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|Statement of Purpose for Erasmus Mundus masters program in Materials Science
2 - Alao, your essay needs to be more focused on making you stand out as a candidate. At the moment,...
ScholarshipAlao0702 - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Do a good dead, stand up and lead
2 - Ahmed , I believe that the first 2 paragraphs are on point in reference to the first 2 questions...
ScholarshipSoliman97 - Dec 12, 2017 / Holt - 2 days ago
|NTU scholarship essay: Write a short essay on a subject of personal importance to you (class)
3 - Tran, while I can understand why you would consider the class an important thing in your life, it does...
Scholarshipanhquantpc - Dec 10, 2017 / Holt - Dec 11, 2017
|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Peronal Statement - Global Market, Local Creativity Master Program
5 - @Holt Noted and thank you Holt! Will revise it and get it back real soon :) really appreciate it!...
Scholarshipkukas90 - Dec 10, 2017 / kukas90 - Dec 11, 2017
|NTU Scholarship Essay: An Event which has Influenced You
3 - @victoriatrinita I go attended to a public school and take took the public transport "angkot". ... and I am...
Scholarshipvictoriatrinita - Dec 9, 2017 / impatient101 - Dec 9, 2017
|Project Management Reference Letter for Chevening
Scholarshiparaku13 - Dec 8, 2017 / araku13 - Dec 9, 2017
|AIM SMALL, MISS SMALL - NTU SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY (MY VALUES AND BELIEFS)
Scholarshipdunn4 - Dec 6, 2017 / dunn4 - Dec 7, 2017
|Applying for Master program in Artificial Intelligence at CC University - Motivationletter
Scholarshipcool_Yu - Dec 6, 2017 / cool_Yu - Dec 6, 2017
|Recommendation Letter for Applying for Master in International Business Program
2 - Faiz, you should clarify that this person worked with you in two capacities, one are your educator, the other,...
ScholarshipFaiz Ahadina - Dec 5, 2017 / Holt - Dec 6, 2017
|What motivates you and write about a topic that reflects your values
4 - @Holt and Macbz, thank you so much for this great feedback. It's helpful and i will incorporate the comments...
Scholarshipwinday209 - Nov 30, 2017 / winday209 - Nov 30, 2017
|David Strangway was a visionary who helped pioneer educational change and reform across Canada.
2 - Danielle, this essay does not represent a future vision for children in this field based upon your expected participation....
ScholarshipMochachii - Nov 29, 2017 / Holt - Nov 30, 2017
|My plan to pursue my masters degree in US be scholarship.
2 - Naseer, I find the first 3 paragraphs to be highly uninteresting to read. You have gone into so much...
Scholarshipnaseernasrati - Nov 25, 2017 / Holt - Nov 26, 2017
|Leadership position and what I did individually to make a change
4 - @Codex1717 I think its a good essay, but I believe that you're trying to stuff too many things in...
ScholarshipCodex1717 - Nov 25, 2017 / madiefarts123 - Nov 25, 2017
|Learning new things has always been a great motivator for me. Essay for MasterCard
Scholarshipkeneshuku - Nov 20, 2017 / keneshuku - Nov 25, 2017
|Major choice - to gain valuable training and obtain access to a wider range of possibilities
5 - @TJLuschen yes, my English is not good. Thank your suggestion. I fixed the essay many times, revised essay is...
ScholarshipSnow_lilac - Nov 6, 2017 / Snow_lilac - Nov 24, 2017
|Outline what you believe are particular challenges (eg. in the economy, education, healthcare, etc.)
5 - Your essay does not provide solutions for the educational problems in your community.. How do u plan to use...
Scholarshiporocky - Nov 18, 2017 / Codex1717 - Nov 24, 2017
|Helping the poor and the underprivileged. Essay on my values and passion as a person
4 - Thank you very much @qin6882060 and @Holt.. I really appreciate your feedback..I will make necessary corrections...
ScholarshipCodex1717 - Nov 23, 2017 / Codex1717 - Nov 24, 2017
|Transformative effect of learning experience.
ScholarshipCodex1717 - Nov 22, 2017 / Codex1717 - Nov 23, 2017
|My journey to study in the United States.
3 - @Holt Hi thanks for your feedback. this is the essay that i worked on last year and submitted it...
Scholarshipnaseernasrati - Nov 22, 2017 / naseernasrati - Nov 23, 2017
|Programming is fascinating to me. Essay on motivation, passion and values.
