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Using what you know about Edtech in Africa and Arizona State Uni, why are you interested in this?

3 - Thank you very much for your feedback...

ScholarshipChukwuagozie - 20 hrs ago / Chukwuagozie - 6 hrs ago
GKS - Study plan Language Before and after (Undergraduate); practice journal and Korean classes

2 - The prior to arrival activities for language development of both English and Hangul are good enough. It shows that...

Scholarshipmiesse - 1 day ago / Holt - 15 hrs ago
Questbridge Short Answer Essay - Proudest Achievement/Moment; I led prayer at the Islamic center

2 - The essay feels under developed. While the first and second paragraphs are striking and somewhat memorable, there is a...

Scholarshipzamzap - 1 day ago / Holt - 15 hrs ago
Names can determine one's destiny; the context in which you have grown up, formed your aspiration

2 - The context in which you grew up and formed your aspirations should not be focused on the name pronounciation...

Scholarshiphli6855 - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
College prompt for the scholarhip essay on my proudest achievements happened so far

2 - Left what? Home? School? An organization? This sentence should set up the whole statement instead, it confuses the...

Scholarshipaytaiwo - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
CAREER PLAN - COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIPS

3 - @Holt Thank you for the insights. I'll make improvements bearing in mind your inputs....

ScholarshipPettypet - Sep 23, 2022 / Pettypet - 2 days ago
Mastery Choir - QuestBridge National College Match Short Answer

2 - This essay is good in terms of narration. It delivers a strong connection between the accomplishment and the overall...

Scholarshiplt3737 - Sep 23, 2022 / Holt - Sep 24, 2022
Questbridge Personal Essay - Context in which you grew up - "Life in America"

3 - I think you should touch up more on how the lack of a social security number affected your plans...

Scholarshipsaady1519 - Sep 23, 2022 / lt3737 - Sep 23, 2022
COMMONWEALTH SCHOLARSHIP: Development Impact statement

3 - @Holt Kindly review the updated statement below. Your inputs are highly appreciated. Thanks. CSC Impact statement Theme: Strengthening...

ScholarshipPettypet - Sep 22, 2022 / Pettypet - Sep 23, 2022
I am interested in Kpop. 2023 GKS-U language study plan to improve foreign languages.

6 - I agree with @Mowa. The mention of Kpop might be a phrase/ statement used by so many applicants. I...

ScholarshipHannakei - Aug 31, 2022 / Pettypet - Sep 22, 2022
"For the longest time I dreamed"- GKS- U Personal Statement

2 - since the applicant is not pursuing a pre-med course, it is irrelevant to be discussing that at the start...

ScholarshipMowa - Sep 22, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
KGSP - personal statement - physics; I see a versatile and significant vocation

4 - @Holt Thank you for your advice! :)...

Scholarshipkiale - Sep 14, 2022 / kiale - Sep 22, 2022
Digitally talented person. Chevening Scholarships: Leadership & Influence

2 - This is neither the kind of leadership nor influencing essay that will make it past the screening round. It...

Scholarshipinekeyuliam - Sep 21, 2022 / Holt - Sep 22, 2022
Ambitious things in life - ugrad SOP

2 - The statement is so general and common in its content that it is actually boring to read. It lacks...

ScholarshipKenChicken - Sep 20, 2022 / Holt - Sep 21, 2022
Economics GKS personal statement undergraduate - public economics

3 - @Holt I took your advice and reduced one third of my essay and I am realocating the points properly....

Scholarshipgeovannafrra - Sep 18, 2022 / geovannafrra - Sep 20, 2022
Accounting - Statement of purpose for POSCO Scholarship

4 - I am not a teacher, it is just my humble comment depending on my experience, so don't be so...

Scholarshipnitakajole - Sep 13, 2022 / mt30 - Sep 15, 2022
Economics and Abroad - GKS U personal statement; WHAT MAKES YOU WISH TO STUDY IN SOUTH KOREA?

4 - I did something similar in my first draft, and after I read it it felt kind of childish and...

ScholarshipMabel09 - Sep 13, 2022 / cruellapoisonz - Sep 15, 2022
KGSP: STUDY PLAN FOR CHILD AND FAMILY STUDIES

2 - Remove the link to the website. The reviewer is not going to bother to peruse it so save the...

ScholarshipSarah009 - Sep 13, 2022 / Holt - Sep 14, 2022
Personal Statement - INTERNATIONAL BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION - GKS 2023-U

3 - Hello i think you need to do a research first about the ideal essay structure and you dont have...

ScholarshipOH Mari - Sep 12, 2022 / nitakajole - Sep 13, 2022
Korean films - KGSP Scholarship for undergraduate . GOAL OF STUDY PLAN

NEW - Korean films Korean films was one of the big factors that made me decide to pursue a major...

