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|How to write an appeal for scholarship to a college board. Include strong points and remedies
2 - @zagger_dat Hi there! I'll do my best to provide you with feedback on your writing. First and...
Scholarshipzagger_dat - Jun 22, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|Personal Statement - Glocal Erasmus Mundus Joint Master Degree Consortium
4 - Thank you so much for all the tips, I'm taking into consideration all the aspects that you pointed out...
Scholarshiprafaeladrcosta - Jun 17, 2019 / rafaeladrcosta - Jun 22, 2019
|Teachers: Influencers in Schools and Communities - Chevening Scholarship essay
Scholarshipshehab16 - Jun 21, 2019 / shehab16 - Jun 22, 2019
|Monbukagakusho (MEXT) Research Student Scholarship: Field of Study/Plan
ScholarshipSunflower21 - Jun 12, 2019 / Maria - Jun 14, 2019
|CHEVENING LEADERSHIP SKILLS ESSAY - Characteristics of True Leaders - meeting this criteria
NEW - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP SKILLS ESSAY Chevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their...
Scholarshipmagajiauwalu - Jun 12, 2019 / — -
|Technology and Multilingual Award - KGSP Undergraduate Personal Statement
4 - @Maria hello! Thank you for your feedback, it will help me a lot :) Regarding the NSTP, I wrote...
ScholarshipKeeneSapphire - May 26, 2019 / KeeneSapphire - May 28, 2019
|Fulbright Scholarship Essay: Masters in Education
3 - Hi Maria! Thanks a lot for your feedback, really appreciate it. Your notes are quite useful and...
ScholarshipNajmaGhuloom - May 24, 2019 / NajmaGhuloom - May 25, 2019
|Personal statement for PTDF masters scholarship at the University of Maiduguri
2 - @Gboy88 Watch out for your capitalization. It is imperative to have this consistent to ensure that your language would...
ScholarshipGboy88 - May 18, 2019 / Maria - May 18, 2019
|Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering - DREAM AND EFFORT FOR FUTURE PLAN
NEW - Applying for KAIST Chemical and Biomolecular Engineering Please describe your dream and the efforts you have made so...
Scholarshipdacvuong11a1hoa - May 16, 2019 / — -
|I write this part to send to a global volunteer program, help me on grammar and word choice.
2 - @vo thi tam Your mistakes were primarily due to technical/grammatical issues you had while writing. This includes details including...
Scholarshipvo thi tam - May 15, 2019 / Maria - May 15, 2019
|Outline the details of your future aspirations and how your degree will help you achieve your vision
3 - Thank you so much for your feedback, it's really helpful. I will definitely add it to my essay. Javiera...
Scholarshipjolivares - May 9, 2019 / jolivares - May 13, 2019
|"Why do you think you are excellent?" - Digital Marketing Communications
2 - I have had much curiosity and thirst... Revise: I have an unquenchable thirst for knowledge in Media & Communications,...
Scholarshipsugarpuurin - May 12, 2019 / KatieNatalya - May 12, 2019
|Total International Schorlarship Application
2 - @Stefanovic Are you working within a specific word count? There are lot of unexplained utterances in your essay...
ScholarshipStefanovic - May 10, 2019 / Maria - May 10, 2019
|Self Introduction For (2019) GKS for ASEAN Countries' Science and Engineering Students
NEW - To be a researcher and to create something helpful My Name is Rheza Surya Pinandita, I was born...
Scholarshiprhezasuryap - May 8, 2019 / — -
|Development Studies - MOTIVATION LETTER FOR SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION
ScholarshipChangemaker - May 6, 2019 / Changemaker - May 8, 2019
|Why I am a good candidate for scholarship? Life experiences / management skills.
2 - A few notes: 1. Watch out for repetitive descriptions. What this means is that when you are writing,...
ScholarshipWezi - May 7, 2019 / Maria - May 7, 2019
|Essay : Which achievement of Singapore which you interested most.
2 - Watch out for your tenses, punctuation, capitalization, and related content. I recommend that you should be more cautious as...
ScholarshipAnnphamthu2310 - May 5, 2019 / Maria - May 5, 2019
|Application essay for Short Summer Research Program in Medical Science
2 - While it is great that you are able to provide a comprehensive output utilizing various writing techniques, you should...
Scholarshipcarpriciouser - May 3, 2019 / Maria - May 3, 2019
|Help me enhance my competitive collage club "CCC" application
Scholarshipomr10488 - Apr 29, 2019 / alessandra_dac - May 2, 2019
|Help me review my scholarship essay under the following headings.
2 - Try to simplify your language as you are writing. Doing this can immensely help your essay as I can...
