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Biological Sciences major for KGSP. Should I pay much attention to the fact I'm an ethnic Korean?

3 - Thank you for such a detailed feedback. I revised the essay and deleted the useless part. Now it doesn't...

ScholarshipYuchime - 1 day ago / Yuchime - 22 hours ago
Prior to my arrival in Korea, I would take an intensive Korean course; My plan is to receive TOPIK5

2 - @jimjimnie This is a very good study plan for both English and Korean languages. The fact that you knew...

Scholarshipjimjimnie - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship

3 - Daniyal, revise the content of your essay. It has irrelevant and superfluous examples in it that do not really...

Scholarshipahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018 / Holt - 2 days ago
CHEVENING ESSAY - Quality Leaders

3 - Thankyou @Holt for your insight...

Scholarshipahmdard - Sep 17, 2018 / ahmdard - 2 days ago
Networking for individuals with strong professional relationship building skills - Chevening

5 - Aju, there is one rule for all the Chevening essays and that is, "Show don't tell" the reviewer about...

Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018 / Holt - 2 days ago
Motivation Letter for Scholarship by DAAD Integrated Urbanism and Sustainable Design

2 - hi ariel.. i just read your letter of motivation and compared it to the daad guidelines. they require you...

Scholarshiparielpvasconcelo - Sep 20, 2018 / ahsan_daniyal - Sep 23, 2018
Post-Career plan to strengthen ties between my country and the UK

3 - Thank you for your insightful feedback. I appreciate your time and constructive feedback....

Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 21, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 23, 2018
I do my best to develop my network and communication skills for my professional career

6 - I can definitely relate to your feelings about writing these essays. Initially I had moments of "ups and downs"...

ScholarshipKing Ahmos - Sep 21, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 23, 2018
Department of Energy Resources Engineering - KGSP/scholarship. Personal Statement

2 - I think you need to work on this essay not only grammar, you need to write in more matured...

Scholarshipiamrmk - Sep 20, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018
Economics and Policy Development - Chevening Studying in UK Essay

3 - Well, your essay is ok and focused just avoid repetition such as ''I choose this course'' in all paragraphs,...

ScholarshipSutan Rajo Lelo - Sep 22, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 22, 2018
Pursuing Master's degree to change from an epidemiologist into a Health Policy Analyst and Advocate

2 - Bithy, you are over reaching with your career plans. You need to represent only a 5 year career plan...

ScholarshipRU_IS - Sep 21, 2018 / Holt - Sep 22, 2018
There are so many points that have made me influenced for applying in Korean government scholarship

1 - Personal statement for KGSP What to include: - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Personal...

ScholarshipKylee - Sep 21, 2018 / — -
University environment is a representation of our world.

4 - I have made the changes based on your feedback. Kindly have a look at the new draft. Currently it...

Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 18, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 21, 2018
My life in a few words - KGSP - UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT .... HELP

3 - Alejandra, this essay is definitely too long for the size of paper that you are being asked to complete...

Scholarshipaleja2624 - Sep 20, 2018 / Holt - Sep 21, 2018
Networking Skill as Powerful Weapon at Work_ Chevening Scholarship

2 - Sherly, this is an example of a competitive networking essay. It really showcases your national networking skills to a...

ScholarshipAnanta - Sep 19, 2018 / Holt - Sep 20, 2018
Chevening Leadership and Influence essay - Establishing a cost-free learning center

5 - Thank you, points well noted. The course that I want to apply is Special and Inclusive Education. Basically...

ScholarshipLegecy - Sep 18, 2018 / Legecy - Sep 19, 2018
Networking skills in cultural Field for Chevening Scholarship

3 - Ana, the reason that you are having a hard time writing these essays is because you tend to over...

Scholarshipluciagonmun - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
Leadership & Influence Question - Leadership is a life time journey

2 - Joana, the first thing you have to change about this essay is the title. By titling it "Leadership is...

Scholarshipjojomel - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
I am applying for a Chevening scholarship in the cultural Heritage Field.

5 - Ana, the essay is stronger this time. It has ample leadership examples but sometimes falls short of a full...

Scholarshipluciagonmun - Sep 18, 2018 / Holt - Sep 19, 2018
For me, the leadership isn't just a tittle but it is an ability to lead people to reach their goals

4 - Thanks a lot ! i discarded the last paragraph as its useless. @schmunzel...

Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 16, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 18, 2018
Study in UK academic or professional experience and your plans for the future

4 - Wow, you opened my eyes,thank i work on it....

Scholarshipjeffreyj - Sep 16, 2018 / jeffreyj - Sep 18, 2018
Leadership and Influence - the special touch which leaves an impression inside of human soul

3 - @Holt ... Thanks so much for the review and your observations are duly noted and will be effected. Thanks...

