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|A Study plan for Canada Study Permit - a professional master in Digital Media from a mature student
3 - @Holt I was aware that my application would be hard, so I tried my best to cover the potential...
Letterssongoftruth - Jun 19, 2022 / songoftruth - Jun 20, 2022
|Express motivation to pursue a Master Business Analytics & Econometrics study
2 - This is a personal statement. It should not be confused with a motivational letter. The motivational letter focuses on...
Letterspudtarn - Jun 10, 2022 / Holt - Jun 10, 2022
|A motivation letter for why I want to read Geoengineering at the University of Florence, Italy.
2 - The experience your father had when you were 8 years old is irrelevant. It is a stretch to believe...
Lettershenryasareadjei - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
|The Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation - Motivation Letter
2 - The motivation letter does not have a prompt, which makes writing it difficult. Without guidance, your tendency will be...
LettersKelly1998 - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 9, 2022
|E-mail: Request for a recommendation letter for the graduate program
2 - The professor is going to decline your request yet again. The reason will be that you are seemingly dictating...
Lettersjsadu - May 29, 2022 / Holt - May 29, 2022
|Ielts writing task 1: A response to a complaint of your neighbors about the noise from your house.
2 - The letter is using an inapplicable scenario. The prompt indicates that the noise problem must be a current problem...
LettersLanita - May 23, 2022 / Holt - May 23, 2022
|Becoming an entrepreneur in the software industry; Motivation Letter for foreign university
2 - The opening statement is acceptable for the most part. However, I am confused as to whether you are applying...
Lettersnisshankaul - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
|Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Civil Engineering
2 - It is good but could be more informative. The first paragraph is taken as the opportunity for the recommendee...
LettersAhmed Aborai - May 18, 2022 / Holt - May 18, 2022
|The Software Development and Entrepreneurship Degree - Motivation letter for BSC
2 - The first paragraph is well developed and serves as an effective lead-in to the actual motivational considerations the student...
Lettersdineshni - May 16, 2022 / Holt - May 16, 2022
|SAP Appeal Letter Review for College
2 - If the applicant is not willing to get personal with this letter of appeal by offering information that would...
Lettersabeishere - May 12, 2022 / Holt - May 12, 2022
|Accounting - Letter of explanation for study permit in canada
2 - The entire letter is not going to be believable to the consular or visa officer upon first, second, or...
LettersMikebael - May 10, 2022 / Holt - May 11, 2022
|Motivational letter for the University Paris-Saclay, Master's in English for Specific Purposes
2 - It should not only be shortened, it should be deleted in totality with a more appropriate motivational letter written...
LettersDina K - May 6, 2022 / Holt - May 7, 2022
|Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter (UNIVERSITY OF TWENTE)
2 - The response to the first few questions of the essay are on point. The paragraphs respond to the questions,...
Lettersyosuarmand - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Admission Postgraduate Certificate in Global Business Management at University
2 - Saying that "I love business" is too amateur. It is almost high schooler in sentiment. I would not use...
Letterstayyabqureshibe - Apr 25, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
|Msc Human technology in Sports and medicine - my motivation letter
3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for the reply. Yes, I will consider the changes you have recommended. Thank you...
LettersVk18luv - Apr 18, 2022 / Vk18luv - Apr 19, 2022
|COVER LETTER APPLY TO SCIENTIFIC DEVELOPER POSITION AT SCHRODINGER, INC.
2 - The letter is not clear about whether the position being applied for is currently open or if the applicant...
Lettersdolong2110 - Apr 14, 2022 / Holt - Apr 15, 2022
|Letter of Motivation PhD (research-based, with pre-defined research topic)
2 - Seeing how the motivation for your studies stems more from related experiences after completing the masters course, the molrational...
Lettersedgmin - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 13, 2022
|Master Environment and Energy Management Motivation letter
2 - I would have to say that the writer over-developed the content of the letter to the point where it...
Lettersvincdels - Apr 12, 2022 / Holt - Apr 12, 2022
|You have received an email from the manager of Science club
2 - The sentence structure and word usage in this letter is so bad, the letter loses all its meaning and...
Lettersquynha1603 - Apr 11, 2022 / Holt - Apr 11, 2022
|Letter of recommendation for Berea College
2 - The recommendation letter is highly individualistic in focus. It speaks only of the solitary nature of the student. This...
Lettersyejiitzy - Apr 9, 2022 / Holt - Apr 10, 2022
|Motivation letter - Master of Science in Spatial data science - Munster, Germany
2 - The 2000 word maximum need not be used if the writer tends to over-extend his motivational letter with non-motivational...