Scholarshipaaderemi1 - Apr 28, 2019 / Maria - Apr 29, 2019
|AAS Essay: Development Studies in Melbourne and Communication at the University of Queensland. Why?
Scholarshipkanzcech - Apr 26, 2019 / kanzcech - Apr 27, 2019
|My curiosity about machines. Supporting statement for Australia Award scholarship 2020
5 - Thank you @Maria. I very appreciate your advises. Well,there is maximum 400s words count. I have difficult to use...
ScholarshipDoharry - Apr 27, 2019 / Doharry - Apr 27, 2019
|Master of Commerce - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - Be wary of the way that you transition your sentences. I have noticed also that there were sporadic instances...
Scholarshipmirzaputra81 - Apr 26, 2019 / Maria - Apr 27, 2019
|AAS MBA in Entrepreneurship - Why study your chosen subject?
3 - I have reviewed my essay and I totally agree with you. It does make sense that my essay looks...
Scholarshipnaufalkamal - Apr 21, 2019 / naufalkamal - Apr 26, 2019
|Australia Award Scholarship 2019/2020 - PT. SPIL shipping line company in Indonesia
Scholarshiptirto - Apr 24, 2019 / tirto - Apr 25, 2019
|Chemical engineering - achievements and career goals.
2 - Try to minimize your usage of filler words that do not add substance/content to your essay. Doing this can...
Scholarshipjingning292929 - Apr 24, 2019 / Maria - Apr 24, 2019
|How Does This Study Improve My Career Prospects
ScholarshipMbanba - Apr 23, 2019 / Mbanba - Apr 24, 2019
|United Nation (UN) co-certification. AAS - why this course or institution essay (330-400 words)
2 - Firstly, watch out for small technical mistakes. While these may be small, overlooking them can greatly harm your essay's...
Scholarshipazizbruder13 - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|I have implemented change and reform in the biggest student organization in Indonesia
2 - Watch out for small mistakes in your essay that can compromise its overall quality. For instance, your first sentence...
Scholarshipiqbalfahmi - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|AAS - Supporting Statement : Learning and Leadership / Education Study
3 - Thank You so much for your fast response and review. I am rewriting my essay and to be honest,...
ScholarshipVanesha - Apr 17, 2019 / Vanesha - Apr 18, 2019
|I want to move on to the next level - pursuing a master degree abroad in IT. Supporting Statement
Scholarshipzorii - Apr 18, 2019 / zorii - Apr 18, 2019
|Physician and pulmonologist - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - @drimran I recommend that you revise the formatting and structure of your essay in terms of the flow of...
Scholarshipdrimran - Apr 16, 2019 / Maria - Apr 16, 2019
|Master in IT - statement for AAS - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
3 - Thank you for the elaborated feedback! I'll try to answer these questions as much as I can within the...
Scholarshippaba - Apr 16, 2019 / paba - Apr 16, 2019
|Accounting and Finance - description of your study/research objectives and why want to pursue them
Scholarshipapachialfa - Apr 14, 2019 / apachialfa - Apr 16, 2019
|Planning career as a lecturer. Australia Awards Scholarship 2019/2020 - Supporting Statement
3 - Thank you, Maria! The limitation on word count makes it difficult for me to write all things that come...
Scholarshipfadelim - Apr 14, 2019 / fadelim - Apr 14, 2019
|A piece of conventional wisdom that you have come to doubt.
2 - I firstly suggest that you divide your essay into three particular points. Not unless you were told to specifically...
ScholarshipTohtoro - Apr 13, 2019 / Maria - Apr 14, 2019
|OASIS AUSTRALIAN AWARD SCHOLARSHIP
2 - Your first paragraph was quite baffling considering that the structure was all over the place. You could prevent this...
ScholarshipPHARMACISTHEBA - Apr 11, 2019 / Maria - Apr 11, 2019
|LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR A MSC IN SUSTAINABLE FOREST AND NATURE MANAGEMENT
ScholarshipToyin6991 - Apr 8, 2019 / Toyin6991 - Apr 8, 2019
|Fulbright Study Objective - psychology and business administration student
3 - Thank you again Maria, it is very helpful comments. I will revise it. But what do you mean about...
Scholarshipsuko - Apr 7, 2019 / suko - Apr 7, 2019
|Statement of financial assistance letter for The Bestway Foundation Scholarship
NEW - I am in desperate need I am working as a management trainee in a well-reputed insurance broker company....
ScholarshipMaharukh - Apr 7, 2019 / — -
|Fulbright Personal Statement - study in the USA would be beneficial
3 - Thank you so much Maria, I tried to revise it. But I still think there are important shortcomings. I...
