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Healthcare system - Goal of study , study plan for gks during my degree program

2 - Try to develop a more concrete goal of study. Your presentation is too generic. It shows that you do...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - 15 hrs ago / Holt - 9 hrs ago

Sharing my desire to pursue nursing/personal statement for gks scholarship

3 - Thanks alot for this wonderful review. I'll check it out....

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 15, 2025 / Moon_Moon - Jun 15, 2025

My language study plan for GKS-U scholarship program (before and after coming to Korea)

2 - Prior to your arrival, the reviewer needs to see evidence that you have done both self study and enrolled...

ScholarshipMoon_Moon - Jun 11, 2025 / Holt - Jun 12, 2025

GKS-U personal statement - major in airline services

2 - This is a very interesting and well developed personal statement. It is a beacon of inspiration and truly introduces...

ScholarshipAdeurani - Jun 5, 2025 / Holt - Jun 5, 2025

Psychology study plan GKS scholarship

2 - One essay at a time please. I can only offer you official advice regarding your language study plan. Everyone...

ScholarshipEcstacy - May 27, 2025 / Holt - May 29, 2025

Biotechnology - MAECI SCHOLARSHIP SIENA AND PAVIA

4 - Merged: MAECI SCHOLARSHIP BIOTECHNOLOGY - PAVIA AND SIENA I formally ask the educational consultant to view my...

Scholarshipzob00010 - May 8, 2025 / zob00010 - May 12, 2025

Why is sustainability important to you? - STEM Scholarship Program Essay

2 - Based on my review of your responses to the first prompt, you should consider combining the first and second...

Scholarshipraemud - Apr 30, 2025 / Holt - May 11, 2025

gks sop - majoring in biological science

2 - The essay is extremely difficult to follow. I can sense your excitement in writing the essay, which caused you...

ScholarshipIanKookoo - Apr 30, 2025 / Holt - Apr 30, 2025

Studies and degrees - How will this scholarship contribute to the organisation's human resource

2 - You are totally off base with your response. The question being asked pertains to your current career attachment. Where...

ScholarshipJason12 - Apr 30, 2025 / Holt - Apr 30, 2025

Master of Entrepreneurship and Innovation - AAS-Why did you choose?

2 - Your response does not show a familiarity with the university, its community, nor the course curriculum. There must be...

Scholarshipnini_Maniva - Apr 17, 2025 / Holt - Apr 17, 2025

Motivation (Agricultural Sciences) - AUSTRALIAN AWARDS 2026 Reintergration plan.

2 - Your essay is over the maximum word count by 4 words. That problem can be easily addressed by simply...

Scholarshipmiss_tee5336 - Mar 17, 2025 / Holt - Mar 17, 2025

Oil and Gas Engineering - Church GYD - Chevening Leadership & Influence

2 - While the reviewer will admire the work that you did with your local church, it does not feel like...

ScholarshipCeceSanandwa_04 - Mar 13, 2025 / Holt - Mar 13, 2025

Erasmus Mundus Joint Master in Imaging Program

2 - When applying for a masters course, it is not important to get into your academic history. What matters more...

Scholarshipali333 - Mar 10, 2025 / Holt - Mar 13, 2025

personal statement or GKS at the Faculty of Translation and Management

2 - The opening section is confusing to read. The statements are not directly related to each other and these are...

ScholarshipaleshonkovaDiana - Mar 5, 2025 / Holt - Mar 5, 2025

Chevening Essay: Professional Relationship-Building Skills

2 - The first paragraph contains names that the reviewer may wish to verify in the future as part of the...

ScholarshipCeceSanandwa_04 - Mar 5, 2025 / Holt - Mar 5, 2025

Personal Statement Essay || GKS-U 2025 (UIC TRACK) Smart Security - Konyang University

2 - Congratulations on being accepted into this rigorous scholarship program for undergraduates. I commend you for the essay that you...

Scholarshiphaneul_hoshi - Mar 3, 2025 / Holt - Mar 3, 2025

GOI-IES Scholar - IRELAND SCHOLARSHIP

2 - When you are asked to discuss how Ireland will contribute to your professional growth, you should address how you...

Scholarshipannhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025 / Holt - Mar 2, 2025

limited access to information - GKS Future plan + Goal of study

3 - @ali333 You could provide more specific details about the graduate program you plan to pursue in Korea and...

Scholarshipali333 - Feb 26, 2025 / annhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025

Economics -Australia Awards Scholarship - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

4 - @ngai07 Your answer could be more concise, focusing on the most compelling reasons for yout choices rather than...

Scholarshipngai07 - Feb 19, 2025 / annhien66677 - Mar 1, 2025

GOI-IES scholarships - LINKAGE BETWEEN VIETNAM AND IRELAND

2 - I am not sure how this might work since the neutrality goals are Ireland specific. Perhaps you can...

Scholarshipannhien66677 - Feb 27, 2025 / Holt - Feb 28, 2025

Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - AAS Public Policy

3 - @Holt Thank you for your kind advice, I would consider your comment to revise my essay. I need further...

