"homosexual adoption" - speech class

hello, i just wanted to know if it is a good start for my persuasive speech, my topic is " homosexual adoption" and i am against it, the professor said that i will have to get the law that says that homosexual can adopt in some states, so here is my start.

Thanks, youssef

"Close your eyes, and imagine your mother a high school student who gets in a relationship with another student, and she accidently gets pregnant for not using a condom or taking pills, she knows about it about it after 2 months as for her, her period was never regular so the option of abortion is not even an option, she has to keep the baby, she talks to her boyfriend and he tells her that he has nothing to do with it, after 9 months, here you are with a mother who barely knows how take care of herself, so she decides to put in a foster home definitely hoping for u a better life. A few months later, Steve and Jackson, a newly homosexual married couple living in Los Angeles decide to adopt a kid, and to start building a family, so they hit the road to the closest Foster home and decide to adopt you. A gigantic question should be interrogated, is that "the better life" your mother wanted you to have? Is that even fair for you not to belong to a normal family with a mother and a father? Young ladies and gentlemen, my controversial topic is homosexual adoption and I am against it. "

I supposed that you are speaking in favor of homosexual adoption,since you made an impressive example to show taht is fair in many situation but I did'nt understand why you said 'I am against it'?!!! by this start I guessed you wanna convince others to accept it's a usuall right that homosexuls can adopt a baby!!is'nt it?

If it wasn't for the last line, i would assume you were speaking in favor of the topic. Try to shorten the part where the mother gets pregnant and emphasize more on why the mother would not choose the homosexual couple for her baby

Beheshteh and Aqsa, it's interesting that you both thought an argument was being made in favor of the rights of same-sex couples. Maybe you assumed that he was arguing in favor of their right to adopt because most people in the modern world know that, for example, children of same-sex couples have been shown to be high achievers, have excellent educational outcomes, etc.

When people argue against the rights of homosexual couples to adopt, I wonder about how they are thinking. Would you rather be raised by a single parent or a same-sex couple? That is an interesting question...

your anecdote suggests that you are for homosexual adoption. I suggest that you change your anecdote into something about the difficulties an adopted child of homosexual parents have to deal with.