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|I plan on starting a training consultancy firm after granting Chevening Scholarship
NEW - Career Plan - Post Chevening Scholarship Upon my return to Pakistan I plan on rejoining my current company...
Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - 14 hrs ago / — -
|Chevening Leadership & Influence Essay: my understanding and examples
NEW - qualified with leadership personalities Note: This is the first time I apply for Chevening and I'm worried about...
Scholarshipq4261709 - 2 days ago / — -
|Example, not persuasion - Chevening Leadership & Influence Essay
4 - @Wara Hi, dear! Thanks for your consistent and persistent support in the forum. If you find this feedback and...
ScholarshipWara - Aug 17, 2019 / Maria - Aug 19, 2019
|Personal Statement (KGSP Undergraduate application) - Motivations, background, experiences...
2 - @alyssa2036 Hi there. It's good to see you around here! I hope you find this feedback beneficial for your...
Scholarshipalyssa2036 - Aug 19, 2019 / Maria - Aug 19, 2019
|The Master of Science in EMJMD IMAGE PROCESSING AND COMPUTER VISION application
3 - @Maria Can I change the first paragraph to something like this, First, I would like to express...
ScholarshipPRABU - Aug 18, 2019 / PRABU - Aug 19, 2019
|Applied for a scholarship at South Korea with the GKS program to study culinary arts. Further plans.
2 - @pato_rivasN Hi, Javier! I hope you're doing well. I hope this feedback helps you write more efficiently to help...
Scholarshippato_rivasN - Aug 18, 2019 / Maria - Aug 19, 2019
|Earning the role - Leadership and influence (Chevening Scholarship)
ScholarshipIntegrityFaj001 - Aug 17, 2019 / IntegrityFaj001 - Aug 19, 2019
|LEADERSHIP - My chevening essay on showcasing my leadership and influencing skills
4 - @Maria @contentwriter Thank you so much for taking the time to offer me your feedbacks. I have tried...
Scholarshipcornel - Aug 14, 2019 / cornel - Aug 19, 2019
|The initiative - Leadership and influencing skills for Chevening scholarship 2019
ScholarshipAnima - Aug 18, 2019 / Anima - Aug 19, 2019
|Leadership and influencing skills are distinct characteristics ... - Chevening Scholarship
Scholarshipmko - Aug 18, 2019 / mko - Aug 18, 2019
|Buddhist cloister. Is it an acceptable introductory paragraph for Chevening Leadership/influence?
2 - @Lao Hi there. Welcome to the forum. As always, we're happy that you're here. I hope you find this...
ScholarshipLao - Aug 18, 2019 / Maria - Aug 18, 2019
|We must work along with others to build our way to success. NETWORKING essay
2 - @Wara Welcome to the forum! If you find any of the feedback you receive here to be helpful, I...
ScholarshipWara - Aug 18, 2019 / Maria - Aug 18, 2019
|Studying In The UK and my choice of masters programs
Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - Aug 18, 2019 / Wara - Aug 18, 2019
|Statement of purpose for higher studies in Materials Science and Engineering
3 - Greeting @Maria Thanks alot for your precious time and this kind favour. I'll try to resolve the highlighted mistakes...
ScholarshipAR13301 - Aug 17, 2019 / AR13301 - Aug 18, 2019
|Chevening Leadership Essay-My Leadership Experience in a Difficult Situtation
4 - Maria thanks for your advice, I have revised my essay and simplified sentence structure. Can you please have a...
Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - Aug 15, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 17, 2019
|Chevening in search for people with great professional relationship developing skills
ScholarshipNadyaa - Aug 16, 2019 / Nadyaa - Aug 17, 2019
|Study plans to improve foreign languages (KGSP Undergraduate Study Plan Part A)
3 - ...; consequently, I am sure it will help to improve ... vocabulary along with some future benefits. ... interested...
Scholarshipalyssa2036 - Aug 14, 2019 / KAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019
|My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship
4 - Merged: Chevening Leadership Essay- My Leadership Experience in A Difficult Situation Being a good leader has always...
Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 14, 2019
|Livestock officer - Chevening leadership and enfluencer essay
2 - @mimi88 Hi there. Welcome to this forum. I'm here to provide you with feedback on this writing! Firstly,...
Scholarshipmimi88 - Aug 9, 2019 / Maria - Aug 10, 2019
|Scholarship appeal letter - Financial Aid Committee
2 - @dissapointment Hi there. I wish you the best of luck in applying for this appeal. I'll do what I...
Scholarshipdissapointment - Aug 6, 2019 / Maria - Aug 9, 2019
|Study plan to improve foreign language (Korean, English) - Korean Scholarship 2020
2 - @pato_rivasN -Don't talk about your bad points, don't say that it's hard to learn Korean or anything like...
