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|An email: A lost bag You went to your friend Jay's house yesterday and you left your bag there.
2 - The letter writing task shares the same criteria as the other Task 1 essays. That means, you cannot write...
LettersHamin - 1 day ago / Holt - 16 hrs ago
|Statement of Purpose for MSc Information and Communication Technology at FAU Erlangen
3 - @Eengineer999 Consider using headings to break up the content - for example, 'Why the University?' 'Why this course?' 'Career...
LettersEengineer999 - Feb 23, 2023 / nawaf - Mar 9, 2023
|Motivation Essay for studying MS in Architecture - Building Technology, TU DELFT
2 - When applying to an MSc program of this type, the reviewers will always prioritize candidates who have a professional...
Lettersmanikagarg - Feb 17, 2023 / Holt - Feb 18, 2023
|Motivation Letter for Master Degree Consumer Science at TU Berlin
Letterstumtuma - Jan 26, 2023 / Holt - Jan 27, 2023
|Motivation Letter for Bachelor's program in Biomedical Sciences
4 - @Holt Hi, sorry to bother I have just taken a closer look at the requirements of the Motivation Letter,...
Lettersngochieu29 - Jan 16, 2023 / ngochieu29 - Jan 18, 2023
|Management and Economics - Letter of Motivation Masters Program
2 - A proper review and advice for this motivational letter cannot be provided as the essential information has been removed...
Letterskalleanka321 - Jan 17, 2023 / Holt - Jan 17, 2023
|Motivation letter for MSc in Material Science Engineering
2 - It is very difficult for me to review this essay due to erased information which could have helped me...
Lettersanto_who - Jan 13, 2023 / Holt - Jan 17, 2023
|Motivation letter - 4 Cities Msc. Urban Studies (max. 2 pages)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your help, I will improve my motivation letter including your suggestions....
Letterselisautzig - Jan 10, 2023 / elisautzig - Jan 11, 2023
|Young Professional for International Business and Economy - A motivation letter for undergraduate
3 - I find it quite interesting, but you could add a paragraph depicts what are your favourite subjects at the...
Lettersalieayaa - Jan 8, 2023 / chewbacauk - Jan 10, 2023
|Revewing a Motivational Letter for IFROS (intelligent Field Robotics Systems) Scholarship
4 - I find the 2nd paragraph seems a little long to read and I would easily get distracted, you should...
Lettersglowstorm - Jan 7, 2023 / chewbacauk - Jan 10, 2023
|Motivation Letter for erasmus mundus to Consortium dealing with ME3
2 - For starters, you need to know that a motivational letter should only comprise a single page, single spaced, no...
Lettersahsan9702 - Jan 8, 2023 / Holt - Jan 9, 2023
|Studying in Hungary challenge. International Relations - Motivation letter for STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM
2 - Relate the motivation more towards being inspired by the current Russian diplomatic relations on a global scale. That would...
Lettersthe writer - Jan 6, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|Worldwide relations. Motivation Letter for Master's Program with Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship
2 - Thank you for indicating that you will be applying to 2 masters programs. The problem is that I cannot...
Lettersbsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|Motivation Letter for Universities offering Human Computer Interaction
2 - Heed the warning about the last chance. This will be the first and last redacted essay from you that...
LettersZzssrish - Jan 4, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum for MSc in Agricultural Biotechnology
LettersFR8899 - Dec 26, 2022 / FR8899 - Jan 3, 2023
|Applying for a Master's degree in computer science; MOTIVATIONAL LETTER
4 - Hi, this is a well-structured letter already. Maybe you can add the challenges that may occur during your time...
LettersHuyNB - Dec 15, 2022 / franklywritten - Jan 2, 2023
|Motivation Letter for embedded systems master program ...
3 - @Holt thank you for your help .. I will take this into consideration while rewriting the letter....
Lettersaseilattia - Dec 26, 2022 / aseilattia - Dec 27, 2022
|Double Degree Motivational Letter; My interest in business management
2 - Nobody will be able to offer a solid review of this motivational letter because of the redacted information. This...
Letterstttiiiaaa - Dec 27, 2022 / Holt - Dec 27, 2022
|Letter of Motivation for Hydrology and Geological Risk Engineering
2 - Since this is a motivation letter, the information it provides should have a backward flow. Present the information in...
