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|High school science fair - Questbridge Proudest Achievement Short Answer
NEW - Good evening! This is my first time creating a thread on EssayForum. I understand that it's a little late...
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|DNA Editing and Bioimaging in the GKS U 2021 Chemical Structure to IMPrOVE MY EsSaY
NEW - personal statement essay it is my personal statement hope that you comment it , thanks. (TWO PAGES max...
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|"How I quit avoiding my family's issue" - Questbridge Biographical essay
NEW - Prompt: We are interested in learning more about you and the context in which you have grown up, formed...
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|I am going to beat fantasy with science in GKS 2020 Chemistry
ScholarshipFidleisAldo - Sep 26, 2020 / FidleisAldo - 1 day ago
|Future of dreams - Personal statment for GKS 2020
2 - This would have been a truly useful personal statement or motivational essay had you been applying for a different...
Scholarshipibrahimtamer - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|"My family's influence on my outlook on life" - Questbridge Prompt
3 - Do not focus on the individual life stories in your presentation. The reviewer doesn't care for that. However, he...
Scholarshiphappyboy123 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|Scholarship essay to highlight socio-economic development of Nigeria, leadership initiatives and com
2 - Rather than simply saying this is URGENT, you should have taken steps to mark this as URGENT in our...
ScholarshipDictbennie - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|What inspires me / education - QuestBridge Scholarship Essay
2 - I think you should not focus so much on the backstory. Setting up the scene at home after you...
Scholarshiparia281 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|"Nothing can beat Experience" Intl. Relations/Media & Com. Personal Statement for GKS-U Scholarship
Scholarshipapollo_nia - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|I told them I wanted to be a doctor - my 800 word biographical essay
Scholarshipeldomady - Sep 25, 2020 / Holt - Sep 26, 2020
|Medical Technology and Pharmacy - study of purpose for schoolarship
2 - Does the scholarship statement of purpose come with a specific prompt instruction? This version does not really feel like...
ScholarshipLinh96 - Sep 25, 2020 / Holt - Sep 25, 2020
|I am prepared for this scholarship - ECONOMICS
3 - @Holt I really appreciate your feedback. My mind is clearer now. I focused only in writing "more and better"...
Scholarshipandtrev - Sep 24, 2020 / andtrev - Sep 25, 2020
|My ACT Test - Questbridge 200 word essay
Scholarshiptran165954 - Sep 24, 2020 / Holt - Sep 25, 2020
|Questbridge Topical Essay - "My Missing Mother & Third-Grade Teacher"
3 - The prompt is asking you to provide information regarding an experience that cause you to change your mind or...
Scholarshiprosemarymelon - Sep 24, 2020 / Holt - Sep 25, 2020
|The Dutch and Mexican culture - Personal Statement for GKS Undergraduate scholarship
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback, it was very helpful. I did not think about why participation...
ScholarshipNaomiAcosta2121 - Sep 21, 2020 / NaomiAcosta2121 - Sep 24, 2020
|The elections of Key Club Statistical Secretary - Questbridge 200 Word Essay
Scholarshiptran165954 - Sep 24, 2020 / tran165954 - Sep 24, 2020
|MSc E-Business and Innovation / Security - My STUDYING Essay 4 Chevening Award
3 - @Holt Thanks for your useful review ... # I am working in IT/Telecommunication Department and my company...
Scholarshipnewchevening - Sep 24, 2020 / newchevening - Sep 24, 2020
|Focus, responsibility, attitude - leadership and influence (Chevening)
5 - I believe the leaders are not born, but it made through a process. Time by time, leadership skills will...
Scholarshipdhienie - Sep 23, 2020 / dhienie - Sep 24, 2020
|The possibilities for the brain - Questbridge Topical Essay - curiosity
Scholarshipthaonhi97 - Sep 22, 2020 / thaonhi97 - Sep 23, 2020
|QuestBridge National College Match Essay: Biography - more about myself
2 - Your essay is very touching on a personal level. I learned a tremendous amount of information about your parents...
Scholarshipthatoneguy - Sep 22, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
|My three university choice on Public Relations Major (Study Plan Essay Chevening)
2 - The main problem with your presentation is that you are presenting an unwarranted backstory in the opening presentation. This...
Scholarshipmosyi20 - Sep 22, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
|I am potential leader and influencer in the future - CHEVENING ESSAY
3 - Thankyou for your suggestion, this is my first time write essay in english, So should I send this essay...
