ESSAY #1: In an essay of 300 words or less, please discuss your academic interests and/or professional goals.
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Noticing the frustrated look on my face as I read over all possible majors and minors for college, my mother reassured me. "Everyone has at least one special talent that they excel in," she winks, "I'm sure you'll have your breakthrough." Just thinking that it was unconditional love smothering me, I shrugged off indifferently at her comment and continued to stare blankly at the list.
My biggest worry wasn't filling out the massive paperwork for college admission; it was choosing the right major, the right field, and the right career. Eventually, regurgitating my mother's words, I discovered my "special talent" - I was good at reading people! Some may call it stereotype, but it was so much more than just judging people based on appearance. I would carefully analyze the person's body language, tone, eye contact, and other qualities to formulate a hypothetical personality, which in most cases was true. Thus, I could predict the person's strengths and weaknesses, and foresee the decisions and mistakes they would make. I was able to flaunt my ability in Concepts of Psychology class, where I learned more about psychological profiling in medicine. I would like to analyze patients' movements and speech to diagnose and cure them. By studying medicine, especially concentrating on psychiatry, would fulfill my goal of using my special talent to help others, not to filter out friends. I would love the opportunity to turn my knack for judgment into a professional career.
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Comments, criticisms, edits are all welcome!!
Please feel free to be harsh
This is arounf 260 words so I have a room to wiggle lol
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Noticing the frustrated look on my face as I read over all possible majors and minors for college, my mother reassured me. "Everyone has at least one special talent that they excel in," she winks, "I'm sure you'll have your breakthrough." Just thinking that it was unconditional love smothering me, I shrugged off indifferently at her comment and continued to stare blankly at the list.
My biggest worry wasn't filling out the massive paperwork for college admission; it was choosing the right major, the right field, and the right career. Eventually, regurgitating my mother's words, I discovered my "special talent" - I was good at reading people! Some may call it stereotype, but it was so much more than just judging people based on appearance. I would carefully analyze the person's body language, tone, eye contact, and other qualities to formulate a hypothetical personality, which in most cases was true. Thus, I could predict the person's strengths and weaknesses, and foresee the decisions and mistakes they would make. I was able to flaunt my ability in Concepts of Psychology class, where I learned more about psychological profiling in medicine. I would like to analyze patients' movements and speech to diagnose and cure them. By studying medicine, especially concentrating on psychiatry, would fulfill my goal of using my special talent to help others, not to filter out friends. I would love the opportunity to turn my knack for judgment into a professional career.
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Comments, criticisms, edits are all welcome!!
Please feel free to be harsh
This is arounf 260 words so I have a room to wiggle lol