Scholarshipmylife1234 - Sep 13, 2022 / — -
Korea Trip - GKS - Language Study Plan

3 - Try specifying free language apps, pdf books etc you will use to learn Hangul...

Scholarshipfamma12345 - Sep 10, 2022 / julia_stn7 - Sep 12, 2022
KGSP 2023 Scholarship for undergraduate. Multimedia Communication

3 - Merged: KGSP 2023 Scholarship for undergraduate . Communication Major When I entered a high school in the...

Scholarshipmylife1234 - Sep 11, 2022 / mylife1234 - Sep 12, 2022
Grew up in India - Study plan for Global KOREA SCHOLARSHIP

7 - @mylife1234 I mentioned where I'm from because I'm come from a nation which has many cultures so it's easy...

ScholarshipTan18 - Sep 9, 2022 / Tan18 - Sep 12, 2022
GKS-U PERSONAL STATEMENT - DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION.

4 - I feel English is not your first language. Please get it reviewed by some professional whi can help you...

ScholarshipOlisan19 - Sep 4, 2022 / Tan18 - Sep 9, 2022
'How money is an essential in our life prosperity?' GKS-U personal statement

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for you feedback and suggestion, it will help me to improve my essay....

Scholarshipnazwa_adz - Sep 7, 2022 / nazwa_adz - Sep 8, 2022
"My life the way i want it" GKS-U Scholarship Personal Statement

6 - @Opeyemichristy Hello!! thank you for your advice! I will work on it! do not have many extracurriculars about my...

Scholarshipleo0528 - Sep 2, 2022 / leo0528 - Sep 7, 2022
Motivation with which you apply for this program / GKS U 2023 / Economics major

5 - In one para you write how you have seen your parents seen struggling and in another you write how...

ScholarshipPrity03 - Sep 1, 2022 / Tan18 - Sep 5, 2022
I never thought the school media team would be a turning point in my life - GKS personal statement

4 - First of all, check your grammar please. And second, instead of answering "each" guidelines, write an essay with a...

ScholarshipMaLina - Aug 18, 2022 / Olisan19 - Sep 4, 2022
Strong people - GKS-U personal statement, major- cse.

4 - The guidelines has already told what to writes in the essay, if you can't really grasp what the guidelines...

ScholarshipMansii - Sep 1, 2022 / Olisan19 - Sep 3, 2022
The Association - CHEVENING LEADERSHIP ESSAY

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback! I will definitely try to use a progressive leadership focus. One...

ScholarshipIPKAT - Aug 30, 2022 / IPKAT - Aug 31, 2022
GKS - Personal statement, biological sciences - motivations, family, experiences, activities, awards

3 - @Holt Thank you for your insightful review. I appreaciate your help and the guidelines provided by you. I will...

ScholarshipKazuyuki1 - Aug 23, 2022 / Kazuyuki1 - Aug 24, 2022
My Chevening scholarship work experience descriptions

3 - Thanks a lot @Holt This job descriptions is main problem now... Please how do I go about it?...

ScholarshipDonwizzy21 - Aug 20, 2022 / Donwizzy21 - Aug 21, 2022
The leadership? It is more of an attitude than a skill; future leaders or influencers essay

2 - Well, this is definitely a leadership essay but it is not a convincing influencing essay since it is focused...

Scholarshipderrick 123 - Aug 20, 2022 / Holt - Aug 20, 2022
Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world

2 - This is a well written personal statement that can be used for other scholarship applications. It is not a...

Scholarshipgood job - Aug 17, 2022 / Holt - Aug 17, 2022
Questbridge National College Match: Proudest Achievement Short Answer Question

2 - Well, this is certainly a character building explanation if I ever read one. Martial arts disciples are known for...

Scholarshippweets - Aug 11, 2022 / Holt - Aug 11, 2022
"I want to be a superhero" - Gks-u personal statement

3 - Thank you so much for your valuable time and review. I will correct the mentioned things....

ScholarshipTan18 - Aug 10, 2022 / Tan18 - Aug 10, 2022
Vision and Science - Leadership and influence / Chevening Scholarship Application:

2 - The problem is that the applicant has discussed only the theoretical aspect of his leadership and influencing skills. This...

ScholarshipMohammedoat - Aug 9, 2022 / Holt - Aug 10, 2022
Impacted by corona-virus crisis. GKS scholarship personal statement for graduate program

3 - @Holt ok sir thank you for your advice if I show how I got more exposure to the language...

ScholarshipSubhratri - Aug 7, 2022 / Subhratri - Aug 8, 2022
Special teaching - GKS UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT

5 - which makes me sure that maybe, English is my passion. you have written this line in your essay but...

ScholarshipOlisan19 - Aug 1, 2022 / Subhratri - Aug 7, 2022
GKS undergraduate personal statement for media and communications major

3 - I think you should also provide some facts like how you met korean language , and this scholarship will...

