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|Development context - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*?
ScholarshipKhine - 2 days ago / Khine - 1 day ago
|Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (Master of Commerce)
Scholarshipchrisfellach - 2 days ago / chrisfellach - 2 days ago
|Current Duties and Responsibilities as District Program Coordinator
4 - @Holt Thank you so much. But actually the title of the discussion went another way. Actually, I wrote it...
ScholarshipTaraAryal23 - Mar 26, 2020 / TaraAryal23 - 2 days ago
|AAS - Gifted Education. Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
2 - Reverse the presentation of your first paragraph. Make the last sentence your opening sentence instead. It creates more of...
Scholarshiparumdalu - Mar 25, 2020 / Holt - Mar 25, 2020
|Environmental Engineering - Personal Statement For Chinese Government Scholarship
3 - @Holt, what do you say to this pls? My choice of graduate degree in Environmental Engineering is to...
ScholarshipGabriela123 - Mar 24, 2020 / Gabriela123 - Mar 24, 2020
|Irish education and Vietnamese students - Master studies
2 - You do not accurately portray responses to either questions in your essay. A long term interest in Ireland would...
Scholarshipkhangdu8897 - Mar 24, 2020 / Holt - Mar 24, 2020
|Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (International Business)
3 - Hi Thank you so much for your feedback! It's really insightful. I'll have them revise accordingly....
Scholarshipdedjabs - Mar 20, 2020 / dedjabs - Mar 21, 2020
|APPLYING FOR A SCHOLARSHIP - GOI-IES - my educational career
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback, I edited the write-up but it turns out it wasn't posted. Okay I...
ScholarshipKnori - Mar 19, 2020 / Knori - Mar 20, 2020
|THE BOY IS GOOD AT ALL - Essay scholarship for a 10-grade student.
2 - Never hashtag your academic essays. You are not writing an Instagram description nor are you Tweeting a message. You...
Scholarshipbaross - Mar 19, 2020 / Holt - Mar 19, 2020
|Essay scholarship - Government of Ireland - International Education Scholarships
2 - The first 2 paragraphs of the essay are not necessary for the presentation. Neither does it improve the presentation...
Scholarshipchrisnguyen - Mar 18, 2020 / Holt - Mar 18, 2020
|Hospital - AAS Supporting statement for applications.
ScholarshipXPROFF - Mar 17, 2020 / XPROFF - Mar 17, 2020
|[NTU] Scholarship on Father - 300 words
5 - Please, if it's possible, give me further feedback on this. The deadline for the submission of the essay is...
Scholarshipsam_wzlim - Feb 22, 2020 / sam_wzlim - Mar 17, 2020
|Study plan for applying Master's program in Logistics and Management.
Scholarshipfangcao - Mar 14, 2020 / fangcao - Mar 16, 2020
|Enterprise Resource Planning manager - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform
2 - The main problem with the situation you posed in this essay is that it is too common a problem...
ScholarshipSukhErdene - Mar 14, 2020 / Holt - Mar 15, 2020
|Security Management - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution
2 - Change your approach to this essay. You need to be more descriptive regarding the reason why you chose your...
ScholarshipSukhErdene - Mar 14, 2020 / Holt - Mar 15, 2020
|NTU Scholarship essay - the importance of family. Essay about my personal values and attitudes.
ScholarshipHomuntan - Feb 25, 2020 / Homuntan - Mar 12, 2020
|"I'm terrified of deep waters" KGSP Personal Statement - Civil & Environmental Engineering
Scholarshipaarongalan123 - Mar 8, 2020 / aarongalan123 - Mar 11, 2020
|Student-run club - Global Markets, Local Creativities - ERASMUS MUNDUS MASTERS SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
2 - The one thing that weakens the letter is the last sentence. It sounds too forced. Your previous paragraph allows...
ScholarshipAdii - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 10, 2020
|GKS Personal Statement - Chem Eng - Applying via Uni
Scholarshipjonathhhan - Mar 7, 2020 / jonathhhan - Mar 10, 2020
|Tell us about the place – or places – you call home. Family - the most important thing.
2 - The essay is all about the place or places you call home. So the essay should be discussing locations,...
Scholarshipyennhi - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|GKS-G 2020 Personal Statement - Master in Anthropology - Embassy Track
2 - You totally missed the mark on several points in this essay. It is unfortunate that you approached this essay...
Scholarshipcafeaulait - Mar 9, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|[FUV] Tell us about one time you cried the loudest and one time you laughed the hardest.
