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|Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023 - Social Welfare major!
3 - As Holt said above, you have no apparent motive. For a person who already has an academic background, there...
ScholarshipFitriws21 - Jan 20, 2023 / crlian - Jan 24, 2023
|Commitment to contribute, Study Plan, and Contribution after graduated
2 - Do not deviate from the actual focus of the essay which is the improvement of Science teaching in the...
Scholarshipdanijaya08 - Jan 20, 2023 / Holt - Jan 21, 2023
|Fluent in English, Chinese and Malay - GKS-G Language Study Plan.
2 - The language study plan only concerns English and Hangul. The mention of Malay in this response is unnecessary. Also,...
Scholarshipjyfang1999 - Jan 18, 2023 / Holt - Jan 19, 2023
|Four cities erasmus scholarship - Letter of Motivaion
2 - There is no connection between the history, goals, and objectives of 4CITIES with the statement you have created. It...
ScholarshipChampionL - Jan 14, 2023 / Holt - Jan 14, 2023
|The misconception of beauty and power; a personal life experience with particular significance
Scholarshipnataliasadhwani - Jan 11, 2023 / nataliasadhwani - Jan 12, 2023
|Essay for a master's degree in labor law (regarding an unfair job recruitment system)
2 - The worst thing that a scholarship applicant can do is use the personal statement, specifically the motivation discussion to...
ScholarshipRamadan - Jan 6, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|Passion for physics and chemistry. Motivational Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum, Chemical Engineering
2 - Why do you not trust us with the complete copy of this essay? Your juvenile writing and clear lack...
Scholarshipvokazar - Jan 1, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
|IMSISS Erasmus Scholarship SOP, International Relation
ScholarshipEternal - Jan 4, 2023 / Eternal - Jan 6, 2023
|Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Biology in University of Debrecen
3 - I believe that the letter is too long and does not really show your motivation is the mentioned program....
ScholarshipHoangTranDuc - Jan 3, 2023 / bsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023
|In a couple paragraphs, provide a summary of activities you have completed from the last three years
2 - The presentation format is not correct. When told to write a few paragraphs, provide 2-3 paragraphs that will cover...
ScholarshipSunilPal - Jan 5, 2023 / Holt - Jan 5, 2023
|Global Issues - ACADEMIC OBJECTIVES AND INDICATE HOW THESE ARE APPROPRIATE TO YOUR LONG-RANGE GOALS.
5 - @bvalkyrianzz @hanablaaaa @Holt Thanks for all the feedback. Is this version better? As a person engaged in global issues,...
Scholarshipanaluglii - Dec 21, 2022 / analuglii - Jan 4, 2023
|Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Computer Science
3 - Hi, I'm also a newbie in writing a motivation letter or even any letters. I guess try to point...
Scholarshiptuanb2610 - Dec 31, 2022 / franklywritten - Jan 2, 2023
|Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023; Cultural Anthropology major
2 - Provide a backgrounder on your father. Where did he work? What was his position? Was he passionate about his...
Scholarshipnidnoi_kuma - Jan 2, 2023 / Holt - Jan 2, 2023
|My SOP for a PhD in Data Science and Scientific Computing at the Institute of Science and Technology
2 - PhD studies of the research kind requires the student to portray a sense of continuing research that may have...
Scholarshipewaoluwa26 - Dec 31, 2022 / Holt - Jan 1, 2023
|The Introvert - SEAYLP Application: Why is participation in this program important to you?
2 - This is a personal reason that definitely helps add a different touch to the application. However, this cannot be...
Scholarshipnotngoc - Dec 31, 2022 / Holt - Dec 31, 2022
|Statement of purpose for pursuing a Bachelor of Computer Science in Hungary.
8 - @ahad checkout other people's SOP to get an insight of how to convert your achievements and education background, relevant...
Scholarshipahad - Dec 10, 2022 / itachi99 - Dec 26, 2022
|Leadership Essay Chevening - Sustainable Fashion
2 - I would not refer to modern slavery in this discussion. The screener is not interested in controversial topics. most...
Scholarshipdalrashid - Dec 19, 2022 / Holt - Dec 19, 2022
|Bachelor's degree in computer science - scholarship essay for UK universities
2 - There are 2 aspects of this essay that need to be addressed. The first is the section about the...
Scholarshipitachi99 - Dec 18, 2022 / Holt - Dec 18, 2022
|NTU Scholarship Essay - Personal Importance - Belief systems
3 - Beware of the negative sentences you put in your presentation. Remember that an essay is a descriptive interview, a...