Lettersnaqvisyed - Dec 24, 2022 / Holt - Dec 25, 2022
|LETTER OF MOTIVATION for Water and Geological Risk Engineering
Lettersmunimjaffer - Dec 21, 2022 / munimjaffer - Dec 23, 2022
|Reference letter for Swedish institute admission
2 - What you have written is an incomprehensible paragraph. It will confuse a native speaker who will notbe able to...
Lettersto be - Dec 16, 2022 / Holt - Dec 17, 2022
|Study Plan for Canadian Study Permit - Art, Creation and Technology Program
3 - Merged: Study Plan for Canadian Study Permit Canadian Embassy Visa Office Subject Subject: Study plan ...
Letterstxmdd - Jul 11, 2022 / txmdd - Dec 13, 2022
|Cover letter for Astrophysics PhD application ( Exoplanets)
2 - The closing paragraph would be a perfect opener with just a little editing. This time, try to mention what...
Lettersayeshaarshad95 - Dec 11, 2022 / Holt - Dec 11, 2022
|I have to write an email to all the employees to announce the office renovation plan.
3 - This is a business letter. Therefore, it must use all formal and professional forms of address. It is incorrect...
Letterssoulpancake - Nov 10, 2019 / Holt - Dec 7, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus cover letter: GLOCAL Programme Global Markets and Creative Industries Pathway
3 - @Holt Thanks! Below is my revised draft. Grateful for more inputs. Dear Selection Committee, I came across...
Lettersbooos_1999 - Nov 29, 2022 / booos_1999 - Dec 1, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus: Neurasmus Motivation Letter; neuroscience with a specialization in genomics
2 - More than 80% of this essay is irrelevant to the proper motivation for attending the program. Since this is...
Lettersryoryo - Nov 30, 2022 / Holt - Dec 1, 2022
|Info-Bionics Engineering - Motivation letter for graduate school
2 - The first paragraph of this essay is quite concise in representing the motivation of the student and the imperative...
Lettersddrazoh - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 30, 2022
|Motivation letter for Undergraduate Study program (computer science)
2 - The last paragraph would have been highly effective as the establishing paragraph in the opening portion. This should definitely...
Letterszholochievvv - Nov 29, 2022 / Holt - Nov 29, 2022
|A letter written by me to introduce one of my friends for a newspaper award.
LettersQuyennguyetri - Nov 25, 2022 / jenny0601 - Nov 28, 2022
|Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum Programme (computer science at Jadara University)
2 - This is a directionless letter that does not make the intention of the writer clear. Does the writer wish...
LettersEyas Alomari - Nov 25, 2022 / Holt - Nov 26, 2022
|Motivation Letter - Russian Scholarship (Biology and Biotechnology)
2 - This is the actual focus of the motivation letter. This is the main topic the writer should show...
Lettersmaisaaziad - Nov 16, 2022 / Holt - Nov 17, 2022
|Biotechnology - Motivational letter for master program in university
2 - The letter could be more straight forward in explaining the motivation. Since this appears to be a continuing research...
Lettersuletrax - Nov 15, 2022 / Holt - Nov 16, 2022
|LOR for student applying to Msc Data science
2 - A letter of recommendation for a masters course often comes with a prompt from the university the student is...
Letterslayla12 - Nov 1, 2022 / Holt - Nov 2, 2022
|Help me to write exemption letter
6 - @strangersth write your motivation letter and post it here for a review. Take note that the motivation letter could...
LettersSohaib799 - Aug 23, 2013 / Holt - Oct 31, 2022
|Prospective MS student - Looking for potential research opportunities for fall 2023
2 - Let me just point out that research professors do not appreciate unsolicited emails asking about position openings on their...
Lettersrs26 - Oct 15, 2022 / Holt - Oct 15, 2022
|Mental health policies. Motivation letter for EuroPubHealth+ Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
4 - Hello Gustavo, I think you should elaborate more on how your experiences with mental health issues has pushed you...
LettersKoiD - Oct 4, 2022 / Pettypet - Oct 6, 2022
|The Interdisciplinary program. Motivation Letter For Master's In Norway
3 - @Holt this is the updated version My name is Samiullah Khan, and I am writing this letter to express...
LettersSamee Ullah - Oct 3, 2022 / Samee Ullah - Oct 5, 2022
|Motivation letter to pursue a phd in Battery Management system in the University
2 - The admissions committee is not looking to learn about the applicant's work biography, which is what he summarized in...
LettersNishant1989 - Oct 1, 2022 / Holt - Oct 2, 2022
|Letter of Motivation, Computer Science for pursing Masters in Germany
2 - The first 2 paragraphs of this essay do not relate to the motivational aspect of the letter so these...