ScholarshipReina - Aug 6, 2022 / Subhratri - Aug 7, 2022
Metaverse - GKS SCHOLARSHIP UNDERGRADUATE PERSONAL STATEMENT (CSE)

2 - For starters, please remove all of the caps lock representations in the essay. Seeing as this is a formal...

ScholarshipApurba_unique - Jul 19, 2022 / Holt - Jul 20, 2022
Imagine being a young girl - BBA Personal statement, GKS scholarship undergraduate

3 - @Holt Thank you. I will format it by keeping those points in my mind 😊...

ScholarshipBlackqueen - Jul 2, 2022 / Blackqueen - Jul 4, 2022
Monash Indonesia - Data Science Scholarship

2 - There is no clear vision for your career path in this essay. The compilation of ideas may have proven...

Scholarshipyedijamessa - Jul 1, 2022 / Holt - Jul 2, 2022
'Financial problems'. GKS-U Personal Statement Psychology; Embassy Track

2 - The essay is bordering on incoherent. Though the writer tried his best to express himself in English, his lack...

ScholarshipCH0CO0PIE - Jun 23, 2022 / Holt - Jun 24, 2022
Describe which single activity/interest represents your most meaningful commitment and why

2 - The first sentence is unnecessary. Introductions are not necessary when writing a character count sensitive response. Just mention the...

Scholarshipjenny7 - Jun 15, 2022 / Holt - Jun 15, 2022
Contributions to both countries after scholarship?

2 - Where is the focus on how you will contribute to the relationship of Mynmar and Japan? The focus is...

Scholarshipeimyat - Jun 14, 2022 / Holt - Jun 14, 2022
Japan. Trigger for having interest in this country?

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your advice. The scholarship asked me to write three essays and the next...

Scholarshipeimyat - Jun 12, 2022 / eimyat - Jun 13, 2022
Studying in Japan to transform my passion into a profession

4 - @Reaper909052 I don't really get what you means by: "Since I first came into contact with a computer, I...

ScholarshipReaper909052 - Jun 9, 2022 / IncognitoRabbit - Jun 11, 2022
What is your weak point and how did you manage overcome it in your past experiences?

2 - Ok. The weak point has been identified. Now, explain it's negative effect on you as a prison. The weak...

ScholarshipDorritos - Jun 9, 2022 / Holt - Jun 10, 2022
Describe your motivation to study in Japan and in which field you're interested

2 - This is not an essay that the reviewer will have a tendency to accept. It does not show a...

ScholarshipDeeyoeTopic - Jun 8, 2022 / Holt - Jun 8, 2022
State the reason for studying in Japan and what you wish to study at a university in Japan

2 - This can be used as a general reference point for a properly developed essay response. It at least gives...

Scholarshipalita - Jun 6, 2022 / Holt - Jun 6, 2022
Valedictorian Admission Form (Grade 8) - what qualities do you posses

3 - @Holt Thanks for your review, your critique is thoroughly appreciated. The only directions that I was given were that...

ScholarshipMkDeltaXD - Jun 5, 2022 / MkDeltaXD - Jun 5, 2022
An achievement related to my future - the internship role at Amazon as a Security Engineering Intern

2 - You totally missed the point. The idea was to expound on the reasons why you consider your internship at...

ScholarshipSubi - May 28, 2022 / Holt - May 28, 2022
Computer science - Reasons for choosing KAIST

2 - Fold in the reasons why your learning interests can be met only by KAIST. Discuss how the educational system...

Scholarshipzephyrantes - May 25, 2022 / Holt - May 25, 2022
Statement of purpose for Masters degree in Dental Technology

2 - The essay is difficult to understand for the most part because of the applicant's lack of control over English...

ScholarshipHassan bulus - May 20, 2022 / Holt - May 20, 2022
Biomedical engineering - personal statement to apply the scholarship.

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for you specific suggestions. I will revise carefully again....

ScholarshipEi Po Po Aung - May 1, 2022 / Ei Po Po Aung - May 1, 2022
Master of Energy Change - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution (AAS)

2 - You have chosen the same course at 2 universities, even if the names of the courses are different. The...

Scholarshipranugraha - Apr 28, 2022 / Holt - Apr 29, 2022
Self Introduction Essay for Exchange Program in Ajou University by an engineering student

4 - I think its a good one. But for personal statement it needs to be more specific. Since i'm also...

Scholarshipbragdon - Apr 27, 2022 / nea12345 - Apr 28, 2022
Personal Statement for Pusan National University Scholarship (Landscape Architecture)

3 - @Holt Thank you so much. I will try to fix it on your advice....

ScholarshipLuvie - Apr 26, 2022 / Luvie - Apr 27, 2022
Self introduction for Pusan National University Scholarship as a transfer

3 - @Holt Thank u for your feedback. This is my very first time writing a scholar essay so I don't...

Scholarshipseraxsh - Apr 26, 2022 / seraxsh - Apr 26, 2022

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