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|KGSP Personal Statement - Graduate Program - Applied Linguistics
NEW - tireless efforts and perseverance Graduating with a GPA of 3.72/4.0 and receiving scholarships in 6 out of 8...
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|LANGUAGE STUDY PLAN FOR GKS-U (3 PAGES)
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|Commonwealth split site scholarship developmental impact 2021
NEW - Prompt: Development Impact part 1 1.How your proposed study relates to: a) development issues at the global, national and...
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|Development essay for the next commonwealth scholarship window 2022-2023
ScholarshipMullah - 2 days ago / Mullah - 1 day ago
|Application Essay for United World College (2022-2024) - personal statement
Scholarshipabhi2312 - Jul 8, 2021 / abhi2312 - Jul 27, 2021
|GKS Personal Statement for Environmental Engineering - "dreaming bigger"
Scholarshipnoxious19 - Jul 8, 2021 / vikedarliyasi - Jul 22, 2021
|THE OPPORTUNITY TO GRAB WITH BOTH HANDS - GKS IN MEDIA AND COMMUNICATION PERSONAL STATEMENT
Scholarshipsimranmavi03 - Jul 16, 2021 / simranmavi03 - Jul 17, 2021
|Scholarship application essay for a Masters in Global Health Sc and Epidemiology
Scholarshipketu2 - Jun 28, 2021 / ketu2 - Jun 30, 2021
|Turning Points in My Life - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement
2 - The scholarship application and appropriate written interview requirements will not be available until September - October. The information requirements...
Scholarshipukh_nisa - Jun 29, 2021 / Holt - Jun 30, 2021
|GKS-U SCHOLARSHIP /STUDY PLAN - LANGUAGE COURSE/
Scholarshipdxqos - Jun 24, 2021 / Harinn - Jun 27, 2021
|GKS U scholarship application - to innovate for business and economics sectors in Indonesia
2 - This essay is confusing to read due to grammatical inaccuracies. Though the essay does its best to respond to...
Scholarshipkeyshara - Jun 23, 2021 / Holt - Jun 25, 2021
|Study Plan for GKS-G Scholarship - Study Plan - Computer Science Undergraduate
Scholarshipjunhao820 - Jun 20, 2021 / junhao820 - Jun 20, 2021
|Agriculture and Pest Management - Personal statement for commonwealth scholarship
2 - Save for some researched information, this essay is devoid of any actual content that relates to the given prompts....
ScholarshipNana_Kwabena - Jun 18, 2021 / Holt - Jun 19, 2021
|Scientists use living animal to carry our research. Some people think it is interesting.
2 - While the topic is controversial, the presented discussion, which asks for your opinion to be presented, leans more...
Scholarshipducklaconvit - Jun 15, 2021 / Holt - Jun 16, 2021
|Personal Statement for apply GKS-U 2022 - Dept. of Nuclear Engineering
3 - @Holt Thank you for your review. I'll be back to you with the new personal statement in the next...
ScholarshipChanihyuck - Jun 3, 2021 / Chanihyuck - Jun 10, 2021
|Battling against cancer - Research interest for a PhD application
2 - You need to balance the discussion between 3 aspects: - Your research interest - The potential importance of...
Scholarshipayuhutami - May 31, 2021 / Holt - Jun 1, 2021
|Elevate Mental Health Awareness Scholarship
3 - In my opinion, the entire story has yet to justify your decision of becoming a nurse. I think it...
Scholarshipsjplumphippos - May 28, 2021 / ayuhutami - May 31, 2021
|Australia Award Scholarship for Master of Architecture - proposed course and institution choice
2 - This is not a competitive presentation. You sound like you are writing a personal statement than a professional motivation....
Scholarshipjhatesnakeu - May 29, 2021 / Holt - May 30, 2021
|IMSISS 2020 Personal Statement - Scholarship declined
2 - Please do not think or believe that you were not considered for the scholarship based on a weak motivation...
ScholarshipJourneyman - May 28, 2021 / Holt - May 29, 2021
|WHY DID YOU PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION - AAS MASTER OF PUBLIC HEALTH
5 - With what NGO or government entity? Cooperation with such groups early on shows that the studies connote a...
ScholarshipVi_Dar - May 27, 2021 / Holt - May 28, 2021
|South Korea is developed technologically - GKS-U Personal statement review
3 - @Holt Oh, sorry I didn't mentioned earlier but this essay is from last year's application. We were instructed to...
