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"Before you are a leader, success is all about growing yourself"; my favourite proverb and Chevening



ezgifilik 4 / 8  
Oct 29, 2016   #1
Hello guys! I have just discovered this website. I was about to submit my Chevening scholarship application. Your comments are very welcome, thanks in advance!

LEADERSHIP

Leadership means different things to different people. To me, it's not about managing people, but encouraging and inspiring them through one's actions. A personal favourite proverb of mine:

"Before you are a leader, success is all about growing yourself. When you become a leader, success is all about growing others."
-Jack Welch, Former Chairman and CEO, General Electric

Many famous people may have spoken on the topic of leadership, but the quote above is my personal favourite because it exactly defines how leadership is about others, not you. Leaders often focus on themselves but this is a short term achievement. If their focus is solely themselves, then they may become an expert or professional, but not a leader. I know that a great leader is the person who encourages and grows people and forges the way for them. I may not have all the answers, but I have my journey and I'm very willing to share it.

As a student I was very hard-working and determined; simply doing the tasks assigned to me was never enough. I have an innate drive to go above and beyond and a perpetual desire to be outstanding. Rather than focusing all my time on studying and achieving good grades at university, I put some time aside to work on extra-curricular projects which would develop me professionally. For instance, the Erasmus Study Mobility Program was very popular among university students; however my lecturer, believing I should go for an advanced alternative, asked me to consider the Erasmus Internship Mobility Programme, which I accepted. No student or lecturer at my university had ever undertaken this programme so I became the pioneer of the complex application processes involved for my university, and furthermore, after having completed the 3-month internship programme in a London-based translation company, became the guest speaker at Erasmus events promoting the programme. Many students across Turkey were inspired by my talks and became very keen to apply, so in between such events I have spent the last year assuming a mentoring role for students preparing them for their foreign internships.

After finishing my degree, I organized a graduation ball for over 100 people and then returned to my hometown. Most of the fresh graduates chose to find a job as soon as possible, but I was keen to gain more developmental experience and discovered the European Voluntary Service (EVS) programme. I volunteered for a Europe Direct desk at the Municipality of Bologna for 1 year and returned to my country for work as an EU Project Assistant for a reputable private company in Izmir. I was highly effective at pre-empting problems, but when they did occur I saw them as an opportunity to improve the service. My duties in this post chiefly involved the coordination of a wide range of events and interpreting when required between three languages. Occasionally I held group talks on my EVS experience which provided people with the opportunity to ask questions and request my recommendations.

I am very grateful for the opportunities I have had so far in life which have rewarded me with the confidence to be a representative and motivational speaker to large audiences and to people on a one-to-one basis.

one essay at time please

Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15385  
Oct 29, 2016   #2
Hi Ezgi, welcome to the forum. As newbie, I guess you are not familiar with the rules yet. We actually have an essay ruling of one essay per thread. So you should really have posted just one essay here. If the admin sees the multiple essays, they will delete the other essays and keep only the first one. So, if I were you, I would either edit this thread for content and leave only one essay, or be prepared to post your other essays in individual threads after the admin deletes the multiple essays in this post.

Since I am here anyway, I'll go ahead and give a review of your first essay, which is about leadership. I can only give you advice on one essay as per the forum rules. Sorry about that. Better one advice than none at all right?

If you wish to use the quote in a more effective manner, use it as the opening statement of your essay. Do not give a personal definition of leadership before launching into the quote. Quotes are usually used as the hook to gain the attention of the reviewer. In this case, it loses its impact because of the position it has in the essay. Lose the opening statement and use the quote to open your discussion instead. That catches the eye more.

While I understand that you would like to present the idea that you are an excellent leader by simply glossing over your leadership experience and making it seem so easy, it was almost natural for you, the reality is that leadership is not an easy role to take on, specially if you have to influence people around you. Is there any chance that you underwent some sort of pressure filled situation in any of the leadership roles that you related? It would really help solidify your leadership ad influencing abilities if you could show the reviewer how you perform under pressure and how you influence people towards your side when things are not going according to your plan. It tells the reviewer that you are a mature individual who is ready to deal with the rigorous demands of masters degree school combined with the demands of a scholarship program.


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