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|AAS MBA in Entrepreneurship - Why study your chosen subject?
2 - Watch out for your usage of preposition. I have noticed that this was a sporadic mistake that you had...
Scholarshipnaufalkamal - 1 day ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|United Nation (UN) co-certification. AAS - why this course or institution essay (330-400 words)
2 - Firstly, watch out for small technical mistakes. While these may be small, overlooking them can greatly harm your essay's...
Scholarshipazizbruder13 - 2 days ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|I have implemented change and reform in the biggest student organization in Indonesia
2 - Watch out for small mistakes in your essay that can compromise its overall quality. For instance, your first sentence...
Scholarshipiqbalfahmi - 1 day ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|AAS - Supporting Statement : Learning and Leadership / Education Study
3 - Thank You so much for your fast response and review. I am rewriting my essay and to be honest,...
ScholarshipVanesha - Apr 17, 2019 / Vanesha - Apr 18, 2019
|I want to move on to the next level - pursuing a master degree abroad in IT. Supporting Statement
Scholarshipzorii - Apr 18, 2019 / zorii - Apr 18, 2019
|Physician and pulmonologist - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - @drimran I recommend that you revise the formatting and structure of your essay in terms of the flow of...
Scholarshipdrimran - Apr 16, 2019 / Maria - Apr 16, 2019
|Master in IT - statement for AAS - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
3 - Thank you for the elaborated feedback! I'll try to answer these questions as much as I can within the...
Scholarshippaba - Apr 16, 2019 / paba - Apr 16, 2019
|Accounting and Finance - description of your study/research objectives and why want to pursue them
Scholarshipapachialfa - Apr 14, 2019 / apachialfa - Apr 16, 2019
|MASTER OF TESOL - AAS - HOW DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION?
Scholarshipnopraaw - Feb 27, 2019 / nopraaw - Apr 16, 2019
|Planning career as a lecturer. Australia Awards Scholarship 2019/2020 - Supporting Statement
3 - Thank you, Maria! The limitation on word count makes it difficult for me to write all things that come...
Scholarshipfadelim - Apr 14, 2019 / fadelim - Apr 14, 2019
|A piece of conventional wisdom that you have come to doubt.
2 - I firstly suggest that you divide your essay into three particular points. Not unless you were told to specifically...
ScholarshipTohtoro - Apr 13, 2019 / Maria - Apr 14, 2019
|OASIS AUSTRALIAN AWARD SCHOLARSHIP
2 - Your first paragraph was quite baffling considering that the structure was all over the place. You could prevent this...
ScholarshipPHARMACISTHEBA - Apr 11, 2019 / Maria - Apr 11, 2019
|LETTER OF MOTIVATION FOR A MSC IN SUSTAINABLE FOREST AND NATURE MANAGEMENT
ScholarshipToyin6991 - Apr 8, 2019 / Toyin6991 - Apr 8, 2019
|Australia Awards Scholarship Supporting Statement (Public Health)
4 - Hi, @Maria . Thanks for your feedback. I tried to rearrange my essay. What do you think about this?...
Scholarshipjihadillah - Apr 3, 2019 / jihadillah - Apr 8, 2019
|Fulbright Study Objective - psychology and business administration student
3 - Thank you again Maria, it is very helpful comments. I will revise it. But what do you mean about...
Scholarshipsuko - Apr 7, 2019 / suko - Apr 7, 2019
|Statement of financial assistance letter for The Bestway Foundation Scholarship
NEW - I am in desperate need I am working as a management trainee in a well-reputed insurance broker company....
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|Fulbright Personal Statement - study in the USA would be beneficial
3 - Thank you so much Maria, I tried to revise it. But I still think there are important shortcomings. I...
Scholarshipsuko - Mar 26, 2019 / suko - Apr 7, 2019
|AAS - study/work in a group and mutual help - 'solving a challenge, implementing reform' essay
5 - Thanks a lot for your comments, Maria. Not only they are useful, they are also truly motivating and positive....
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 6, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 6, 2019
|An Application for the World Bank Scholarship Program - Future Career Plans
2 - Technically speaking on your grammatical composition, I suggest that you look into your usage of punctuation and prepositions. There...
Scholarshipfiras89 - Apr 6, 2019 / Maria - Apr 6, 2019
|How you will use the knowledge, skills, and connections and avoid possible constraints?
3 - @ririamanah Dear Riri, In the first reason, you overestimated of being overseas alumni. Other comment is on third...
