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|Human resource development needs organisation, choice of proposed course and institution
2 - TM, if you can revise the first prompt response to be more focused on the "human resource development needs"...
ScholarshipTMH - 1 day ago / Holt - 9 hours ago
|Expected skills and knowledge from proposed study (New Zealand Study)
3 - desmarnov , do not lump your skills and knowledge development for the two universities in one presentation. Since there...
Scholarshipadix - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - 1 day ago
|One theory that interests me is the theory of parallel universes. Questbridge Concept/Theory Essay
2 - Michelle, while the parallel universe theory is interesting to read about, you did not go beyond the "interest" part...
Scholarshiprunningflight - Mar 18, 2018 / Holt - 1 day ago
|Essay for OFID scholarship. I've been admitted into the prestigious University of Chester in the UK
2 - Erick, this is a very creatively developed essay. You get points for that. However, you neglected to include the...
ScholarshipRunga - Mar 17, 2018 / Holt - 1 day ago
|The proposed study will contribute to my next career, and my country overall
2 - Todo, you need to make the presentation more prompt responsive. Open the essay with a reference to your proposed...
Scholarshiptodo - Mar 16, 2018 / Holt - Mar 17, 2018
|Study Animation in South Korea and living my dream - KGSP
4 - HI Nora, first up, please allow me to apologize for the delay in my response to your revision. There...
ScholarshipAyumuNoraDesu - Feb 18, 2018 / Holt - Mar 17, 2018
|Short essay on my current work: apply for a masters in art in international development and policy
1 - experiences and challenges in uganda Improve the youth Uganda is a not-for-profit local community based organization whose objective...
Scholarshipjalutia30 - Mar 14, 2018 / — -
|Stuned Motivation Statement: Applied engineering research for resilient coastal community
4 - @Holt and @roxwolf95, Thank you for your comprehensive review and kind feedback. I realize the shortcoming on first half...
Scholarshiprum7 - Mar 10, 2018 / rum7 - Mar 14, 2018
|Knowledge and Skills I hope to gain from my proposed study (Development Studies)
2 - Khusnul, your response is so indirect that it failed to respond to the prompt. When you are writing a...
Scholarshipkkpanjaitan - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 14, 2018
|What aspect/s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established?
2 - Selvi, this essay perfectly establishes your identity as a team member, not as a team leader, which was the...
Scholarshipselvimtj - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 14, 2018
|Australia award scholarship's contribution in 37 year old's future career
2 - Ulambayar, I am not sure about how to review this essay. You forgot to give the prompt instructions for...
ScholarshipUlambayar - Mar 9, 2018 / Holt - Mar 13, 2018
|Lingual & cultural communication is a bridge; Applying for Korean Studies/KGSP-G Personal Statement
Scholarshipbeatricekarova - Mar 10, 2018 / miriealie - Mar 10, 2018
|Scholarship essay to NTU : An event of personal importance to you. You may choose any topic.
2 - Sourabh, while you were asked to pick someone else or a different event for the topic of this essay,...
ScholarshipSourabh01 - Mar 8, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|CT's Motivation Letter for applying Master Degree Maritime Operation
2 - CHUMPON, a motivation letter is an essay that explains your reasons for wishing to enroll in a specific masters...
Scholarshiptuengi - Mar 8, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Being at crossroads in the journey of life. My "Personal Statement" for Government Scholarship
ScholarshipShinbi Jung13 - Mar 4, 2018 / Shinbi Jung13 - Mar 10, 2018
|Why you apply for Msc in Business Administration, specialization Small Business & Entrepreneurship?
2 - @SSAGitz you are not being asked why you want to be an entrepreneur, the question is all about the...
ScholarshipSSAGitz - Mar 5, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Essay about How do you pay your tuition and living expenses while in college?
3 - Sophia, your whole essay, save for the part where you discuss working as a call center agent is nothing...
ScholarshipSophia123 - Mar 4, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - opportunity to delve deeper into Korean studies
3 - Sven, you need to refocus your response to represent only the academic and professional aspects of your application in...
Scholarshipagermanguy - Mar 4, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement: Promoting communication and exchange – A social psychologist's approach..
Scholarshipbrightcolours - Mar 1, 2018 / Ashkan123 - Mar 5, 2018
|Applying KGSP Korean Language and Literature majoring in Teaching Korean As a Foreign Language
5 - @brightcolours ahh thats right :( i think i wrote too long for nothing.. i got no more space to...