LettersabdelrhmanCS - Apr 6, 2022 / Holt - Apr 6, 2022
|Teaching and National Prizes in Computer Science - Letter of recommendation for GKS-U
Lettersbritonnn - Apr 4, 2022 / britonnn - Apr 5, 2022
|Application for the Master of Education program in Canada - plan of study essay
2 - 11 paragraphs proves to be too long for a study plan explanation. The winter takes several paragraphs before it...
Lettersjenny_ye - Apr 1, 2022 / Holt - Apr 1, 2022
|LOR/Recommendation letter for undergraduate - Business Administration
2 - The letter does not contain the same academic tone that it should have, if a teacher had actually written...
Letterskayce - Mar 31, 2022 / Holt - Mar 31, 2022
|Motivation Letter - Research Master in Business - Maastricht University - The Netherlands
2 - The response essay needs to be better structured by creating a clear relationship between the courses of interest to...
Lettershdmquan - Mar 27, 2022 / Holt - Mar 27, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus Master In Impact Entrepreneurship (EMMIE)-- Motivation Letter
2 - The current letter can be made shorter and direct to the point. Remember that there are thousands of applicants...
Letterszack1211 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
|Letter of Motivation Masters in Cybersecurity (Germany)
2 - The historical references in this essay are all more than 5 years old making these irrelevant in relation to...
LettersRishi986 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 22, 2022
|Statement letter for pursuing a master's degree in petroleum refining.
2 - The letter is too weak as it does not represent a strong and imperative reason for your decision to...
LettersTheep - Mar 15, 2022 / Holt - Mar 15, 2022
|Motivational Letter for the PhD doctoral course in Computer science
Lettersmuhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 3, 2022 / muhammadbinsaif0 - Mar 4, 2022
|[GKS-G] Letter Of Recommendation on behalf of my PROFFESOR for application to SNU
2 - There are conflicting statements in the recommendation letter. An example of the conflict is with regards to the thesis...
LettersViktoriAnders - Mar 3, 2022 / Holt - Mar 4, 2022
|Management Engineering focusing on circular economy motivation letter
2 - A motivational letter aimed at attending an international university masters course is not an academic and internship biography. The...
LettersJulyffff - Mar 1, 2022 / Holt - Mar 1, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus European Politics and Society – Václav Havel Joint Master - Motivation Letter
3 - You need to work more in your background, what makes you the best candidate for them? Prove that you...
Lettersiamzakariakk - Feb 28, 2022 / Julyffff - Mar 1, 2022
|MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SUSTAINABLE FOOD SYSTEM MASTER PROGRAMME AT SLU (SWEDEN)
2 - Disposable sentence. It does nothing to help the essay move forward. Since the prompt already indicates everything the...
Lettersnhidinh2998 - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
|My time in Sweden - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship
3 - Hey Holt Thanks for your feedback. That was my mistake when I forgot to remove the first sentence. That...
Lettersnghiabui - Feb 22, 2022 / nghiabui - Feb 22, 2022
|Scholarship Motivation Letter - Lund University, Sweden 2022
2 - This is a waste of space in your motivational letter. Sure the words of Sherly Sandberg were inspirational...
Lettersserra_biels - Feb 21, 2022 / Holt - Feb 22, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Scholarship admission in Sweden - The environmental master's programs
2 - Why at this institute? How does the knowledge you will gain translate into a benefit for the institute?...
Lettersansurya - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 19, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Turkiye Burslari Scholarship - Food engineering
3 - I think it is better to merge these paragraphs which have the same contents to make your assay with...
Lettersjklkoskal - Feb 18, 2022 / Loren - Feb 19, 2022
|Upon returning to Vietnam - Motivation Letter For SI scholarship
2 - you only need 2 paragraphs for your motivational letter. Merge the first and last paragraphs since the plans you...
Lettersnghiabui - Feb 17, 2022 / Holt - Feb 17, 2022
|Motivation letter for MSc in Business Analytics
2 - This paragraph is more geared towards a statement of purpose rather than a motivation letter since it describes...
Lettersfiorepaola - Feb 14, 2022 / Holt - Feb 15, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Sustainable Product Creation - Msc in Engineering
LettersEmjay - Feb 13, 2022 / Holt - Feb 14, 2022
|Public health - Motivation letter review for scholarship
2 - Address them formally either as Dear Consortium or To the Consortium. It is more acceptable than using the...
