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|Essay on Presidential LEEP scholarship at Clark University
3 - @Holt Here is changed version of my essay. Can you give suggestions? Aizada here is candy but shhh.. do...
ScholarshipwizardA - 19 hrs ago / wizardA - 7 hrs ago
|Skills and knowledge I hope to gain and how these skills are important to my country's development
3 - @Holt Thanks Holt, Thanks for time time you spent in reviewing my essay. I will make necessary corrections...
ScholarshipReginaOtu - 13 hrs ago / ReginaOtu - 12 hrs ago
|Application to study at a Korean university. Personal statement- Arts management. GKS-KGSP 2020
2 - There is an overall weakness in the essay because of your lack of true interest in Korea and the...
Scholarshipcellofreak - 21 hrs ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|Challenges during the scholarship
ScholarshipEvidenceBrown - 2 days ago / EvidenceBrown - 1 day ago
|Love for ships. Personal Statement for Global Korea Scholarship (GKS) - 2020
2 - Your overall essay is weak. There is a motivation for the course you want to study but absolutely no...
Scholarshipdhana13 - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Master degree - Social work with Families and Children
2 - The essay needs to build up the explanation as to how the course Children and Families in Adverse Life...
Scholarshipnurzullalaliz - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|KGSP Scholarship 2020 Personal Statement International Relations
2 - This is already a tremendously strong essay that definitely has the potential to move you up the GKS consideration...
ScholarshipTade19 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Why New Zealand study? For adventure and because of my love for research and development
3 - @Uromi I suggest you should write more on New Zealand's education and learning system. Do they offer a safe...
ScholarshipUromi - Jan 21, 2020 / EvidenceBrown - 2 days ago
|Personal Statement for Interaction Science - KGSP / GKS 2020
6 - @Holt Hi Holt, thank you very much for your feedback. Really, it helps a lot. I am now developing...
Scholarshipranagiani - Jan 8, 2020 / ranagiani - Jan 21, 2020
|Statement of Purpose for PTDF OVERSEAS SCHOLARSHIP 2020 - to tell the admissions committee who I am
2 - There is room for improvement in this essay. You need to develop the cybersecurity discussion in relation to the...
ScholarshipAsiya - Jan 20, 2020 / Holt - Jan 21, 2020
|Food Technology programme relates closely to the recommended subject for my country
3 - This essay is nothing more than one run-on sentence after another. The length of each sentence, coupled with the...
ScholarshipAnimity - Jan 18, 2020 / Holt - Jan 19, 2020
|I've chosen to study B.A (English Language and Linguistics) to become an English teacher in Myanmar
3 - Your essay does not respond to the question posed at all. You totally disregarded the requirements of the essay...
ScholarshipVstar - Jan 18, 2020 / Holt - Jan 19, 2020
|Be Change Maker - Personal Statement GKS 2020
3 - Thank you for your feedback. It's really important and helpful. I will come back with the revision....
Scholarshiprumusgsheet - Jan 19, 2020 / rumusgsheet - Jan 19, 2020
|GKS SCHOLARSHIP / PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR INTERNATIONAL STUDIES - EMBASSY TRACK, COLOMBIA
Scholarshipdani1694 - Jan 17, 2020 / dani1694 - Jan 18, 2020
|I hope to become a passionate person who will take part in the Global UGRAD Program.
3 - The Global UGrad program looks for future leaders and problem solvers in their home country. The application specifically asks...
Scholarshipchunghoangmy - Dec 21, 2019 / Holt - Jan 16, 2020
|Sustainable-Energy-Systems - to write a study objective for the Fulbright scholarship
3 - [/quote] Thank you, for your useful comments dear @Holt but two things should be considered in writing this essay...
ScholarshipAli163 - Jan 13, 2020 / Ali163 - Jan 14, 2020
|Who I am and background? Study plan for master's scholarship
4 - Your introduction essay should not focus so much on your weaknesses as a student. Neither should it relate too...
ScholarshipAmmaraRasheed - Jan 13, 2020 / Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|A step into the future I ever dreamt of - review on my Personal statement for PTDF Msc Scholarship
2 - Even without seeing the guiding prompts for this personal statement, I would have to say that the essay does...
Scholarshipminers - Jan 13, 2020 / Holt - Jan 14, 2020
|(Scholarship essay) Significant experience - student's impact on school and community
3 - @Holt Thank you for your valuable feedback, I agree to the part that my impact is not visible...
Scholarshipsky004 - Jan 13, 2020 / sky004 - Jan 13, 2020
|[PERSONAL STATEMENT] KGSP 2020, master degree in communication
3 - Well,t his is certainly a very strong application essay that highlights all of the salient points of the prompt...