Scholarshipstardust294 - Feb 24, 2018 / stardust294 - Mar 2, 2018
|Looking for an opportunity to conduct Environmental researches! Personal statement
2 - Hi! First of all: This is my first time commenting on any essay so please kindly note, that my...
ScholarshipAMOZ04 - Feb 26, 2018 / brightcolours - Mar 1, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - Combining Technology and Korean Culture
2 - Rafika, open the essay with an immediate reference to your college studies. The current opening statement you have does...
Scholarshipraf1209 - Feb 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|KGSP Study Plan - Solving Companies Problem
2 - Evin, What exactly is your thesis proposal ? I don't get what your study goal is. What is the...
ScholarshipEvin Chan - Feb 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|Technology and telecommunication engineering in Korea - personal statement for KGSP 2018
2 - Ainani, your essay is nowhere near delivering the relevant requirements for the KGSP scholarship. This sort of essay writing...
Scholarshipstxrrynight - Feb 26, 2018 / Holt - Mar 1, 2018
|How undertaking this fellowship in the UK will benefit your career
2 - Mohit, in your opening paragraph, you don't have to say that the opportunity to apply for the scholarship could...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 24, 2018 / Holt - Feb 27, 2018
|Architects are responsible for comfortable and safe future. KGSP Personal Statement.
3 - Dear Holt, thank you so much for your comments! I updated my Personal Statement. I will be appreciate if...
Scholarshipdaisyooh - Feb 24, 2018 / daisyooh - Feb 27, 2018
|It was worth to wait for the opportunity to apply for Master study in Korea - Personal Statement
1 - Hi guys~ I am going to apply KGSP for Master's study. This is my personal statement for the scholarship....
Scholarshipshahzad iqbal - Feb 27, 2018 / — -
|Marketing myself and demonstrating suitability in my Personal Statement
3 - Walter, this personal statement is too simplified in presentation that it almost seems like a draft of a personal...
Scholarshipgmeigo9 - Feb 23, 2018 / Holt - Feb 25, 2018
|Personal Statement for phD scholarship in Design schools in Korea
1 - The registration program requires the following items: Motivations with which you apply for this program / Your education and...
Scholarshiparantesb - Feb 23, 2018 / — -
|I have been involved deeper into the processes that need more expertise - KGSP application
Scholarshipbatgirl23 - Feb 22, 2018 / batgirl23 - Feb 23, 2018
|My nursing education and interest in the Korean Government Scholarship Program
3 - Thank you so much for your advices I will fix my mistakes.And I think I should write with Korean...
ScholarshipKubra42 - Feb 21, 2018 / Kubra42 - Feb 22, 2018
|KGSP - is a big opportunity to start over, when you think that life is over
7 - Thank you, i will definitely rewrite my statement, now i see that it was to emotional and indeed not...
ScholarshipLanaVasel - Feb 20, 2018 / LanaVasel - Feb 22, 2018
|Public order provision. Study in Australia will be more related to the Indonesian's context
Scholarshipismayati - Feb 21, 2018 / ismayati - Feb 22, 2018
|What it means to me? Essay on Leadership and influence - question for Chevening Fellowship
4 - Mohit, as far as I know, Chevening is asking for leadership examples in professional settings. Therefore, in my opinion...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 20, 2018 / hanabanana - Feb 22, 2018
|I can learn a lot of good things from this great nation. KGSP scholarship 2018
4 - @Holt Hello, Mary Rose~ I have revised my personal statement essay, would you mind to review it? thank you...
Scholarshipyourbae - Feb 13, 2018 / yourbae - Feb 21, 2018
|LETTER OF SELF INTRODUCTION FOR KGSP MASTERS PROGRAM IN (Talend and Passion)
2 - sundas, do you have a copy of the new prompt requirements for the KGSP scholarship? If you do, I...
Scholarshipsundassadiq - Feb 19, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|TO THE HIGHT COMMISION. My principal recommendation letter for the Chevening Program
Scholarshiptsitsou - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|Describe clearly the key things you are looking for in a course and your reasons for choosing it
3 - Embun, your response is off target. If you review the website in relation to your masters degree course choice,...
ScholarshipEmbun - Feb 20, 2018 / Holt - Feb 21, 2018
|Training and experience in Korea - study plan and future plan - I would like apply for KGSP
6 - @TB17 you already did some addition for your research plan and method to do it but I think your...
ScholarshipTB17 - Feb 13, 2018 / Jsovane - Feb 20, 2018
|Can Chemistry be useful? When I use all of my theory in my real life? - Personal Statement for KGSP
ScholarshipRahma29 - Feb 18, 2018 / Rahma29 - Feb 20, 2018
|Essay about developing e-learning for maths word problems (Applying for KGSP)
4 - Hafsah, your goal of study needs an appropriate title. It should also be presented in a thesis style proposal....
