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|COMMON APP SHORT ESSAY EXPERIENCE AS A PREFECT
NEW - "Please keep quiet", "Please fold your socks", "Do your top button" are statements I made countless times during the...
Undergraduateoshkoshmadam - 28 mins ago / — -
|Georgia Tech. To be an architect that will leave a mark inspiring the current and future generations
3 - Joseph, you have written a very good response to the prompt. You don't need to edit anything with regards...
UndergraduateEdSharon - 13 hours ago / Holt - 41 mins ago
|AUB essay - invention that has a great impact on my life - common app
3 - Steven, the response you are giving is highly generic. It is the standard go to response that every student...
UndergraduateStevenSameh1512 - 17 hours ago / Holt - 47 mins ago
|Fashion School Admission Essay for FIDM; expectations, hobbies, interests, goals and aspiration
2 - Nai, the essay feels like it spins its wheels without going anywhere for the first few paragraphs. The direct...
Undergraduateleothewriter - 22 hours ago / Holt - 1 hour ago
|What book or piece of literature you believe is important for the entire Colgate Class to read? Why?
NEW - Supplement essay for Colgate University Colgate's core curriculum teaches students empathy, informed debate, and critical thinking. Please tell...
Undergraduateuchiaelodin - 1 hour ago / — -
|Com Apps essay - the story of great Hustler, Ignazio Wexler
NEW - Topic of your choice Host : Good morning folks, I'm your host Dick, with you for another episode....
Undergraduatekimyoungjin123 - 1 hour ago / — -
|A full comprehension of the world's nature obtained through rigorous reasoning and experimenting
3 - Thank you!!!...
Undergraduatephamhung - 1 day ago / phamhung - 6 hours ago
|'I need to be a journalist' Applying to some Ivy League and top tier colleges. How common is my app?
4 - The essay still becomes confusing to read because you are discussing 2 unrelated topics in one essay. Pick one...
UndergraduateJohnatanReiss - 2 days ago / Holt - 9 hours ago
|Desiring to be an explorer. Application letter for Global UGRAD exchange program
2 - I think that your begining is quite long and unnecessary. Acorrding my experience, I think the structure below will...
Undergraduatenusrat8662 - 1 day ago / Alicelanphuong - 1 day ago
|Global Ugrad - Making the difference in the education of students
4 - In my opinion, the whole essay does not work because you are not properly focusing in the requirement of...
UndergraduateNossferatu - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Global UGRAD program - a different culture experience, interchanging ideas, products, and influence
4 - @Holt @Dannyalc92 Thank you so much for your feedback. I'll write a new essay soon and update the...
Undergraduatezimmer - Dec 16, 2018 / zimmer - 1 day ago
|My drive to always learn something new and be the best version of myself that I can be; UBC essay
2 - Jason, the essay isn't cocky at all. It sounds like it was written by a level headed person who...
Undergraduateecho16 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|FIT portfolio essay evaluating how I take criticism
3 - Woah you're definitely right! I was just trying super hard to sum everything up because the word limit was...
UndergraduateLazydazey - 2 days ago / Lazydazey - 1 day ago
|"Understanding the heart of another"- Dartmouth college supplement
2 - Sharon, rather than trying to apply the prompt to the world around you, try to apply it to yourself...
UndergraduateAgirlhasnoname - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|UVA Supplement - The Steppe Bison
3 - Ryan, you sound really surprise in the essay, but you are not clearly explaining why. So you will need...
Undergraduateafriendinneed - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Why major essay for a tons of school!
2 - To reduce the number of words perhaps you could remove one of the examples you used in the first...
UndergraduateSasakfld - 2 days ago / Agirlhasnoname - 2 days ago
|Georgetown - What does it mean to you to be educated?
2 - HI！ I really like your answer to the question "what does it mean to you to be educated". It's...
Undergraduateleylamagsud - Dec 15, 2018 / Sasakfld - 2 days ago
|The Experimental Class. Tell about the important place, or places, you call home.
UndergraduateSasakfld - Dec 16, 2018 / Sasakfld - 2 days ago
|I co-founded Muniversiti, a non-profit organization with the purpose of galvanizing the youth
3 - Thanks for pointing that out. Its a trivial matter. I'll contact someone from the digital networking department and the...
Undergraduatekartikt - 2 days ago / kartikt - 2 days ago
|UPENN Supplement - the vanilla ice cream essay
4 - I like the analogies with vanilla ice cream, however, it becomes too repetitive and downplays the main topic of...
Undergraduateredname898 - Dec 6, 2018 / Dannyalc92 - 2 days ago
|A seemingly impossible obstacle can become one's biggest asset; Amherst essay
2 - Anant, there is a lack of backstory to this essay that prevents the reader from understanding the full importance...