Scholarshipattahdavid - Sep 13, 2018 / attahdavid - Sep 18, 2018
Embassy track - SCHOLARSHIP Personal Statement

5 - I appreciate your advice very much. I'll work on the Personal Statement again. Thanks....

Scholarshipshahriar10 - Sep 14, 2018 / shahriar10 - Sep 17, 2018
An intriguing concept, theory, or topic you have explored; fascinated by geography

2 - Anthony, your essay is good, but lacking in terms of response to "How do you want to further explore...

Scholarshipschmunzel - Sep 16, 2018 / Holt - Sep 17, 2018
Personal statement for Scholarship; Motivation, Family background, Experience, Activities, and Skill

2 - ... not as good as the one in developed countries. I can find out how ... --> I think...

Scholarshipmilenatnat - Sep 15, 2018 / cao1km - Sep 17, 2018
The context in which you have grown up, formed your aspirations, and accomplished your successes

3 - Anthony, the essay is strong, but with a lot of grammatical errors that requires professional editing in order for...

Scholarshipschmunzel - Sep 15, 2018 / Holt - Sep 16, 2018
"Senior Developer" - Chevening Leadership essay question draft answer

3 - Wafaa, this is not a leadership and influencing essay. This only a paragraph form of your resume. This is...

ScholarshipwAly - Sep 15, 2018 / Holt - Sep 16, 2018
Networking is crucial to succesfully fulfilling my job duties. Chevening

3 - Thank you for those suggestions. I will "go back to the drawing board" and post again. Thank you very...

Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 14, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 16, 2018
I was presented with the Achievement and Leadership award at graduation ceremony. Chevening essay

4 - Thank you very much for your feedback. I will revise and post the new edition. Thanks....

Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 13, 2018 / terminal28 - Sep 16, 2018
Strong professional relationship building skills; respect to others and managing personal emotions

2 - Miguel, it appears to me that you accidentally titled this post "networking" when it is clearly a leadership and...

ScholarshipMiguel Pugliesi - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
Trying to apply for the KGSP program - writing essay based on the guidelines below

4 - Nrayani, do not insult the intelligence of the Korean reviewer by downscaling your language. If you wish to be...

ScholarshipPhoenix91 - Sep 14, 2018 / Holt - Sep 15, 2018
As Chevening awardee, I will further enhance my networking skills and widen my circle

4 - here is a new networking essay, I hope you will be happier when you review it :) @HOLT In...

ScholarshipMHD - Sep 11, 2018 / MHD - Sep 14, 2018
Mom's Motorola Razr and My Identity- Questbridge Scholarship Biographical Essay

3 - Aman, your aunt and uncle are not the one's applying for this scholarship. So why are they the focal...

ScholarshipMrBean1978 - Sep 13, 2018 / Holt - Sep 14, 2018
One of my cardinal principles is influencing my immediate environment and my country at large

4 - Thanks a mill for your apt contribution. I will work on it accordingly....

ScholarshipMayor1981 - Aug 30, 2018 / Mayor1981 - Sep 13, 2018
Professional networking has become an integral to modern life-Chevening

3 - @Holt Oh thank you so much. this is the best thing for me this morning. I appreciate your time...

ScholarshipSsekyanzi - Sep 12, 2018 / Ssekyanzi - Sep 13, 2018
Chevening Essay - Empathy and Vision as the core abilities for future leaders or influencers

3 - Hi Mary Rose @holt Thank you so much for your kind words and valuable feedback - all of which are very...

Scholarshipadrnknnths - Sep 11, 2018 / adrnknnths - Sep 12, 2018
Leadership is totally mandatory if you want to be a great architect. CHEVENING

3 - Ana, as I keep telling the current crop of Chevening applicants, you are wasting the time of the reviewer...

ScholarshipMPAULINO55 - Sep 11, 2018 / Holt - Sep 12, 2018
Looking forward to a promising career in development sector - Chevening Career Plan Question

2 - Shreya, you are missing the point. Your post study plan needs to show how your career plans will coincide...

ScholarshipShreya19 - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
Chevening Essay - Question one - Leadership

2 - Nada, this essay is too unimpressive for a Chevening leadership and influencing essay. It is not very appropriate for...

Scholarshipwin92dy - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
Leadership and influence means to me making a positive change and a lasting impact on people

2 - Ruona, you don't sound like you need this scholarship. Why do I say that? You can manage to run...

Scholarshipgracefoundme - Sep 10, 2018 / Holt - Sep 11, 2018
What engineering means to me - pursuing success in Korea (mechanical engineering field)

4 - @Holt Sorry, posted the wrong one. This is my 2nd draft. While I was in the 10th grade,...

ScholarshipPaulscs - Sep 8, 2018 / Paulscs - Sep 11, 2018
CHEVENING Leadership essay - Turning around one of the largest Geothermal development project

4 - Thanks a lot for the feedbacks Holt, RU_IS on your feedback.. Will certainly tweak the essay accordingly....