LettersAhmedd - Feb 12, 2022 / Holt - Feb 12, 2022
|From Germany to Africa - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR A MASTERS DEGREE IN ECONOMICS
2 - Only paragraphs 2,3,5,6, and 7, work for the motivational statement. The rest of the essay is irrelevant to a...
LettersHephzibar - Feb 7, 2022 / Holt - Feb 7, 2022
|Canadian Study Permit SOP - I was already refused once
2 - From the very start of the letter, I already saw at least 2 strong weaknesses in the presentation. One...
Lettersanaadi - Feb 5, 2022 / Holt - Feb 6, 2022
|Recommendation letter from principal for undergraduate
2 - The letter needs to be professionally written by a writer who can use this as the actual basis of...
Lettersheartadnail - Feb 2, 2022 / Holt - Feb 2, 2022
|EPOG Scholarship sustainability consultant motivation letter.
LettersJulyffff - Jan 30, 2022 / Holt - Jan 31, 2022
|Erasmus - Track F Glocal - green consulting
LettersJulyffff - Jan 23, 2022 / Julyffff - Jan 30, 2022
|Motivation letter for the erasmus mundus program in green networking and cloud computing
2 - The applicant lacks the required professional experience to be admitted into the EM program. The consortium will have to...
Lettersaminebdj - Jan 29, 2022 / Holt - Jan 29, 2022
|Electronics and Telecommunication Engineering - Erasmus mundus motivation letter
2 - So what? Every student has an ambition to pursue their studies in their field of work. There is...
LettersSanketnawale101 - Jan 28, 2022 / Holt - Jan 29, 2022
|Law student - Erasmus mundus motivation letter
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your honest review. I narrowed my topic to a singular theme as you...
Lettersgabriellacosta - Jan 27, 2022 / gabriellacosta - Jan 28, 2022
|Practice and theory. Motivational letter for MBA in university of Padua (Italy)
2 - The quotations, regardless of whether these are original or taken from someone else, are not necessary in a motivational...
Lettersahmadshk8888 - Jan 26, 2022 / Holt - Jan 27, 2022
|Write a motivational letter for MSC scholarship swedish University of Agricultural Sciences
LettersGlow92 - Jan 26, 2022 / Glow92 - Jan 26, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Masters at Tampere University in Peace, mediation and conflict research
2 - The overall letter is not applicable as a motivational reference. The content is more of a conversational personal statement....
Lettersaayushmaniktalia - Jan 25, 2022 / Holt - Jan 26, 2022
|Reference letter for Master of Design program in Hungarian university
2 - The first paragraph must contain a clear reference to the position of the person making the reference. It must...
LettersAni0506 - Jan 25, 2022 / Holt - Jan 26, 2022
|Motivation letter for applying to master in renewable energy in the marine environment program
2 - Since you are applying to the program with a handicap, the lack of at least 2 years relevant work...
Lettersokurus - Jan 23, 2022 / Holt - Jan 24, 2022
|Write an email for Jude about Saturday trip
2 - Unfortunately, the writer only wrote 89 words for a letter that must contain at least 150 words. This will...
LettersButterTrieu - Jan 22, 2022 / Holt - Jan 22, 2022
|Motivation letter for the Erasmus Mundus Master in Marine and Maritime Intelligent robotics program
3 - @Holt Thank's for your feedback. so except the fact that I didn't emphasize about my interest in maritime technology,...
Letterssofiane - Jan 20, 2022 / sofiane - Jan 21, 2022
|Motivation Letter for Imaging and Lighting in Extended Reality Programme (Erasmus Mundus)
2 - Review the requirements of the motivation letter. Compare it to what you have written. Your motivational letter does not...
Lettersbushranajeeb - Jan 19, 2022 / Holt - Jan 19, 2022
|Development Economics - Student Exchange Motivation Letter
4 - The reason why you wish to become a participant in the program is not convincing. The reason used is...
Lettersalyssa2036 - Jan 18, 2022 / Holt - Jan 18, 2022
|Write a letter, offering practical advice and reassuring students that they do not need to worry
LettersDoie - Jan 17, 2022 / Holt - Jan 18, 2022
|Medical Laboratory Science graduate - Motivation Letter for Stipendum Hungaricum
3 - Hello! you use words such as I really want which is kinda informal. Also the second paragraph is too...
LettersTulasse - Jan 17, 2022 / summerarcadia - Jan 17, 2022
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