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|AAS Supporting Statement - Master of Urban Design and Master of Urban Planning
2 - Start the essay by introducing your academic background and relevant work experience. Do not make that information selective based...
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|AAS Application Supporting statement - justify postgraduate study in transportation choice
2 - Use the opening paraghap to explain your work related reasons for choosing these courses. That means, you will need...
Scholarshipputri famelia - May 6, 2021 / Holt - May 6, 2021
|The reason why I choose the Public Health course
Scholarshipkurulu - Apr 15, 2021 / kurulu - May 6, 2021
|Why I take master of agribusiness? AAS Aplication
4 - Dear Holt, thank you a million for your invaluable support I highly appreciate your comments and will certainly use...
ScholarshipFarmer - May 3, 2021 / Farmer - May 5, 2021
|THE REPLY FOR AAS ESSAY - MY THREE PRACTICAL EXAMPLES AND POTENTIAL CONSTRAINTS
Scholarshipmiumiu18 - Apr 26, 2021 / Ratudestiani - May 4, 2021
|Why Master of Governance and Public Policy at the University of Queensland? AAS Application 2021
ScholarshipApaajaboleh1 - May 2, 2021 / Apaajaboleh1 - May 3, 2021
|Practical examples on how I will use my knowledge - AAS (Master of International Trade)
2 - The constraint that you present must coincide with the solutions and help that the courses you will be studying...
ScholarshipOnbr - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
|Why Do I Want To Become An Exchange Student In The US.? - scholarship
3 - Hi @juliemikulova In my humble opinion, this essay is too emotional. Not to mention that this essay is...
Scholarshipjuliemikulova - Apr 28, 2021 / Ratudestiani - Apr 29, 2021
|Essay for AAS Scholarship: Why I choose supply chain management course
Scholarshipaditya23 - Apr 28, 2021 / Ratudestiani - Apr 29, 2021
|Diet / Nutrition - practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills you will gain
Scholarshiplukewaqanivere - Apr 26, 2021 / lukewaqanivere - Apr 27, 2021
|I've always been interested in urban planning, that's why I'm pursuing master degree in this field
2 - There are 2 things that your essay fails to address in relation to your chosen course. The first is...
Scholarshipdaskapitallll - Apr 25, 2021 / Holt - Apr 25, 2021
|Civil Engineering focused on Geotechnics - AAS Supporting statement
2 - The national program and your desired contribution are not well connected in the second paragraph. It would be better...
Scholarshipncincinci - Apr 23, 2021 / Holt - Apr 24, 2021
|AAS - Political Science - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - Your essay is way over the standard character maximum of 2000 characters. You need to edit your content into...
Scholarshipcalicookies - Apr 22, 2021 / Holt - Apr 23, 2021
|Political science - [AAS] Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
5 - Hi @calicookies AAS essays have 2000 character limit, which is around 300 words. I would recommend to shorten the...
Scholarshipcalicookies - Apr 21, 2021 / brsn - Apr 23, 2021
|PhD in Engineering (AAS Supporting Statement)
3 - Rather than speaking much of your undergraduate study, you need to focus more on your master degree and research....
Scholarshipmasamune_date - Apr 20, 2021 / calicookies - Apr 22, 2021
|Entrepreneurship and Innovation - [AAS] Why did you choose your proposed course?
3 - I suggest you to not waste length of paragraph on explaining the entrepreneurship situation in Indonesia. You can minimize...
Scholarshipandrianiwd - Apr 20, 2021 / calicookies - Apr 22, 2021
|World Food Programme - FULBRIGHT STUDY OBJECTIVES
3 - Dear Holt, thank you very much for your invaluable support, you are the Best! I highly appreciate your comments...
ScholarshipFelex - Apr 20, 2021 / Felex - Apr 21, 2021
|Why am I applying for Master of Data Science? Proposed course and institution (AAS Essay)
2 - Good job! Well developed, insightful, and forward projecting. It shows that you have given a great thought to your...
Scholarshipsatriaa - Apr 20, 2021 / Holt - Apr 21, 2021
|Architecture and Urban Planning - contribution to my career
NEW - Australia Awards scholarship essay Hi, I am applying for Australia Awards. I want someone to give comments and...
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|Master's degree in transportation - proposed course and institution
3 - I suggest you to be more analytical to explain the background of your study in the first paragraph. The...
ScholarshipMadam - Apr 19, 2021 / miftahul - Apr 20, 2021
|Analyzing complex problems - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform
NEW - Over the past four years, I have implemented my ability on analyzing complex problems, theoretical and conceptual understanding and...