ScholarshipdalilaHD - Sep 19, 2020 / dalilaHD - Sep 23, 2020
|The Stanford Medical Youth Program - Questbridge - proudest achievement
Scholarshipthaonhi97 - Sep 22, 2020 / Holt - Sep 22, 2020
|Chevening - Leadership essay - what have I achieved as a leader
2 - The essay does show influencing abilities. However, being elected president by default us not leadership. This poses a problem...
ScholarshipMostafa94 - Sep 20, 2020 / Holt - Sep 21, 2020
|PERSONAL STATEMENT GKS 2021 UNDERGRADUATE
2 - You have only given the brainstorming information that you developed. This is nowhere near an academic essay that reflects...
Scholarshipkarenntz_1097 - Sep 21, 2020 / Holt - Sep 21, 2020
|To be the leader of our own life - Chevening looking for leaders or influencers
5 - @Omnia A bundle of thanks that you have read my essay and mentioned my mistakes, I try to fine...
ScholarshipAnsari01 - Sep 19, 2020 / Ansari01 - Sep 20, 2020
|GKS This scholarship will assist me greatly in my endeavors and allow me the accomplish career goals
4 - To whom it may concern: I have found memories from childhood of drawing buildings and inside of them which...
Scholarshiprabrab - Sep 19, 2020 / rabrab - Sep 20, 2020
|Chevening - Studying in UK Essay (The aim of studying is not only to obtain a scientific degree)
2 - The Chevening Scholarship will look for the connection of your current work, your past and present work experience, with...
ScholarshipEnghirri - Sep 19, 2020 / Holt - Sep 20, 2020
|Plan on studying Psychology - Puestbridge Essay
2 - You can actually write a totally new essay because this current presentation fails to respond to two questions: 1....
Scholarshipbrowngal - Sep 20, 2020 / Holt - Sep 20, 2020
|QUESTBRIDGE "What do you admire most about your community? What would you change?"
2 - Please remember to break up your presentation into paragraphs. It is extremely difficult to read in this format. The...
Scholarshipdarrensar - Sep 19, 2020 / Holt - Sep 20, 2020
|Chevening Networking Essay (relations are one of the most important strength of current time)
ScholarshipEnghirri - Sep 18, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 19, 2020
|The representative of my colleagues - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
ScholarshipOmnia - Sep 9, 2020 / Omnia - Sep 19, 2020
|Civic Engagement Program - Chevening Leadership and Influence Essay
ScholarshipSam Ji - Sep 13, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 19, 2020
|Chevening Leadership Essay (leadership is not a right to be given, but a privilege to earned)
ScholarshipEnghirri - Sep 18, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 19, 2020
|Leadership as an Environmentalist - Chevening Scholarship
3 - I think that it contains a lot of details, the essay should reflect how you manged the program, but...
Scholarshipimhana - Sep 15, 2020 / Enghirri - Sep 18, 2020
|Confidence - My questbridge scholarship short answer 1
ScholarshipAriel2002 - Sep 18, 2020 / Ariel2002 - Sep 18, 2020
|History, Book, Weekend, Compliment, Challenge, Future - Questbridge Short answers for Scholarship
Scholarshipluluexcel - Sep 17, 2020 / Holt - Sep 18, 2020
|"CS is too hard" - Questbridge Short Answers - My Proudest Achievement
3 - You wasted the word count on an unnecessary back story. You should have kicked off the essay using the...
ScholarshipBearByte - Sep 17, 2020 / Holt - Sep 18, 2020
|The cruel irony... Personal statement for Korean Government Scholarship Program 2020
NEW - Personal statement Korean Government Scholarship Program 2020 New essay on the same topic = must be Urgent ...
Scholarshipshinkouuuu - Sep 17, 2020 / — -
|Swimming determination - Questbridge Biographical Essay.
3 - @Holt Thank You for giving me feedback on my essay! I was actually trying to alude to Dory's famous...
Scholarshipprinsipe - Sep 16, 2020 / prinsipe - Sep 17, 2020
|The opportunity to go to the United Kingdom to study - for Chevening
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your high attention and comments for my essays, Rally I have accepted your...
ScholarshipJagar Baso - Sep 13, 2020 / Jagar Baso - Sep 16, 2020
|General Science - Chevening application
Scholarshipbluecherry - Sep 16, 2020 / bluecherry - Sep 16, 2020
|"As high as the sky" - KGSP PERSONAL STATEMENT INTERNATIONAL RELATIONS MAJOR
3 - Hi @JPM21 I think you use too many quotes for the beginning of your personal statement. I think...
