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|Writing: For MEXT Scholarship Japan - My field of expertise is Biotechnology
1 - Respected EF moderators and members. I would like to apply MEXT scholarship which provides Field of specialization studied in...
ScholarshipNazish Masood - Jun 8, 2018 / — -
|Three MSc courses for wildlife conservation. Why do I have chosen them?
5 - @Holt, I wholeheartedly appreciate everything you've done for me, and I feel that it's my duty to share my...
Scholarshiprodrigolivbr - Oct 11, 2017 / rodrigolivbr - Jun 6, 2018
|Motivation for programme choice, you as a proper candidate, dissertation topic, study contribution
3 - @Holt Please make it urgent first, thank you. Hello! Thank you for the great feedback, Holt. I highly...
Scholarshipmaurice0422 - May 25, 2018 / maurice0422 - May 27, 2018
|Essay about African-American leader in my field who has inspired me to achieve my goals
ScholarshipDaughaqu - May 15, 2018 / Holt - May 21, 2018
|Study Objectives for Fulbright Scholarship - Artificial Intelligence w/ application in Aerospace
4 - Merged: Study Objectives for Fulbright Scholarship Hello from Pakistan! I am Rizwan Malik and I am applying for...
ScholarshipRizwan89 - May 5, 2018 / Rizwan89 - May 13, 2018
|I dream to become an indigenous oil/gas expert in Nigeria Personal statement for ptdf scholarship
3 - @Holt Thank you so much Sir for your thorough contributions. I just hope to qualify for the next stage...
Scholarshippalongs - May 5, 2018 / palongs - May 6, 2018
|Supporting statement for AAS 2018, Possible tasks to perform
2 - @Keiko_15 you neglected to inform the reviewer as to how you will use the professional network composed of professors,...
ScholarshipKeiko_15 - Apr 27, 2018 / Holt - Apr 28, 2018
|Why Master of Economics / Master of Applied Economics and Econometrics?
3 - @nelanavida you did extremely well in the first part of the essay where you introduce the purpose of your...
Scholarshipnelanavida - Apr 26, 2018 / Holt - Apr 27, 2018
|Scholarship Essay Globalisation, Business and Sustainable Development
Scholarshipcuriouscat - Apr 26, 2018 / curiouscat - Apr 27, 2018
|I will apply nursing education in Monash University - AAS 2018
4 - i try to make new essay based on your advice, could you please correct it again. A new revision...
ScholarshipKeiko_15 - Apr 21, 2018 / Keiko_15 - Apr 27, 2018
|My essay for the Julius Mwalimu scholarship scheme
6 - thanks holt...
ScholarshipWanyabanda - Apr 15, 2018 / Wanyabanda - Apr 25, 2018
|"I will benefit directly" - A short essay for OFID scholarship
4 - Dear Holt, is it possible to contact you in person, i need a little help with my statement. -...
ScholarshipFatemahEbrahimi - Apr 9, 2018 / GaliDavl - Apr 23, 2018
|AAS Supporting Statement, Why Master of Sustainable Energy? Solutions for global energy challenges
3 - Firno, your reference to the reason why you chose this course is too vague. You cannot have a generalized...
Scholarshipfirno - Apr 21, 2018 / Holt - Apr 22, 2018
|My goal to become an e-business transformation consultant - IELTS PRIZE personal statement
3 - Thanks @Holt! I think the work experience is important because it made me confirmed my goal, but maybe...
Scholarshipenjoy543 - Apr 18, 2018 / enjoy543 - Apr 20, 2018
|Why the University of Sidney became my first choice? (AAS Suporting Statemnet)
4 - Kiki, you have to be more specific about the reasons you have chosen to pursue masters studies in TESOL...
ScholarshipKikyo_14 - Apr 18, 2018 / Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Information about AAS from Australian university websites and from attending educational exhibitions
2 - @yeniuyun Do not term your introduction to the AAS as coming from a "talk show" on campus.; That implies...
Scholarshipyeniuyun - Apr 18, 2018 / Holt - Apr 19, 2018
|Scholarship application - Master of Social Work in Queensland University matches my passion
ScholarshipIvonsestia - Apr 9, 2018 / Ivonsestia - Apr 19, 2018
|My proposed study will help me to understand people better. Positive for my career and for Indonesia
4 - Thank you @abdo65619 and @holt. Your feedback gave me some insight and it means a lot.. and I have...
ScholarshipIvonsestia - Apr 10, 2018 / Ivonsestia - Apr 19, 2018
|The gained knowledge would sharpen my passion (Australia Award Scholarship)
2 - also designing digital marketing are animportant skill I do hope to gain Consider separating run on sentence: From...