Scholarshipsuko - Mar 26, 2019 / suko - Apr 7, 2019
|AAS - study/work in a group and mutual help - 'solving a challenge, implementing reform' essay
5 - Thanks a lot for your comments, Maria. Not only they are useful, they are also truly motivating and positive....
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 6, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 6, 2019
|An Application for the World Bank Scholarship Program - Future Career Plans
2 - Technically speaking on your grammatical composition, I suggest that you look into your usage of punctuation and prepositions. There...
Scholarshipfiras89 - Apr 6, 2019 / Maria - Apr 6, 2019
|How you will use the knowledge, skills, and connections and avoid possible constraints?
3 - @ririamanah Dear Riri, In the first reason, you overestimated of being overseas alumni. Other comment is on third...
Scholarshipririamanah - Apr 4, 2019 / firas89 - Apr 6, 2019
|An Application for the World Bank Scholarship Program - most significant professional achievement
Scholarshipfiras89 - Apr 5, 2019 / firas89 - Apr 6, 2019
|AAS - teaching is my passion; pursuing master's degree in applied linguistics with TESOL
3 - After re-reading, I now agree with you. It does sound odd, a bit too odd probably. I have also...
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 4, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 5, 2019
|AAS - Knowledge / Skills / Procrastination - examples of use, as well as the constraints
3 - I see. So, it is basically adding my personal experiences into it, right? from admin: New review only for...
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 4, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 5, 2019
|English Teaching - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - AAS 2019
6 - Thank you so much, Maria. I will try my best to incorporate all of your suggestions into my essay...
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 2, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 4, 2019
|Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (Public Health)
3 - In paragraph two - understand their position so they can ... during the policy-making process. Change in my situation...
Scholarshipjihadillah - Apr 3, 2019 / Constance - Apr 3, 2019
|Competition as the path to success. GKS-G. Masters degree in EDUCATION (South Korea)
3 - Thank you. I will fix all shortcomings mentioned by you. But, in general, personal statement is not so weak?...
Scholarshipnuraiym - Apr 2, 2019 / nuraiym - Apr 2, 2019
|"limited educational backgrounds in Korean language" - Personal Statement for GKS 2020
Scholarshipml1227 - Mar 29, 2019 / Constance - Mar 29, 2019
|Educational background and desire - Why I deserve this xxxxscholarship?
2 - I suggest self-reviewing your essay. There were a few grammatical errors that involved punctuation, demonstratives, and conjuctions. A lot...
Scholarshipjingning2929 - Mar 26, 2019 / Maria - Mar 26, 2019
|How this particular study can help me achieve my career goals
2 - I suggest mentioning more than what you have provided here. A well-thought out essay could help boost your applications....
Scholarshipjves - Mar 25, 2019 / Maria - Mar 25, 2019
|Build Indonesia's Potential Through Border Economic Potential
3 - Darkknight1995, I suggest that you try shortening your sentences to make your thoughts more comprehensible. While lengthy sentences...
Scholarshipdarkknight1995 - Mar 23, 2019 / Maria - Mar 23, 2019
|Scholarship essay for Opportunity Fund Program by Usef...any suggestions ?
2 - NirajP, I admire how you started your essay by telling your personal story. Generally speaking, the flow of...
ScholarshipNirajP - Mar 23, 2019 / Maria - Mar 23, 2019
|NTU Scholarship Essay: The Value of Self-Discipline
2 - Agb2k, I think your essay is headed in the right direction. I would propose, though, trying to cut...
Scholarshipagb2k - Mar 17, 2019 / Maria - Mar 22, 2019
|Personal Statement to apply GKS 2019/University Track to MBA program
4 - Hello there. I'm trying to give you a constructive feedback as possible. I don't want to be rude or...
Scholarshiptheone - Mar 5, 2019 / hangvo2806 - Mar 22, 2019
|Law study - correct my scholarship form for the Board Enrollment
2 - First paragraph - I'd not mention that you're "busy" (it may suggest you cannot fully focus on this scholarship...
Scholarshiphermionedoan7012 - Mar 17, 2019 / Rich Monte - Mar 20, 2019
|Transitional market - KGSP- Personal Statement/ Economics
2 - 1) I think you can start your essay from the experience on why you interest/register in KGSP-Master in Economics....
Scholarshipmeerimsm - Mar 17, 2019 / Izzudinfarras - Mar 18, 2019
|Personal Statement for Master Degree Application in Islamic Finance
Scholarshipdanggraini - Mar 18, 2019 / Izzudinfarras - Mar 18, 2019
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