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Biomedical engineering - personal statement to apply the scholarship.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for you specific suggestions. I will revise carefully again....

ScholarshipEi Po Po Aung - May 1, 2022 / Ei Po Po Aung - May 1, 2022
Master of Energy Change - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution (AAS)

2 - You have chosen the same course at 2 universities, even if the names of the courses are different. The...

Scholarshipranugraha - Apr 28, 2022 / Holt - Apr 29, 2022
Self Introduction Essay for Exchange Program in Ajou University by an engineering student

4 - I think its a good one. But for personal statement it needs to be more specific. Since i'm also...

Scholarshipbragdon - Apr 27, 2022 / nea12345 - Apr 28, 2022
Personal Statement for Pusan National University Scholarship (Landscape Architecture)

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I will try to fix it on your advice....

ScholarshipLuvie - Apr 26, 2022 / Luvie - Apr 27, 2022
Self introduction for Pusan National University Scholarship as a transfer

3 - @Holt Thank u for your feedback. This is my very first time writing a scholar essay so I don't...

Scholarshipseraxsh - Apr 26, 2022 / seraxsh - Apr 26, 2022
Why did you chose your proposed study (Mathematics) and institution (UNSW)? AAS Essay

2 - The presentation is over the maximum word count by 85 words. The writer will need to edit the content...

ScholarshipAlfalfaaamru - Apr 26, 2022 / Holt - Apr 26, 2022
Applying for scholarship given by Pusan National University as a credit transferred student

3 - Dear Holt, Thank you for your kindness and time to give feedback of my essay to me. I started...

Scholarshipyaminn - Apr 23, 2022 / yaminn - Apr 25, 2022
MOTIVATION LETTER - MSC ECONOMICS; explain your professional qualifications and personal motivations

3 - Thank you very much, Holt. I will work on your corrections....

Scholarshipigee - Apr 23, 2022 / igee - Apr 24, 2022
Why did you choose Master of Data Science (Australia)? Proposed course and institution (AAS Essay)

2 - The first and second paragraphs are not relevant to this discussion. These may be removed and pinned for future...

Scholarshipyukizaka - Apr 24, 2022 / Holt - Apr 24, 2022
The Developer Company - How will the proposed study contribute to your career*?

2 - There are 2 ways you can approach this response. The first, is by keeping the first paragraph, but removing...

Scholarshipkmust798 - Apr 24, 2022 / Holt - Apr 24, 2022
AAS Essay - How will the proposed study contribute to your career*? (Master in Data Science)

3 - @Holt Great advices, Holt. thank you so much!...

Scholarshipantonjms - Apr 20, 2022 / antonjms - Apr 20, 2022
Sales & Marketing Manager - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform

2 - Take out the "etc." reference in the essay. That is a highly unprofessional reference/word and should not be used...

ScholarshipYun Bo Bo - Apr 19, 2022 / Holt - Apr 19, 2022
AN ESSAY OF MY CONTRIBUTION TO HOME COUNTRY DEVELOPMENT AFTER MY STUDIES ABROAD FOR A SCHOLARSHIP

3 - Thank you sir I will do as you have directed...

ScholarshipRichieRaph - Apr 18, 2022 / RichieRaph - Apr 19, 2022
Melbourne University Master of Education; Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - I appreciate the comment. I need more private help. Let me know further information plz. Please contact us at...

ScholarshipMika Fly - Apr 11, 2022 / Mika Fly - Apr 19, 2022
School band member - Applying for Kaist undergraduate scholarship

3 - Is selling flowers online (Instagram) considere as a business ?? I used to have a small project me and...

Scholarshiplaylay1234 - Apr 16, 2022 / laylay1234 - Apr 18, 2022
Incredible core courses and field of studies - why this course and institution?

2 - There is a need to present 2 course choices at 2 universities. This is a requirement that allows the...

ScholarshipHeain - Apr 16, 2022 / Holt - Apr 17, 2022
Master of Landscape Architecture - proposed course and institution

3 - I plan to create and design a good living environment for humans, which reminds them closer to nature and...

Scholarshipmustofa798 - Apr 14, 2022 / mahfuj840 - Apr 16, 2022
Australia Awards Scholarship Application Supporting Statement: Contribution to solving challenges

2 - The problem is the constant alternating between "we" and "I" in the presentation. Focus on the "I" aspect only....

Scholarshipthebigmade - Apr 14, 2022 / Holt - Apr 14, 2022
Serving humanity / Social work - Why did you choose proposed course and institutions? AAS

2 - The writer has provided a personal statement that is informative but not fully applicable to the information expectations of...

Scholarshipmkuria - Apr 11, 2022 / Holt - Apr 12, 2022
Either We Choose to Overcome It or Give Up

2 - Whatever opinion I have of you as a student is irrelevant as it may not be the same as...

