Hey guys! Please, please, please give me a hand with this letter. Several days ago I was waitlisted by Upenn. I don't have a very clear idea of what is appropriade to write in such a letter. Moreover, Upenn is my dream school and I want them to get the right idea about me. Please, please, please help! Any comments are welcome!
Dear Admission Committee,
Several days ago I learned was put on a waitlist by the University of Pennsylvania. First of all, I would like to thank you for spending time reviewing my application. Naturally, the letter of deferral came as a disappointment to me.
Being very serious about my college choices, I researched and considered a lot of amazing school both in my home country and abroad. I applied to various countries around the world and even got admitted by the University of Toronto, UC Berkeley and some other good schools. However, my devotion is still firmly with UPenn - the University, which could present me with unparallel opportunities to flourish in my future career.
The most important reason for me holding on to my dream of attending UPenn is quite simple. No other school can offer to harmoniously combine my three academic interests (International Relations, Business and Languages) into a perfect interdisciplinary program such as Huntsman. With the knowledge acquired during the four years of hard work up my sleeve, I will be able to really alter the world for the best and commit to global issues I feel passionate about. To be honest, I cannot help imagining myself as a part of academic and cultural life in the University of Pennsylvania. Hopefully, I would be a good ambassador on campus and in class, sharing true Russian culture.
Since I submitted my application in winter, there have been some further improvements in my academic and extracurricular records that hopefully could strengthen my application. To begin with, I retook the ACT test and my English score went from 31 to 34 and the Reading one - from 27 to 34. In addition, I became a winner of Russian National Olympiads in French, English and Russian languages and of High School of Economics' Olympiad in World History. In addition I was awarded a diploma of Moscow State University's Olympiad in Society Study.
Apart from my academic achievements, I have been elected as a chair of a new cultural project. My responsibility is to organize a two week program for twelve students from Eaton College, London, who study Russian as a foreign language. That involves setting up excursions, appointing meetings with regional Russian activists and communicating trip related information to the appropriate committees etc. The delegation will be in Moscow in the beginning of May and the plan of their stay is being approved by the Eaton school officials now.
It is my sincere hope that the information above would prove helpful in the further admission process.
Many thanks for your consideration,
Alina Skripets
Dear Admission Committee,
Several days ago I learned was put on a waitlist by the University of Pennsylvania. First of all, I would like to thank you for spending time reviewing my application. Naturally, the letter of deferral came as a disappointment to me.
Being very serious about my college choices, I researched and considered a lot of amazing school both in my home country and abroad. I applied to various countries around the world and even got admitted by the University of Toronto, UC Berkeley and some other good schools. However, my devotion is still firmly with UPenn - the University, which could present me with unparallel opportunities to flourish in my future career.
The most important reason for me holding on to my dream of attending UPenn is quite simple. No other school can offer to harmoniously combine my three academic interests (International Relations, Business and Languages) into a perfect interdisciplinary program such as Huntsman. With the knowledge acquired during the four years of hard work up my sleeve, I will be able to really alter the world for the best and commit to global issues I feel passionate about. To be honest, I cannot help imagining myself as a part of academic and cultural life in the University of Pennsylvania. Hopefully, I would be a good ambassador on campus and in class, sharing true Russian culture.
Since I submitted my application in winter, there have been some further improvements in my academic and extracurricular records that hopefully could strengthen my application. To begin with, I retook the ACT test and my English score went from 31 to 34 and the Reading one - from 27 to 34. In addition, I became a winner of Russian National Olympiads in French, English and Russian languages and of High School of Economics' Olympiad in World History. In addition I was awarded a diploma of Moscow State University's Olympiad in Society Study.
Apart from my academic achievements, I have been elected as a chair of a new cultural project. My responsibility is to organize a two week program for twelve students from Eaton College, London, who study Russian as a foreign language. That involves setting up excursions, appointing meetings with regional Russian activists and communicating trip related information to the appropriate committees etc. The delegation will be in Moscow in the beginning of May and the plan of their stay is being approved by the Eaton school officials now.
It is my sincere hope that the information above would prove helpful in the further admission process.
Many thanks for your consideration,
Alina Skripets