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|Essay about how to use my networking skills to lead and influence others- Chevening Scholarship
ScholarshipDanstand - 6 hours ago / Danstand - 5 hours ago
|Bank's telemarketer - leadership & Influence Letter for Chevening Scholarship
2 - Glaucia, I do not care if you worked as supervisor for only a year, the job description that you...
Scholarshipglausantos - 23 hours ago / Holt - 15 hours ago
|Being an Aries Man. Leadership & Influence Letter for Chevening Scholarship
ScholarshipMoshtaq Ahmad - Aug 17, 2017 / Phoowadon - 2 days ago
|The sky is the Limit - applying for Chevening scholarship, leadership question
2 - Selwan, this is a personal statement, not a leadership and influencing essay. You need to pick up your revised...
Scholarshipsola_210 - Aug 19, 2017 / Holt - Aug 19, 2017
|'Teaching English Language' - MY CHEVENING LEADERSHIP/INFLUENCER ESSAY------- Bankole Akinfolarin
8 - @BENJI31 Thank you very much! Your corrections and observations were helpful. Do you think the essay will be...
ScholarshipBankyfolarin - Aug 11, 2017 / Bankyfolarin - Aug 19, 2017
|A small group of people may influence many
4 - @Katthew Kim @ Holt Thank you so much guys. I really appreciated your comments. Here i have revised my...
ScholarshipHikmatullah - Aug 16, 2017 / Hikmatullah - Aug 18, 2017
|Losing my mother put me into the position of the leader in my family. Chevening essay
3 - Aye, this particular essay needs to focus more on the professional experience than the scattered presentation of leadership influence...
ScholarshipVeronica14 - Aug 17, 2017 / Holt - Aug 17, 2017
|Chevening essay on leadership - Servant leadership essay
6 - @Bankyfolarin Hi Bankole, Thank you for your comments and corrections. I will change my essay accordingly. Have a nice...
Scholarshipthepinetree - Jul 22, 2017 / thepinetree - Aug 17, 2017
|One interest that makes me different from other students
5 - hi I think your essay is good and full of interesting stories. It would be better to include your...
ScholarshipMartin101 - Aug 12, 2017 / tunglinh0907 - Aug 14, 2017
|"the act of leading a group of people" - Leadership. Essay for Chevening application
4 - @Benji31 Truth be told, that was a good essay; well structured and presented but I would go with...
ScholarshipBENJI31 - Aug 12, 2017 / Bankyfolarin - Aug 13, 2017
|I've been living in a bungalow my whole life - influenced environment
6 - Hi, I personally think your essay is good. However, there are a few grammar mistakes in your essay such...
ScholarshipMartin101 - Aug 10, 2017 / tunglinh0907 - Aug 12, 2017
|My leadership twofolds my professional and social life.
3 - Leadership requires a deep commitment in order to lead team members towards development. I am a kind of leader...
ScholarshipAlere - Aug 10, 2017 / Alere - Aug 11, 2017
|Writing a detailed study plan / future plan
3 - @Holt Yes, I am aware of the formalities of Korean culture. I didn't mean to sound informal. I will...
ScholarshipTracy_212 - Aug 9, 2017 / Tracy_212 - Aug 9, 2017
|Writing a winning self-introduction letter for the KGSP Scholarship.
4 - @holt thanks for your correction. Here is the revised one. Be born, go to school, watch TV, get...
ScholarshipTracy_212 - Jul 23, 2017 / Tracy_212 - Aug 8, 2017
|NYC Student Looking for Union Help to Be a UX/UI Designer
2 - Britt, have you given any thought to appealing to the union for the scholarship based a little bit upon...
Scholarshipbrittgreve - Aug 4, 2017 / Holt - Aug 5, 2017
|What is one value you have that cannot be compromised?
5 - @Holt Thanks for your advice.I was trying to write one paragraph each time so I can get benefit...
Scholarshipphongbilly - Aug 4, 2017 / Ashkan123 - Aug 4, 2017
|If you could know the answer to anyone question in the world, what would it be? Why?
3 - Ngo, you have written a series of opening statements. You have not written a response essay. A response essay...
Scholarshipphongbilly - Aug 4, 2017 / Holt - Aug 4, 2017
|My life project was always to study abroad. Personal Statement Undergraduate KGSP
2 - Piero, this is supposed to be a personal statement. Not an autobiography. So the content of your essay, while...
ScholarshipOkura - Jul 28, 2017 / Holt - Jul 28, 2017
|Motivation letter for African Union Youth Volunteer
2 - Stanley, the questions require an essay type format and you have given a bio-data format so the format of...
Scholarshipstanley - Jul 27, 2017 / Holt - Jul 27, 2017
|Failed at Australia Award Scholarship with below statements
4 - hi Holt., revised per comments: I have selected the University of Wollongong's Master of Science (Supply chain management...
