'she studied very hard and graduated' - letter of recommendation

Dear all, My native language is not English so please give me some review for this letter of recommendation. Thanks a lot!

February 1, 2012

To whom it may concern,

It is with great pleasure that I am recommending xxx to you. I have known her well 4 years, as she was my student of Tourism management for 4 years. The applicant graduated from Mongolian University of Science and Technology in 2007.

She is one of the most extraordinary students I have encountered in 25 years of teaching. xxx is always the leader in every aspect and holds the highest position in her class's rating for four consecutive years. Being her teacher, I can vouch that she is one of the most brilliant and kindhearted student that I have encountered in my career. She is an energetic, enthusiastic leader in all jobs of her class as well as voluntary activities held by school. xxx is also very responsible to her work and is able to handle the pressure of deadlines very well. She has an extremely amiable personality and is popular among her classmates as she shows great consideration and deep respect for others. On many occasions, she has helped her classmates in various subjects, especially Management. Being honest and hardworking, she demonstrates the best of behavior and excellent study habits.

With an outstanding intellectual ability and strong leadership qualities, xxx has led her classes in numerous subjects as well as other extracurricular events successfully.

During her student years, she studied very hard and graduated with special diploma and awarded "the Best Student" in her school in 2007.

She is not only quick at learning and good at solving complicated problems, but also with a logical and creative mind that enables her to raise some insightful views. I was also deeply impressed with her diligence and outstanding communication ability, compared with my other students. What's more, she is an optimistic woman with pleasant personality, and gets along well with all the people around her.

xxx is an exceptionally motivated and talented young woman. I firmly believe that she will be successful in whatever she pursues.
Sincerely,

/teacher's name/

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To whom it may concern,

It is with great pleasure that I am recommending xxx to you. I have known her well for 4 years, during whichas she was mya student of Tourism management for 4 years . The applicant graduated from Mongolian University of Science and Technology in 2007.

She is one of the most extraordinary students I have encountered in 25 years of teaching. xxx is always the leader in every aspect and holdshas held the highest position in her class's rating for four consecutive years. Being her teacher, I can vouch that she is one of the most brilliant and kindhearted students that I have encountered in my career. She is an energetic, enthusiastic leader in all jobs of her class as well as voluntary activities held by the school. xxx is also very responsible toin her work and is able to handle the pressure of deadlines very well. She has an extremely amiable personality and is popular among her classmates as she shows great consideration and deep respect for others. On many occasions, she has helped her classmates in various subjects, especially Management. Being honest and hardworking, she demonstrates the best of behavior and excellent study habits.

With an outstanding intellectual ability and strong leadership qualities, xxx has successfully led her classes in numerous subjects as well as other extracurricular events successfully .

During her student years, she studied very hard and graduated with a special diploma. She was alsoand awarded "the Best Student" in her school in 2007.

She is not only quick at learning and good at solving complicated problems, but she also withhas a logical and creative mind that enables her to raise some insightful views. I was also deeply impressed with her diligence and outstanding communication ability, compared with my other students. What's more, she is an optimistic woman with a pleasant personality, and gets along well with all the people around her.

xxx is an exceptionally motivated and talented young woman. I firmly believe that she will be successful in whatever she pursues.
Sincerely,

I hope this helps somewhat.

Thank you so much

Hi,

Just a couple of things...

I have known her well 4 years, as she was my student of Tourism management for 4 years. (There's a repetition here. .I think it should go like: I have known her really well for 4 years as she was my student in Tourism Management)

....every aspect and holds has held the highest position in her class's rating for four consecutive years.

....communication ability, compared withto my other students.

I think everything else has been corrected already..

Hope this helps :)

thanks a lot :)

Apart from the grammar errors it is really nice

goood joooob bbb