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|Essay on Contribution of Proposed Study to Career Plan - AAS application for MBA Program
2 - You only gave a description of your career plan. There is no reference to how the learning at the...
ScholarshipOscarPangestu - Apr 12, 2021 / Holt - Apr 20, 2021
|How will Master of International Trade course contribute to my career - Australia Awards Scholarship
3 - @Holt thanks for your valuable comment. As you might know, Australia Awards Scholarship consists of the following 4...
Scholarshipbrsn - Apr 18, 2021 / brsn - Apr 19, 2021
|ESP practitioner - TESOL and the prospect for my future career (AAS)
2 - This is not a definitive career goal. There is uncertainty in your presentation thus, making the contribution of...
ScholarshipDA786 - Apr 10, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|Motivation Letter for Counter Terrorism and Criminology Course (Australia Awards Scholarship)
2 - You need to relate your current position and position within the agency with your interests in the aforementioned courses....
Scholarshiplisandroid - Apr 18, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australia universiti
2 - The lack of image makes the review of this essay difficult. Due to changes in company policy, I am...
Scholarshiprei1412 - Apr 6, 2021 / Holt - Apr 17, 2021
|Master of Social Work and Psychology - AAS Supporting Statement
2 - Include information prior to Covid, during Covid, and a projection regarding GBV once the pandemic is lifted or...
ScholarshipRis - Apr 16, 2021 / Holt - Apr 16, 2021
|Energy field - my proposed course and institution in Australia
2 - The reason for you proposed course must be similar to a motivation or career goal. The presentation does not...
Scholarshipmariaindira - Apr 15, 2021 / Holt - Apr 16, 2021
|Information Systems - supporting statement for AAS about choose proposed course and institution
Scholarshipjuna91 - Apr 8, 2021 / Ris - Apr 16, 2021
|Supporting Statement for AAS: Why did you choose proposed course - Master of Education
3 - Great write up. Only comment I would give you is to remove the last paragraph. This will give you...
ScholarshipMachica - Apr 14, 2021 / brsn - Apr 15, 2021
|Different cultures and lifestyles - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR USEFP SEMESTER EXCHANGE PROGRAM
2 - The overall essay is extremely vague in reference. You need to be clearer in your presentation in terms of...
Scholarshipfaseeh - Apr 15, 2021 / Holt - Apr 15, 2021
|Master of Economic Policy (MECPO) - MECPO AAS
2 - You need to have a focus beyond Covid - 19 to help make your desire to compelete this program...
Scholarshipkra013 - Apr 14, 2021 / Holt - Apr 15, 2021
|Master in Local Government - How will the proposed course will contribute to your career?
4 - Hello @assad12. If you are not an Australian citizen, I would advise you to be cautious since there are...
Scholarshipassad12 - Mar 26, 2021 / Alif ID - Apr 14, 2021
|Why I choose to study the bachelor of commerce majoring in economics? Australian Awards Scholarship
5 - Hi Nicky. My advice would be that you need to elaborate more about your proposed institution. You need to...
ScholarshipNickyross - Apr 12, 2021 / Alif ID - Apr 14, 2021
|AAS scholarship question: why did I choose my course - Master of Engineering (Civil and Structure)
7 - @MM1695 Hi MM. For this essay question, I don't think you have to mention the rankings. Try to research...
ScholarshipMM1695 - Apr 5, 2021 / uray - Apr 14, 2021
|Career in the academe - PERSONAL STATEMENT - GKSP MASTER'S DEGREE
2 - There are several aspects of the prompt that you fail to address. The most obvious missing theme is the...
Scholarshipriagntry - Apr 8, 2021 / Holt - Apr 14, 2021
|International law - AAS Supporting Statement for LL.M. Study in Australia
2 - You need to focus less on your background and interest development because you are applying for a masters degree...
ScholarshipAlif ID - Apr 13, 2021 / Holt - Apr 14, 2021
|Essay for Australia award scholarship (master of finance) Why proposed course prompt
4 - @OscarPangestu Hi oscar! Thanks a lot for your advice. it's really really help! I already revised my essay!...
Scholarshipuray - Apr 7, 2021 / uray - Apr 13, 2021
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR USEFP SEMESTER EXCHANGE PROGRAM
2 - As a draft, this is an essay that has potential and nothing more due to under development of the...
Scholarshiplevi285 - Apr 11, 2021 / Holt - Apr 12, 2021
|Social sciences - AAS Supporting Statement for LLM Study in Australia
6 - Hi folks. Thanks for the advice and feedback given in this thread. I hope to ask you again for...