ScholarshipDeanRuno - May 25, 2021 / DeanRuno - May 28, 2021
|AAS Scholarship: Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? - Master of Public Policy
Scholarshipannisar - May 26, 2021 / Holt - May 27, 2021
|Reasons for choosing Korea as study abroad destination
4 - You fail to respond to the prompt properly. You need to explain why South Korea attracts you as a...
Scholarshipmelseonnn - May 23, 2021 / techmind20 - May 26, 2021
|Plan After Study - Posco Asia Fellowship
3 - Try to breakdown your plans into three parts: short-term, mid-term, and long-term plan. Short term plan is the goal...
ScholarshipSalimakmur - May 23, 2021 / Ulaai - May 26, 2021
|AAS - Why did you choose this - Economic Growth
2 - Your reasons for wanting to pursue higher studies are purely research based. It would help if you could offer...
Scholarshipimsyw - May 25, 2021 / Holt - May 25, 2021
|Renewable energy - Study goal - Posco Asia Fellowship
ScholarshipSalimakmur - May 18, 2021 / Salimakmur - May 23, 2021
|I was not selected and I want to know why! | Personal statement of KGSP/GKS 2021
4 - In my opinion, the first paragraph of your essay could have been more unique. "Clean buildings, fantastic scenery, ..."...
Scholarshipapiw - May 21, 2021 / techmind20 - May 23, 2021
|Why Master of International Sustainable Tourism Management as a graduate program in Australia? AAS
2 - Huh? You never mentioned what that was. You better offer a clearer professional motivating factor. You should...
Scholarshipshy2shine - May 22, 2021 / Holt - May 22, 2021
|Pharmacobiochemistry and environmental biochemistry; Study objective for Fullbright students program
2 - Restate this part to create a global impact on this field of study. The scholarship gives weight to...
Scholarshipimaoakpe - May 20, 2021 / Holt - May 21, 2021
|Essay for a medical 'PAINWEEK' conference scholarship
2 - The essay should lose the "We" references since this in an individual rather than group application. The reference to...
Scholarshipgpatama - May 20, 2021 / Holt - May 21, 2021
|When Angklung being the Learning Instrument in Europe (Motivation Letter for applying PETaL EMJMD)
Scholarshipmad_amran - May 20, 2021 / mad_amran - May 20, 2021
|Starting a business - AAS Scholarship Questions
Scholarshippkla - May 19, 2021 / pkla - May 19, 2021
|MSMEs Development - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution? (AAS)
Scholarshipsaritasph - May 17, 2021 / saritasph - May 19, 2021
|AAS Scholarship - Contribution to solving problems
2 - Work on presenting your work background first. Establish how or what your observations wire that led to the research...
Scholarshiphoangnam - May 18, 2021 / Holt - May 18, 2021
|Life is only a chance - Personal Statement for GKS (Global Korea Scholarship)
3 - @Holt Hi, thankyou in advance for giving me a response. Actually I wrote this essay for GKS Undergraduate Program....
Scholarshipvidyainjiela - May 14, 2021 / vidyainjiela - May 16, 2021
|Artificial intelligence engineer - Essay for bachelor's degree scholarship
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback. I agree with you . But they asked me in another paragraph to...
Scholarshipyesmin - May 14, 2021 / yesmin - May 15, 2021
|THE REPLY FOR AAS ESSAY - MY THREE PRACTICAL EXAMPLES AND POTENTIAL CONSTRAINTS
Scholarshipmiumiu18 - Apr 26, 2021 / miumiu18 - May 13, 2021
|The Ministry of Finance - STUDY OBJECTIVE FULBRIGHT SCHOLARSHIP PROGRAM
2 - Your study/research objective is limited to your local career path alone. As a Fulbright scholar, your main objective should...
Scholarshipgonzforever - May 11, 2021 / Holt - May 12, 2021
|AAS Supporting Statement - Master of Urban Design and Master of Urban Planning
2 - Start the essay by introducing your academic background and relevant work experience. Do not make that information selective based...
ScholarshipJeffrisip - May 8, 2021 / Holt - May 8, 2021
|AAS Application Supporting statement - justify postgraduate study in transportation choice
2 - Use the opening paraghap to explain your work related reasons for choosing these courses. That means, you will need...