Scholarshippato_rivasN - Aug 4, 2019 / isabellal - Aug 4, 2019
|Explain the extent to which you have a long-term interest in Ireland and how will you promote links
2 - @stella898 Hello there. I'll try to efficiently assess as much as possible details in your essay to help you...
Scholarshipstella898 - Jul 24, 2019 / Maria - Jul 25, 2019
|"Manse" - the resilient spirit of Koreans - Scholarship SOP
2 - @vivianlima Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll do my best to provide you with writing feedback on this...
Scholarshipvivianlima - Jul 19, 2019 / Maria - Jul 20, 2019
|GKS Personal Statement (Early Childhood Education Masters)
2 - Hello, Nice work! But maybe in this sentence, ''.....that having a perspective from a country that......'', could try...
Scholarshipjade31 - Jul 14, 2019 / Synorita - Jul 14, 2019
|I love my life, life loves me. KGSP graduate program. Personal statement
2 - @utegenf Hi there! In terms of technicalities, your writing is quite sufficient already. I would suggest only that...
Scholarshiputegenf - Jul 1, 2019 / Maria - Jul 4, 2019
|Think about two or three adjectives that best describe you.
3 - @Maria Hey Maria, could you possibly help me more specifically? Maybe, just my intro if you can. I would...
Scholarshiptamu - Jun 29, 2019 / tamu - Jun 29, 2019
|Plan after college - PROOFREADING! Scholarship Short Answer
2 - @tamu Hi there! I suggest to firstly try to categorize your writing in a more efficient and well-rounded...
Scholarshiptamu - Jun 28, 2019 / Maria - Jun 28, 2019
|Scholarship Essay about the most important lesson about money
2 - @michaelayomide Hello there! Best of luck in your application. I will try to help you correct this written...
Scholarshipmichaelayomide - Jun 26, 2019 / Maria - Jun 26, 2019
|How to write an appeal for scholarship to a college board. Include strong points and remedies
2 - @zagger_dat Hi there! I'll do my best to provide you with feedback on your writing. First and...
Scholarshipzagger_dat - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - Jun 23, 2019
|Personal Statement - Glocal Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Degree Consortium
4 - Thank you so much for all the tips, I'm taking into consideration all the aspects that you pointed out...
Scholarshiprafaeladrcosta - Jun 17, 2019 / rafaeladrcosta - Jun 22, 2019
|Teachers: Influencers in Schools and Communities - Chevening Scholarship essay
2 - Hi, I think you've succeeded in answering the prompt by explaining in detail how you meet the requirement....
Scholarshipshehab16 - Jun 21, 2019 / zagger_dat - Jun 22, 2019
|Monbukagakusho (MEXT) Research Student Scholarship: Field of Study/Plan
ScholarshipSunflower21 - Jun 12, 2019 / Maria - Jun 14, 2019
|CHEVENING LEADERSHIP SKILLS ESSAY - Characteristics of True Leaders - meeting this criteria
NEW - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP SKILLS ESSAY Chevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their...
Scholarshipmagajiauwalu - Jun 12, 2019 / — -
|Technology and Multilingual Award - KGSP Undergraduate Personal Statement
4 - @Maria hello! Thank you for your feedback, it will help me a lot :) Regarding the NSTP, I wrote...
ScholarshipKeeneSapphire - May 26, 2019 / KeeneSapphire - May 28, 2019
|Fulbright Scholarship Essay: Masters in Education
3 - Hi Maria! Thanks a lot for your feedback, really appreciate it. Your notes are quite useful and...
ScholarshipNajmaGhuloom - May 24, 2019 / NajmaGhuloom - May 25, 2019
|Personal statement for PTDF masters scholarship at the University of Maiduguri
2 - @Gboy88 Watch out for your capitalization. It is imperative to have this consistent to ensure that your language would...
ScholarshipGboy88 - May 18, 2019 / Maria - May 18, 2019
|Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering - DREAM AND EFFORT FOR FUTURE PLAN
NEW - Applying for KAIST Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering Please describe your dream and the efforts you have made so...
Scholarshipdacvuong11a1hoa - May 16, 2019 / — -
|I write this part to send to a global volunteer program, help me on grammar and word choice.
2 - @vo thi tam Your mistakes were primarily due to technical/grammatical issues you had while writing. This includes details including...
Scholarshipvo thi tam - May 15, 2019 / Maria - May 15, 2019
|Outline the details of your future aspirations and how your degree will help you achieve your vision
3 - Thank you so much for your feedback, it's really helpful. I will definitely add it to my essay. Javiera...