LettersFarhan2910 - Sep 21, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
|Impressive academic potential - LOR
2 - This letter will be totally unacceptable to the GKS review committee ( That is a big IF the applicant...
Lettersgogy - Sep 15, 2022 / Holt - Sep 15, 2022
|'The beginning is the middle' - Letter of motivation for GKS-U education
4 - @Holt I thank you for your reply. I tried to follow your advice and rewrite my personal statement making...
Lettersannyxradit - Sep 8, 2022 / annyxradit - Sep 10, 2022
|Write a letter in reply to the tourism office advertisement
2 - The writer has mostly problems with writing sentences in English. He often loses track of who is speaking and...
Lettersntminh720 - Sep 3, 2022 / Holt - Sep 4, 2022
|Fascination by hardware and software. Motivation Letter for applying to a master proramme
2 - The writer has developed a friendly letter of introduction. It does not reflect the necessary information requirements for a...
Lettersaseil - Aug 31, 2022 / Holt - Aug 31, 2022
|Pursuing my Master of Arts - Graduate Scholarship Application
2 - It is impossible to review an essay that avoids all mention of important information. I have nothing to review...
Lettersdigitalliteracy - Aug 19, 2022 / Holt - Aug 19, 2022
|Letter of intent for Business Administration. Business is a matter of passion for me
NEW - Letter of intent for Business Administration Business has become one of the most important aspects of our life...
Lettersoluwalan - Aug 11, 2022 / — -
|To Study in Romania - Motivation letter for Romanian Government Scholarship
2 - The application cycle for this scholarship is currently closed. I am not sure why you are preparing a motivational...
Lettersendlerviena - Jul 9, 2022 / Holt - Jul 9, 2022
|A Study plan for Canada Study Permit - a professional master in Digital Media from a mature student
3 - @Holt I was aware that my application would be hard, so I tried my best to cover the potential...
Letterssongoftruth - Jun 19, 2022 / songoftruth - Jun 20, 2022
|Express motivation to pursue a Master Business Analytics & Econometrics study
2 - This is a personal statement. It should not be confused with a motivational letter. The motivational letter focuses on...
Letterspudtarn - Jun 10, 2022 / Holt - Jun 10, 2022
|A motivation letter for why I want to read Geoengineering at the University of Florence, Italy.
2 - The experience your father had when you were 8 years old is irrelevant. It is a stretch to believe...
Lettershenryasareadjei - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
|The Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation - Motivation Letter
2 - The motivation letter does not have a prompt, which makes writing it difficult. Without guidance, your tendency will be...
LettersKelly1998 - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
|E-mail: Request for a recommendation letter for the graduate program
2 - The professor is going to decline your request yet again. The reason will be that you are seemingly dictating...
Lettersjsadu - May 29, 2022 / Holt - May 29, 2022
|Ielts writing task 1: A response to a complaint of your neighbors about the noise from your house.
2 - The letter is using an inapplicable scenario. The prompt indicates that the noise problem must be a current problem...
LettersLanita - May 23, 2022 / Holt - May 23, 2022
|Becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry; Motivation Letter for foreign university
2 - The opening statement is acceptable for the most part. However, I am confused as to whether you are applying...
Lettersnisshankaul - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
|Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Civil Engineering
2 - It is good but could be more informative. The first paragraph is taken as the opportunity for the recommendee...
LettersAhmed Aborai - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
|The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC
2 - The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student...
Lettersdineshni - May 16, 2022 / Holt - May 16, 2022
|SAP Appeal Letter Review for College
2 - If the applicant is not willing to get personal with this letter of appeal by offering information that would...
Lettersabeishere - May 12, 2022 / Holt - May 12, 2022
|Accounting - Letter of explanation for study permit in canada
2 - The entire letter is not going to be believable to the consular or visa officer upon first, second, or...
LettersMikebael - May 10, 2022 / Holt - May 11, 2022
|Motivational letter for the University Paris-Saclay, Master's in English for Specific Purposes
2 - It should not only be shortened, it should be deleted in totality with a more appropriate motivational letter written...
LettersDina K - May 6, 2022 / Holt - May 7, 2022
|Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter (UNIVERSITY OF TWENTE)
2 - The response to the first few questions of the essay are on point. The paragraphs respond to the questions,...
Lettersyosuarmand - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Admission Postgraduate Certificate in Global Business Management at University
2 - Saying that "I love business" is too amateur. It is almost high schooler in sentiment. I would not use...
Letterstayyabqureshibe - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
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