ScholarshipCodex1717 - Nov 22, 2017 / Codex1717 - Nov 22, 2017
|Follow up on MCF scholars network
5 - @keneshuku Thanks alot for your feedback. I will give it another thoughtful review and do the needful if I...
Scholarshipinok26 - Nov 6, 2017 / inok26 - Nov 21, 2017
|My motivation, passion and values as a person.
3 - @Holt WOW!! you offered really great insights. I thought I was done and dusted, I shall take into consideration...
Scholarshipinok26 - Nov 21, 2017 / inok26 - Nov 21, 2017
|Positions of leadership you have undertaken and what you did individually to make a change- MCF
Scholarshipkeneshuku - Nov 21, 2017 / keneshuku - Nov 21, 2017
|What motivates you and what you are passionate about. MCF
ScholarshipEddie2018 - Nov 21, 2017 / Eddie2018 - Nov 21, 2017
|"Shape the city with AI"; Artificial Intelligent and Deep Learning has bright future
2 - Robert, what you have written is not a proper KGSP Goal of Study / Study plan. In this essay,...
Scholarshipabetterfuture - Nov 20, 2017 / Holt - Nov 20, 2017
|Engaging with the network of Mastercard Foundation Scholars
3 - Thank you very much for your response Holt. But please could you elaborate more on the alumni project you...
ScholarshipCodex1717 - Nov 18, 2017 / Codex1717 - Nov 20, 2017
|Living the outstanding dream
3 - Mohamed, as a person applying for a government sponsored scholarship to the United States, it would be best if...
ScholarshipMohamed012375 - Nov 19, 2017 / Holt - Nov 20, 2017
|CURRENT AND EMERGING ISSUES FACING NIGERIA - RELATION TO THE STUDY CHOICE
Scholarshipkeneshuku - Nov 19, 2017 / keneshuku - Nov 19, 2017
|How would this learning experience be transformative for you- Mastercard
Scholarshipkeneshuku - Nov 19, 2017 / keneshuku - Nov 19, 2017
|Remaining in the same company rather than job switching?
4 - Vishnu, your approach to the discussion is improper. The most significant improper presentation in your essay is the opening...
Scholarshipvakkomvishnu - Nov 18, 2017 / Holt - Nov 19, 2017
|The kind of leader I want to be.
3 - Ghana, here is the thing, you speak a lot of Angelina as a leader and philanthropist, but you fail...
Scholarshipghana raza - Nov 16, 2017 / Holt - Nov 17, 2017
|Addressing the problem of 21st century Pakistan.
3 - @ghana raza the first two paragraphs do not really help to move the essay forward. You must open your...
Scholarshipghana raza - Nov 16, 2017 / Holt - Nov 17, 2017
|Explain how past experiences have prepared you for participation in the master in DCLead
3 - Thankyou for your feedback. I thought I'd give the letter a personal touch hence i wrote it in...
Scholarshiplamiasalim - Nov 15, 2017 / lamiasalim - Nov 15, 2017
|Motivation letter for scholarship in Europe. Information Technology.
3 - @HOLT Thank you for your valuable feedback. The reason I have laid out the 2 paragraphs like that is...
Scholarshipamitpokhrel - Nov 14, 2017 / amitpokhrel - Nov 15, 2017
|I have solid skills to make my networking abilities grow - Chevening scholarship.
7 - @alanmarruenda The fact that you are making an attempt to give a good presentation is commendable. However, I couldn't...
Scholarshipalanmarruenda - Nov 7, 2017 / inok26 - Nov 10, 2017
|Statement which is required for a PhD scholarship in the USA.
2 - Fahima, this essay is too long. You are trying to pack in way too much information into one essay...
ScholarshipFahima Amini - Nov 8, 2017 / Holt - Nov 8, 2017
|Leadership in depth of knowing its members
2 - Reni, did you use an English translator for this essay? It sounds worse than odd when being read by...
ScholarshipIrenki - Nov 7, 2017 / Holt - Nov 7, 2017
|Pursuing financial literacy and education for Filipinos. Chevening Post Study Plan
3 - @Holt Thanks for all the comments on my essays for the Chevening. The time and effort is greatly...
Scholarshipiceman2017 - Nov 7, 2017 / iceman2017 - Nov 7, 2017
|Chevening_Leadership experience gained from emergent events is often the most precious.
6 - @iceman2017 Throughout my life I have some chance of being a leader. Thanks to the experience which has...
