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|the tutor - Ubc personal profile essay
NEW - Tell us about who you are. How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you? If...
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|My Model UN experience - solving global issues
NEW - Tell us more about ONE or TWO activities listed above that are most important to you. Please explain the...
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|UBC Personal Profile: Who are you? One who has stepped out of their shell to become a leader
4 - In the first line, I would remove the sentence that says, "despite the little recognition I get for my...
Undergraduateppham2020 - Nov 15, 2019 / reneemvm - 1 day ago
|How my athletics reflects my determination
3 - @Maria Would it be better if I reconstructed the last sentence and fixed some other sentences to make them...
Undergraduatereneemvm - Nov 18, 2019 / reneemvm - 2 days ago
|Working at a consulting company - UBC Personal Profile - Activity
3 - ... and present it them in my own way". ... my organizational skills". ... and compare it them with...
Undergraduateagupta - Nov 15, 2019 / reneemvm - Nov 19, 2019
|UBC Personal Profile - Tell us about who you are - "Not a Prodigy Runner"
3 - @kyliemwong I agree with @Maria, I think you should talk less about the whole journey of how you got...
Undergraduatekyliemwong - Nov 15, 2019 / agupta - Nov 17, 2019
|UBC PERSONAL PROFILE: a real-life Wonder Woman who couldn't sit still whenever it came to unfairness
6 - you should definitely add more about your specific qualities and what others would describe you more...
Undergraduatejennieyo - Nov 13, 2019 / student19 - Nov 17, 2019
|Valuable person - UBC Personal Profile - Tell us about who you are
4 - @ppham2020 @jennieyo Thank you for the feedback. I will try to stick to only a few traits and give...
Undergraduateagupta - Nov 16, 2019 / agupta - Nov 17, 2019
|Quality and Consistency - UBC PERSONAL PROFILE ESSAY
2 - and ended my academic career on ... Just as a technicality, some may perceive ending your academic career...
Undergraduatestudent19 - Nov 16, 2019 / ppham2020 - Nov 17, 2019
|UBC Personal Profile - Cupcakes
2 - @ieahat Hi! Thanks for coming to the forum. I hope my feedback gives you insight on how to improve...
Undergraduateieahat - Nov 15, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|Difficult class - Colgate University's supp essay
2 - @alta Hi there as well! I'm going to give you feedback on your writing that'll hopefully help you in...
Undergraduatealta - Nov 15, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|Problem-solving passion - U of Waterloo Data Science AIF Question
2 - @emilywang2002 Hi there. Thanks for being a part of the forum! I hope that this feedback will give you...
Undergraduateemilywang2002 - Nov 14, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|UBC personal essay:Tell us about who you are. How would your family, friends...
Undergraduatemangoyabani - Nov 14, 2019 / mangoyabani - Nov 16, 2019
|Personality essay who you are and what makes the person who you are
2 - @Dinaol1234 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you clarity on what you need...
UndergraduateDinaol1234 - Nov 11, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|My nine years younger brother - UBC application
2 - @unigirl123 Hi there. Welcome here! I hope this feedback gives you an idea on how to improve your writing....
Undergraduateunigirl123 - Nov 9, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Volleyball. Explain about an interest you have pursued outside your academic classes
2 - Your essay is so good and if you can change "team captain" to "team's captain" grammatically, I believe it...
UndergraduateFengLun - Nov 3, 2019 / Cuong Trinh - Nov 7, 2019
|Videos and games - Commonapp: Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea
4 - @Maria When you say prioritize as well the details that are essential what exactly do you mean? Can you...
UndergraduateTuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019 / Tuguldurgnrdn - Nov 3, 2019
|Dumpling of My Life - FSU Essay
2 - @koowilliam01 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Hopefully, my feedback will give you an idea on how to improve...
Undergraduatekoowilliam01 - Nov 1, 2019 / Maria - Nov 3, 2019
|NAME AND IDENTITY - COMMONAPP 650 words or less
4 - @nochaelle04 I actually think that it should be a larger portion of your essay- you could dive into...
