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Motivation Letter- ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP FOR MATHS DISC JOINT MASTERS PROGRAMME.

3 - Okay thank you for your feedback! I have worked on my motivation letter. I revised it taking into consideration...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025 / OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025
Becoming a doctor - STIPENDIUM HUNGARICUM MOTIVATION LETTER

4 - Hi Paul, Whilst this is good, you also need to talk about your academic achievements. This letter mainly...

LettersSwagata Paul - Dec 31, 2024 / OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025
a motivation letter for applying master degree at university being a data analyst

2 - The information provided in the motivation letter is not as strong as it could be. It is in fact,...

Lettersdsuf - Jan 8, 2025 / Holt - Jan 9, 2025
Motivation Letter to KTH - Real Estate and Construction Management

2 - Details regarding this competition would help to create a more informative paragraph. Provide the name of the competition,...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Jan 5, 2025 / Holt - Jan 6, 2025
Design and structure - Motivation Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - The information contained in the essay is not really geared towards a motivation letter. This is more of a...

Letterssafiraes - Jan 2, 2025 / Holt - Jan 3, 2025
Captivated by numbers - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP LETTER OF MOTIVATION

2 - While it is admirable that your father was your role model when it came to the development of your...

LettersOsatoOsazuwa - Jan 1, 2025 / Holt - Jan 2, 2025
motivation letter for master of science by a data analyst with mechatronic bachelor degree

2 - You developed a personal statement rather than a motivational letter. The content of this paper are only an expanded...

LettersKyaw Aung - Jan 1, 2025 / Holt - Jan 2, 2025
The 5th Industrial Revolution - Stipendium Hungaricum Motivation Letter

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. I've made the revision based on your review, please check it out:) ...

Letterssaddamprayogo - Jan 1, 2025 / saddamprayogo - Jan 2, 2025
A Chinese language teacher - Motivation Latter- Stipendium Hungaricum 2025

2 - Your motivation to study Languages as a masters course needs to be better focused on the study of languages,...

LettersChiaoChiao - Dec 28, 2024 / Holt - Dec 29, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

2 - The rest of this paragraph is too vague to gain the interest of the reviewers. You are not...

Lettersscottsimpson29 - Dec 20, 2024 / Holt - Dec 21, 2024
Psychology Motivation Letter for Behavior Change Master Program

2 - Since you already know that sustainability is not the main focus of the program, it stands to reason...

Lettersfemelements - Dec 16, 2024 / Holt - Dec 18, 2024
Outstanding academic performance - LETTER OF REFERENCE FOR UNIVERSITY ADMISSION

2 - Somehow, the letter reads like a longer version of your personal statement. That will give away the fact that...

Lettersnganlyn5520 - Dec 12, 2024 / Holt - Dec 13, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc in Integrated Brain Sciences UZH/ETH

4 - Edited SOP here - mainly changed the last para Dear Admissions Committee, I am writing to express my...

Lettersivy_lee - Dec 9, 2024 / ivy_lee - Dec 10, 2024
HER POV OF ME - Recommendation letter for a big scholarship

3 - @Holt Hello. Thank you so much for your valuable feedback. My course requires two letters of recommendation (mandatory): one...

LettersRaome - Dec 1, 2024 / Raome - Dec 4, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus-Mundus Master's program in Sustainable Design, Construction...

2 - The IELTS test is not connected with your academics. The reference to your band score is misplaced in...

LettersMubarokhz - Nov 30, 2024 / Holt - Dec 4, 2024
Motivation Letter for Embedded System Design in Hochschule Bremerhaven

3 - @Holt Hi. Thank you for your feedback. I need help with pinpointing exactly what academic path I wish to...

Letterssabeehalam - Nov 27, 2024 / sabeehalam - Nov 30, 2024
Motivation for PhD: Research Academic Journey

2 - Be specific about the type of research that you wish to pursue and what sort of researcher you...

LettersBinnu45 - Nov 28, 2024 / Holt - Nov 29, 2024
Motivation Letter for MSc in Applied Physic at TU Delft

2 - These apply to your research experience, which does not factor into the motivation statement when compared to...

Lettersvattickdrz - Nov 27, 2024 / Holt - Nov 28, 2024
Motivation letter for Radboud University Artificial Intelligence

5 - Dear Members of the Admissions Committee, Growing up in Nepal, my curiosity about the intricate workings of the human...

Lettersthunderk3g - Oct 20, 2024 / thunderk3g - Nov 25, 2024
Civil Engineering - Motivation Letter for ETH Zurich Master's Application

3 - @Holt Thankyou for the review Holt! I have incorporated your suggestions and come up with the following: I...