ScholarshipYtr879 - Feb 26, 2025 / Ytr879 - Feb 28, 2025

Psychology - Motivation with which you apply for this program-GKS scholarship

4 - Merged: Personal statement psychology;GKS SCHOLARSHIP As children, life feels simple. Our biggest worries revolve around play, curiosity,...

ScholarshipVault - Feb 22, 2025 / Vault - Feb 27, 2025

Immersing myself in Irish society - GOI-IES SCHOLARSHIP 2025-2026

2 - This is a totally empty and unnecessary reference. I suggest that you delete this an open strong by...

Scholarshipannhien66677 - Feb 25, 2025 / Holt - Feb 27, 2025

To overcome financial barriers - GLOCAL PROGRAM - ERASMUS MUNDUS SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you for your suggestion. Regarding the rest of the essay, do you think further revisions are necessary?...

Scholarshipangel246 - Feb 19, 2025 / angel246 - Feb 27, 2025

R-GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT UNIVERSITY TRACK - MASTER'S DEGREE IN MARINE ENGINEERING

2 - I feel that the presentation is unnecessarily long. It could be more concise and interesting to the reviewers. You...

Scholarshiplailatulqid - Feb 19, 2025 / Holt - Feb 27, 2025

Education in Biology - to achieve scholarship in DGIST

5 - Your study plan is strong, but it could benefit from improved flow, clarity, and conciseness....

Scholarshipabdurraffidaffa7 - Feb 1, 2025 / Vault - Feb 22, 2025

Master of Public Policy (MPP) - Manaaki scholarship

6 - @Febri0402 Looking at your essay, I agree with other commentors. Rather than describing what you want to learn, you...

ScholarshipFebri0402 - Feb 8, 2025 / ngai07 - Feb 20, 2025

The Value of Hard Work - GKS-G Personal Statement

2 - These information should be shared in the language study plan. While you can discuss the Chinese language here,...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 17, 2025 / Holt - Feb 17, 2025

Accounting and Management - Lund University Global Scholarship

2 - The Lund Scholarship focuses solely on merit based scholarships. The merit of the scholarship applicant should be based upon...

ScholarshipMercySpeak - Feb 15, 2025 / Holt - Feb 16, 2025

Communication - What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your study programme?

4 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback! The character limit for what i can write is 1200 character...

Scholarshiplotuslilly - Feb 14, 2025 / lotuslilly - Feb 15, 2025

Social stereotype - Yale Young Global Scholars

3 - @TracySifaMagambo I don't think this text is suitable for the question you had to answer. Throughout the whole first...

ScholarshipTracySifaMagambo - Feb 13, 2025 / clauana - Feb 15, 2025

Study Plan for Political Science Master's Degree - GKS-G

4 - @Holt I've rewritten part of this essay trying to align it with your advice. If you have time, please...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 9, 2025 / clauana - Feb 15, 2025

Think Tanks and Promotion of Bilateral Collaborations - Future Plan - GKS-G

3 - @Holt I appreciate the insight and will rewrite it....

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 10, 2025 / clauana - Feb 13, 2025

GKS-G - Language Study Plan - My road with korean language

3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback!...

Scholarshipclauana - Feb 9, 2025 / clauana - Feb 12, 2025

GkS Graduate Scholarship For Master's Degree In Early Child Education

4 - The essay is too short and not properly written in an organized format. Try to rewrite it, ensuring...

ScholarshipTumi d - Jan 15, 2025 / clauana - Feb 9, 2025

A circus artist and a scout - GKS graduate program personal statement

2 - There are 2 considerations that should help you decide the focus of your discussion. These are: 1. Are...

Scholarshipgabucee - Feb 6, 2025 / Holt - Feb 7, 2025

"it ain't over till it's over" - gks personal statement draft

3 - @Holt Thankyou for your advice.. I'll correct my mistakes sir....

ScholarshipIanKookoo - Feb 3, 2025 / IanKookoo - Feb 4, 2025

LPDP Essay - Personal statement and paragraph about background reasons and skills

2 - When applying for any scholarship, you must provide a strong academic foundation in terms of research skills, academic achievements,...

Scholarshipbonaventura_bb - Feb 3, 2025 / Holt - Feb 4, 2025

Applying scholarship GKS essay in teaching language field

2 - One of the main questions that your essay should address is "Why study a Masters in French in Korea...

Scholarshipnguyenleminh - Feb 3, 2025 / Holt - Feb 4, 2025

Public Admin - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? AUSTRALIAN AWARDS ESSAY

2 - You need to improve your academic choices discussion. Provide more details beyond the cut and paste information from the...

ScholarshipMaxie0326 - Feb 1, 2025 / Holt - Feb 2, 2025

A desire to Drive Meaningful Impact & Change in Developing nations (Application for QTEM Exchange)

3 - @Holt Okay thankyou for the information. Could you also give me your opinion about the essay otherwise? Is there...

