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|Writing to a hotel to ask for support in getting a forgotten papers
3 - Han, it would be better to indicate that you either misplaced or left your documents behind. Don't say "forgotten"...
LettersHanNguyen0510 - Dec 4, 2018 / Holt - Dec 4, 2018
|This is the letter by my advisor - applying to the physics graduate program
4 - @Holt I am so sorry that I missed your notice. I am not really familiar with this forum. Anyway,...
LettersMCMichael - Nov 29, 2018 / MCMichael - Dec 3, 2018
|Motivation letter for a Master degree in English Linguistics.
2 - Abderrahim, your approach to writing this motivational letter sounds too elementary. It is almost as if you ar writing...
LettersAbderr12 - Nov 21, 2018 / Holt - Nov 22, 2018
|Cover letter for applying Ph.D. in renewable energy technologies
3 - Mohammad, your essay speaks of your strengths in a detailed manner. However, that is not going to be able...
LettersWhiplash - Nov 14, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|To complete their proposed program, what further development does the applicant require?
LettersA8bbas - Nov 3, 2018 / A8bbas - Nov 5, 2018
|Informal email to a proposed PhD supervisor
4 - Thank you so much. I really appreciate your help. This is informal application letter for a PhD studentships. What...
LettersHayu - Oct 23, 2018 / Hayu - Oct 24, 2018
|A letter to a newspaper about facilities for shoppers could be improved. Writing task 1 IELTS.
3 - @TJLuschen, First of all, I would like to thank you for your first, unfortunately, currently deleted reply. Also,...
LettersGreen77 - Oct 9, 2018 / Green77 - Oct 9, 2018
|Motivation letter for DAAD-scholarship in field of Fine Arts - jewelry design
2 - individual's creativity to worldwide = to the world By saying, Designer : myself, has a crucial roles ... -...
LettersNattawat - Oct 4, 2018 / Hetav Pandya - Oct 7, 2018
|Academic Dismissal Appeal Letter/readmission letter - low GPA, I felt disappointed in myself
4 - Nope. It doesn't make a difference because, in the eyes of the university, you still had a failing score...
Lettersbloomblaum42 - Jul 30, 2018 / Holt - Aug 1, 2018
|Motivation letter for DAAD scholarships, Master of Development and Governance course
2 - in the implementation of ... Relationship - based appointments has have suffered... I valued this opportunity and ;however,...
LettersFatemahEbrahimi - Jul 17, 2018 / niesaysi - Jul 27, 2018
|Judging book by its cover - Letter to my future roommate, Stanford essay
3 - I don't know exactly about the standard structure, but, try to write in short and complete sentences instead of...
LettersCabradasbrisa - Jul 15, 2018 / FatemahEbrahimi - Jul 17, 2018
|From childhood, I had a special affection towards Mathematics subject; project management course SOP
2 - My country is still ... --->> India is a developing country, which its economic has been increasing year by...
Letterskuku9555 - Jul 11, 2018 / dimdim02 - Jul 16, 2018
|Making a reservation for the October weekend in a hotel, with a view on the sea.
3 - Hassan, you have the presentation of information all reversed in your letter. You are also prone to using the...
Lettershrafiee - Jul 9, 2018 / Holt - Jul 10, 2018
|Motivation letter for student visa study M.Sc. Animal Sciences at the University of Bonn
3 - Thank you Holt for your comprehensive feedback. I know that the letter is long (980 words), but I tried...
LettersHanyseif - Jul 3, 2018 / Hanyseif - Jul 4, 2018
|Leipzig University is the best place to satisfy my professional aim & aspirations
2 - Shuvro, this is an extremely long essay that combines 3 essays into one; personal statement, statement of purpose, and...
LettersShuvrosen - Jul 2, 2018 / Holt - Jul 3, 2018
|Cover letter for IOM Security Assistant - Hudaydah, Yemen
3 - Thanks Holt for your positive response. Could you please designed short and expressive cover letter for applying for UN...
Lettersmotei - Jun 12, 2018 / motei - Jun 22, 2018
|My interest to start career in plant sciences. Cover letter.
2 - Godwin, this is an extremely long and irrelevant cover letter. A cover letter should only list bullet points of...
Lettersgoddy93 - Jun 16, 2018 / Holt - Jun 17, 2018
|My letter of intent to do a Master program in US - HR Management
2 - Praise, this is an acceptable draft for your personal statement. It cannot be considered a complete personal statement because...
LettersPraise - May 25, 2018 / Holt - May 26, 2018
|Write a letter to a person in charge and ask for detailed information related the seminar abroad
3 - The letter is just a series of questions. Try to make a story to minimize the questions asked. ...