Lettersarjit - Nov 18, 2024 / arjit - Nov 21, 2024
Improve my Motivation Letter for Masters in Environmental Engineering

2 - The reviewer reads over a thousand applications that have students claiming to have experienced one thing or another....

LettersAbeershaykh - Nov 19, 2024 / Holt - Nov 20, 2024
Review my PhD motivation letter for aligned LLM companions

2 - Since you were part of a research and development team, you cannot claim to be the single developer...

Lettersvishalk - Nov 18, 2024 / Holt - Nov 19, 2024
Motivation Letter for MSc Human Computer Interaction in Universität Siegen

6 - Maybe you can say "With all aspects and desires stated" instead of "With everything said"...

Lettersmariegold - Nov 10, 2024 / Edukid2309 - Nov 17, 2024
Motivation Letter for Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Image Processing and Computer Vision AI

2 - Kindly edit this paragraph in particular to not sound like an extended version of your resume. The reviewer...

Lettersdarent - Nov 6, 2024 / Holt - Nov 6, 2024
Information Engineering - Letter of Motivation for Bachelor

3 - Focus more on skills and experience directly tied to embedded systems rather than general IT knowledge....

Lettersjashimuddin - Oct 25, 2024 / jasminee - Nov 2, 2024
Motivation letter for CERN 2025 Technical Student Internship programme for civil engineering.

4 - thanks @jasminee i have make suitable improvement kindly check it on my new threads Thank you again : )...

Lettersmilan123 - Nov 2, 2024 / milan123 - Nov 2, 2024
Nuclear power - Erasmus Mundus Sarena motivation letter

6 - @milan123 Noted. Thanks...

LettersKinami1 - Oct 29, 2024 / Kinami1 - Nov 2, 2024
Motivation Letter - M.Sc. Mechatronics

4 - @LazyWillow7 When I am writing a motivational letter, I am often advised not to dwell on motivations that started...

LettersLazyWillow7 - Oct 22, 2024 / ryayra - Oct 28, 2024
Clinical experience - Erasmus Mundus motivation letter

3 - Focus on conciseness by highlighting key experiences and specific program alignment, and consider streamlining early achievements to strengthen relevance...

LettersFlorence Dambani - Oct 21, 2024 / alian - Oct 26, 2024
Environment and Economics - motivational letter for University of Eastern Finland

2 - The letter is too long. A motivational letter should not have more than 400-600 words in its entirety because...

LettersShanto856 - Oct 23, 2024 / Holt - Oct 24, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's Degree in Electrical Engineering at TU Delft

2 - Your essay does not flow as a solid document because you have divided it into chapters or discussion points...

LettersAnastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024 / Holt - Oct 17, 2024
Motivation Letter - MSc In Quantitive Finance ETH UZH

3 - Hello, - If there is a format that you have to follow, it would be helpful to give us...

Letterssnane - Oct 16, 2024 / Anastasis_k - Oct 16, 2024
Motivational Letters - MSc in Sustainable Outdoor Hospitality Management

3 - Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus. You could structure it around your experiences, skills gained, and how they...

Lettersjudyyy123 - Oct 10, 2024 / Nandia20060709 - Oct 13, 2024
Medical Field - Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Motivation Letter

2 - This is more of a personal statement than a motivation letter. Specifically, this is not an essay that was...

LettersNandia20060709 - Sep 28, 2024 / Holt - Sep 30, 2024
Is This a Good Motivation Letter ? to Master Program Transport and Geinformation Technology at KTH

3 - Thanks for your review @Holt I have written another version based on your valuable comments. Do you think...

Lettersmhmdazmi - Sep 22, 2024 / mhmdazmi - Sep 23, 2024
Letter of Motivation for M.Sc Data Science Germany.

2 - This does not come across as a motivational letter. It will be seen mostly as an essay form of...

Lettersemnikkhil - Sep 11, 2024 / Holt - Sep 15, 2024
Bachelor in Psychology - MOTIVATION LETTER ERASMUS MUNDUS (applying again)

2 - The essay covers only the reasons you are interested in the program and the foundation of that interest (unnecessary...

Lettersmaydreams - Sep 10, 2024 / Holt - Sep 12, 2024
Molecular Biology, Biomedicine, and Clinical Research (BMBIC) -Motivation letter for PhD application

2 - I believe that the case study you have chosen to present as having inspired you is too old to...

Lettersmidori13 - Sep 5, 2024 / Holt - Sep 7, 2024
Motivation letter for Public Policy and Developmental Studies review DAAD

2 - You have mnade the same error that the other DAAD applicants make when writing a letter of motivation. The...

Lettershamzamarwat - Aug 30, 2024 / Holt - Aug 30, 2024
A forestry graduate - motivation letter for master's studies in Europe

2 - Harish, only paragraph 3 is useful in this case. That is the only aspect that has references to your...