Undergraduatebokaaaaaa - Dec 16, 2018 / Holt - 2 days ago
|"Don't limit your challenges, challenge your limits" - My reason for choosing Waterloo
UndergraduateEssaysReview - Dec 15, 2018 / EssaysReview - 2 days ago
|"Without any Expectations"- Motivational Statement Essay for Peace Corps Application
4 - While there are grammatical errors and sentence structure issues with your writing, the fact that I am asking you...
UndergraduateHikeBikeRepeat - Dec 14, 2018 / Holt - Dec 16, 2018
|Devoting to communities - I need advice for my SOP for UGRAD Program
3 - Hi! Sincerely thank you a lot for your advice. I've struggled with this SOP for 1 months, written 3...
Undergraduateiamngocthao810 - Dec 14, 2018 / iamngocthao810 - Dec 15, 2018
|Why UChicago Essay 2018: Is it Ready? Like a home.
2 - Shana, you should only write a 725-750 word essay if you have enough interesting information to share with the...
Undergraduatejungkook666 - Dec 14, 2018 / Holt - Dec 15, 2018
|Sharing the world - application essay. (to Duke Kunshan University)
Undergraduatekaia0911 - Dec 9, 2018 / kaia0911 - Dec 13, 2018
|JHU Supplemental Essay - an impact by collaboration with others
2 - Hi Leyla. I have to say, this essay really hit the mark when considering the prompt requirements. It is...
Undergraduateleylamagsud - Dec 11, 2018 / Holt - Dec 12, 2018
|To be a part of the introduction of sustainable and affordable biotechnology, the International Plan
2 - Ibukun, what is the maximum word count for this essay? The reason I ask is because you need to...
Undergraduateibk101 - Dec 11, 2018 / Holt - Dec 12, 2018
|Identify one piece in your portfolio that you are most passionate about, tell us the story behind it
2 - Hannah, every painting has a story. The Mona Lisa depicts the story of a shy woman with a beautiful...
Undergraduatech15hann - Dec 11, 2018 / Holt - Dec 12, 2018
|A time, in or outside the classroom, when you worked with others and what you learned from this
4 - Momina, the first thing I would change about the referencing in this essay is the way that you always...
Undergraduatemominanaveed - Dec 11, 2018 / Holt - Dec 12, 2018
|I am answering the why NYU Abu Dhabi question. Will it catch the attention of the admissions officer
3 - Your essay is commendable. However, there are a few things that you can improve. Firstly, you have discussed more...
Undergraduatebilis - Dec 4, 2018 / mbk7162 - Dec 11, 2018
|Personal Statement for Undergraduate Program in Computer Science
2 - Mohammed, the essay works but could be improved. The last part about the choice of university, makes this decision...
Undergraduateanon123 - Dec 10, 2018 / Holt - Dec 11, 2018
|What are your artistic interests/goals? Advice on CalArts artist statements.
3 - Thank you so much!! I really appreciate your help :) Yea, I was just trying to throw everything I...
Undergraduatech15hann - Dec 10, 2018 / ch15hann - Dec 10, 2018
|Bakery and recipes - WASHU SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY
5 - @Holt Hello, thank you for the honest review. I really someone to tell me this wasn't the right prompt...
Undergraduatech15hann - Dec 7, 2018 / ch15hann - Dec 10, 2018
|Science excites me and l aspire more: to learn and to create as what my own childhood taught me
UndergraduateTendekai - Dec 3, 2018 / Tendekai - Dec 9, 2018
|What is important to me? PROTECTING OUR NATURE AND ENSURING ANIMAL WELFARE
3 - I would not want to confuse the reviewer by using dividers to create choices in the presentation. You are...
UndergraduateSupantha - Dec 8, 2018 / Holt - Dec 9, 2018
|They say that I'm the one who does crazy stuff with Electricity; Tell us about who you are essay
2 - Oops! Nischay, you were off to a good start till you got to the part after your friend's description...
UndergraduateNishantfizz - Dec 8, 2018 / Holt - Dec 9, 2018
|Common application essay - When that Eisenbahn hit me
UndergraduateCabradasbrisa - Dec 8, 2018 / Cabradasbrisa - Dec 8, 2018
|GWU Supplement Prompt 1 - how would you change the course of history?
2 - Lelya, since the prompt indicates that the student of GWU interact with policy makers and world leaders, the aim...
Undergraduateleylamagsud - Dec 7, 2018 / Holt - Dec 8, 2018
|All the typical hopes and expectations, of being a studious person, were placed on me
3 - Sailesh, the essay is good overall, but it doesn't answer the prompt question. Also, you mostly focus on talking...
