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Spring Is Coming; POETRY WRITING



CathyYan 1 / 2  
Dec 26, 2013   #1
Spring Is Coming
Leaves outside the window
Turn green and burst into grins,
Me in the bed
Sighing stare the breeze.

The flower on the desk
Already became fade,
Sweetheart next to the bed
Also never urbane.

My Twinkle Night
That glitter in the sky
Always shines in my heart
But never bright in my eyes.

Always prowling on the street
Seeing people walking expressionlessly
And never comes a person blazes it.

Staring at the twinkle night
Imagine you come urbanely
And expecting the fairy tales all the nights
Perpetually.

Never Find You
The careless boy on the opposite
Lost his way home,
Me standing blankly on the street
Ain't able to find the bantering you.

Chatting on the net
Seeing the sentimental wallpaper on the screen,
And answering your calls before the slept
Which is not the scene I ever meet.

Where to find You
Walking slowly toward the gateway
Staring at everything longing
Suddenly thinking of you bright the way
Now never appears smily

The summer we ate ice-cream and laugh boldly
Talking about the loves' stealthy in beds
The stately promises we clapping sincerely
While gone with wind I gazing at.
Exceedingly.

CHRISTMAS EVE
The shops already opened on the streets
Welcoming the variety people want to celebrate with families
I standing at the bus stop waiting for you three
Puckish you smiling sportively.

Horsing around walk into the room
Glancing at the fantasy accessories and exclaiming
Choosing the value for you only
Seeing your surprised face delightfully.
Embraces from you warm me smoothly.

No Longer Owning You
The boy smiles unruly
Give that girl a reluctant embrace
The girl hugs blushingly
With her twinkle face.

Thinking up our transient sweets
I shyly want the same treats
But your gentlenesses only can that smiling girl owns it
And never hold it will me.

I am Cathy, all above are the poems write myself in my leisure time, just for fun. So please give me some suggestions, like whether I need to write more emotional or somewhat.

Thanks~

Prinz18 3 / 10  
Dec 27, 2013   #2
I'm not a poem person but i enjoyed the second and third poems. Keep it up and you might strike gold someday :)
OP CathyYan 1 / 2  
Dec 27, 2013   #3
thank u~ I will persistent in writing O(∩_∩)O


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