Scholarshipmrkmdms - Apr 9, 2022 / Holt - Apr 10, 2022
Indonesian-Chinese misunderstandings. AAS: Solving a challenge and implementing change or reform

3 - @Holt Wow, thanks for your advice. I didn't expect I would get such a quick response. Actually, the language...

Scholarshipnaalasadan - Apr 7, 2022 / naalasadan - Apr 7, 2022
Sharing knowledge - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution

2 - Go directly to the point when responding to the prompt. Why did you choose your proposed course? I...

ScholarshipVermount - Apr 7, 2022 / Holt - Apr 7, 2022
International Sustainable Tourism Management ESSAY FOR AAS - WHY THIS COURSE AND INSTITUTION?

2 - The reviewer is not Vietnamese so you will need to spell out what QBB means and what it stands...

Scholarshiplukaku - Apr 3, 2022 / Holt - Apr 4, 2022
Essay AAS : Why did you choose your proposed course and institution*? Master Epidemiology

2 - In response to your question, allow me to cite the AAS policy on this matter. The ruling states that:...

Scholarshipkharismaridho - Mar 27, 2022 / Holt - Mar 27, 2022
Community development courses - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?

3 - @Holt Do you mean I need to add my work experiences?...

ScholarshipEi Ei - Mar 26, 2022 / Ei Ei - Mar 26, 2022
AAS Essay (How will the proposed study contribute to your career*) Master degree Aquaculture

3 - Thanks for ur advice I will immediately change that......

Scholarshiprizkilauk - Mar 7, 2022 / rizkilauk - Mar 25, 2022
AAS ESSAY-WHY DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION ? MASTER OF SCIENCE IN AGRICULTURE

2 - The essay is over the character count by almost 100 characters. There is a 2000 character limit for this...

Scholarshipfiraanee - Mar 24, 2022 / Holt - Mar 25, 2022
GKS - International Business Major - Personal Statement; application for study in Korea

2 - I do not know where to begin with the review of this essay. It is just a horrible piece...

Scholarshipoyik1206 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 21, 2022
GKS Personal Statement - Where there is a will, there is a way.

2 - The essay does not deliver a strong development in terms of Global Studies. The applicant has a strong backstory...

Scholarshipalebe13 - Mar 21, 2022 / Holt - Mar 21, 2022
The operational staff - How have you contributed to solving a challenge and to implementing change

2 - If a problem only happened sometimes then there was no urgency to solve the situation. The presentation only shows...

Scholarshiplemonade97 - Mar 18, 2022 / Holt - Mar 19, 2022
GKS SCHOLARSHIP FOR TRANSPORTATION ENGINEERING MAJOR. Traffic problems in Indonesia

2 - One thing that applicants must understand is that the reviewers are interested to get to know the applicant based...

Scholarshipreyhanfbrn - Mar 18, 2022 / Holt - Mar 18, 2022
LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN-GKS GRADUATE PROGRAM- MASTER'S IN ARTS AND DESIGN

4 - Your essay does not explain about your study plan and does not answer the question. You should tell the...

Scholarshipharshita - Mar 4, 2022 / narezng - Mar 18, 2022
[GKS Scholarship] Language Study Plan - AR/VR Technology

4 - Imo, it will be good if you can divided your plan into two parts, Like before coming to korea...

Scholarshiptatamalfoy - Mar 11, 2022 / narezng - Mar 18, 2022
GKS Personal Statement- Public Relations and Advertising major

2 - Try to bring up a more impressive motivation for your interest in public relations without having to go back...

Scholarshipnarezng - Mar 18, 2022 / Holt - Mar 18, 2022
Personal Statement - Fashion Design. Family and Education background, extracurricular activities

3 - thank you for the advice, but it's only the quote i placed there thats not originally mine. everything else...

ScholarshipMunirat - Mar 17, 2022 / Munirat - Mar 17, 2022
Pioneer trailblazing research in several fields - Essay for UK Scholarship Application

2 - The writer can do better than to simply present an extended bullet form of his accomplishments. Having read the...

ScholarshipGarryLyon400 - Mar 17, 2022 / Holt - Mar 17, 2022
Statement Of Purpose (my study and self introduction) for POSCO scholarship

3 - @Holt thank you for your feedback . i will try my best to fix it...

ScholarshipNishi1977 - Mar 16, 2022 / Nishi1977 - Mar 16, 2022
Personal Statement for International Health Management

3 - @Holt Good day Thanks for the feedback Can you help fine tune my personal statement? - please contact us...

ScholarshipCepkorby - Mar 15, 2022 / Cepkorby - Mar 15, 2022
Organizational Effectiveness and Performance -How will the proposed study contribute to your career?

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. Your response is very much appreciated. I will take your advice....

Scholarshipjkitawal - Mar 13, 2022 / jkitawal - Mar 13, 2022
GKS-G Personal Statements Clinical Psychology ; University Track to Yonsei University

4 - @Julyffff thank you so much, I will write it again better...