LettersNeha_b123 - Apr 30, 2018 / jommiejr - May 1, 2018
|Motivation Letter for EPFL masters degree program in Life Sciences and Technology
3 - Kindly review my letter now ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Dear Sir/Madam: I am writing this letter to apply for Master's...
Lettersmubi - Mar 28, 2018 / mubi - Apr 14, 2018
|My decision to enroll in CSE at TU Braunschweig - Letter of motivation for masters in CSE
3 - Haseeb, you have written a statement of purpose, not a motivational letter. The motivational letter serves to show the...
Lettershaseebhash - Apr 7, 2018 / Holt - Apr 13, 2018
|Job Shadowing request from different department
2 - Ashkan, you not writing a simple note to a friend asking for a favor. You are asking a superior...
LettersAshkan123 - Mar 1, 2018 / Holt - Mar 2, 2018
|Recommendation Letter by Mentor in University for A Scholarship Application
4 - This is my suggestion for your first paragraph but I am not sure if it is good(Something to think)...
Lettershanabanana - Feb 22, 2018 / Ashkan123 - Mar 1, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Master Degree at RWTH Aachen - Software Systems Engineering
2 - Dzaky, I read your letter from paragraph to paragraph, till the very end and I did not come across...
Lettersdzakybd - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Do you think the laws are needed to make people recycle?
4 - Chen, first up, the Task 2 essay must always have 5 paragraphs composed of an opening, 3 body paragraphs,...
Lettersying_chen - Feb 22, 2018 / Holt - Feb 23, 2018
|You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday, you realised you had left your wallet.
2 - Inderjeet, this letter sounds like you used a very bad translator program to write it. It almost sounds like...
LettersinderGTR - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|Application for acceptance into Master program for Operations and Innovation Management
2 - Cosmin, What you have written is a very informative essay but it does not directly refer to a response...
Letterscosmin - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|Max 300 words in which you describe why you would like to attend the programme you have chosen
2 - Abdul, the first paragraph of your motivational letter is not necessary. You can skip that presentation because the motivational...
LettersAbdulJabbar - Feb 19, 2018 / Holt - Feb 20, 2018
|Cover Letter : IT University of Copenhagen
3 - Diwakar, the purpose of a cover letter is to provide a summary of the content of the various essays...
Letterszer0leet - Feb 13, 2018 / Holt - Feb 14, 2018
|Letter of recommendation for Scholarship - description of an applicant
2 - Hilza, have a problem with your response to question number 3. This is too obviously written by the student...
LettershiHilz95 - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|Email to my manager to request subscription for some websites.
4 - Hi Ashkan123, Your letter looks very informal. 1. ) Hi Dear XXXX : start the salutation as "Dear"....
LettersAshkan123 - Jan 23, 2018 / senuthilini - Feb 2, 2018
|A very short essay for the European Commission traineeship
2 - Alessandra, this response is like a hamster on a wheel. Constantly churning out words but not getting anywhere. You...
LettersAlexxaStonem - Jan 29, 2018 / Holt - Jan 29, 2018
|Motivation letter for MSc in BA and SCM at a Dutch university
2 - Natalia, the content of your essay is more in line with a letter of self introduction than a motivational...
LettersNatalie513 - Jan 27, 2018 / Holt - Jan 28, 2018
|Statement of purpose for pursuing the master of data science/business analytics in the Netherlands
2 - Mostafa, you had a good start with your opening paragraph. Then you floundered when you presented the subjects that...
Lettersyazdanifard - Jan 16, 2018 / Holt - Jan 16, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Master program at Nürnberg University, Germany; 'garnering a wealth of ideas'
2 - Sameh, if the motivational letter does not come with a maximum word count, you should consider expanding your discussions...
LettersPryda - Jan 14, 2018 / Holt - Jan 14, 2018
|Motivation Letter for Information Technology MSc program in Germany
3 - Thank you Holt for your correction and comments. I will revise the letter as per your comments and...
LettersSamer Zekry - Jan 7, 2018 / Samer Zekry - Jan 7, 2018
|Recommendation letter for Chevening program.
3 - @Holt Thanks i will work on that and revise it you mentioned good points i will use those points...
Lettersnaseernasrati - Dec 28, 2017 / naseernasrati - Dec 29, 2017
|Cover letter for accountant position
3 - @Holt I am very thankful for your constructive feedback and considering my problem. This is the first time I...
Letterskhanhnguyennh93 - Dec 15, 2017 / khanhnguyennh93 - Dec 16, 2017
|My letter to express my scientific interest in applying for the Doctor Program in Mathematics.
2 - Phi, the only part of this letter that you can use is the fourth paragraph that discusses the reasons...