LettersHarishpandey - Aug 29, 2024 / Holt - Aug 30, 2024
Software engineer - Motivation Letter for CERN Technical Studentship

2 - Your desire to be an inspiration to the students from your village is admirable. However, that should not be...

LettersAbhishekbhardwaj - Jul 26, 2024 / Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Motivation letter for PhD at University after M.Sc. in Biotechnology

2 - You need to reference the current work of the professor as well. Create a relationship between his research, and...

Letterslibrarymyth - Jul 25, 2024 / Holt - Jul 28, 2024
Study Plan/ SoP for Canadian study permit

3 - @Holt Hi, thank you so much for a swift response! I know it was quite difficult to read...

Letterscccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024 / cccremebrulee - Jul 20, 2024
How convincing is my narrative for my motivation statement for CERN's administrative student program

2 - This is supposed to be a motivational letter, It is not a paragraphical form of your work related experiences....

Letterswannabdiplomat - Jul 19, 2024 / Holt - Jul 19, 2024
A short motivation letter for studying mathematics - 400 to 500 words, but involves change of fields

2 - This letter is very weak. It is not the kind of motivational letter that would catch the attention of...

Lettersraj8799 - Jun 11, 2024 / Holt - Jun 12, 2024
Motivation Letter to Apply for Ministry of Foreign Affairs and International Cooperation Grants

3 - The 1st paragraph, you miss a dot (.) here "while pursuing my studies". 2nd paragraph, you listed some...

Letterssholdril - May 23, 2024 / viscaria - May 29, 2024
Motivation letter for Masters Program on Applied Computational Mechanics at Skoltech University

2 - Sadly, you wrote an academic biography instead of a motivational statement. So the majority of this essay, except for...

LettersAli Ur Rehman - May 20, 2024 / Holt - May 27, 2024
Letter of Recommendation for undergraduate college / commitment and consistency

2 - The problem with this letter is that you are claiming to be the counselor at the school. So the...

Lettershxddsu - May 16, 2024 / Holt - May 17, 2024
Help writing a motivation letter for scholarships

2 - You could base your motivation letter on your experience living in Gaza. Look at the architecture around you, discuss...

LettersMalaknasser_07 - May 10, 2024 / Holt - May 17, 2024
Motivation Letter For Kazakhstan Government Scholarship

2 - The first thing you have to do is delete this essay. This is not a motivational letter. You mistook...

Lettersraffyqurtuba - Apr 30, 2024 / Holt - May 4, 2024
Motivation Letter for Master's program in "Advanced Systems in Automation and Information Technology

3 - @Holt Thanks Sir, Your advice was very helpful, how about this: To a new thread please....

LettersSteve24kh - Apr 17, 2024 / Steve24kh - Apr 21, 2024
International arbitration and environmental law - Motivation letter for master admission

2 - What you have written is a personal statement. There is very little motivation focus in the letter so this...

LettersLeila321 - Apr 20, 2024 / Holt - Apr 21, 2024
Education at the University of Twente - motivation letter

2 - This is not a well developed motivational letter. It is short, which makes it a good draft. An acceptable...

LettersNovellaleedeman - Apr 15, 2024 / Holt - Apr 20, 2024
MSc in Information and Communication Technology - Letter of motivation for sweden University

2 - Okay, you have to stop with the over excitement. You should not be emphasizing information in your letter with...

LettersKunal_Gujar - Apr 4, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Mathematics and technology - motivation letter to a german university

2 - Paragraphs 3 and 4 are out of place in this presentation. You do not need to give a summarized...

Letterssara1999 - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
Motivation letter for MSc in Data Science.

2 - Remove the reference to your academic training. Those are normally a part of a motivational letter. You should sell...

Letterssupunchandi - Apr 3, 2024 / Holt - Apr 13, 2024
MotivationalLetter: Master's degree in Microbiology and Microbial Biotechnology

2 - Since you already have an existing master's degree, you should be justifying why you would want to pursue a...

LettersDam94 - Mar 31, 2024 / Holt - Apr 3, 2024
Faculty of Management and Tourism at Hanoi University - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR ERASMUS SCHOLARSHIP

2 - This is not a very effective ML letter for EM. It is more applicable towards a non scholarship based...

LettersHuiMin - Mar 25, 2024 / Holt - Mar 28, 2024
Motivation letter for master of fine art master in Amsterdam

4 - I believe that it's very nice but for some improvements i would totally agree with holt...

Lettersedenlan - Mar 11, 2024 / smichalo - Mar 18, 2024
Motivational essay to study a bachelor degree at the Copenhaguen Business School

2 - Please edit the beginning of your essay. You should be focusing only on the motivational aspect of your interest...

Lettersoller210 - Mar 6, 2024 / Holt - Mar 10, 2024

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