Undergraduatesailesh - Dec 2, 2018 / leylamagsud - Dec 7, 2018
|"Don't screw up your life like she did." College App Essay for Ivy leagues
UndergraduateMia2000 - Dec 4, 2018 / leylamagsud - Dec 7, 2018
|To spend a study semester in the USA - Global Undergraduate exchange program essay
2 - Yaroslav, not all of the information in this essay can be used for the prompt requirement. Let me point...
UndergraduateMonsieurNN - Dec 6, 2018 / Holt - Dec 7, 2018
|Thermodynamics class - Brown ESSAYS
2 - Alexandra, you are not directly responding to the prompt. The reviewer could care less about the stem class taught...
Undergraduatealex42 - Dec 6, 2018 / Holt - Dec 7, 2018
|I am the only teenager in my community who thinks something different unlike others. Essay about me.
3 - Supantha, it is important that you understand what the prompt requirements are and how to deliver it. For this...
UndergraduateSupantha - Dec 6, 2018 / Holt - Dec 7, 2018
|Colgate Supplemental (3 words your friend would use to describe you)
Undergraduateleylamagsud - Dec 5, 2018 / leylamagsud - Dec 6, 2018
|Common app Personal essay- recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure.
4 - ... in caps, and black hooded... (remove and) I felt butterflies in my stomach - you could also change...
Undergraduatearnoldb - Nov 21, 2018 / leylamagsud - Dec 5, 2018
|Johns Hopkins Essay - Collaboration with others, including peers, mentors, and professors
3 - Hi Arnold! I really enjoyed reading your essay, I think it is written really well. Seeing that you are...
Undergraduatearnoldb - Nov 28, 2018 / leylamagsud - Dec 5, 2018
|A never-ending pile of whys. I am applying to some top universities.
3 - Thank you for your advice! Is there anything I should change about the essay itself? I rewrote it, would...
Undergraduateleylamagsud - Dec 3, 2018 / leylamagsud - Dec 4, 2018
|Assistant Coach - UBC short answer - an activity
2 - Emma, the presentation is a bit scattered. I would divide this presentation into 2 paragraphs. The first paragraph would...
Undergraduateemilydavis - Dec 2, 2018 / Holt - Dec 3, 2018
|Achievement Supplement for CWRU - we are interested in hearing more about you.
2 - Abby, the reference to your 4 year old self is irrelevant to this discussion. You are stretching your perceived...
Undergraduateabifyor - Dec 1, 2018 / Holt - Dec 2, 2018
|UBC PERSONAL PROFILE - something about yourself, also according to opinions of others
2 - Try to not be a one trick pony. You will bore the reviewer by your constant reference to your...
Undergraduateisica - Nov 30, 2018 / Holt - Nov 30, 2018
|Essay on how I deal with the overstimulation of information
2 - Giuliana, you never responded to the question you posed for yourself in the essay. The main question is how...
UndergraduateGiuliVal - Nov 30, 2018 / Holt - Nov 30, 2018
|I spent this past summer performing in a show at the Winnipeg Fringe Theatre Festival ACTIVITY ESSAY
3 - Hi Victoria, the essay in itself needs to be better presented. The strength of the essay and the interest...
Undergraduatevictoria_003 - Nov 27, 2018 / Holt - Nov 30, 2018
|'The friends around' - UBC PERSONAL PROFILE, WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY?
3 - This looks like a really good response and I love how you outlined how your friends brought a positive...
Undergraduatekaffafle - Nov 28, 2018 / isica - Nov 30, 2018
|Waterloo; comment e.g. on your exposure to engineering through school-related and other experiences
2 - Mohammed, your essay is dry, boring, and not very informative. You should be focusing in providing interesting responses for...
Undergraduatemmahtab10 - Nov 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 29, 2018
|Everyone belongs to many different communities and/or groups defined by environment around
3 - jinzhejian, you have chosen a very interesting topic for this discussion. However, your presentation is off. You are talking...
UndergraduateJack_Kin - Nov 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 29, 2018
|Personal Statement - Common Application - Gynecomastia Disease
UndergraduateStevenSameh1512 - Nov 28, 2018 / ch15hann - Nov 29, 2018
|OVERCOMING AN EDUCATION BARRIER. How did overcoming this barrier help shape who are you today?
Undergraduatesmarquez16 - Nov 27, 2018 / luna789 - Nov 29, 2018
|College App Essay - 200 American movies
Undergraduatesnazbt - Nov 27, 2018 / luna789 - Nov 29, 2018
|Students presenting a portfolio in Art Practice must include an artist's statement
2 - Hi, I think this a great essay. I think there is too much of visualize there, try another synonym...
Undergraduatech15hann - Nov 28, 2018 / arnoldb - Nov 28, 2018
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