs. Dear Selection Committee, I came across...
Lettersbooos_1999 - Nov 29, 2022 / booos_1999 - Dec 1, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus: Neurasmus Motivation Letter; neuroscience with a specialization in genomics
2 - More than 80% of this essay is irrelevant to the proper motivation for attending the program. Since this is...
Lettersryoryo - Nov 30, 2022 / Holt - Dec 1, 2022
|Info-Bionics Engineering - Motivation letter for graduate school
2 - The first paragraph of this essay is quite concise in representing the motivation of the student and the imperative...
Lettersddrazoh - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 30, 2022
|Motivation letter for Undergraduate Study program (computer science)
2 - The last paragraph would have been highly effective as the establishing paragraph in the opening portion. This should definitely...
Letterszholochievvv - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 29, 2022
|A letter written by me to introduce one of my friends for a newspaper award.
LettersQuyennguyetri - Nov 25, 2022 / jenny0601 - Nov 28, 2022
|Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum Programme (computer science at Jadara University)
2 - This is a directionless letter that does not make the intention of the writer clear. Does the writer wish...
LettersEyas Alomari - Nov 25, 2022 / Holt - Nov 26, 2022
|Motivation Letter - Russian Scholarship (Biology and Biotechnology)
2 - This is the actual focus of the motivation letter. This is the main topic the writer should show...
Lettersmaisaaziad - Nov 16, 2022 / Holt - Nov 17, 2022
|Biotechnology - Motivational letter for master program in university
2 - The letter could be more straight forward in explaining the motivation. Since this appears to be a continuing research...
Lettersuletrax - Nov 15, 2022 / Holt - Nov 16, 2022
|LOR for student applying to Msc Data science
2 - A letter of recommendation for a masters course often comes with a prompt from the university the student is...
Letterslayla12 - Nov 1, 2022 / Holt - Nov 2, 2022
|Help me to write exemption letter
6 - @strangersth write your motivation letter and post it here for a review. Take note that the motivation letter could...
LettersSohaib799 - Aug 23, 2013 / Holt - Oct 31, 2022
|Prospective MS student - Looking for potential research opportunities for fall 2023
2 - Let me just point out that research professors do not appreciate unsolicited emails asking about position openings on their...
Lettersrs26 - Oct 15, 2022 / Holt - Oct 15, 2022
|Mental health policies. Motivation letter for EuroPubHealth+ Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
4 - Hello Gustavo, I think you should elaborate more on how your experiences with mental health issues has pushed you...
LettersKoiD - Oct 4, 2022 / Pettypet - Oct 6, 2022
|The Interdisciplinary program. Motivation Letter For Master's In Norway
3 - @Holt this is the updated version My name is Samiullah Khan, and I am writing this letter to express...
LettersSamee Ullah - Oct 3, 2022 / Samee Ullah - Oct 5, 2022
|Motivation letter to pursue a phd in Battery Management system in the University
2 - The admissions committee is not looking to learn about the applicant's work biography, which is what he summarized in...
LettersNishant1989 - Oct 1, 2022 / Holt - Oct 2, 2022
|Letter of Motivation, Computer Science for pursing Masters in Germany
2 - The first 2 paragraphs of this essay do not relate to the motivational aspect of the letter so these...
LettersFarhan2910 - Sep 21, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
|Impressive academic potential - LOR
2 - This letter will be totally unacceptable to the GKS review committee ( That is a big IF the applicant...
Lettersgogy - Sep 15, 2022 / Holt - Sep 15, 2022
|'The beginning is the middle' - Letter of motivation for GKS-U education
4 - @Holt I thank you for your reply. I tried to follow your advice and rewrite my personal statement making...
Lettersannyxradit - Sep 8, 2022 / annyxradit - Sep 10, 2022
|Write a letter in reply to the tourism office advertisement
2 - The writer has mostly problems with writing sentences in English. He often loses track of who is speaking and...
Lettersntminh720 - Sep 3, 2022 / Holt - Sep 4, 2022
|Fascination by hardware and software. Motivation Letter for applying to a master proramme
2 - The writer has developed a friendly letter of introduction. It does not reflect the necessary information requirements for a...
