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'conscientious, articulate, motivated' -educational aspirations + future career goals



Jennifer12 2 / 4  
Nov 26, 2011   #1
Education to me is extremely important, and is very important to stay committed to it. When I put my mind to something, I will never lose. My parents are relying on me to make them proud, but also I will someday have a family that relies on my success in my career choose. This being said, even though I have only a handful of months left in high school I'm dedicated myself to excel in all of my class by setting personal goals.

Some future goals that I've set for myself are to always be punctual in my college classes. It is in my nature to always be a little early. I will turn every assignment in on time and make sure that it is done to the best of my ability. I've found it helpful to try and learn the ways of every technologist that I have the opportunity to work with. I believe that in any field, even if one had the opportunity to work in that field for several lifetimes, there is always a way to be further educated. This is something that I will strive to accomplish throughout my career.

I'm an individual of high moral character. I'm conscientious, articulate, highly motivated. I'm a strong willed and determined individual that will accept nothing less than to do well in my schooling and future career. I believe these are all traits vital of a successful attorney. Having these traits will help me to accomplish my goals throughout my career. I know that in the long run this will be a rewarding job in which I get to help people on a daily basis but it will also help the people I love the most in life. I can't wait until the day when I become an attorney. Until then I will keep my positive attitude and always apply myself to the task at hand, knowing that all will end in success.

jbfranco14 1 / 2  
Nov 26, 2011   #2
I feel you should discuss more long term and life changing goals, instead of short term ones. Although being punctual is very important, I don't think it is as impressive as hard-reach goals. Try using different examples to make your essay more moving and inspiring.
shanicem13 2 / 4  
Nov 26, 2011   #3
I think it sounds good but maybe instead of having two short-term goals, you should keep 1 short-term goal to show your educational aspirations and have 1 challenging long- term goal that would help your specific career goals


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