Scholarshiptams27 - Apr 16, 2018 / jazzyjaz - Apr 19, 2018
|Hi I'm Queen. This scholarship is for help to drive proper interventions and policies in Nigeria.
4 - @Holt Good evening sir, trust this meet you well. Please kindly find my edited essay above for your attention....
Scholarshipquiqui - Apr 14, 2018 / quiqui - Apr 18, 2018
|What it means to me? Essay on Leadership and influence - question for Chevening Fellowship
5 - After reading so many responses of you for leadership question, I was sure that the original essay wrote by...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 20, 2018 / mohit2k6123 - Apr 18, 2018
|Why I choose master course in Mining and Metallurgical Engineering at Curtin University
Scholarshipdigital256 - Apr 17, 2018 / digital256 - Apr 18, 2018
|Commonwealth scholarship short essay on objectives during award, and career plan after award.
2 - Alao, why are you presenting the responses as an itemized listing? This is normally presented as inter connected plans...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Apr 16, 2018 / Holt - Apr 17, 2018
|What will you do after finishing school? Supporting Statement - Australia Awards Scholarship
2 - @Milkx_Tea your response is confusing. If you have already worked at XYZ company and you are planning to return...
ScholarshipMilkx_Tea - Apr 16, 2018 / Holt - Apr 17, 2018
|How undertaking this fellowship in the UK will benefit your career
3 - Hi thanks for your suggestions. As you suggested I rephrased my opening sentence of this essay and some...
Scholarshipmohit2k6123 - Feb 24, 2018 / mohit2k6123 - Apr 16, 2018
|My reasons for applying the master's program of General and Applied Linguistics
Scholarshiptm_aulia - Apr 4, 2018 / tm_aulia - Apr 16, 2018
|"A sound track of excellence and dedication"; Statement of purpose (max 500 words) - UK scholarship
Scholarshipsalmamza85 - Apr 14, 2018 / salmamza85 - Apr 15, 2018
|"The determination to succeed will bring the power to overcome any challenge" - facing hard life
6 - kindly find my revised essay below Born into a family of six that relied on a limited financial...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Apr 7, 2018 / Alao0702 - Apr 15, 2018
|WHY TESOL in University of Canberra or Sydney? (AAS Hunter)
2 - Umniyyatul, try to create a more integrated presentation of your reason for choosing the course at this institution. As...
ScholarshipUmni - Apr 13, 2018 / Holt - Apr 14, 2018
|Describe the efforts you have undertaken so far to obtain information on your study options?
ScholarshiphunterSC - Apr 8, 2018 / hunterSC - Apr 14, 2018
|Engineering; why you chose your proposed host organisation - Scholarship Application master essay
ScholarshipChemicalAus - Apr 11, 2018 / ChemicalAus - Apr 11, 2018
|Scholarship essay about my educational goals, reasons for applying, and how I would help my country
Scholarshipabdo65619 - Apr 7, 2018 / abdo65619 - Apr 11, 2018
|Describe the problem/issue of society/business you want to solve in your community or organization
2 - Nnamso, the essay is not asking you to describe what skills you hope to develop and use in the...
ScholarshipEsunam - Apr 2, 2018 / Holt - Apr 5, 2018
|Scholarship Response about education barriers
4 - I agree with holt, I think your essay is too political. You should be careful to write a tendentious...
ScholarshipLourHarb - Mar 26, 2018 / gultom - Apr 5, 2018
|Australia Awards 2018 Supporting Statement - proposed course and institution choice
3 - Dear Holt, thank you very much for your kind suggestion. I have revised opening paragraph of my essay and...
Scholarshipprm57 - Apr 1, 2018 / prm57 - Apr 3, 2018
|Summarize the ways in which you have engaged in voluntary activities
ScholarshipAdade - Mar 29, 2018 / Adade - Apr 3, 2018
|Personal statement Science and technology for development - COMMONWEALTH SHARED SCHOLARSHIP
ScholarshipSophiaN - Apr 1, 2018 / SophiaN - Apr 2, 2018
|UK' CSC AND NIGERIA - HOW YOUR STUDY RELATES TO DEVELOPMENT IN YOUR COUNTRY?
3 - Your first paragraph is out of place. Don't give the reviewer a historical lecture. He doesn't have the time...
ScholarshipGraham - Apr 1, 2018 / Holt - Apr 2, 2018
|Human resource development needs organisation, choice of proposed course and institution
3 - Thx Holt.....
ScholarshipTMH - Mar 21, 2018 / TMH - Apr 2, 2018
|The Consistency of Change: QUESTBRIDGE BIOGRAPHICAL ESSAY
2 - Cole, this is a very well developed biographical essay. You have adequately represented the circumstances of your growth and...