Lettersaseil - Aug 31, 2022 / Holt - Aug 31, 2022
|Pursuing my Master of Arts - Graduate Scholarship Application
2 - It is impossible to review an essay that avoids all mention of important information. I have nothing to review...
Lettersdigitalliteracy - Aug 19, 2022 / Holt - Aug 19, 2022
|Letter of intent for Business Administration. Business is a matter of passion for me
NEW - Letter of intent for Business Administration Business has become one of the most important aspects of our life...
Lettersoluwalan - Aug 11, 2022 / — -
|Study Plan for Canadian Study Permit - Art, Creation and Technology Program
2 - The study plan could use more educational background reference. It would help reinforce the idea that the applicant is...
Letterstxmdd - Jul 11, 2022 / Holt - Jul 11, 2022
|To Study in Romania - Motivation letter for Romanian Government Scholarship
2 - The application cycle for this scholarship is currently closed. I am not sure why you are preparing a motivational...
Lettersendlerviena - Jul 9, 2022 / Holt - Jul 9, 2022
|A Study plan for Canada Study Permit - a professional master in Digital Media from a mature student
3 - @Holt I was aware that my application would be hard, so I tried my best to cover the potential...
Letterssongoftruth - Jun 19, 2022 / songoftruth - Jun 20, 2022
|Express motivation to pursue a Master Business Analytics & Econometrics study
2 - This is a personal statement. It should not be confused with a motivational letter. The motivational letter focuses on...
Letterspudtarn - Jun 10, 2022 / Holt - Jun 10, 2022
|A motivation letter for why I want to read Geoengineering at the University of Florence, Italy.
2 - The experience your father had when you were 8 years old is irrelevant. It is a stretch to believe...
Lettershenryasareadjei - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
|The Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation - Motivation Letter
2 - The motivation letter does not have a prompt, which makes writing it difficult. Without guidance, your tendency will be...
LettersKelly1998 - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
|E-mail: Request for a recommendation letter for the graduate program
2 - The professor is going to decline your request yet again. The reason will be that you are seemingly dictating...
Lettersjsadu - May 29, 2022 / Holt - May 29, 2022
|Ielts writing task 1: A response to a complaint of your neighbors about the noise from your house.
2 - The letter is using an inapplicable scenario. The prompt indicates that the noise problem must be a current problem...
LettersLanita - May 23, 2022 / Holt - May 23, 2022
|Becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry; Motivation Letter for foreign university
2 - The opening statement is acceptable for the most part. However, I am confused as to whether you are applying...
Lettersnisshankaul - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
|Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Civil Engineering
2 - It is good but could be more informative. The first paragraph is taken as the opportunity for the recommendee...
LettersAhmed Aborai - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
|The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC
2 - The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student...
Lettersdineshni - May 16, 2022 / Holt - May 16, 2022
|SAP Appeal Letter Review for College
2 - If the applicant is not willing to get personal with this letter of appeal by offering information that would...
Lettersabeishere - May 12, 2022 / Holt - May 12, 2022
|Accounting - Letter of explanation for study permit in canada
2 - The entire letter is not going to be believable to the consular or visa officer upon first, second, or...
LettersMikebael - May 10, 2022 / Holt - May 11, 2022
|Motivational letter for the University Paris-Saclay, Master's in English for Specific Purposes
2 - It should not only be shortened, it should be deleted in totality with a more appropriate motivational letter written...
LettersDina K - May 6, 2022 / Holt - May 7, 2022
|Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter (UNIVERSITY OF TWENTE)
2 - The response to the first few questions of the essay are on point. The paragraphs respond to the questions,...
Lettersyosuarmand - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Admission Postgraduate Certificate in Global Business Management at University
2 - Saying that "I love business" is too amateur. It is almost high schooler in sentiment. I would not use...
Letterstayyabqureshibe - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
|Msc Human technology in Sports and medicine - my motivation letter
3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for the reply. Yes, I will consider the changes you have recommended. Thank you...
LettersVk18luv - Apr 18, 2022 / Vk18luv - Apr 19, 2022
|COVER LETTER APPLY TO SCIENTIFIC DEVELOPER POSITION AT SCHRODINGER, INC.
2 - The letter is not clear about whether the position being applied for is currently open or if the applicant...