ScholarshipAlif ID - Apr 7, 2021 / Alif ID - Apr 12, 2021
|"Things are getting complicated..." - Personal Statement - Erasmus Mundus IMSISS Scholarship
2 - EM-IMSISS is a highly competitive scholarship to apply for. You have to understand that the applicants for this program...
ScholarshipHolse - Apr 9, 2021 / Holt - Apr 10, 2021
|Essay about solving a challenge - AAS application for course in MBA
ScholarshipOscarPangestu - Apr 8, 2021 / OscarPangestu - Apr 9, 2021
|AAS Scholarship Master of Commerce; Data Analyst for business, Digital Transformation Specialization
5 - I would advise you to add at least one other university - which provides a similar programme - for...
Scholarshipalfazrinb - Mar 27, 2021 / Alif ID - Apr 9, 2021
|Petroleum Geoscience - Supporting statement for AAS about choose proposed course and institution
2 - Try to avoid ranking the schools as your first and second choices. You must appear to be interested and...
Scholarshipsuryawibawa - Apr 8, 2021 / Holt - Apr 9, 2021
|"Upon completing my postgraduate degree in the UK......" - Commonwealth Scholarship Impact Statement
2 - You are speaking of research you will have done as a student. The prompt actually requires a description of...
Scholarshipkhanfaiza - Apr 7, 2021 / Holt - Apr 8, 2021
|AAS - Choosing MBA will be the most proper course for me to learn how to be a great leader
Scholarshipsuperbia - Apr 7, 2021 / superbia - Apr 8, 2021
|Digital and technology transformation - AAS application for MBA
ScholarshipOscarPangestu - Apr 6, 2021 / OscarPangestu - Apr 7, 2021
|English teacher - TESOL and the prospect for my future career (AAS)
ScholarshipDA786 - Mar 29, 2021 / DA786 - Apr 7, 2021
|Learning Success - Personal Statement - GKS Graduate University Track
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the review. You are right about what is missing and I will definitely...
Scholarshipsmics - Apr 5, 2021 / smics - Apr 6, 2021
|HOW YOUR PROPOSED STUDY RELATES TO: A) DEVELOPMENT ISSUES AT THE GLOBAL.. -Commonwealth Scholarship
NEW - Hi. I am writing my development statement for Commonwealth Scholarship. Please leave useful comments for revisions in the essay...
Scholarshipfassehmemun10 - Apr 6, 2021 / — -
|Question about AAS Support Statement for Master of Business Administration
4 - You need to revise your essay in way that is aligned with former paragraphs in a logical fashion....
ScholarshipOscarPangestu - Apr 3, 2021 / fassehmemun10 - Apr 6, 2021
|AAS Scholarship for public policy
3 - Hi Dlsm, I think you need to be more careful also about active-passive form in your sentences. Your opening...
ScholarshipDIsm - Apr 1, 2021 / OscarPangestu - Apr 6, 2021
|Supporting Statement AAS Scholarship for Master Degree in Public Health
4 - Hi Hanna, I think the sentences in your essay are too long and complex. You might want to break...
Scholarshiphanaadilaa - Apr 1, 2021 / OscarPangestu - Apr 6, 2021
|Treasury operations / Accounting - How will the proposed study contribute to your career*?
3 - The first problem this presentation has is formatting. Divide the short, medium, and long term plans into paragraphs. The...
Scholarshipgonzforever - Apr 2, 2021 / Holt - Apr 3, 2021
|"Raising in a middle-class family was indeed demanding" Commonwealth Scholarship Personal Statement
2 - The essay is on point until you get to the last paragraph. Since it appears that you are going...
Scholarshipfassehmemun10 - Apr 1, 2021 / Holt - Apr 2, 2021
|Personal Statement for MSc Data Science scholarship in Sweden
3 - Thank you for your advice. Do you mean that I need to combine Machine Learning, Business, and Big Data...
Scholarshipkenna007 - Apr 1, 2021 / kenna007 - Apr 1, 2021
|Motivation Statement for AAS - applying for a master degree in Public Health
8 - @albertedwn keep fighting! you will pass the scholarship at the right time. so, actually what I mean is...
Scholarshipalbertedwn - Mar 24, 2021 / MsC - Mar 30, 2021
|Development Impact Plan - Theme: Science and Technology - Commonwealth
2 - Your response is widespread but common. It does not present a proper representation of each development issue as it...
Scholarshipzaineb0131 - Mar 29, 2021 / Holt - Mar 30, 2021
|The proposed study will have a vast impact on my professional career - Australian awards scholarship
ScholarshipAbl steven - Mar 28, 2021 / MsC - Mar 29, 2021
|Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? AAS; Crawford School of Public Policy
4 - use the more specific reason for university choice rather than the reputation reason. what course you interested and why...
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