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|Job Shadowing request from different department
LettersAshkan123 - Mar 1, 2018 / Ashkan123 - Mar 6, 2018
|Recommendation Letter by Mentor in University for A Scholarship Application
5 - This is my suggestion for your first paragraph but I am not sure if it is good(Something to think)...
Lettershanabanana - Feb 22, 2018 / Ashkan123 - Mar 1, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Master Degree at RWTH Aachen - Software Systems Engineering
2 - Dzaky, I read your letter from paragraph to paragraph, till the very end and I did not come across...
Lettersdzakybd - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Do you think the laws are needed to make people recycle?
4 - Chen, first up, the Task 2 essay must always have 5 paragraphs composed of an opening, 3 body paragraphs,...
Lettersying_chen - Feb 22, 2018 / Holt - Feb 23, 2018
|You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, you realised you had left your wallet.
2 - Inderjeet, this letter sounds like you used a very bad translator program to write it. It almost sounds like...
LettersinderGTR - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|Application for acceptance into Master program for Operations and Innovation Management
2 - Cosmin, What you have written is a very informative essay but it does not directly refer to a response...
Letterscosmin - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|Max 300 words in which you describe why you would like to attend the programme you have chosen
2 - Abdul, the first paragraph of your motivational letter is not necessary. You can skip that presentation because the motivational...
LettersAbdulJabbar - Feb 19, 2018 / Holt - Feb 20, 2018
|Cover Letter : IT University of Copenhagen
3 - Diwakar, the purpose of a cover letter is to provide a summary of the content of the various essays...
Letterszer0leet - Feb 13, 2018 / Holt - Feb 14, 2018
|Letter of recommendation for Scholarship - description of an applicant
2 - Hilza, have a problem with your response to question number 3. This is too obviously written by the student...
LettershiHilz95 - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|Email to my manager to request subscription for some websites.
4 - Hi Ashkan123, Your letter looks very informal. 1. ) Hi Dear XXXX : start the salutation as "Dear"....
LettersAshkan123 - Jan 23, 2018 / senuthilini - Feb 2, 2018
|A very short essay for the European Commission traineeship
2 - Alessandra, this response is like a hamster on a wheel. Constantly churning out words but not getting anywhere. You...
LettersAlexxaStonem - Jan 29, 2018 / Holt - Jan 29, 2018
|Motivation letter for MSc in BA and SCM at a Dutch university
2 - Natalia, the content of your essay is more in line with a letter of self introduction than a motivational...
LettersNatalie513 - Jan 27, 2018 / Holt - Jan 28, 2018
|Statement of purpose for pursuing the master of data science/business analytics in the Netherlands
4 - @Holt Thanks a lot. I am surprised with your complete and quick review! I rewrite it again. Should i...
Lettersyazdanifard - Jan 16, 2018 / yazdanifard - Jan 16, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Master program at Nürnberg University, Germany; 'garnering a wealth of ideas'
2 - Sameh, if the motivational letter does not come with a maximum word count, you should consider expanding your discussions...
LettersPryda - Jan 14, 2018 / Holt - Jan 14, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Information Technology MSc program in Germany
3 - Thank you Holt for your correction and comments. I will revise the letter as per your comments and...
LettersSamer Zekry - Jan 7, 2018 / Samer Zekry - Jan 7, 2018
|Recommendation letter for Chevening program.
3 - @Holt Thanks i will work on that and revise it you mentioned good points i will use those points...
Lettersnaseernasrati - Dec 28, 2017 / naseernasrati - Dec 29, 2017
|Cover letter for accountant position
3 - @Holt I am very thankful for your constructive feedback and considering my problem. This is the first time I...
Letterskhanhnguyennh93 - Dec 15, 2017 / khanhnguyennh93 - Dec 16, 2017
|My letter to express my scientific interest in applying for the Doctor Program in Mathematics.
2 - Phi, the only part of this letter that you can use is the fourth paragraph that discusses the reasons...
Letterskarisa - Dec 16, 2017 / Holt - Dec 16, 2017
|Job Application for a part-time job
2 - Vishnu, the letter that you wrote is not properly developed. You only delivered the most specific prompt requirements as...
Lettersrinirini - Dec 13, 2017 / Holt - Dec 13, 2017
|Complain about the restaurant service.