ScholarshipLogistician - Jul 19, 2017 / Logistician - Jul 27, 2017
|Essay for Chevening Leadership question; applying for a masters degree scholarship grant
3 - @Holt Thank you for the very direct and honest reply. This is my first draft and I will certainly...
Scholarshipannrieska - Jul 18, 2017 / annrieska - Jul 19, 2017
|One swipe can save many times and health...
Scholarshiprobelamare - Jul 10, 2017 / dawit359 - Jul 17, 2017
|Teaching context outline and an action plan containing measures to benefit a community
Scholarshipd2ny - Jul 7, 2017 / d2ny - Jul 16, 2017
|Chevening scholarship: my response to the leadership and influence prompt
3 - @Holt Thank you immensely Holt for the prompt reaction. I have assimilated your advice and the new version will...
ScholarshipMairomi - Jul 14, 2017 / Mairomi - Jul 15, 2017
|Korea - this is my only chance. Undergraduate - Letter of Self Introduction KGSP
2 - Piero, as an undergraduate applying for the KGSP program, you are not required to present a letter of self...
ScholarshipOkura - Jul 4, 2017 / Holt - Jul 4, 2017
|Constant Progress on Maturing and Returning the Favor - Essay for Scholarship Application
4 - Hatif, as I read your essay what I learned about was a series of half baked successes that had...
ScholarshipHatif - Jul 1, 2017 / Holt - Jul 4, 2017
|Good Manufacturing Practice - ENDEAVOUR SCHOLARSHIP
ScholarshipJacksonLe - Jun 30, 2017 / JacksonLe - Jun 30, 2017
|My future as an Environmental Engineer and Manager
2 - Samara, do you in any way have a professional experience you can highlight in this essay. You just have...
Scholarshipsgpoliveira - Jun 29, 2017 / okorobiadimma14 - Jun 29, 2017
|Ship for the World Youth Program JAPAN- LEADERSHIP SKILLS AND CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY ESSAY
ScholarshipSusyCS - Jun 25, 2017 / SusyCS - Jun 26, 2017
|ENDEAVOUR SCHOLARSHIP: Contribution to personal goals
2 - Kamila, in terms of the academic application of your studies, you need to adjust the information that you are...
ScholarshipKamilaUbuntu - Jun 26, 2017 / Holt - Jun 26, 2017
|Endeavour Scholarship - writing about proposed program, host organisation, etc.
2 - Maria, you are being required to present a study plan for your time as a masters degree student in...
Scholarshipmcam - Jun 26, 2017 / Holt - Jun 26, 2017
|"self-introduction letter for master degree in finance" - the major is international relations
Scholarshipchith5333 - Jun 20, 2017 / chith5333 - Jun 22, 2017
|I am applying for financial aid in order to continue my studies and get a Master degree.
4 - I honestly think that you should explain a bit further the situation that your family is currently experiencing. Your...
Scholarshipkanyshai - Jun 19, 2017 / brayan1996 - Jun 19, 2017
|'a great opportunity, but also a responsibility' - Endeavour scholarship or fellowship
3 - Sara, this is a scatter brained essay that does not focus on the realistic representation of how this scholarship...
Scholarshiparb13llan - Jun 17, 2017 / Holt - Jun 18, 2017
|Australian Scholarship essay about how the chosen program would further my career
3 - Sara, this prompt requires you to be forward thinking in your approach. Rather than simply repeating the information from...
Scholarshiparb13llan - Jun 14, 2017 / Holt - Jun 14, 2017
|Scholarship essay : the definition of success in my life
3 - Tessa, unfortunately without the original prompt requirement for the scholarship, that is the instruction about what you are supposed...
Scholarshiplauratessa97 - Jun 13, 2017 / Holt - Jun 13, 2017
|Scholarship Essay "Why should you be considered for a scholarship by the Alumni of your school"
2 - Sebastian, being a graduate of this university and applying for an alumna scholarship requires a specific type of scholarship...
ScholarshipTRD006 - Jun 11, 2017 / Holt - Jun 11, 2017
|Prompt by scholarship committee about my goals for the future
2 - You are saying a lot of things of interest in your essay but none of these responses directly respond...
Scholarshiphealthstudent - Jun 8, 2017 / Holt - Jun 9, 2017
|I am a medical student on my way to becoming a physician
2 - Amit, this is a pretty interesting essay. The only critique that I can give you is that the essay...
Scholarshiphealthstudent - Jun 8, 2017 / Holt - Jun 8, 2017
|Endeavour scholarship (Master in sustainable devlopment)
4 - little changes..... Since very early age I was interested in science; finding the truth; I took my keen...
ScholarshipEndeavourguy - Jun 1, 2017 / Endeavourguy - Jun 1, 2017
|Statement explaining how the scholarship will support your educational and career objectives
2 - Lilian, all I read about here are your skills and educational background. You have spoken of possible objectives for...