Scholarshipyennhi - Feb 26, 2020 / yennhi - Mar 9, 2020
|Unraveling chloroplast-mediated regulatory network that drives senescence in plants
2 - This is a pretty solid thesis proposal. It clearly outlines every point of research and indicates the importance of...
ScholarshipPeng Wang - Mar 8, 2020 / Holt - Mar 9, 2020
|Applied of GIS in land Management system for urban sustainable development
3 - I chose Geographic information Science at University of Western Australia as my first choice and Geospatial Science at RMIT...
ScholarshipXanara - Mar 6, 2020 / Xanara - Mar 8, 2020
|KGSP - Statement of Purpose (Goal of study & Study Plan + Future Plan - Media Reporter)
2 - Your essay lacks focus. I am wondering if you were required to write a college thesis before you graduated...
Scholarshipfruitymay - Mar 6, 2020 / Holt - Mar 6, 2020
|Personal Statement for KGSP - Master in Southeast Asian Studies.
3 - @Holt thank you so much for your quick response.Because the deadline is approaching, I have made a revised essay...
Scholarshipirmao - Mar 4, 2020 / irmao - Mar 4, 2020
|"Becoming a Musician by self teaching" - Scholarship Essay
5 - This is a much better version of the previous essay that you wrote for this prompt. It is better...
ScholarshipCHRISOD - Jan 30, 2020 / Holt - Mar 4, 2020
|Applying the scholarship program - describing the motivation for study the chosen course
ScholarshipJohn Henry - Mar 2, 2020 / John Henry - Mar 3, 2020
|How will you extend yourself beyond your studies to become actively involved in Irish society
2 - Of the 500 word allotment for this essay, you should be writing at least 400 words to help better...
Scholarshipmattuche - Mar 2, 2020 / Holt - Mar 2, 2020
|Career Plan After MSc Program - Renewable Energy
ScholarshipAdelo - Feb 27, 2020 / Adelo - Feb 28, 2020
|Tell us why you selected New Zealand as a place to study?
ScholarshipLeo552 - Feb 26, 2020 / AbhayWalia - Feb 28, 2020
|Ps for applying scholarship: why should we grant you this scholarship?
3 - thank you very much you are right, that is also my problem in writing I modified this passage with...
Scholarshipyiping - Feb 25, 2020 / yiping - Feb 28, 2020
|Personal Statement for KGSP - to show my full potentials and meet my research expectations
3 - I feel like the the essay is too superficial in content for it to qualify as a application once...
Scholarshipfruitymay - Feb 26, 2020 / AbhayWalia - Feb 27, 2020
|Fulbright essay personal statement - the fight against cyber criminality.
7 - HELLO EVERYONE, PLEASE I NEED YOUR HELP TO MY PROPOSAL OF STUDY. I'm a person who's so passionate...
Scholarshipschulschenko - Feb 14, 2020 / schulschenko - Feb 25, 2020
|Master of Energy in NZ - knowledgre you hope to gain from your exposed study programme?
3 - Remove the reference to the book that you read. That is irrelevant to the discussion. Only the program exposure...
ScholarshipLeo552 - Feb 25, 2020 / Holt - Feb 25, 2020
|Forest ecosystem - Skill and knowledge to contribute to the development of your home country
4 - @Holt @Camilllla Thanks for the feedback! I will incorporate your comments into revising the essays...
ScholarshipThet Oo - Feb 21, 2020 / Thet Oo - Feb 24, 2020
|What is the benefit of becoming a GOI-IES Scholar, to yourself (personally and professionally)
2 - This essay needs to be divided into three parts. The three sections are the personal, academic, and professional. However,...
ScholarshipAbraham123 - Feb 21, 2020 / Holt - Feb 22, 2020
|Fostering dreams - My QuestBridge Bio Essay #2!
ScholarshipDevaii - Feb 18, 2020 / Devaii - Feb 20, 2020
|NZ Scholarship: Enhancing my skills and knowledge in quantification of renewable energy works.
Scholarshipoladipokj - Feb 18, 2020 / oladipokj - Feb 19, 2020
|I got it from my Moma - Questbridge bio essay
3 - @Holt Thanks for your feedback! I really appriciate it and will keep it in mind while revising!...
ScholarshipDevaii - Feb 18, 2020 / Devaii - Feb 18, 2020
|"Positivity is second to none" - NTU Scholarship essay
3 - @Holt Thanks for the feedback. To clarify, my response to the prompt is based on positivity as a value...
Scholarshipcarcrzy_adhi_123 - Feb 16, 2020 / carcrzy_adhi_123 - Feb 17, 2020
|Tell us about a concept, theory, or topic you have explored. Questbridge Prompt (200 words)
2 - Your response lacks a key element in your presentation. How do you plan to further pursue this concept, theory,...