Letterskarisa - Dec 16, 2017 / Holt - Dec 16, 2017
|Job Application for a part-time job
2 - Vishnu, the letter that you wrote is not properly developed. You only delivered the most specific prompt requirements as...
Lettersrinirini - Dec 13, 2017 / Holt - Dec 13, 2017
|Writing a letter of recommendation for one of my employees.
Lettersofmorale - Dec 12, 2017 / ofmorale - Dec 12, 2017
|Complain about the restaurant service.
2 - @happyfunny what are the parameters given to you for the writing of this letter? This is a very badly...
Lettershappyfunny - Dec 3, 2017 / Holt - Dec 3, 2017
|Cover letter for a trainee program position at Daimler Greater China company
5 - @Honghaoli Thanks for your help. You are right, I should not tell the HR again the things I have...
LettersStandings - Dec 2, 2017 / Standings - Dec 2, 2017
|Email to my manager and request to be my reference
3 - The letter is too straightforward. You always need to use diplomacy and tact when writing these reference request letters...
LettersAshkan123 - Nov 22, 2017 / Holt - Nov 22, 2017
|Recommendation Letter to British embassy, my journey to study Urban Planning.
5 - Naseer, remove the last line about you being one of the top applicants. That sounds very presumptive of your...
Lettersnaseernasrati - Nov 13, 2017 / Holt - Nov 19, 2017
|Has television ruined bonds among friends and family or not? TOEFL Independent essay.
4 - Naseer, the first rule of English Test writing is that the opening statement is always meant to prove your...
Lettersnaseernasrati - Nov 14, 2017 / Holt - Nov 14, 2017
|Recommendation Letter for Electrical Engineering Phd Program
3 - @ Holt I tried hard to rewrite the recommendation letter according to your valuable advice. My teacher's personal information...
Lettersphyllis - Nov 9, 2017 / phyllis - Nov 9, 2017
|Motivation Letter - UN4MUN South East Asia Conference
Lettersrubychautran - Nov 6, 2017 / rubychautran - Nov 7, 2017
|MOTIVATION LETTER for Behavioural Science at Radboud University
3 - Levent, you should about presenting the same information twice in the same essay. Your opening paragraph contains the same...
LettersMario94 - Nov 5, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|This is a letter of recomentation from the Head of computer engineering department.
3 - Generally, universities want recommendation letter to: 1. State how you rank among other students (whether you are in the...
Lettersshub08 - Nov 2, 2017 / rumihumaira - Nov 4, 2017
|'She was flexible and willing to work on any project' - recommendation letter from employer
Letterscaoline - Oct 19, 2017 / Holt - Oct 21, 2017
|A letter to newspaper editor regarding a benevolent stranger who helped an elderly relative of yours
4 - I think you should focus more on the description of the characters, for example, the stranger who helped the...
Lettersraikaashraf - Oct 11, 2017 / abhishek125 - Oct 14, 2017
|ADMISSION LETTER TO UNIVERSITY PART TIME PROGRAM
Lettersbeomkomap - Oct 3, 2017 / beomkomap - Oct 4, 2017
|The quality of a reference letter addressed to the Chevening Scholarship
4 - @Holt Dear Holt, I should confess that you are astute in terms of discovering that I who wrote this...
LettersAnwar Al Behadil - Sep 13, 2017 / Anwar Al Behadil - Sep 13, 2017
|Application letter for the Teaching Assistant position - Vietnam USA Society English Centers
Lettersvan94 - Sep 6, 2017 / van94 - Sep 7, 2017
|What makes my candidacy valid for the traineeship? Motivation letter for Eur. Commission programme
3 - @Holt Thank you for providing me valuable feedback. I come up the following after reading your suggestion. ...
Lettershassanimam - Aug 28, 2017 / hassanimam - Aug 28, 2017
|Motivation Letter to study " IT " master in Germany
4 - Thanks for your opinion "Clausthal" This is the name of the university. Clausthal Technical University @vodang...
Lettersosaco - Aug 26, 2017 / osaco - Aug 28, 2017
|I wrote this email, but I would like to know if it is good
Lettersana35 - Aug 22, 2017 / — -
|You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some ...
2 - Vijay, you have misplaced your things after a conference, you cannot give just your first name to the hotel...
Lettersvijaykumar09 - Jul 31, 2017 / Holt - Jul 31, 2017
|My Essay for the Application to AFRICAN UNION YOUTH VOLUNTEER CORPS Program
3 - thanks for your input.I have done some editing. (please make this thread Urgent if you need a new Contributor's...
Lettersesie2017 - Jul 18, 2017 / esie2017 - Jul 26, 2017
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