Scholarshipjolivares - May 9, 2019 / jolivares - May 13, 2019
|"Why do you think you are excellent?" - Digital Marketing Communications
2 - I have had much curiosity and thirst... Revise: I have an unquenchable thirst for knowledge in Media & Communications,...
Scholarshipsugarpuurin - May 12, 2019 / KatieNatalya - May 12, 2019
|Total International Schorlarship Application
2 - @Stefanovic Are you working within a specific word count? There are lot of unexplained utterances in your essay...
ScholarshipStefanovic - May 10, 2019 / Maria - May 10, 2019
|Self Introduction For (2019) GKS for ASEAN Countries' Science and Engineering Students
NEW - To be a researcher and to create something helpful My Name is Rheza Surya Pinandita, I was born...
Scholarshiprhezasuryap - May 8, 2019 / — -
|Development Studies - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION
ScholarshipChangemaker - May 6, 2019 / Changemaker - May 8, 2019
|Why I am a good candidate for scholarship? Life experiences / management skills.
2 - A few notes: 1. Watch out for repetitive descriptions. What this means is that when you are writing,...
ScholarshipWezi - May 7, 2019 / Maria - May 7, 2019
|Essay : Which achievement of Singapore which you interested most.
2 - Watch out for your tenses, punctuation, capitalization, and related content. I recommend that you should be more cautious as...
ScholarshipAnnphamthu2310 - May 5, 2019 / Maria - May 5, 2019
|Application essay for Short Summer Research Program in Medical Science
2 - While it is great that you are able to provide a comprehensive output utilizing various writing techniques, you should...
Scholarshipcarpriciouser - May 3, 2019 / Maria - May 3, 2019
|Help me enhance my competitive collage club "CCC" application
Scholarshipomr10488 - Apr 29, 2019 / alessandra_dac - May 2, 2019
|Help me review my scholarship essay under the following headings.
2 - Try to simplify your language as you are writing. Doing this can immensely help your essay as I can...
Scholarshipaaderemi1 - Apr 28, 2019 / Maria - Apr 29, 2019
|AAS Essay: Development Studies in Melbourne and Communication at the University of Queensland. Why?
Scholarshipkanzcech - Apr 26, 2019 / kanzcech - Apr 27, 2019
|My curiosity about machines. Supporting statement for Australia Award scholarship 2020
5 - Thank you @Maria. I very appreciate your advises. Well,there is maximum 400s words count. I have difficult to use...
ScholarshipDoharry - Apr 27, 2019 / Doharry - Apr 27, 2019
|Master of Commerce - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - Be wary of the way that you transition your sentences. I have noticed also that there were sporadic instances...
Scholarshipmirzaputra81 - Apr 26, 2019 / Maria - Apr 27, 2019
|AAS MBA in Entrepreneurship - Why study your chosen subject?
3 - I have reviewed my essay and I totally agree with you. It does make sense that my essay looks...
Scholarshipnaufalkamal - Apr 21, 2019 / naufalkamal - Apr 26, 2019
|Australia Award Scholarship 2019/2020 - PT. SPIL shipping line company in Indonesia
Scholarshiptirto - Apr 24, 2019 / tirto - Apr 25, 2019
|Chemical engineering - achievements and career goals.
2 - Try to minimize your usage of filler words that do not add substance/content to your essay. Doing this can...
Scholarshipjingning292929 - Apr 24, 2019 / Maria - Apr 24, 2019
|How Does This Study Improve My Career Prospects
ScholarshipMbanba - Apr 23, 2019 / Mbanba - Apr 24, 2019
|United Nation (UN) co-certification. AAS - why this course or institution essay (330-400 words)
2 - Firstly, watch out for small technical mistakes. While these may be small, overlooking them can greatly harm your essay's...
Scholarshipazizbruder13 - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|I have implemented change and reform in the biggest student organization in Indonesia
2 - Watch out for small mistakes in your essay that can compromise its overall quality. For instance, your first sentence...
Scholarshipiqbalfahmi - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|AAS - Supporting Statement : Learning and Leadership / Education Study
3 - Thank You so much for your fast response and review. I am rewriting my essay and to be honest,...
ScholarshipVanesha - Apr 17, 2019 / Vanesha - Apr 18, 2019
|I want to move on to the next level - pursuing a master degree abroad in IT. Supporting Statement
Scholarshipzorii - Apr 18, 2019 / zorii - Apr 18, 2019
|Physician and pulmonologist - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - @drimran I recommend that you revise the formatting and structure of your essay in terms of the flow of...
Scholarshipdrimran - Apr 16, 2019 / Maria - Apr 16, 2019
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