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Human Behavior - Stipendiary Hungarian Essay



molnardebora 1 / 3  
Oct 21, 2024   #1
Why I Want to Study Psychology

Dear admission office with this letter I would like to express my strong desire to study Psychology by joining the Stipedium Hungaricum program.

I am fascinated by human behavior. In high school, I found myself drawn to psychology and began reading books or watching documentaries on the subject. I noticed that people would often confide in me, sharing their personal stories because they felt comfortable around me. This sparked my interest even further, and I knew that I wanted to pursue a career in psychology.

I believe that the human mind is a complex and fascinating "machine. People's actions are influenced by a variety of factors, including trauma, social environment, personality, and many others. I am eager to learn more about these influences and how they shape our thoughts and behaviors.

My passion for psychology, particularly counseling, has been with me for years. However, it wasn't until recently that I fully recognized it. I have always had a desire to help others, to listen to their struggles, and offer advice. I believe that by studying psychology, I can gain a deeper understanding of the human mind and use this knowledge to help others in meaningful ways.

After high school, I took a job teaching English, unsure of what I wanted to study in college. However, this experience only confirmed my love for working with and understanding people. I have seen firsthand how important it is, especially in today's generation, to have open conversations about mental health and how to overcome challenges.

I am determined to pursue a degree in psychology, as it will allow me to deepen my passion and make a positive impact on the lives of others. I am grateful for the opportunity to apply for the Stipedium Hungaricum Scholarship, which could help me achieve my goal of becoming a psychologist.I believe that the Stipedium Hungaricum scholarship would provide me with the necessary financial support to continue my education without any worries.

Receiving it would be a great honor and a life-changing opportunity for me. It would allow me to fulfill my academic aspirations and contribute to the development of my country.

I appreciate your consideration, and I hope to have the opportunity to talk more about my qualifications with you.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15347  
Oct 22, 2024   #2
The essay lacks a personal attachment to the major you plan on pursuing. The content actually sounds so generic, it could be mistaken for a cut and paste of researched information about psychology and various interests behind it. There is no driving force behind your instinct to study Psychology aside from the obvious reasons, which are generally referred to as foundations of almost all applicants for this course. There needs to be pivotal point in your presentation that made you realize this is your calling as a future professional. Do not confuse the reviewer by suddenly including an interest in English later on. It sounds like you are undecided about your actual major. Find another way to frame that insight, without mentioning the choice you made between majors.
ryayra 4 / 11  
Nov 3, 2024   #3
It is always important to know the type of problems that you want to solve after the programme. This will help you in writing your essay as you will be able to tie in your experiences better
woodg 3 / 4  
Nov 4, 2024   #4
@molnardebora
I agree with the comments. It is crucial to identify the problems and develop solutions.


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