ScholarshipPharm2916 - Nov 7, 2017 / Pharm2916 - Nov 7, 2017
|Picking Loughborough University, University of Reading, and Salford for their reputable achievements
4 - @Ahmed351 Why are there no citation of specific courses? Only general descriptions of the universities are indicated....
Scholarshipisahmk125 - Nov 6, 2017 / iceman2017 - Nov 7, 2017
|The three courses that will led me forward as a professional - Studying in the UK Question
2 - Walter, your first paragraph is unnecessary. That slot is normally reserved for your academic summary in relation to your...
Scholarshipgmeigo9 - Nov 7, 2017 / Holt - Nov 7, 2017
|The importance of knowing people in person - it is vital in creating excellent networks.
2 - SG, the first paragraph should be deleted or revised for a number of reasons. The first, is that saying...
Scholarshipsgassani - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 7, 2017
|Conquer the access to untapped resources by connecting with people. Chevening Network Question
Scholarshipgmeigo9 - Nov 3, 2017 / gmeigo9 - Nov 7, 2017
|I intend to connect with a wider community through Chevening network.
3 - Kwesi , your networking essay does not establish anything except to establish that you know a group of people...
Scholarshipkwesiopoku - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 7, 2017
|[Chevening] My leadership experience came from being an .... Influencers in home countries essay
6 - Dear All, thank you so much for your correction. It means a lot. Wish me luck for the scholarship...
Scholarshiplittlepony - Oct 21, 2017 / littlepony - Nov 7, 2017
|Sudden operation. Experiences and challenges of a female Embryologist. Chevening essay
3 - khadeejah , you only followed the orders of your superior in this essay. That is not indicative of a...
Scholarshipkokotmtm - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 7, 2017
|Don't expect to receive benefits from your contacts but be ready to give these benefits to others
3 - Iriyna, it is an exaggeration to say that you have "contacts all over the world". Rather, you have "a...
ScholarshipIra_Chelysheva - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 7, 2017
|My interest in capital markets, banking and finance, second master's degree - Chevening
Scholarshipiceman2017 - Nov 6, 2017 / iceman2017 - Nov 7, 2017
|My professional career plan is to become an expert in Civil engineering profession
ScholarshipDelexjohn - Nov 5, 2017 / Delexjohn - Nov 6, 2017
|Motivation to commit my skills and knowledge to the service of others in Guatemala
3 - @Holt thank you so much for your feedback! What do you mean about "examples of each skill required"? Should...
Scholarshippao cardona - Nov 6, 2017 / pao cardona - Nov 6, 2017
|Two examples from my professional experience to illustrate my leadership and influencing skills
2 - Elissa, this is an essay that shows the reviewer your efficiency as a rank and file employee who is...
Scholarshipblueprincess - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|Chevening Application: Interactive Leadership, providing solutions to a problem
ScholarshipbmKimmy - Nov 5, 2017 / bmKimmy - Nov 6, 2017
|Chevening - excellent opportunities for networking and staying in touch with people from UK
4 - Yonas, your networking essay is supposed to give the Chevening reviewer an idea as to what kind of business...
Scholarshipyonas - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|I need Postgraduate education to do these great things in my career. Career Plan Essay
2 - Marzia, open with the OUPP reference to encouraging their editors to come back to work after the education is...
ScholarshipRaza93 - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|Acceptance into a UK university is an opportunity of a lifetime for me which I do not intend to miss
3 - Ben, your essay will not benefit your application. You have taken only 2 paragraphs to discuss what should be...
Scholarshipbendaught - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|My mission will be to create and lead dream teams in the public sector of Egypt
3 - Karim, this is not a career plan essay. You wrote a statement of purpose. This essay cannot be submitted...
ScholarshipKareeeim - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|My previous and current leadership experience have given positive impact to progress in my career
Scholarshippungihw - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|Chevening - Career Plan - Empowering People through Business and Technology
Scholarshipkukas90 - Nov 6, 2017 / HM1411 - Nov 6, 2017
|These courses will help me to move the tech-community in Pakistan a step closer towards digitization
5 - You know what? Your essay will be a lot stronger if you don't use our opening and closing paragraphs....
ScholarshipMokhtiarAli - Nov 6, 2017 / Holt - Nov 6, 2017
|To use ICT for development not only for SP projects but for any other DFID priorities in Kenya.
ScholarshipbmKimmy - Nov 6, 2017 / bmKimmy - Nov 6, 2017
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