Scholarshipririamanah - Apr 4, 2019 / firas89 - Apr 6, 2019
|An Application for the World Bank Scholarship Program - most significant professional achievement
Scholarshipfiras89 - Apr 5, 2019 / firas89 - Apr 6, 2019
|AAS - teaching is my passion; pursuing master's degree in applied linguistics with TESOL
3 - After re-reading, I now agree with you. It does sound odd, a bit too odd probably. I have also...
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 4, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 5, 2019
|AAS - Knowledge / Skills / Procrastination - examples of use, as well as the constraints
3 - I see. So, it is basically adding my personal experiences into it, right? from admin: New review only for...
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 4, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 5, 2019
|English Teaching - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - AAS 2019
6 - Thank you so much, Maria. I will try my best to incorporate all of your suggestions into my essay...
ScholarshipDay999 - Apr 2, 2019 / Day999 - Apr 4, 2019
|Competition as the path to success. GKS-G. Masters degree in EDUCATION (South Korea)
3 - Thank you. I will fix all shortcomings mentioned by you. But, in general, personal statement is not so weak?...
Scholarshipnuraiym - Apr 2, 2019 / nuraiym - Apr 2, 2019
|"limited educational backgrounds in Korean language" - Personal Statement for GKS 2020
Scholarshipml1227 - Mar 29, 2019 / Constance - Mar 29, 2019
|Why I deserve this xxxxscholarship?
3 - @Maria @pc_pc Thanks for your feedback.This is the latest draft that I had made some changes. Please give...
Scholarshipjingning2929 - Mar 26, 2019 / jingning2929 - Mar 27, 2019
|How this particular study can help me achieve my career goals
2 - I suggest mentioning more than what you have provided here. A well-thought out essay could help boost your applications....
Scholarshipjves - Mar 25, 2019 / Maria - Mar 25, 2019
|Build Indonesia's Potential Through Border Economic Potential
3 - Darkknight1995, I suggest that you try shortening your sentences to make your thoughts more comprehensible. While lengthy sentences...
Scholarshipdarkknight1995 - Mar 23, 2019 / Maria - Mar 23, 2019
|Scholarship essay for Opportunity Fund Program by Usef...any suggestions ?
2 - NirajP, I admire how you started your essay by telling your personal story. Generally speaking, the flow of...
ScholarshipNirajP - Mar 23, 2019 / Maria - Mar 23, 2019
|NTU Scholarship Essay: The Value of Self-Discipline
2 - Agb2k, I think your essay is headed in the right direction. I would propose, though, trying to cut...
Scholarshipagb2k - Mar 17, 2019 / Maria - Mar 22, 2019
|Personal Statement to apply GKS 2019/University Track to MBA program
4 - Hello there. I'm trying to give you a constructive feedback as possible. I don't want to be rude or...
Scholarshiptheone - Mar 5, 2019 / hangvo2806 - Mar 22, 2019
|Law study - correct my scholarship form for the Board Enrollment
2 - First paragraph - I'd not mention that you're "busy" (it may suggest you cannot fully focus on this scholarship...
Scholarshiphermionedoan7012 - Mar 17, 2019 / Rich Monte - Mar 20, 2019
|Transitional market - KGSP- Personal Statement/ Economics
2 - 1) I think you can start your essay from the experience on why you interest/register in KGSP-Master in Economics....
Scholarshipmeerimsm - Mar 17, 2019 / Izzudinfarras - Mar 18, 2019
|Personal Statement for Master Degree Application in Islamic Finance
Scholarshipdanggraini - Mar 18, 2019 / Izzudinfarras - Mar 18, 2019
|My values and beliefs - emotional things in essay?
Scholarshiphelloqueensland - Mar 13, 2019 / danggraini - Mar 18, 2019
|"How your proposed study relates to ..." - Impact Statement for Commonwealth Scholarship
2 - I think it would be better you mention the university you're going to, then state the reasons why you...
Scholarshipcontentwriter - Mar 12, 2019 / danggraini - Mar 18, 2019
|Taking initiative - I contributed to implementing change or reform in my organization.
3 - Raja, your essay needs a more effective presentation. You are telling the reader that your friend started the organization...
Scholarshiphassan raza - Mar 14, 2019 / Holt - Mar 17, 2019
|The selection panel will want to understand how your proposed study will assist you in your career.
NEW - Respected seniors, Please suggest how I can improve this essay ? your help will mean a lot to me...
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|Development impact statement....Cancer Pharmacology
2 - Abdul, your essay responded to only 2 parts of the discussion requirements. You were able to present information regarding...
ScholarshipabdulB - Mar 12, 2019 / Holt - Mar 14, 2019
|Master of Mgt-Why are the skills and knowledge you describe important to your country development?
2 - Phonevilay, the skills required for proper management leaders in this sector is unclear. The discussion cannot reference general information...