Scholarshiplamiasalim - Jan 18, 2025 / lamiasalim - Jan 19, 2025

GKS-G Civil Engineering major, PERSONAL STATEMENT

3 - @Lilmonsta The essay has too many personalizations and too less qualifications. Why are you applying to the program of...

ScholarshipLilmonsta - Jan 17, 2025 / lamiasalim - Jan 17, 2025

how to overcome stress with NLP method. an essay for stipendium hungaricum

3 - This essay doesn't show your personal motivation and academic achievements as to why you deserve such scholarship to study...

Scholarshipgoingtocollagesn - Jan 12, 2025 / OsatoOsazuwa - Jan 14, 2025

Paraguay - Global Markets and Local Creativities

2 - Your credentials are very strong. The fact that you have work experience with Erasmus Mundus definitely adds a significant...

Scholarshipadrianaman - Jan 10, 2025 / Holt - Jan 12, 2025

Little Oceans - UWC essay

2 - Reviewers actually prefer that the applicants write from a point of view that shows a personal insight. So writing...

ScholarshipHarryweg - Jan 10, 2025 / Holt - Jan 12, 2025

Social, environmental, and economic changes - Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum

2 - Your passion and motivation should be one that encourages you to think outside of the box. Rather than relying...

Scholarshiprimbi8 - Jan 10, 2025 / Holt - Jan 12, 2025

Avid Evil - UWC application

3 - I couldn't work out the diversity angle but how about this Essay : At summer camp, I was...

ScholarshipObed199 - Jan 9, 2025 / Obed199 - Jan 10, 2025

Strategic business mind - GLOCAL Erasmus Mundus Application - Personal Statement

2 - Kindly name the NGO that you worked with and also, a few of the brands that you assisted with....

Scholarshiptahsinjalal - Jan 4, 2025 / Holt - Jan 5, 2025

Statement of Purpose for the GLOBAL MINDS Erasmus Mundus scholarship in Social and Cultural Psy

3 - Thank you very much for your feedback. You have no idea how much it means to me. I...

ScholarshipPsychwizard - Jan 2, 2025 / Psychwizard - Jan 3, 2025

Focused intention and effort - the UWC values / personal challenge

2 - This is an interesting response to the question provided. However, I believe it is too abstract for the reviewer...

ScholarshipZoeeoz - Dec 29, 2024 / Holt - Dec 29, 2024

Techwomen - how you have demonstrated leadership, specifically in your chosen track.

3 - I was wrong, it is not about leadership . this is correct one : Reflect on the long-term objectives...

ScholarshipChaymakh - Dec 19, 2024 / Chaymakh - Dec 21, 2024

Bachelor of Science in Nursing - Scholarship: educational and career goals/objective

2 - Scholarship organizations tend to prefer high achieving students for their scholar programs. At this point in your essay,...

Scholarshipambr05ia - Dec 19, 2024 / Holt - Dec 21, 2024

Language Study Plan (Study plans to improve Korean/English language ability for gks)

3 - I feel that this essay can be improved in terms of coherence and clarity. Also, I would recommend to...

Scholarshipziza - Dec 13, 2024 / habibraza22 - Dec 20, 2024

A Prolonged Journey for A Genuine Passion (Indonesia Endowment Fund for Education Scholarship)

3 - Thank you very much for your suggestion Holt!...

Scholarshipjakartainrain - Dec 2, 2024 / jakartainrain - Dec 14, 2024

The Ripple of Change - From small changes to big impact - GLOBAL UGRAD essay 1

3 - @Holt thank you for the review!!...

ScholarshipNugraha - Dec 6, 2024 / Nugraha - Dec 9, 2024

My proudest accomplishment - the Cambridge Science Competition

2 - Just indicate that this was a team event and you were the group leader. It sounds more professional...

Scholarshipmtbee7 - Dec 6, 2024 / Holt - Dec 9, 2024

AI in language learning and literature writing - Personal Statement for CLMC Erasmus Program

2 - This should go to the very top of the discussion. This is your personal motivation for studying the...

ScholarshipAshiaBibi - Nov 13, 2024 / Holt - Nov 14, 2024

Chemical Engineering - Academic objective and long range goal essay

2 - Actually, your response is incorrect in the sense that you speak of your long term goals, but not of...

ScholarshipMichaelllll - Nov 6, 2024 / Holt - Nov 6, 2024

Political landscape of Bosnia and Herzegovina - Chevening career plan

3 - You are writing only on UN women. I recomend you to put numerous goals and arrange them to implementation...

ScholarshipLohnpartner - Nov 4, 2024 / a_sm - Nov 5, 2024

CHEVENING: LEADERSHIP THROUGH EMPOWERMENT

2 - Remove all the references to your internship and college experience. Those paragraphs do not contain actual leadership discussions. The...

ScholarshipAsquare27 - Nov 5, 2024 / Holt - Nov 5, 2024

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