Lettersdolong2110 - Apr 14, 2022 / Holt - Apr 15, 2022
|Letter of Motivation PhD (research-based, with pre-defined research topic)
2 - Seeing how the motivation for your studies stems more from related experiences after completing the masters course, the molrational...
Lettersedgmin - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 13, 2022
|Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter
2 - I would have to say that the writer over-developed the content of the letter to the point where it...
Lettersvincdels - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 12, 2022
|You have received an email from the manager of Science club
2 - The sentence structure and word usage in this letter is so bad, the letter loses all its meaning and...
Lettersquynha1603 - Apr 11, 2022 / Holt - Apr 11, 2022
|Letter of recommendation for Berea College
2 - The recommendation letter is highly individualistic in focus. It speaks only of the solitary nature of the student. This...
Lettersyejiitzy - Apr 9, 2022 / Holt - Apr 10, 2022
|Motivation letter - Master of Science in Spatial data science - Munster, Germany
2 - The 2000 word maximum need not be used if the writer tends to over-extend his motivational letter with non-motivational...
LettersabdelrhmanCS - Apr 6, 2022 / Holt - Apr 6, 2022
|Teaching and National Prizes in Computer Science - Letter of recommendation for GKS-U
Lettersbritonnn - Apr 4, 2022 / britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
|Application for the Master of Education program in Canada - plan of study essay
2 - 11 paragraphs proves to be too long for a study plan explanation. The winter takes several paragraphs before it...
Lettersjenny_ye - Apr 1, 2022 / Holt - Apr 1, 2022
|LOR/Recommendation letter for undergraduate - Business Administration
2 - The letter does not contain the same academic tone that it should have, if a teacher had actually written...
Letterskayce - Mar 31, 2022 / Holt - Mar 31, 2022
|Motivation Letter - Research Master in Business - Maastricht University - The Netherlands
2 - The response essay needs to be better structured by creating a clear relationship between the courses of interest to...
Lettershdmquan - Mar 27, 2022 / Holt - Mar 27, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus Master In Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE)-- Motivation Letter
2 - The current letter can be made shorter and direct to the point. Remember that there are thousands of applicants...
Letterszack1211 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
|Letter of Motivation Masters in Cybersecurity (Germany)
2 - The historical references in this essay are all more than 5 years old making these irrelevant in relation to...
LettersRishi986 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
|Statement letter for pursuing a master's degree in petroleum refining.
2 - The letter is too weak as it does not represent a strong and imperative reason for your decision to...
LettersTheep - Mar 15, 2022 / Holt - Mar 15, 2022
|Motivational Letter for the PhD doctoral course in Computer science
Lettersmuhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 3, 2022 / muhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 4, 2022
|[GKS-G] Letter Of Recommendation on behalf of my PROFFESOR for application to SNU
2 - There are conflicting statements in the recommendation letter. An example of the conflict is with regards to the thesis...
LettersViktoriAnders - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 4, 2022
|Management Engineering focusing on circular economy motivation letter
2 - A motivational letter aimed at attending an international university masters course is not an academic and internship biography. The...
LettersJulyffff - Mar 1, 2022 / Holt - Mar 1, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus European Politics and Society – Václav Havel Joint Master - Motivation Letter
3 - You need to work more in your background, what makes you the best candidate for them? Prove that you...
Lettersiamzakariakk - Feb 28, 2022 / Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022
|MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SUSTAINABLE FOOD SYSTEM MASTER PROGRAMME AT SLU (SWEDEN)
2 - Disposable sentence. It does nothing to help the essay move forward. Since the prompt already indicates everything the...
Lettersnhidinh2998 - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
|My time in Sweden - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship
3 - Hey Holt Thanks for your feedback. That was my mistake when I forgot to remove the first sentence. That...
Lettersnghiabui - Feb 22, 2022 / nghiabui - Feb 22, 2022
|Scholarship Motivation Letter - Lund University, Sweden 2022
2 - This is a waste of space in your motivational letter. Sure the words of Sherly Sandberg were inspirational...
Lettersserra_biels - Feb 21, 2022 / Holt - Feb 22, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Scholarship admission in Sweden - The environmental master's programs
2 - Why at this institute? How does the knowledge you will gain translate into a benefit for the institute?...
Lettersansurya - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
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