ScholarshipSignature - Mar 11, 2019 / Holt - Mar 14, 2019
|Master of Management - What skills and knowledge do you hope to gain from your proposed study?
2 - Phonevilay, your essay sounds like you have just read the website of the school you wish to enroll in,...
ScholarshipSignature - Mar 11, 2019 / Holt - Mar 14, 2019
|Master in Political Science (Mongolia) - What are your plans when you finish your studies?
Scholarshipace789 - Mar 12, 2019 / ace789 - Mar 14, 2019
|Food Science - New Zealand scholarship skills
3 - focus on your second paragraph. Try to expand the expected skill and knowledge and their relevance to your development...
Scholarshipsastradamar - Mar 8, 2019 / ahy071 - Mar 11, 2019
|Realistic markets - SOP, KOREAN GOVERNMENT SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM
5 - @Holt I don`t doubt in your expertise in this issue. Just wanted to figure out the inconsistency between...
Scholarshipasmara1 - Mar 10, 2019 / asmara1 - Mar 11, 2019
|Masters in Education, Study Plan.
2 - Nuraiym, for the goal of study and study plan, you must develop a title for your research and an...
Scholarshipnur097 - Mar 10, 2019 / Holt - Mar 11, 2019
|Archaeology and Art History - GKS Statement of Purpose for Graduate School Scholarship
3 - Carina, if you are applying for the scholarship through the embassy track, then you should not be mentioning a...
Scholarshipcarisamano02 - Mar 6, 2019 / Holt - Mar 9, 2019
|SOP for scholarship in MSc Chemistry; King Fahad University of Petroleum and Minerals KFUPM award
Scholarshipahy071 - Mar 7, 2019 / ahy071 - Mar 8, 2019
|GKS Scholarship Future Plan after Study (Embassy Track)
3 - Hi @Poln4 Thanks for your feedback. I went to reword my essay to make it clearer and also rearrange...
Scholarshipracheltsk90 - Mar 8, 2019 / racheltsk90 - Mar 8, 2019
|GKS Scholarship Personal Statement - Masters in Clinical Psychology (Korea)
2 - Rachel, your interest to study in Korea, based on the motivation of spending time with a Korean is not...
Scholarshipracheltsk90 - Mar 7, 2019 / Holt - Mar 8, 2019
|Linguistics - Personal Statement Global Korean Scholarship
3 - In your last statement, you mentioned about how Yonsei University is a good school. However, you fail to mention...
ScholarshipPoln4 - Mar 7, 2019 / racheltsk90 - Mar 8, 2019
|Personal Statement for GKS application (MBA, MEXICO)
3 - @Holt, your comments are on point and have been incredibly motivating and helpful. I have changed what you suggested...
Scholarshipbretondp - Mar 2, 2019 / bretondp - Mar 7, 2019
|To gain more knowledge in the field of geology
3 - Aleixo, the essay that you wrote does not correspond to the expected response. The question is asking you to...
ScholarshipAleixo - Mar 6, 2019 / Holt - Mar 7, 2019
|KGS 2019 Personal statement (International Studies)
3 - Cris, as I read your essay, I came to the conclusion that you are another of the students who...
ScholarshipPaolaRO - Mar 4, 2019 / Holt - Mar 5, 2019
|Materials for energy and environment, cooperation with future leaders COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP ESSAY
Scholarshipschwenze - Feb 27, 2019 / gizemmutlu - Mar 4, 2019
|Statement Of Purpose- GKS 2019 - Computer science
5 - Ok, Thank you Sorry to mention you again, but I'm a little worry about lacking the content, it's not...
Scholarshipelinabrown - Mar 3, 2019 / elinabrown - Mar 4, 2019
|Personal Statement - GKS 2019/Embassy Track - Industrial Engineering
2 - Jose, there are two weak points in this essay that you need to address. The first, is the lack...
Scholarshipjlrm - Mar 3, 2019 / Holt - Mar 4, 2019
|PERSONAL STATEMENT - KGSP 2019 - ENGLISH LITERATURE
3 - Thank you so much for your breakdown ideas. I will try to revise it soon and consult it again...
ScholarshipNursanty - Mar 3, 2019 / Nursanty - Mar 3, 2019
|Economic Development - Commonwealth shared scholarship
ScholarshipNazeefi - Feb 28, 2019 / Nazeefi - Mar 3, 2019
|How is your program of interest related to sustainable energy
2 - Nmandi, the response that you gave feels like it was just a cut and paste of various job descriptions...
ScholarshipEbosh - Feb 28, 2019 / Holt - Mar 1, 2019
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