Scholarshipacah79 - Feb 17, 2018 / Holt - Feb 19, 2018
|STUNED Essay. Why you apply for the chosen program, what do you intend to do with your Master degree
4 - Sagita, what you have here is the preliminary work on a research paper relevant to your field of interest....
ScholarshipGITZ14 - Feb 18, 2018 / Holt - Feb 19, 2018
|Course and institution choice; word choice, confusing sentences of my answer on the question below.
3 - @GITZ14 Thank you. I will do. Let's delete our posts, just caring about plagiarism. We need to delete our...
ScholarshipAmurik - Feb 18, 2018 / Amurik - Feb 19, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - Learning about Other Cultures
2 - The essay could use more of a backstory regarding your decision to become a polyglot. Since you are focusing...
Scholarshipjadesinger - Feb 16, 2018 / Holt - Feb 17, 2018
|Personal Statement shows how your own interests are linked to the Digital Marketing programme
2 - I think it would be better if you arrange your essay more systematically. You can state your main idea...
ScholarshipMariamM - Feb 16, 2018 / Ulfaidrus_flip - Feb 16, 2018
|KGSP Personal Statement - I want to fix my country unseen problem
2 - Josevan, the reference to your ambition should start with high school not childhood. the reviewers do not believe that...
ScholarshipJsovane - Feb 16, 2018 / Holt - Feb 16, 2018
|"Stipendium Hungaricum" Program - Motivation letter for Hungarian Scholarship
ScholarshipIvanovic12 - Feb 15, 2018 / Ivanovic12 - Feb 16, 2018
|Academic study related awards, publications - not specific to any particular qualifications you hold
1 - how to write this scholarship essay? Provide a maximum of four academic study related awards, prizes or publication...
Scholarshipharry dawson - Feb 15, 2018 / — -
|I strive to be a leader in this field. Motivational Letter for MaMaSELF Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
Scholarshipbiffokadir13 - Feb 12, 2018 / biffokadir13 - Feb 13, 2018
|I'm on my way to become that great food engineer I've always wanted
2 - Tchalim, this essay reminds me of an example of a misunderstanding in a conversation that my professor once told...
ScholarshipBooster70 - Feb 12, 2018 / Holt - Feb 13, 2018
|Food Technology and Packaging -Your study objectives for Fulbright application
ScholarshipBooster70 - Feb 8, 2018 / Booster70 - Feb 12, 2018
|Why I want to contribute to the development of the health system in my country
2 - Christi, the strength of this essay will rely on you focusing the opening statement in a manner that directly...
ScholarshipXti02 - Feb 11, 2018 / Holt - Feb 12, 2018
|Reference Letter Chevening Scholarship "Global Health "
Scholarshipwomeen15 - Feb 11, 2018 / womeen15 - Feb 12, 2018
|KGSP program is the perfect opportunity for my goals and dreams - Korean Scholarship essay
4 - I appreciate deeply the feedback. I've changed the focus to better reflect my interest, which is the game development...
ScholarshipMyrium - Feb 10, 2018 / Myrium - Feb 11, 2018
|Scholarship for master program in data analytics - Management Information Systems
Scholarshipkennai - Feb 6, 2018 / kennai - Feb 11, 2018
|The same proportion between boys and girls in a tertiary education for all subjects
3 - thank u, i truly appreciate it ! Actually in the first paragraph I wrote "hardly", I mean I tried...
ScholarshipQuynhphuong1 - Feb 6, 2018 / Quynhphuong1 - Feb 10, 2018
|I want to apply KGSP. I need to write a Statement of Purpose for that I wrote this.
ScholarshipAkib67 - Feb 9, 2018 / Akib67 - Feb 10, 2018
|The KGSP is one such opportunity that I don't wish to regret for not trying - PERSONAL STATEMENT
3 - Jerry, your personal statement is not aligned with the prompt requirements in some instances. So it would be better...
Scholarshipjerrys1995 - Feb 9, 2018 / Holt - Feb 10, 2018
|Impact of my study to national development; Commonwealth scholarship.
Scholarshipjoechido91 - Feb 7, 2018 / joechido91 - Feb 9, 2018
|Convincing that this Scholarship in Korea is a true match with my education and work experience
5 - @Holt I was actually trying to explain about my departement (communication science) used to offer specific major in 4th...
Scholarshipaprn88 - Feb 8, 2018 / aprn88 - Feb 9, 2018
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