Scholarshipkgsp2020grad - Jan 9, 2020 / Holt - Jan 13, 2020
|The Personal Statement for graduate KGSP Scholarship. Other field in master course
2 - Since this is a masters degree application, you can skip the family background since that is not required for...
Scholarshipchanelkarpova - Jan 7, 2020 / Holt - Jan 12, 2020
|Crude oil - offer suggestion on the arrangement and organization of my statement of purpose
2 - Change the age in this essay from 11 to 15 or older but use the same experience. The reviewer...
ScholarshipInyang - Jan 5, 2020 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|Journey of self-discovery - personal importance to you ~ NTU scholarship
Scholarshipaloyxius - Jan 11, 2020 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|Dynamic leaders - UGRAD - Why would you be a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program?
2 - The last sentence in the first paragraph should be deleted. There is no sense in you telling the reviewer...
Scholarshipanan1249 - Dec 31, 2019 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|Motivation letter for the International Master of Science in Rural development scholarship
3 - @Maria Dear Maria, Many thanks for your detailed and helpful comment. I will try to focus on your...
ScholarshipDarina14 - Jan 2, 2020 / Darina14 - Jan 3, 2020
|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship, Track B Global market and Development
2 - @Tati 237 Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum. Here is my feedback on your writing. Since...
ScholarshipTati 237 - Dec 23, 2019 / Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Describe your current possibilities (in terms of role/position, mandate) to influence
NEW - -- 866 of 1000 characters limit. Due to the characters limit, I try to make is as efficient as...
Scholarshiplililalu - Jan 1, 2020 / — -
|Global UGRAD to look for solutions in the fields of education, human rights, and emancipation.
2 - It is great to hear about your experience teaching the kids and that is the highlight. However, I think...
ScholarshipNurul Aisyah - Dec 23, 2019 / anan1249 - Dec 31, 2019
|Why would you be a great participant of this scholarship? Well let's be real about that.
5 - @sleepysharmrocks thanks for help any other editions ? how many other students have I helped..? none so far...
Scholarshiptomgk - Dec 15, 2019 / tomgk - Dec 17, 2019
|LOM for International Masters of Science in Environmental Engineering
3 - @Maria Thank you so much for the response. But I don't quiet understand what you mean by what your...
Scholarshiphadilakk - Dec 16, 2019 / hadilakk - Dec 17, 2019
|WHAT YOU EXPECT WILL CHANGE IN DEVELOPMENT TERMS FOLLOWING YOUR STUDIES
2 - @StChibuzor Hi there. Here is my feedback on this writing of yours. Be cautious of the tenses you...
ScholarshipStChibuzor - Dec 12, 2019 / Maria - Dec 13, 2019
|It is this area wherein lies my passion - 'How your proposed study relates to' question
2 - @StChibuzor Hello. Here's my feedback on this essay. For one, if this is truly what the entire essay...
ScholarshipStChibuzor - Dec 12, 2019 / Maria - Dec 13, 2019
|Applying For Master Degree majoring in Strategic Marketing Management
NEW - Good morning, I am posting my Motivation letter for review as i apply for Master Degree in Norway. Please...
ScholarshipVT2207 - Dec 10, 2019 / — -
|MY PERSONAL STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR PTDF SCHOLARSHIP TO STUDY Msc IN ENVIRONMENTAL POLICY
2 - @Ulamas14 Hi, welcome to the site! Here's my feedback for your writing. Academic writing requires that you have...
ScholarshipUlamas14 - Dec 7, 2019 / Maria - Dec 9, 2019
|Academic Reference Letter for Scholarships and To Get a University
2 - @izecsony5 Hello, I would like to give my feedback your reference letter. Firstly, the reference given good...
Scholarshipizecsony5 - Dec 3, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 5, 2019
|MY SUPPORTING STATEMENT FOR QECS APPLICATION
ScholarshipXPROFF - Nov 26, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 5, 2019
|Medical physics - QEC scholarship; Development impact and post study outreach
ScholarshipXPROFF - Dec 2, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 3, 2019
|Personal values, beliefs, attitudes and behaviour
2 - @NAYS Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope my feedback gives you insight on how to improve your...
ScholarshipNAYS - Nov 22, 2019 / Maria - Nov 22, 2019
|Vistec International Students Scholarship to Study MSc Materials Science and Engineering in Thailand
ScholarshipNnabodo Darlingt - Nov 15, 2019 / Nnabodo Darlingt - Nov 16, 2019
|Reference Letter for Scholarships and To Get a University
3 - Thank you for your prompt response. Actually, I already have academic reference letter. Soon I will post in...
Scholarshipizecsony5 - Nov 14, 2019 / izecsony5 - Nov 16, 2019
|Being a leader that expects everyone is as driven as himself - Chevening
5 - @izecsony5 Hi @izecsony5, thanks a lot to your valuable feedback and directions for my essay structures is really recognized...