ScholarshipLILIB - May 30, 2017 / Holt - May 30, 2017
|K-ARTS Scholarship Self Introduction essay for Film and Media Graduate students
3 - @Holt Thanks for your valuable remarks .In this essay ,I talked about the university because they wanted to know...
ScholarshipJsheikh - May 28, 2017 / Jsheikh - May 29, 2017
|PERSONAL STATEMENT ON WHY I SHOULD BE CONSIDERED FOR SCHOLARSHIP AT HERRIOT WATT UNIVERSITY.
5 - @Holt I sincerely appreciate your comment. I have several academics accomplishment, but as it is now I don't have...
ScholarshipHussein17 - May 12, 2017 / Hussein17 - May 28, 2017
|SCHOLARSHIP: Short essay on something of personal importance to you
4 - Thank you for your invaluable insights. I will keep in mind your inputs and incorporate a personal tone to...
Scholarshipskullyton - May 22, 2017 / skullyton - May 28, 2017
|A decent aspirant to obtain a scholarship prize
3 - Ciara, when you apply for a scholarship, the first that you have to look at are the requirements of...
ScholarshipciaraM - May 23, 2017 / Holt - May 26, 2017
|Learning nationalism through activities in education, youth, and Indonesian culture
5 - @Holt Thank you, Holt, your advice did improve the essay! I would also love to use the private service...
Scholarshipflykitten - May 22, 2017 / flykitten - May 22, 2017
|University of Auckland Scholarship Essay_Skill and Knowledge gained from the study
3 - Thank you @Mary Rose for the feedback. I have revised the essay based on your comment. Please give any...
Scholarshipkris_2017 - May 18, 2017 / kris_2017 - May 18, 2017
|University Scholarship Cancellation Appeal Letter
Scholarshipacecomer98 - May 18, 2017 / acecomer98 - May 18, 2017
|Brunel University - Country Specific Scholarship
4 - A LOT OF CHANGES NEEDED: Just first paragraph done here. As an engineer working in construction field (for...
ScholarshipEng Phin - May 4, 2017 / sartajzzz - May 15, 2017
|'person with high curiosity of anything' Self Introduction Essay for Exchange Program in South Korea
Scholarshipurufaru - May 5, 2017 / adambacon813 - May 6, 2017
|AAS Supporting statement No.4. Practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge
4 - Your examples are fantastic. The manner by which you wish to use the knowledge you will be gaining is...
Scholarshipaz23 - May 3, 2017 / Holt - May 5, 2017
|In which way this study will enhance your chance for a great career?
2 - Husam, your essay concentrates too much on hypothetical situations instead of real world applications. Since this is a masters...
Scholarshiphusam bari - May 3, 2017 / Holt - May 4, 2017
|Reasons and Study Objectives Behind Proposed Course and Institution - AAS 2017 Essay Task 1
3 - I don't think you can write in excess of 2,000 characters on the application page. So please be sure...
ScholarshipMonica26 - Apr 30, 2017 / az23 - May 3, 2017
|Sydney university - "Technology that is designed to delight its users" - AAS supporting statement 1
2 - Ida, totally remove your first paragraph and make the current second paragraph your first paragraph instead. Just merge the...
Scholarshipkanbin - May 1, 2017 / Holt - May 2, 2017
|Study Objectives Essay For Fulbright Scholarship Program 2018 From Pakistan
4 - Bilal, in my honest opinion, your essay doesn't really respond to the question. The development of your essay response...
Scholarshipbilal_engineer - Apr 30, 2017 / Holt - May 1, 2017
|STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR OFID SCHOLARSHIP AWARD - PAKISTAN RISK
4 - @bilal_engineer thank you dear bilal. I have modified it totally now, looking at the suggestions made by you people....
ScholarshipFarmancus - Apr 27, 2017 / Farmancus - Apr 30, 2017
|The road to abolish energy poverty from my country
4 - @azadsaleem71 Dear Azad, Salam buddy! I've proofread your essay and following is some of the parts which...
Scholarshipazadsaleem71 - Apr 29, 2017 / bilal_engineer - Apr 30, 2017
|"How I Intend to use benefits from scholarship and possible constraints" - AAS 2017 Essay Task 3
2 - Monica, all of your reference to the actual application of your course of study is vague and general in...
ScholarshipMonica26 - Apr 30, 2017 / Holt - Apr 30, 2017
|Details of any other experience/information which you consider relevant to your application
5 - Here's a revised edition The first time I recognized the magnitude of my passion for sustainable development is...
Scholarshipbolarinwa - Apr 16, 2017 / bolarinwa - Apr 29, 2017
|Task 1 for AAS application. Reasons for choosing to study the course and the institution.
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I have made a revision with your suggestions. Please have a look...
ScholarshipbushraAhmed - Apr 28, 2017 / bushraAhmed - Apr 29, 2017
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