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Achitecture/ Family/ Cultural; SYRACUSE U; Who&what influenced?; Dream person; Mission



hk1234 1 / 1  
Dec 31, 2012   #1
1. Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse University?
As I was doing my online research, as to which College/ University had a fitting Architectural or Interior Design program that would match me , I came across Syracuse University website which was listed as one of the most Nationally Accredited Program in Architecture. I became fascinated in their department of design and Architecture and decided to apply to receive more information about what the school's has to offer. The School has a diversity of student organizations, extracurricular activities, and different academics programs so they can prepare students like me for the world in the world. Syracuse offers great opportunities to study globally to experience and explore outside the city. This urge me into applying to Syracuse University , Although I have not visited the campus I can feel the vibrant atmosphere and I can picture myself engaged in it's beautiful campus.

2. Who is the person you dream of becoming and how do you believe Syracuse University can help you achieve this?

Seeing my family suffer with financial problems at a young age, made me realized that I wanted to become someone successful in life not only for them, but for me. Despite of all the struggles I believe that in order to pursue a major in architecture it requires passion, curiosity, and determination. My affection for architecture and interior design started at a young age. It was up in till my seventh grade year in middle school that I decided that architect was the career I wanted to pursue and I was determined to follow it. Over the years , my passion for architect out grew into a passion for interior Designer , I have always dream of becoming a successful young women. The more i dreamed about it , the more it made me want to expand my education further more into those careers. I believe Syracuse University will help me further my dreams into making them come true. They will teach me the right technical skills that i need in order to a achieve in this major , with its remarkable top ranked architectural and industrial design program. They will help me succeed in a field that is complex and demanding not only will i learn but i will receive a rewarding career in architecture.

4. Our mission of Scholarship in Action, education for the world in the world, extends beyond the classroom to include engagement opportunities with our campus community, the City of Syracuse, and locations across the globe. Based on your interests, tell us what real-world experiences you might pursue during your education at Syracuse as part of this mission.

As an architect you have to explore around the world to learned about the cultural and ancient architectural buildings. In Syracuse University we will get a First hand experience at there beautiful campus in Florence , London and New York City. We will also get a chance to learn outside of our design studio and explore the world and it's different variety's of cultural languages. During our trip I will gain an unforgetable experience that will help me earn future knowledge in industrial Design and architecture.

OP hk1234 1 / 1  
Dec 31, 2012   #2
anything i could add, fix ? please help due tommorow!!!
ktminnieheartsa 2 / 6  
Dec 31, 2012   #3
the world in the world - not sure what you mean by that, too abstract
Syracuse offers great opportunities to study globally and to experience and explore outside the city
urged me into applying
at a young age, made me realized
that I wanted to become
Despite of all the struggles I believe - change: Despite all these struggles, I believe
architecture, it requires
It was up in till my seventh grade year in middle school that I decided that architect was the career I wanted to pursue - change: Up until seventh grade year, I decided that I wanted to become an architect, and that it was the career that I wanted to pursue.

Over the years , my passion for architect out grew into a passion for interior Designer , I have always dream of becoming a successful young women - change: over the years, I outgrew my passion for architecture; instead, my passion was interior design.


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