Scholarshipelhamkhan - Nov 3, 2019 / elhamkhan - Nov 16, 2019
|My experience about Leading and Influencing People (Chevening)
3 - Hi @spideymaniac, similar with @Maria I found it difficult when I read your essay. At first, I thought your...
Scholarshipspideymaniac - Nov 4, 2019 / izecsony5 - Nov 14, 2019
|A true leader is one who empathizes with the problems of others
ScholarshipAsj - Nov 5, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Kenya and India - write on a topic that is of importance to you, and reflects who you are.
2 - @vedantpatel Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Scholarshipvedantpatel - Nov 4, 2019 / Maria - Nov 7, 2019
|I always participated in activities of student-led organizations ever since I started university.
2 - @Nana Byl Hi there. Thanks for coming back to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on...
ScholarshipNana Byl - Nov 1, 2019 / Maria - Nov 3, 2019
|Personal Statement (Applying for Ph. D. in the field of China Studies)
3 - Hi, @Maria. Many thanks for your advice! The PS I posted was sorted in chronological order, therefore, the theme...
ScholarshipJennifer3086 - Oct 30, 2019 / Jennifer3086 - Nov 1, 2019
|Chevening scholarship essay: Networking with work related professionals by using LinkedIn and Alumni
3 - @Maria Thank you so much for your useful insight and I will certainly rewrite the essay considering your...
ScholarshipIqbal3993 - Oct 30, 2019 / Iqbal3993 - Nov 1, 2019
|Essay on Choice of Universities (Chevening Scholarship 2020/2021)
ScholarshipEluwahDaniel - Oct 30, 2019 / EluwahDaniel - Nov 1, 2019
|Chevening Academic essay - Three courses choice in UK
2 - Overall, I think you have a very good essay but the opening didn't move me much to continue reading....
Scholarshipntlinhtran - Nov 1, 2019 / Nana Byl - Nov 1, 2019
|"action at home" - influence on people's lives through orphanages (leadership essay)
3 - could you elaborate more on your last point for my conclusion? A sample could do the trick. thank...
ScholarshipNana Byl - Nov 1, 2019 / Nana Byl - Nov 1, 2019
|Chevening Career Plan essay - Educational Technology
Scholarshipntlinhtran - Oct 30, 2019 / ntlinhtran - Nov 1, 2019
|Ownership makes leadership - Chevening - Leadership and Influence essay
2 - @pionpt Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum. Wish you the best of luck in your Chevening application!...
Scholarshippionpt - Oct 30, 2019 / Maria - Nov 1, 2019
|Business Management (finance) - scholarship study plan
2 - @vanya1999 Hello there. Thanks for coming to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will help you learn more. First...
Scholarshipvanya1999 - Oct 27, 2019 / Maria - Oct 31, 2019
|Studying in the UK Essay: Why these Schools Resonate so Deeply with my Future Aspirations
2 - @kaybee19 Hi there! Thanks for coming back to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how...
Scholarshipkaybee19 - Oct 28, 2019 / Maria - Oct 30, 2019
|Chevening scholarship essay on Leadership and Influence: Managing a team at workplace
3 - @pionpt Thank you so much for your response. I will omit those two sentences and rewrite the the...
ScholarshipIqbal3993 - Oct 29, 2019 / Iqbal3993 - Oct 30, 2019
|Study in the UK - Essay Chevening Scholarship How these programs will empower me in my career
2 - Hi @yiselgarza, I'm applying for Chevening as well and hope you will find my comment helpful. Firstly, your...
Scholarshipyiselgarza - Oct 29, 2019 / pionpt - Oct 30, 2019
|Chevening Networking Essay: How Your Network Can Influence Your Balance Sheet
2 - Good day kaybee. You are making your essay sound like a curriculum vitae. You should select one or just...
Scholarshipkaybee19 - Oct 28, 2019 / Praise Aninyei - Oct 29, 2019
|Leadership Essay: The Silent Trials and Burdens of Being a Leader Today
2 - @Freshguy Hello! Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, this feedback will enlighten you with your writing endeavors. If you have...
ScholarshipFreshguy - Oct 27, 2019 / Maria - Oct 29, 2019
|Leadership and Influence in urban planning - Making decisions as a leader.
2 - Hello Loreany, to get right into it you can shorten your introductory paragraph as it doesn't add substrate to...
ScholarshipLoreany - Oct 27, 2019 / kaybee19 - Oct 28, 2019
|Networking in Professional Environment - Risk Management
4 - You successfully achieved The task, however your sentence structure need to be tighter. You need to show your excellent...
Scholarshipizecsony5 - Oct 26, 2019 / kaybee19 - Oct 28, 2019
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