Undergraduatenochaelle04 - Oct 28, 2019 / lycheepeach12 - Oct 29, 2019
|Things that caught my interests in Purdue - in one hundred words or less
Undergraduateomostic21 - Oct 22, 2019 / omostic21 - Oct 26, 2019
|HOW THE SMARTPHONE CHANGED PEOPLE'S LIVES
3 - Good day, Your writeup is interesting. But can be expanded for better content. 1An essay is better when it...
Undergraduatephuongthao187 - Oct 26, 2019 / Tobechukwu - Oct 26, 2019
|Stanford students have a sense of intellectual vitality. Intellectually engaging idea or experience.
3 - More of an deep-insight-tip here, Stanford is prestigious for their weirdness and quirkiness, so you should try to make...
UndergraduateJKANG - Oct 22, 2019 / Tuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019
|Robot "02618" - Common App Essay (Setback/Failure) - Is it to cliche? Is it any good?
3 - Try to write like you talk. The descriptive writing you're going for is not working out that well for...
Undergraduateiswhars - Oct 22, 2019 / Tuguldurgnrdn - Oct 24, 2019
|When my dog died - Most Significant challenge I faced - MIT Prompt
2 - @prmchpra7 Hello there! Good luck on your MIT application. I'm going to provide you with feedback on your writing....
Undergraduateprmchpra7 - Oct 22, 2019 / Maria - Oct 24, 2019
|My passion for aviation. Congressional Nominational Essay for Air force Academy
2 - @Bpriley1414 Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for you! Please don't hesitate to approach us...
UndergraduateBpriley1414 - Oct 20, 2019 / Maria - Oct 23, 2019
|Bike ride - A story from your life which could illustrate your character
2 - @thfdlrla Taking a first example by you learning to ride a bike, I think it's good move. Learning...
Undergraduatethfdlrla - Oct 23, 2019 / ndhnif - Oct 23, 2019
|"My world and my Dreams" MIT prompt
3 - @Maria Thanks for the feedback! The essay has word limit of 250 words. I understand that I need...
Undergraduateprmchpra7 - Oct 19, 2019 / prmchpra7 - Oct 22, 2019
|Beyond "Good" and "Bad" - Common App Essay, Prompt 3 (questioning/challenging a belief)
3 - @espeon12 Hi. Welcome to the forum. Let me provide you with feedback on your writing to hopefully help you...
Undergraduateespeon12 - Oct 14, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|The Importance of Education - What is important to you and why? - UBC Personal Profile
3 - @ng864 Hi. Thanks for being in the forum once more. Please don't hesitate to come back if you have...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 16, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|Woman for Humanity - the person you dream of becoming and how do you believe Syracuse University
2 - @obluebeanso Hello. Thanks for coming to the forum. I'm going to give feedback on this essay of yours. Hopefully,...
Undergraduateobluebeanso - Oct 18, 2019 / Maria - Oct 19, 2019
|Multicultural affairs - Who or what influenced you to apply to Syracuse University?
Undergraduateobluebeanso - Oct 18, 2019 / obluebeanso - Oct 18, 2019
|To Work as a Software Engineer - SFU Dual Degree Prompts - Academic or career goals after university
2 - @ng864 Hi. Thanks for your continuous contributions to the forum. I hope that this feedback gives you insight on...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 17, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|My interest in Computer Science and Chinese Culture - SFU Dual Degree Program Statement of Interest
2 - @ng864 Thanks for your continuous participation in the platform. I'm here again to give you feedback on this essay...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 16, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|Student with passion for technology - UBC Personal Profile - Who are you?
2 - @ng864 Hi. Thanks for your continuous support and feedback into this site. We're hoping that you've learned something valuable...
Undergraduateng864 - Oct 15, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|Common app essay - The gaming Cafe. A challenge, setback, or failure and its effect on me.
4 - @suckasmack Thank you so much for your feedback! But do you think I should change the topic? Some people...
Undergraduatesoo010207 - Oct 9, 2019 / soo010207 - Oct 15, 2019
|"The Heartbeat" - APPLICATION ESSAY - TELL US WHO YOU ARE
2 - @chikhnguyen16 Welcome to the forum. I'm going to provide you with my feedback on this writing to hopefully help...
Undergraduatechikhnguyen16 - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Striving for the best - UBC Personal Profile Question. Tell us about who you are.
2 - @ShaylaC Thank you for being in the forum. I'm here to give feedback on this essay of yours. ...