Scholarshipputri famelia - May 6, 2021 / Holt - May 6, 2021
|The reason why I choose the Public Health course
Scholarshipkurulu - Apr 15, 2021 / kurulu - May 6, 2021
|Why I take master of agribusiness? AAS Aplication
4 - Dear Holt, thank you a million for your invaluable support I highly appreciate your comments and will certainly use...
ScholarshipFarmer - May 3, 2021 / Farmer - May 5, 2021
|Why Master of Governance and Public Policy at the University of Queensland? AAS Application 2021
ScholarshipApaajaboleh1 - May 2, 2021 / Apaajaboleh1 - May 3, 2021
|Practical examples on how I will use my knowledge - AAS (Master of International Trade)
2 - The constraint that you present must coincide with the solutions and help that the courses you will be studying...
ScholarshipOnbr - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
|Why Do I Want To Become An Exchange Student In The US.? - scholarship
3 - Hi @juliemikulova In my humble opinion, this essay is too emotional. Not to mention that this essay is...
Scholarshipjuliemikulova - Apr 28, 2021 / Ratudestiani - Apr 29, 2021
|Essay for AAS Scholarship: Why I choose supply chain management course
Scholarshipaditya23 - Apr 28, 2021 / Ratudestiani - Apr 29, 2021
|Diet / Nutrition - practical examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills you will gain
Scholarshiplukewaqanivere - Apr 26, 2021 / lukewaqanivere - Apr 27, 2021
|I've always been interested in urban planning, that's why I'm pursuing master degree in this field
2 - There are 2 things that your essay fails to address in relation to your chosen course. The first is...
Scholarshipdaskapitallll - Apr 25, 2021 / Holt - Apr 25, 2021
|Civil Engineering focused on Geotechnics - AAS Supporting statement
2 - The national program and your desired contribution are not well connected in the second paragraph. It would be better...
Scholarshipncincinci - Apr 23, 2021 / Holt - Apr 24, 2021
|AAS - Political Science - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - Your essay is way over the standard character maximum of 2000 characters. You need to edit your content into...
Scholarshipcalicookies - Apr 22, 2021 / Holt - Apr 23, 2021
|Political science - [AAS] Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
5 - Hi @calicookies AAS essays have 2000 character limit, which is around 300 words. I would recommend to shorten the...
Scholarshipcalicookies - Apr 21, 2021 / brsn - Apr 23, 2021
|PhD in Engineering (AAS Supporting Statement)
3 - Rather than speaking much of your undergraduate study, you need to focus more on your master degree and research....
Scholarshipmasamune_date - Apr 20, 2021 / calicookies - Apr 22, 2021
|Entrepreneurship and Innovation - [AAS] Why did you choose your proposed course?
3 - I suggest you to not waste length of paragraph on explaining the entrepreneurship situation in Indonesia. You can minimize...
Scholarshipandrianiwd - Apr 20, 2021 / calicookies - Apr 22, 2021
|World Food Programme - FULBRIGHT STUDY OBJECTIVES
3 - Dear Holt, thank you very much for your invaluable support, you are the Best! I highly appreciate your comments...
ScholarshipFelex - Apr 20, 2021 / Felex - Apr 21, 2021
|Why am I applying for Master of Data Science? Proposed course and institution (AAS Essay)
2 - Good job! Well developed, insightful, and forward projecting. It shows that you have given a great thought to your...
Scholarshipsatriaa - Apr 20, 2021 / Holt - Apr 21, 2021
|Master's degree in transportation - proposed course and institution
3 - I suggest you to be more analytical to explain the background of your study in the first paragraph. The...
ScholarshipMadam - Apr 19, 2021 / miftahul - Apr 20, 2021
|Analyzing complex problems - solving a challenge and to implementing change or reform
NEW - Over the past four years, I have implemented my ability on analyzing complex problems, theoretical and conceptual understanding and...
Scholarshipmiftahul - Apr 20, 2021 / — -
|Essay on Contribution of Proposed Study to Career Plan - AAS application for MBA Program
2 - You only gave a description of your career plan. There is no reference to how the learning at the...
ScholarshipOscarPangestu - Apr 12, 2021 / Holt - Apr 20, 2021
|ESP practitioner - TESOL and the prospect for my future career (AAS)
2 - This is not a definitive career goal. There is uncertainty in your presentation thus, making the contribution of...
ScholarshipDA786 - Apr 10, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|How will Master of International Trade course contribute to my career - Australia Awards Scholarship
2 - Change the first paragraph to reflect that you will be changing your career path from foreign relations manager to...
Scholarshipbrsn - Apr 18, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
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