ScholarshipExceptional - Dec 18, 2022 / bvalkyrianzz - Dec 18, 2022
|Passion for Fashion - GKS U Personal Statement 2023
ScholarshipAlexaaaDay - Dec 17, 2022 / AlexaaaDay - Dec 17, 2022
|Study Plan- COMMONWEALTH SHARED SCHOLARSHIPS - the University of Cambridge
ScholarshipPettypet - Dec 12, 2022 / Pettypet - Dec 16, 2022
|Being A Student, A Daughter, A Human Being, and Everything in Between
2 - Do not make blanket assumptions Not everyone grieves in the same way. There are people who do not...
Scholarshipchelseaanasts - Dec 14, 2022 / Holt - Dec 15, 2022
|GLOBAL UGRAD Essay 1: I know what I can change and what I have to do!
2 - Skip paragraphs 1 an 2. Those are irrelevant to the prompt focus so the screener will not appreciate the...
ScholarshipLa_la - Dec 12, 2022 / Holt - Dec 12, 2022
|More than just school or studying - Global UGRAD Program
2 - The screener will not pay attention to the information in this essay as it does not pertain to community...
ScholarshipOmar_E - Dec 11, 2022 / Holt - Dec 12, 2022
|Question : Discuss the differences between the condition in your country now and in the past
2 - Indonesia only became independent 77 years ago. The internet is approximately 39 years old. Therefore, the internet discussion is...
Scholarshipshafirazsya - Dec 11, 2022 / Holt - Dec 11, 2022
|Different experiences - Why am I a great candidate for Global Ugrad ?
3 - thank you so much for your feedback, there is a section in the application that asks for the varied...
ScholarshipMeriem slimani - Dec 2, 2022 / Meriem slimani - Dec 2, 2022
|Erasmus Personal Statement: GLOCAL Global Political Economy (Track F)
2 - I do not think that consequence is the correct term to use in this case. Consequence refers to a...
Scholarshipmaroksklaut - Nov 30, 2022 / Holt - Dec 1, 2022
|Africa and Poverty - personal statement
3 - ... poor family and grew up in a small poor village.... I failed to see the coherence between the...
Scholarshipsimion - Nov 20, 2022 / Bun cha - Nov 25, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus - Excellence in Analytical Chemistry (EACH) Motivation Letter
2 - Try to develop the research team participation in the essay since that is an essential part of the discussion....
Scholarshipkuronoma_sawako - Nov 13, 2022 / Holt - Nov 13, 2022
|Grandmother and Dominican Republic - my application for Global Ugrad
2 - The aim of the writer is incorrect. The target of the essay should not be what the applicant hopes...
ScholarshipNanya_26 - Nov 12, 2022 / Holt - Nov 13, 2022
|Energetic, hardworking and ambitious - great participant in the Global UGRAD Program
2 - The essay is too self centered. Being a Global UGrad participant, the applicant should show a sense of community...
ScholarshipKjavier - Nov 7, 2022 / Holt - Nov 7, 2022
|e-health challenge * Leadership and influence
2 - This is a good start to responding to the question. As we both know, the Chevening scholarship is looking...
ScholarshipMamka - Oct 30, 2022 / Holt - Oct 31, 2022
|Things that need to be improved - Chevening - leadership essay
2 - The essay is very technical in presentation. It does not carry an ounce of humanity in the leadership and...
Scholarshipidoremi - Oct 29, 2022 / Holt - Oct 29, 2022
|Challenges found in Indonesia fashion startups: A Chevening Essay on Studying in the UK
3 - Hi, You have to state clearly why Chevening should select you for the scholarship award not the other....
ScholarshipHlong54 - Oct 21, 2022 / segrid15 - Oct 28, 2022
|Master of Fine Art RESEARCH PLAN for MEXT Scholarship Japan 2022
3 - @holt Thank you so much for your advice! It makes sense how i should open it with Indonesia first...
Scholarshiphojichalovers - Oct 26, 2022 / hojichalovers - Oct 27, 2022
|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - Global Market Local Creativities personal statement - Study Track B
Scholarshipcosmos1171 - Oct 19, 2022 / cosmos1171 - Oct 20, 2022
|My Performance - Leadership and Influence essay for Chevening
2 - This presentation is not very effective as it does not provide specific instances of leadership nor influencing situations in...
ScholarshipTheYodash - Oct 18, 2022 / Holt - Oct 19, 2022
|Commonwealth Scholarship development impact p.1; Climate change poses a huge problem for the planet
2 - Since the writer has not provided the complete essay in response to the given prompts, I find it difficult...
Scholarshipnajam - Oct 15, 2022 / Holt - Oct 16, 2022
|The cosmetics market value - Chevening scholarship
3 - Thank you for the reply. Of course that i have professional experience but not in that field. What i...
ScholarshipDelya - Oct 14, 2022 / Delya - Oct 15, 2022
|Study abroad - Language Plan for Global Korean Scholarship
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the directions I did feel like I missed some details and needed advice....
