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Love for STEM and UX - Self-introduction essay for POSCO scholarship

NEW - Hi all, I want to submit a self-introduction essay for POSCO scholarship. Here's my draft. can anyone help me...

Scholarshipbonon_noona - May 1, 2023 / — -
The field of epidemiology - Why did you choose your proposed course?

2 - While this is a concise presentation of your academic goal and reasons for choosing the university, the AAS actually...

ScholarshipJay_001 - May 1, 2023 / Holt - May 1, 2023
Practical Examples of How You Intend to Use the Knowledge, Skills and Connections - AAS Scholarship

2 - I am not sure that you should be assuming anything as an example in your discussion. Are you absolutely...

Scholarshipbrendadevita - Apr 30, 2023 / Holt - May 1, 2023
The multicultural society of Australia - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution

2 - The response to this essay should only be around 200 words. It should never be at the 600 word...

ScholarshipAA356918 - Apr 26, 2023 / Holt - Apr 27, 2023
AAS Proposed Course & Institution: From Marketing Communications to Master of Environmental

2 - It is impossible for me to give you any helpful advice with this essay because you refused to mention...

Scholarshipgongjunim - Apr 11, 2023 / Holt - Apr 22, 2023
Trade. Fixing the process. Solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform?* - AAS Essay

2 - Keep your narration to the maximum of 200 words. The AAS is a word limited response essay application type....

Scholarshipnurikasetya - Apr 18, 2023 / Holt - Apr 19, 2023
Personal Statement about Aspirations & Desired Impact Proved by Extracurriculars for Scholarship

NEW - Outline your future aspirations and how a degree at (Uni) will help you achieve these goals. What positive impact...

Scholarshipstrawboy - Apr 17, 2023 / — -
Public Health - AAS Essay: I chose Public Health as my proposed study. Why?

2 - Do not separate your interest in Public Health from your chosen courses and universities. That is because your academic...

Scholarshipsintahtp - Apr 5, 2023 / Holt - Apr 6, 2023
Supporting Statement for AAS-Part 1: Proposed Course and Institution - Comm. and Media Studies

3 - @Holt Thank you so much, that is really helpful....

Scholarshipmaulanaws - Apr 1, 2023 / maulanaws - Apr 4, 2023
Hand on experience - HISPANIC SCHOLARSHIP FUND ESSAY

2 - The first 2 paragraphs do not necessarily reflect responses that would relate to the given prompt instructions. These are...

Scholarshipvivi_0628 - Mar 29, 2023 / Holt - Apr 3, 2023
Personal Statement - Master at Brunel University (motivation letter)

2 - This is a very messy thought presentation lacking in actual application towards the prompt requirements. There is, quite often,...

Scholarshiplany83 - Mar 28, 2023 / Holt - Apr 2, 2023
Why proposed course and institution? I put my attention to the University of Sydney (USYD) and UNSW

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the respon, can i ask for your opinion about this one? it will...

Scholarshipcarlsjunior - Mar 27, 2023 / carlsjunior - Apr 2, 2023
Undergraduate Global Excellence Scholarship - What makes you excellent?

2 - You fall short in terms of qualifying factors for this scholarship. Your academic achievements do not warrant any consideration...

Scholarshipayemar - Mar 21, 2023 / Holt - Mar 22, 2023
Shaping Public Discourse Through Journalism - QUESTBRIDGE CPS

2 - You are over the maximum count by 3 words so you will need to revise one sentence presentation to...

Scholarshipjoshdaposh - Mar 19, 2023 / Holt - Mar 19, 2023
Artisanal and small-scale mining (ASM) - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

4 - Merged: Sustainable mining - How will the proposed study contribute to your career? sustainable mining interest ...

Scholarshipnawaf - Mar 6, 2023 / nawaf - Mar 9, 2023
Group work and human resources

2 - Note that the essay prompt refers to you, in the singular in reference to the writing topic. The provided...

ScholarshipKazu01 - Mar 7, 2023 / Holt - Mar 8, 2023
Swimming - Questbridge College Prep Scholars Program

4 - @gulfbreeze123 Hi! I'm currently doing the same application and I think for this question focus especially on the numbers,...

Scholarshipgulfbreeze123 - Mar 5, 2023 / celbel - Mar 7, 2023
The multiverse theory - QUEST BRIDGE ESSAY - Is this too generic?

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I'm not exactly sure what I should take out. Due to the fact that...

Scholarshipizyuki - Mar 2, 2023 / izyuki - Mar 3, 2023
Ecommerce, fiance, management - GKS - G Personal Statement (MBA Student)

3 - @Holt Hello, Please don't get me wrong. Actually I failed last time that's why I'm trying to write good...

ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 22, 2023
Social Science - KOREAN GLOBAL SCHOLARSHIP - GOAL OF STUDY

4 - @tsyiaa99 Hey, I face the same problem while writing "study goal." I'd suggest you read some good articles...