Scholarshipaisy12 - Feb 26, 2022 / aisy12 - Mar 12, 2022
Genetic Engineering - GKS-Undergraduate- Future plan

2 - You are getting ahead of yourself. The masters course you plan to take up is not yet relevant at...

Scholarshipamn1234 - Mar 11, 2022 / Holt - Mar 11, 2022
Learning and class schedule - Korean/English language study plan

5 - @adriennguyen thank you so much. i will make the necessary changes to it...

ScholarshipMunirat - Mar 3, 2022 / Munirat - Mar 10, 2022
The contribution of the proposed study to your career as a geoscientist - AAS

3 - Thankyou for your help in reviewing my essay. I will do your suggestions to make my essay stronger. Tahnkyouu...

Scholarshiplemonade97 - Mar 5, 2022 / lemonade97 - Mar 6, 2022
Study plan - Fashion, Textile or Designer GKS - 2023

4 - @rafaellarodri I think you don't need to write year-to-year plans in point form, write year-by-year plans in paragraphs form....

Scholarshiprafaellarodri - Feb 23, 2022 / milaniawati - Mar 4, 2022
STUDY PLAN GKS 2022_Graduate_Radiologic Imaging Technology

3 - @Holt Thank you for your advices, i will fix it ....

Scholarshipmilaniawati - Mar 4, 2022 / milaniawati - Mar 4, 2022
PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GKS SCHOLARSHIP 2022_GRADUATE_ ARTS AND DESIGN

3 - @Holt thank you for the advice. I will work on it....

Scholarshipharshita - Mar 4, 2022 / harshita - Mar 4, 2022
MSC IN IMPACT ENTREPRENEURSHIP

3 - Hi Holt. Thank you for your help. However, I do not think that we are talking about the...

Scholarshipjeoo - Mar 1, 2022 / jeoo - Mar 2, 2022
GKS Personal Statement/ Master's Degree in Counseling Psychology

4 - maybe you can focus more on why you choose that major and why in korea, coz as i understood...

Scholarshipkappk - Feb 25, 2022 / slyny - Mar 1, 2022
My paintings and sharing. An attempt to think or do things differently

3 - i just wanna a real experience...

Scholarshipladybird123 - Feb 27, 2022 / ladybird123 - Feb 28, 2022
About my stay in Sweden - SI Scholarship letter of motivation

3 - Thank you very much for your comment, I will adjust the test accordingly!...

ScholarshipXorelle - Feb 25, 2022 / Xorelle - Feb 25, 2022
NTU SCHOLARSHIP Values and beliefs you hold strongly. How you have demonstrated these.

2 - There is no personal insight in this response. These are mere observations provided as generalized references to the question....

ScholarshipGaurikkaa - Feb 25, 2022 / Holt - Feb 25, 2022
Health workers - knowledge gained from your master studies to contribute to your home

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for going through the work. I will put in the necessary recommendations. Thank you....

ScholarshipAlh - Feb 22, 2022 / Alh - Feb 24, 2022
A Bridge Between Two Countries - Global Korea Scholarship - Personal Statement

2 - This is a truly personal statement that has disregarded the graduate focus of the applicant. It is more about...

Scholarshipaspb2022 - Feb 23, 2022 / Holt - Feb 23, 2022
Insurance company and accounting - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR APPLYING GKS

3 - Helped me It also feels a little on the short side. Try to use more of the...

Scholarshipnitakajole - Feb 14, 2022 / aspb2022 - Feb 23, 2022
In your opinion, how would an SI scholarship for master's studies in Sweden be valuable

4 - @Scholarship I believe this is not detailed enough. It looks like it was written by the applicant and then...

ScholarshipScholarship - Feb 15, 2022 / felixtobi - Feb 23, 2022
Serving for health - GKS graduate degree program, personal statement

3 - @ll12 Your paper is good, but it lacks some details about your traits of character, own achievements, and so...

Scholarshipll12 - Feb 15, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 16, 2022
Study Plan to improve Foreign Languages (Korea and English degree course) before and after you come

5 - @Renu1973 I think the outline that you want to deliver is good enough. However, I suggest you to wrote...

ScholarshipRenu1973 - Feb 4, 2022 / helloitsme - Feb 15, 2022
Designing, assessing, economic policy - Letter of motivation for Erasmus Mundus EPOG+

4 - I'm not an expert in writing the motivation letters, statements of purpose, etc., but your paper looks good enough....

ScholarshipNhilist - Jan 28, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 14, 2022
OKP scholarship, study Master of Public Health (MPH): Health Systems Policy and Management track

2 - The infomation provided is a bit scattered in approach. The writer needs to focus the writing in a chronological...

ScholarshipAhmedd - Feb 14, 2022 / Holt - Feb 14, 2022
Melbourne University Personal Statement for finance: 500 words maximum

3 - @tientran I think it is good, it needs some modifications....

Scholarshiptientran - Feb 9, 2022 / Ahmedd - Feb 14, 2022

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