Scholarshipessaytesting - Sep 8, 2018 / essaytesting - Sep 10, 2018
Chevening Scholarship Networking Question - I have grown as a professional

5 - @Holt Dear Mary, thank you for detailing out para by para, it was really kind of you. I have...

ScholarshipShreya19 - Sep 8, 2018 / Shreya19 - Sep 10, 2018
KGSP personal statement .. applying for second time after a rejection

3 - Zara, the essay that you wrote does not follow the requirements for a KGSP Personal Statement. You are supposed...

ScholarshipzaraSmart - Sep 9, 2018 / Holt - Sep 10, 2018
Competitive educational system - MY PERSONAL STATEMENT #2 FOR KGSP

4 - thank you so much for your comments. i will do everything what you said. you're the best!! 😄😄 everything...

Scholarshiproykim - Sep 7, 2018 / roykim - Sep 9, 2018
Study in UK - Chevening Essay - The Importance of Visual Design in Museums.

5 - REVISED ESSAY. Many Museums in Indonesia has not been able to adjust its way to give a meaningful...

ScholarshipJeleetah - Sep 4, 2018 / Jeleetah - Sep 8, 2018
Trust, honesty, hard work - CHEVENING NETWORKING ESSAY

2 - Daniel, the requirement for the Chevening Networking essay is as follows: Chevening is looking for individuals with strong...

Scholarshipdanielsaps - Sep 7, 2018 / Holt - Sep 8, 2018
Chevening Networking Essay - High-trust Relationships for Ever Lasting Networking

2 - Bayu, please stop defining your understanding of terms and referencing your college education at this point in your application....

Scholarshipimbws - Sep 7, 2018 / Holt - Sep 8, 2018
A Childhood Dream - KGSP Undergraduate 2019 Personal Statement

3 - @Mazino31 Hi. I assume you are going to apply for a business administration course? Why don't we discuss over...

ScholarshipMazino31 - Aug 22, 2018 / zaraSmart - Sep 7, 2018
My aim is to produce innovative technologies that would fulfill people`s needs. SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY

3 - Avoid overly dramatic presentations such as having your grandmother withhold food until you spoke to her in Russian to...

Scholarshipnilu228 - Sep 6, 2018 / Holt - Sep 7, 2018
My network include several politicians; members of Congress and ministers, as well as public figures

3 - @valeriavbv I think you have to focus on one or two experiences and be more detail, rather than only...

Scholarshipvaleriavbv - Aug 27, 2018 / imbws - Sep 7, 2018
Writing my personal statement for KGSP 2019 Undergraduate - I'm applying for Computer Science major.

4 - Thanks a lot your feedback was truely helpful....

Scholarshipmohamedmamoon01 - Sep 5, 2018 / mohamedmamoon01 - Sep 7, 2018
Endeavour Scholarship / Proposed Program: Sustainable Design

4 - The admin has decided that your question warrants a response. So here is my detailed explanation regarding the reasons...

Scholarshipcaroweis22 - Sep 5, 2018 / Holt - Sep 7, 2018
Chevening Leadership Essay - LEADING THROUGH INNOVATION

3 - Holt, thanks for your feedback. Definitely going to review my essay according to your feedback....

Scholarshipimbws - Sep 6, 2018 / imbws - Sep 7, 2018
Leadership and influence at a tech startup - Chevening (Leadership & Influence essay)

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for the correction to my essay, I see the weaknesses in what I wrote...

ScholarshipAury23 - Sep 4, 2018 / Aury23 - Sep 6, 2018
Critical Analysis of the Essay with regard to statement and conditions under subject is required!

4 - Hey qamaradeel, I think you have the examples to make an essay shine, what I think could help is...

Scholarshipqamaradeel - Sep 2, 2018 / Aury23 - Sep 5, 2018
Biomedical engineer - Personal statement - I'm interested to apply for KGSP scholarship

4 - @bxddxst I really appreciate your help and I'm totally sure that I am going to make a new one,...

Scholarshipairam - Sep 3, 2018 / airam - Sep 4, 2018
I recognized my natural leadership abilities and I always endeavored to improve these skills

4 - @RU_IS @Holt thank you for your feedback I will do my best....

Scholarshipblocket - Sep 3, 2018 / blocket - Sep 4, 2018
University leadership experience - engineering week

2 - Mohammed, these are not leadership examples. These are examples of how you are a good follower. In fact, the...

Scholarshipmhdsalah1993 - Sep 2, 2018 / Holt - Sep 3, 2018
I'll be able to make things happen; Motivations with which you apply for the KGSP

4 - @bxddxst thank you for your advise!! @Holt THANK YOU VERY MUCH!! i will do everything what you said....

Scholarshiproykim - Aug 31, 2018 / roykim - Sep 1, 2018

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