Scholarshipcmakontrack - Mar 29, 2018 / Holt - Mar 31, 2018
|Workshop about creating lesson material through e-module application - solving a challenge essay
3 - Rini, there should not be any reference to "we" in this essay because the focal point of the discussion...
Scholarshipavatar22 - Mar 27, 2018 / Holt - Mar 31, 2018
|Personal Statement for Erasmus : Global Markets, Local Creativities Programme
Scholarshipssaadpasha - Jan 1, 2018 / ssaadpasha - Mar 30, 2018
|Common wealth Benefits to Uganda: for Msc Food Tech and Quality Assurance at Reading University
2 - Claire, try to be more precise about how your studies at this university tie in with the Commonwealth Benefits...
ScholarshipKreg - Mar 26, 2018 / Holt - Mar 29, 2018
|How your personal background has encouraged you to contribute to development in your country?
2 - Alao, you need to be less flowery with your presentation and more informational in content. You have to build...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Mar 25, 2018 / Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Explain how your proposed study relates to a development need in your sector and country
2 - Alao, paragraph 2 doesn't help to move the essay forward. It does not really say anything of value and...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - Mar 25, 2018 / Holt - Mar 26, 2018
|Problem with water resources in Nigeria. Home Country Benefit Commonwealth
3 - @Holt thank you very much for your contribution. I have noted the errors, I will do the corrections...
ScholarshipEmcee_huckz - Mar 22, 2018 / Emcee_huckz - Mar 26, 2018
|Expected skills and knowledge from proposed study (New Zealand Study)
2 - desmarnov , do not lump your skills and knowledge development for the two universities in one presentation. Since there...
Scholarshipadix - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 20, 2018
|One theory that interests me is the theory of parallel universes. Questbridge Concept/Theory Essay
2 - Michelle, while the parallel universe theory is interesting to read about, you did not go beyond the "interest" part...
Scholarshiprunningflight - Mar 18, 2018 / Holt - Mar 20, 2018
|Essay for OFID scholarship. I've been admitted into the prestigious University of Chester in the UK
2 - Erick, this is a very creatively developed essay. You get points for that. However, you neglected to include the...
ScholarshipRunga - Mar 17, 2018 / Holt - Mar 20, 2018
|The proposed study will contribute to my next career, and my country overall
2 - Todo, you need to make the presentation more prompt responsive. Open the essay with a reference to your proposed...
Scholarshiptodo - Mar 16, 2018 / Holt - Mar 17, 2018
|Short essay on my current work: apply for a masters in art in international development and policy
1 - experiences and challenges in uganda Improve the youth Uganda is a not-for-profit local community based organization whose objective...
Scholarshipjalutia30 - Mar 14, 2018 / — -
|Stuned Motivation Statement: Applied engineering research for resilient coastal community
4 - @Holt and @roxwolf95, Thank you for your comprehensive review and kind feedback. I realize the shortcoming on first half...
Scholarshiprum7 - Mar 10, 2018 / rum7 - Mar 14, 2018
|Knowledge and Skills I hope to gain from my proposed study (Development Studies)
2 - Khusnul, your response is so indirect that it failed to respond to the prompt. When you are writing a...
Scholarshipkkpanjaitan - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 14, 2018
|What aspect/s of your leadership knowledge, skills and practice you consider to be well established?
2 - Selvi, this essay perfectly establishes your identity as a team member, not as a team leader, which was the...
Scholarshipselvimtj - Mar 11, 2018 / Holt - Mar 14, 2018
|Australia award scholarship's contribution in 37 year old's future career
2 - Ulambayar, I am not sure about how to review this essay. You forgot to give the prompt instructions for...
ScholarshipUlambayar - Mar 9, 2018 / Holt - Mar 13, 2018
|Lingual & cultural communication is a bridge; Applying for Korean Studies/KGSP-G Personal Statement
Scholarshipbeatricekarova - Mar 10, 2018 / miriealie - Mar 10, 2018
|Scholarship essay to NTU : An event of personal importance to you. You may choose any topic.
2 - Sourabh, while you were asked to pick someone else or a different event for the topic of this essay,...
ScholarshipSourabh01 - Mar 8, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|CT's Motivation Letter for applying Master Degree Maritime Operation
2 - CHUMPON, a motivation letter is an essay that explains your reasons for wishing to enroll in a specific masters...
Scholarshiptuengi - Mar 8, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
|Being at crossroads in the journey of life. My "Personal Statement" for Government Scholarship
ScholarshipShinbi Jung13 - Mar 4, 2018 / Shinbi Jung13 - Mar 10, 2018
|Why you apply for Msc in Business Administration, specialization Small Business & Entrepreneurship?
2 - @SSAGitz you are not being asked why you want to be an entrepreneur, the question is all about the...
ScholarshipSSAGitz - Mar 5, 2018 / Holt - Mar 10, 2018
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