Scholarshiptsyiaa99 - Feb 6, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
2023 GKS-G STUDY PLAN - VETERINARY MEDICINE MASTER'S DEGREE

3 - @mvorti Write in as much detail as possible and explain how you learned Hangul, step by step. As you...

Scholarshipmvorti - Feb 17, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 21, 2023
Growing up in the Solomon Islands - why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?

2 - This is not an appropriate response to the writing query. These are considered vague, nonganswers to the question. You...

ScholarshipPED65 - Feb 21, 2023 / Holt - Feb 21, 2023
GKS-G Doctoral in Media and Communication - Goal of Study and Study Plan (Embassy Track)

4 - I'm new to the site, so I'm not sure if this is right but i remember reading on another...

Scholarshiphzal - Feb 19, 2023 / hzal - Feb 21, 2023
Improving Further - GKS - G Korean Language Study Plan

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the help. I'll improve myself....

ScholarshipOkjanu10 - Feb 14, 2023 / Okjanu10 - Feb 15, 2023
Commercial Law: How will my knowledge and skills to contribute to my country's development?

5 - thank you for the feedback!...

Scholarshipalinariana - Feb 9, 2023 / alinariana - Feb 14, 2023
Student Council - a situation that demonstrates your ability to develop new relationships

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. At first, I thought the point of the question was how can I...

Scholarshipusksblm315 - Feb 13, 2023 / usksblm315 - Feb 14, 2023
Management position - scholarship to contribute to the organisation's human development needs

2 - This is an incorrect response to the question. A proper response will show how the applicant has assessed his/her...

ScholarshipTutu000 - Feb 11, 2023 / Holt - Feb 11, 2023
Master in IT project Management - knowledge and skills important to Botswana's development

3 - Good content, you've mentioned the problems in your own country and most likely how they can be addressed. Try...

ScholarshippalePale - Feb 4, 2023 / Tutu000 - Feb 11, 2023
An underprivileged community - Australian award Scholarship preferred choices

3 - @holt Thanks for the review, I need a wake-up call and you just gave me. Appreciated....

ScholarshipAhmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023 / Ahmadjb225 - Feb 10, 2023
Social Science / Linguistic with Hons - KOREAN GLOBAL SCHOLARSHIP - STUDY PLAN

2 - The essay is not concerned about your undergraduate certification. Nor is it concerned with the number and kinds of...

Scholarshiptsyiaa99 - Feb 3, 2023 / Holt - Feb 4, 2023
Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023 - Social Welfare major!

3 - As Holt said above, you have no apparent motive. For a person who already has an academic background, there...

ScholarshipFitriws21 - Jan 20, 2023 / crlian - Jan 24, 2023
Commitment to contribute, Study Plan, and Contribution after graduated

2 - Do not deviate from the actual focus of the essay which is the improvement of Science teaching in the...

Scholarshipdanijaya08 - Jan 20, 2023 / Holt - Jan 21, 2023
Fluent in English, Chinese and Malay - GKS-G Language Study Plan.

2 - The language study plan only concerns English and Hangul. The mention of Malay in this response is unnecessary. Also,...

Scholarshipjyfang1999 - Jan 18, 2023 / Holt - Jan 19, 2023
Four cities erasmus scholarship - Letter of Motivaion

2 - There is no connection between the history, goals, and objectives of 4CITIES with the statement you have created. It...

ScholarshipChampionL - Jan 14, 2023 / Holt - Jan 14, 2023
The misconception of beauty and power; a personal life experience with particular significance

3 - @Holt Thank you so much! Here is my revised essay. Do you think I've ended it clearly? For...

Scholarshipnataliasadhwani - Jan 11, 2023 / nataliasadhwani - Jan 12, 2023
Essay for a master's degree in labor law (regarding an unfair job recruitment system)

2 - The worst thing that a scholarship applicant can do is use the personal statement, specifically the motivation discussion to...

ScholarshipRamadan - Jan 6, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
Passion for physics and chemistry. Motivational Letter - Stipendium Hungaricum, Chemical Engineering

2 - Why do you not trust us with the complete copy of this essay? Your juvenile writing and clear lack...

Scholarshipvokazar - Jan 1, 2023 / Holt - Jan 8, 2023
IMSISS Erasmus Scholarship SOP, International Relation

3 - @Holt Thank you for the feedback. I'm making corrections right away....

ScholarshipEternal - Jan 4, 2023 / Eternal - Jan 6, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Biology in University of Debrecen

3 - I believe that the letter is too long and does not really show your motivation is the mentioned program....

ScholarshipHoangTranDuc - Jan 3, 2023 / bsuzunoglu - Jan 5, 2023
In a couple paragraphs, provide a summary of activities you have completed from the last three years

2 - The presentation format is not correct. When told to write a few paragraphs, provide 2-3 paragraphs that will cover...

ScholarshipSunilPal - Jan 5, 2023 / Holt - Jan 5, 2023
Global Issues - ACADEMIC OBJECTIVES AND INDICATE HOW THESE ARE APPROPRIATE TO YOUR LONG-RANGE GOALS.