Scholarshipdumbandpabo - Oct 7, 2022 / dumbandpabo - Oct 7, 2022
|I want to bring awareness of wildlife conservation. Commonwealth Scholarships - Personal Statement
4 - Well explained essay. Try to also include the reasons for applying to your university of choice...
Scholarshipshraddha1997 - Oct 4, 2022 / Pettypet - Oct 6, 2022
|Wildlife conservation. Commonwealth Scholarship - Personal Statement
2 - Since the applicant already has a previous MS certification, his paper should be sounding more professional and more career...
ScholarshipSgogoi - Oct 6, 2022 / Holt - Oct 6, 2022
|Digitalization in Indonesia - Career Plan for Chevening Essay
2 - What does the visa policy for Chevening students have to do with the career plans? That is an irrelevant...
Scholarshipaulia - Oct 5, 2022 / Holt - Oct 6, 2022
|Chevening Study Essay - Career Change to Arts and Illustration Field
2 - Unfortunately, the Chevening Scholarships are not meant for students who are looking to create a career change for themselves....
ScholarshipTanzeelaWasti - Oct 4, 2022 / Holt - Oct 5, 2022
|Master's degree in Korean language and literature - Goal of study and study plan
2 - The goal of study and study plan for a graduate student must be approached based upon the career plan...
ScholarshipSubhratri - Oct 3, 2022 / Holt - Oct 3, 2022
|"For the longest time I dreamed"- GKS- U Personal Statement
5 - Merged: "For the longest time I dreamed" - GKS- U 2023 Personal Statement Update Motivations with which...
ScholarshipMowa - Sep 22, 2022 / Mowa - Oct 2, 2022
|Ambitious things in life - ugrad SOP
4 - I think you should try to give more personal motivations into your SOP in order to be an outstanding...
ScholarshipKenChicken - Sep 20, 2022 / leo0528 - Sep 30, 2022
|Scholarship essay for M.A Learning Science
2 - The discussions provided are relevant but does not highlight anything special about the applicant. Since this is a scholarship...
ScholarshipChukwuagozie - Sep 29, 2022 / Holt - Sep 30, 2022
|Questbridge Personal Essay - Context in which you grew up - "Life in America"
Scholarshipsaady1519 - Sep 23, 2022 / saady1519 - Sep 27, 2022
|Using what you know about Edtech in Africa and Arizona State Uni, why are you interested in this?
ScholarshipChukwuagozie - Sep 26, 2022 / Chukwuagozie - Sep 27, 2022
|GKS - Study plan Language Before and after (Undergraduate); practice journal and Korean classes
2 - The prior to arrival activities for language development of both English and Hangul are good enough. It shows that...
Scholarshipmiesse - Sep 26, 2022 / Holt - Sep 27, 2022
|Questbridge Short Answer Essay - Proudest Achievement/Moment; I led prayer at the Islamic center
2 - The essay feels under developed. While the first and second paragraphs are striking and somewhat memorable, there is a...
Scholarshipzamzap - Sep 26, 2022 / Holt - Sep 27, 2022
|Names can determine one's destiny; the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspiration
2 - The context in which you grew up and formed your aspirations should not be focused on the name pronounciation...
Scholarshiphli6855 - Sep 25, 2022 / Holt - Sep 26, 2022
|College prompt for the scholarhip essay on my proudest achievements happened so far
2 - Left what? Home? School? An organization? This sentence should set up the whole statement instead, it confuses the...
Scholarshipaytaiwo - Sep 25, 2022 / Holt - Sep 26, 2022
|Public Health methods - CAREER PLAN - COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP
ScholarshipPettypet - Sep 23, 2022 / Pettypet - Sep 25, 2022
|Mastery Choir - QuestBridge National College Match Short Answer
2 - This essay is good in terms of narration. It delivers a strong connection between the accomplishment and the overall...
Scholarshiplt3737 - Sep 23, 2022 / Holt - Sep 24, 2022
|COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP: Development Impact statement
ScholarshipPettypet - Sep 22, 2022 / Holt - Sep 23, 2022
|I am interested in Kpop. 2023 GKS-U language study plan to improve foreign languages.
6 - I agree with @Mowa. The mention of Kpop might be a phrase/ statement used by so many applicants. I...
ScholarshipHannakei - Aug 31, 2022 / Pettypet - Sep 22, 2022
|KGSP - personal statement - physics; I see a versatile and significant vocation
Scholarshipkiale - Sep 14, 2022 / kiale - Sep 22, 2022
|Digitally talented person. Chevening Scholarships: Leadership & Influence
2 - This is neither the kind of leadership nor influencing essay that will make it past the screening round. It...
Scholarshipinekeyuliam - Sep 21, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
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