ScholarshipJPM21 - Sep 14, 2020 / imhana - Sep 15, 2020
|Questbridge 1, Historical Figure to meet: Gavrilo Princip
3 - You mixed up your question presentations. This response is meant for a different Questbridge essay regarding the proudest moment...
ScholarshipIcarusFliesOn - Sep 14, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|Civil Engineer / A practitioner of Taekwondo - Leadership & Influence Question
ScholarshipJadi - Sep 11, 2020 / Jadi - Sep 12, 2020
|QuestBridge - Tell us about your proudest moment and what it says about you..
3 - The essay is too bland and uninteresting. It does not create an imaginative reading experience for the reviewer. It...
Scholarshipmbotchway - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 11, 2020
|Creations of great infrastructures - KOREAN SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM 2021 APPLICATION
Scholarshipshinkouuuu - Sep 9, 2020 / Holt - Sep 9, 2020
|Helping other people grow - Personal Statement for GKS Scholarship 2020 (Embassy Track)
8 - Your updated personal statement is way more better however, you can't start a sentence with "Because" . The reason...
Scholarshipjannicefelicia - Aug 5, 2020 / shinkouuuu - Sep 9, 2020
|Civil Engineer - networking and Influence skills - Chevening
3 - @Holt Dear Mary Rose, Thank your for your precious feedback. Even though, I think it very difficulty for me...
Scholarshipmoo332211 - Sep 3, 2020 / moo332211 - Sep 8, 2020
|Become a influencer, who will be able to change the world into a better place; Chevening scholarship
2 - Sadly, you are not qualified to apply for a Chevening scholarship at this point. You do not have any...
Scholarshipasema_alt - Sep 8, 2020 / Holt - Sep 8, 2020
|A black kid in America - Questbridge Biographical Essay
3 - It would be better if you started this essay on a hopeful note. Rather than the gloom and doom...
ScholarshipAndrewO - Sep 7, 2020 / Holt - Sep 7, 2020
|A section manager - My Chevening leadership essay a part of scholarship needs
2 - Okay, you did well explaining your leadership personality based on a test that you took. However, there was no...
ScholarshipAli Elias - Sep 6, 2020 / Holt - Sep 7, 2020
|"If you are not willing to risk the unusual, you'll have to settle with the ordinary"-Jim Rohn
ScholarshipMimo08 - Aug 31, 2020 / Mimo08 - Sep 6, 2020
|Personal statement for Korean government scholarship. (Civil engineering)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. Tbh This is my first draft personal statement. I will think about your...
Scholarshipapriliyarosa - Sep 2, 2020 / apriliyarosa - Sep 2, 2020
|KGSP: Motivations with which you apply for this program - Why South Korea? Psychology.
2 - Ditch the second paragraph altogether. Work instead on presenting 2 facets of motivation, the social and the educational. You...
Scholarshipalua122 - Sep 1, 2020 / Holt - Sep 1, 2020
|RMIT Personal Statement - Leadership and Digital Marketing
2 - Your reason for believing you deserve this scholarship is unimpressive. Have you studied the requirements of the scholarship? Look...
ScholarshipKurekoHikari - Sep 1, 2020 / Holt - Sep 1, 2020
|Marriage Idea - On QuestBridge short answers
2 - The assumption of the promptnis that you will physically meet a historical figure and spend some time.e with that...
ScholarshipHoneybear - Sep 1, 2020 / Holt - Sep 1, 2020
|The country I did not belong. 2020 GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT SCHOLARSHIP
5 - @Holt I can clearly see my mistakes now. Thank you for pointing out. But regarding the application, associate...
Scholarshiplylrose - Aug 29, 2020 / lylrose - Aug 30, 2020
|"I am trapped" - My Personal Statement - Global Korea Scholarship
2 - The English grammar in this essay is inconsistent and reflects the use of an English translation software during a...
Scholarshiprafifirman - Aug 28, 2020 / Holt - Aug 28, 2020
|Research project about music and learning new languages - KGSP-U: Extracurricular activities
3 - While all of these activities are notable. They do not share equal importance in your presentation. You should indicate...
Scholarshipalua122 - Aug 25, 2020 / Holt - Aug 26, 2020
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