5 - @bvalkyrianzz @hanablaaaa @Holt Thanks for all the feedback. Is this version better? As a person engaged in global issues,...

Scholarshipanaluglii - Dec 21, 2022 / analuglii - Jan 4, 2023
Stipendium Hungaricum motivational letter - MSC Computer Science

3 - Hi, I'm also a newbie in writing a motivation letter or even any letters. I guess try to point...

Scholarshiptuanb2610 - Dec 31, 2022 / franklywritten - Jan 2, 2023
Personal Statement for GKS-G 2023; Cultural Anthropology major

2 - Provide a backgrounder on your father. Where did he work? What was his position? Was he passionate about his...

Scholarshipnidnoi_kuma - Jan 2, 2023 / Holt - Jan 2, 2023
My SOP for a PhD in Data Science and Scientific Computing at the Institute of Science and Technology

2 - PhD studies of the research kind requires the student to portray a sense of continuing research that may have...

Scholarshipewaoluwa26 - Dec 31, 2022 / Holt - Jan 1, 2023
The Introvert - SEAYLP Application: Why is participation in this program important to you?

2 - This is a personal reason that definitely helps add a different touch to the application. However, this cannot be...

Scholarshipnotngoc - Dec 31, 2022 / Holt - Dec 31, 2022
Statement of purpose for pursuing a Bachelor of Computer Science in Hungary.

8 - @ahad checkout other people's SOP to get an insight of how to convert your achievements and education background, relevant...

Scholarshipahad - Dec 10, 2022 / itachi99 - Dec 26, 2022
Leadership Essay Chevening - Sustainable Fashion

2 - I would not refer to modern slavery in this discussion. The screener is not interested in controversial topics. most...

Scholarshipdalrashid - Dec 19, 2022 / Holt - Dec 19, 2022
Bachelor's degree in computer science - scholarship essay for UK universities

2 - There are 2 aspects of this essay that need to be addressed. The first is the section about the...

Scholarshipitachi99 - Dec 18, 2022 / Holt - Dec 18, 2022
NTU Scholarship Essay - Personal Importance - Belief systems

3 - Beware of the negative sentences you put in your presentation. Remember that an essay is a descriptive interview, a...

ScholarshipExceptional - Dec 18, 2022 / bvalkyrianzz - Dec 18, 2022
Passion for Fashion - GKS U Personal Statement 2023

3 - Thanks for your advice.I will try to write another personal statement ....

ScholarshipAlexaaaDay - Dec 17, 2022 / AlexaaaDay - Dec 17, 2022
Study Plan- COMMONWEALTH SHARED SCHOLARSHIPS - the University of Cambridge

3 - @Holt Thank you for the insights. Corrections were made accordingly....

ScholarshipPettypet - Dec 12, 2022 / Pettypet - Dec 16, 2022
Being A Student, A Daughter, A Human Being, and Everything in Between

2 - Do not make blanket assumptions Not everyone grieves in the same way. There are people who do not...

Scholarshipchelseaanasts - Dec 14, 2022 / Holt - Dec 15, 2022
GLOBAL UGRAD Essay 1: I know what I can change and what I have to do!

2 - Skip paragraphs 1 an 2. Those are irrelevant to the prompt focus so the screener will not appreciate the...

ScholarshipLa_la - Dec 12, 2022 / Holt - Dec 12, 2022
More than just school or studying - Global UGRAD Program

2 - The screener will not pay attention to the information in this essay as it does not pertain to community...

ScholarshipOmar_E - Dec 11, 2022 / Holt - Dec 12, 2022
Question : Discuss the differences between the condition in your country now and in the past

2 - Indonesia only became independent 77 years ago. The internet is approximately 39 years old. Therefore, the internet discussion is...

Scholarshipshafirazsya - Dec 11, 2022 / Holt - Dec 11, 2022
Different experiences - Why am I a great candidate for Global Ugrad ?

3 - thank you so much for your feedback, there is a section in the application that asks for the varied...

ScholarshipMeriem slimani - Dec 2, 2022 / Meriem slimani - Dec 2, 2022
Erasmus Personal Statement: GLOCAL Global Political Economy (Track F)

2 - I do not think that consequence is the correct term to use in this case. Consequence refers to a...

Scholarshipmaroksklaut - Nov 30, 2022 / Holt - Dec 1, 2022
Africa and Poverty - personal statement

3 - ... poor family and grew up in a small poor village.... I failed to see the coherence between the...

Scholarshipsimion - Nov 20, 2022 / Bun cha - Nov 25, 2022
Erasmus Mundus - Excellence in Analytical Chemistry (EACH) Motivation Letter

2 - Try to develop the research team participation in the essay since that is an essential part of the discussion....

Scholarshipkuronoma_sawako - Nov 13, 2022 / Holt - Nov 13, 2022
Grandmother and Dominican Republic - my application for Global Ugrad

2 - The aim of the writer is incorrect. The target of the essay should not be what the applicant hopes...

ScholarshipNanya_26 - Nov 12, 2022 / Holt - Nov 13, 2022

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