ScholarshipDubemikael - Feb 15, 2020 / Holt - Feb 16, 2020
|NTU Scholarship essay - event that have personal importance. The National Service
2 - It would be better if you presented the experience through a transitional phase outlook on your life. By that,...
Scholarshippongjingyang - Feb 14, 2020 / Holt - Feb 15, 2020
|Study plan for scholarship undergraduate Program. Business Administration majors
3 - Hi there! It's great to find someone who's applying for the same scholarship as I am. I hope I'll...
ScholarshipRifqi_ismail - Feb 13, 2020 / alyssa2036 - Feb 14, 2020
|English teacher and determination -PTDF UK scholarship: scholarship with this statement of purpose.
ScholarshipNayaya - Feb 13, 2020 / Nayaya - Feb 14, 2020
|How you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your study time in Sweden?
3 - @Holt Thanks so much. I will revise it right away, but the difficulty is cutting it down to one...
Scholarshipeyes - Feb 13, 2020 / eyes - Feb 14, 2020
|Global Scholarship under Lund University Masters in International Development and Management
2 - Without the prompt requirement for this essay, I am unable to provide a comprehensive review of the content and...
Scholarshipayasmin - Feb 13, 2020 / Holt - Feb 13, 2020
|Education reform gaps - Australia Award Scholarship
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your great advice. I will reanalyze my essay about choosing the universities and...
ScholarshipKyaw Mong - Feb 11, 2020 / Kyaw Mong - Feb 11, 2020
|GKS Graduate Program 2020 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Urban Planning
4 - @Holt I do consider highlighting the programs that the university offer, however, the program website is only provided in...
Scholarshipanantatk - Feb 9, 2020 / anantatk - Feb 11, 2020
|Global Korea Scholarship - Personal Statement. Medical Doctor.
Scholarshipsheila_lala - Feb 8, 2020 / sheila_lala - Feb 10, 2020
|NFGL member - how you can apply the knowledge and experience gained from your time in Sweden
2 - The application to the workplace setting is acceptable. However, I feel like the application is a bit shallow and...
Scholarshipstuntuya - Feb 9, 2020 / Holt - Feb 10, 2020
|REVIEW ON PTDF MSC MOTIVATION LETTER ON ENERGY AND ENVIRONMENTAL ENGINEERING
2 - The motivation letter does not respond to the most basic question being asked: "What is the professional motivation for...
Scholarshipoghenekevwe - Feb 9, 2020 / Holt - Feb 9, 2020
|Masters is Security and Information Assurance at KFUPM - Statement of Purpose
4 - Please write a totally new statement of purpose. What you have written above is an autobiography of your academic...
Scholarshipmhxlmx - Feb 7, 2020 / Holt - Feb 8, 2020
|Global Korean Scholarship Study Plan for Improve Language to reach my goals
2 - While your expertise in English writing is probably just as bad as your Hangul at this point, I can...
Scholarshipkarenntz_1097 - Feb 7, 2020 / Holt - Feb 7, 2020
|Scholarship in a center for talented-student of Vinschool school (Vietnam)
2 - I am not sure what question you are trying to respond to with this personal statement. I wish you...
Scholarshiplebaothubn - Feb 5, 2020 / Holt - Feb 6, 2020
|Global Korea Scholarship GKS 2020 - Master of Business Administration - Personal Statement
2 - The only part of this essay that you can use is the reference to the preparations you have made...
Scholarshipbecca9896 - Feb 5, 2020 / Holt - Feb 6, 2020
|Chinese Government Undergraduate Scholarship (Personal Statement - Economics)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your thoughts! I will edit my personal statement and repost the revised one....
Scholarshipalyssa2036 - Feb 2, 2020 / alyssa2036 - Feb 5, 2020
|Essay Scholarship (NZAID) - Study Relevance
2 - Since you are applying for a scholarship, you need to be a bit more detailed when explaining the skills...
Scholarshipimgiselll - Feb 5, 2020 / Holt - Feb 5, 2020
|Master of Economics - Scholarship statement on choosing the proposed course and institutions
2 - The choice of your proposed course is not very clear in this essay. You are discussing an academic interest...
ScholarshipBJ003 - Feb 5, 2020 / Holt - Feb 5, 2020
|Personal Statement- Education Administration major- KGSP
3 - Hello Holt Thank you very much for your kind advice, I truly appreciate it. It means a lot to...
ScholarshipAquanisenja - Feb 3, 2020 / Aquanisenja - Feb 3, 2020
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