3 - However shoul have been begun as a new sentence whenever you use it. minutes for food. However,... You can...
Lettershappyfunny - Dec 3, 2017 / rinirini - Dec 13, 2017
|Writing a letter of recommendation for one of my employees.
Lettersofmorale - Dec 12, 2017 / ofmorale - Dec 12, 2017
|Cover letter for a trainee program position at Daimler Greater China company
5 - @Honghaoli Thanks for your help. You are right, I should not tell the HR again the things I have...
LettersStandings - Dec 2, 2017 / Standings - Dec 2, 2017
|Email to my manager and request to be my reference
3 - The letter is too straightforward. You always need to use diplomacy and tact when writing these reference request letters...
LettersAshkan123 - Nov 22, 2017 / Holt - Nov 22, 2017
|Recommendation Letter to British embassy, my journey to study Urban Planning.
5 - Naseer, remove the last line about you being one of the top applicants. That sounds very presumptive of your...
Lettersnaseernasrati - Nov 13, 2017 / Holt - Nov 19, 2017
|Has television ruined bonds among friends and family or not? TOEFL Independent essay.
4 - Naseer, the first rule of English Test writing is that the opening statement is always meant to prove your...
Lettersnaseernasrati - Nov 14, 2017 / Holt - Nov 14, 2017
|Recommendation Letter for Electrical Engineering Phd Program
3 - @ Holt I tried hard to rewrite the recommendation letter according to your valuable advice. My teacher's personal information...
Lettersphyllis - Nov 9, 2017 / phyllis - Nov 9, 2017
|Motivation Letter - UN4MUN South East Asia Conference
Lettersrubychautran - Nov 6, 2017 / rubychautran - Nov 7, 2017
|MOTIVATION LETTER for Behavioural Science at Radboud University
3 - Levent, you should about presenting the same information twice in the same essay. Your opening paragraph contains the same...
LettersMario94 - Nov 5, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|This is a letter of recomentation from the Head of computer engineering department.
5 - Generally, universities want recommendation letter to: 1. State how you rank among other students (whether you are in the...
Lettersshub08 - Nov 2, 2017 / rumihumaira - Nov 4, 2017
|'She was flexible and willing to work on any project' - recommendation letter from employer
Letterscaoline - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 21, 2017
|A letter to newspaper editor regarding a benevolent stranger who helped an elderly relative of yours
4 - I think you should focus more on the description of the characters, for example, the stranger who helped the...
Lettersraikaashraf - Oct 11, 2017 / abhishek125 - Oct 14, 2017
|ADMISSION LETTER TO UNIVERSITY PART TIME PROGRAM
Lettersbeomkomap - Oct 3, 2017 / beomkomap - Oct 4, 2017
|The quality of a reference letter addressed to the Chevening Scholarship
4 - @Holt Dear Holt, I should confess that you are astute in terms of discovering that I who wrote this...
LettersAnwar Al Behadil - Sep 13, 2017 / Anwar Al Behadil - Sep 13, 2017
|Application letter for the Teaching Assistant position - Vietnam USA Society English Centers
Lettersvan94 - Sep 6, 2017 / van94 - Sep 7, 2017
|What makes my candidacy valid for the traineeship? Motivation letter for Eur. Commission programme
3 - @Holt Thank you for providing me valuable feedback. I come up the following after reading your suggestion. ...
Lettershassanimam - Aug 28, 2017 / hassanimam - Aug 28, 2017
|Motivation Letter to study " IT " master in Germany
4 - Thanks for your opinion "Clausthal" This is the name of the university. Clausthal Technical University @vodang...
Lettersosaco - Aug 26, 2017 / osaco - Aug 28, 2017
|I wrote this email, but I would like to know if it is good
Lettersana35 - Aug 22, 2017 / — -
|You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some ...
2 - Vijay, you have misplaced your things after a conference, you cannot give just your first name to the hotel...
Lettersvijaykumar09 - Jul 31, 2017 / Holt - Jul 31, 2017
|My Essay for the Application to AFRICAN UNION YOUTH VOLUNTEER CORPS Program
3 - thanks for your input.I have done some editing. (please make this thread Urgent if you need a new Contributor's...
Lettersesie2017 - Jul 18, 2017 / esie2017 - Jul 26, 2017
|The program at the University of Winnipeg is suited for my goals.
Lettersafrin sultana - Jul 20, 2017 / afrin sultana - Jul 24, 2017
|Cover letter apply for assistance research position (my educational skills and motivation)
3 - Thanks for your precious comments, I try to consider all these useful suggestions. Based on your opinion it's better...
LettersAtoosa Alibeigi - Jul 23, 2017 / Atoosa Alibeigi - Jul 23, 2017
|You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. The letter in this case.
Lettershe227803 - Jul 2, 2017 / numissh - Jul 7, 2017
|Cover letter for study permit in Canada at Cape Breton University
Lettersdexterloax - Jun 25, 2017 / dexterloax - Jun 26, 2017
|My goal to be a successful interdisciplinary bioinformatics scientist. Cover letter for scholarship
Lettersthanhbuu - Jun 18, 2017 / thanhbuu - Jun 18, 2017
|Cover letter for visiting researcher (PhD) from the United States
2 - Luna, in order to impress the professor and possibly, make him consider your acceptance as a visiting researcher to...
Letterslunamferolla - Jun 13, 2017 / Holt - Jun 14, 2017
|Im still here if you want to know me - Stanford roommate essay
4 - Your first paragraph got me confused when I read it and then the second paragraph because your first paragraph...
Lettersquietly_me - Jun 13, 2017 / chizy7 - Jun 14, 2017
|Motivation letter and curriculum vitae for Switzerland university
4 - I would also suggest that looking into faculty and unique programs of the university. Many institutions love when students...
LettersHarleyone - Jun 7, 2017 / healthstudent - Jun 8, 2017
|Study permit Canada: Study Plan. Cultural, Social, Political Thought Major - Lethbridge University
2 - Lopa, a study plan is not a summary of your past academic experiences. Rather, it is a look as...
Letterslopa116 - Jun 5, 2017 / Holt - Jun 6, 2017
|About TV in my country - Email to my friend - essays
Letterslenhatbao - May 26, 2017 / lenhatbao - May 26, 2017
|Your friend asked you to be a partner in his new business
Lettersoilcrow - May 25, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - May 26, 2017
|Finalizing my Uni appeal for Sociology
3 - @Holt thank you for the feedback. Actually I was trying to show how the skills I learnt during project...
LettersGuest - May 26, 2017 / Guest - May 26, 2017
|Provide College Cafeteria with suggestions
2 - for providing some suggestions in order to provide some suggestions I hope you can keep the price stay...
Lettersadambacon813 - May 8, 2017 / asilver427 - May 10, 2017
|Write a letter to a company for information about voluntary work in a developing country.
2 - @adambacon813 Its good and decent but I think we have to mention open for a chance or waiting for...
Lettersadambacon813 - May 6, 2017 / sarayu - May 8, 2017
|A letter to administration officer about the problem with my dormitory
2 - At first, I feel feltso lucky torenting the value of money room. of this value. NeverthelessHowever, my good mood...
Lettersadambacon813 - May 3, 2017 / az23 - May 3, 2017
|Negative experience due to the bad service and food. Writing a complaint letter to restaurant owner
Lettersadambacon813 - May 2, 2017 / adambacon813 - May 3, 2017
|Motivation Letter for Master's degree _ International Business and Management
2 - Nguyen, there are only two things that you should represent in the motivational letter, which should not be more...
Lettersnhngocphuong1710 - Apr 24, 2017 / Holt - Apr 24, 2017
|Applying for a business school in Netherlands - Motivation letter for Business Administration
3 - I think you should show your reasons why you want to choose this major and tell people about your...
LettersCroma - Mar 30, 2017 / frenchfries - Mar 31, 2017
|A plant breeder - my PhD cover letter
Lettersjasimpstu - Mar 26, 2017 / jasimpstu - Mar 27, 2017
|Reconsidering my application - how to write a good appeal for sdsu?
3 - Tammy, the tone of your letter is too informal for an appeal letter. this must carry a serious and...
Lettersttran0408 - Mar 25, 2017 / Holt - Mar 26, 2017
|Canada Visit - Reply a friend's invitation.
2 - Dang, your letter should be better developed than this. All of your paragraphs are too short and do not...
Lettersthunga251090 - Mar 24, 2017 / Holt - Mar 24, 2017
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