UndergraduateShaylaC - Oct 11, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|About My Father - Princeton Supplement Essay - a person who has influenced you in a significant way
2 - @rouyi Welcome to the forum. I am here to help you by providing feedback on this essay. Firstly,...
Undergraduaterouyi - Oct 10, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|My Gender - Common app 4 - A problem of significance to you and steps that can be taken to solve it.
2 - @StephVan Welcome to the forum. I'll be providing you with feedback on your writing. Content-wise, I find that...
UndergraduateStephVan - Oct 10, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Women and Volunteer Essay UIC
2 - @Essay19 Welcome here. I hope you're doing good. Let me give you feedback on this writing first and foremost....
UndergraduateEssay19 - Oct 9, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|"Life is what happens while you are busy making other plans" - FIT application essay
2 - @TovaW Hi, welcome to the forum. I'm going to provide you feedback on this writing; and, hopefully, it will...
UndergraduateTovaW - Oct 8, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Discipline, family, climate - WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY?
2 - @chopraribhav Welcome to the forum. Here, I'm going to provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, be...
Undergraduatechopraribhav - Oct 8, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|A sense of belonging - Students identify Lafayette as an excellent fit for countless reasons.
2 - @pramodk18 Welcome here! I hope that this feedback somehow gives you insight on writing. Don't hesitate to always approach...
Undergraduatepramodk18 - Oct 8, 2019 / Maria - Oct 11, 2019
|Flying - Purdue Opportunities Essay. How do the opportunities at Purdue support my interests?
2 - @suckasmack Hi! Welcome to the forum. I hope that this feedback becomes helpful. Firstly, the first sentence immediately...
Undergraduatesuckasmack - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|Why my major and what opportunities at Georgia Tech will prepare me in that field after graduation?
2 - @Shkr Welcome to the forum! I'm here to provide you with feedback on your writing. I hope this truly...
UndergraduateShkr - Oct 7, 2019 / Maria - Oct 9, 2019
|UBC personal profile - who am I? My natural ability and determination.
2 - @celinehb Hey, welcome to the forum. I'm here to provide you with feedback on this writing. I hope this...
Undergraduatecelinehb - Oct 2, 2019 / Maria - Oct 2, 2019
|I am very dedicated to pursuing a career in computer science and Engineering; personal statement
4 - @jozaif12 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Undergraduatejozaif12 - Sep 26, 2019 / Maria - Sep 27, 2019
|I want to study psychology - Personal statements 2021 kgsp undergraduate
2 - @nicole10115 Hi there, welcome to the forum! I hope this feedback becomes helpful for your writing endeavors. If it...
Undergraduatenicole10115 - Sep 24, 2019 / Maria - Sep 26, 2019
|Studying abroad - My personal Statement for Apply GKS
UndergraduateMulya Hadi 99 - Sep 17, 2019 / ochanlebong7 - Sep 23, 2019
|The complexity of Climate Change - Princeton essay
3 - Hi! I was wondered this topic. Actually, The change of weather is one of the most problem that all...
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 21, 2019 / Estelle133 - Sep 22, 2019
|Describe problems connected with overpopulation and propose resolutions to this issue
2 - @longpm2k Hi longpm2k! I'm not an expert, so please just ignore if my advice doesn't actually help... I think...
Undergraduatelongpm2k - Sep 19, 2019 / yui meow - Sep 19, 2019
|UC Personal Insight Question #2: Every person has a creative side...
Undergraduateashymustard - Sep 17, 2019 / ashymustard - Sep 18, 2019
|Write about a person who has made a meaningful impact on you. Hasan Minhaj.
2 - @quavius Hey there. I'll be providing you with feedback on this essay - no worries! I hope that you...
Undergraduatequavius - Sep 17, 2019 / Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|Efficiency of human with respect to social class (Common app essay)
2 - @Browny Welcome, Browny! I hope you have been lurking around and enjoying what we offer in this site. If...
UndergraduateBrowny - Sep 17, 2019 / Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|Study Plan for learning language for KGSP Undergraduate Program - before and after entry
3 - thank youu...
UndergraduateZelk0vA - Sep 16, 2019 / Zelk0vA - Sep 18, 2019
|My Statistics Personal Statement (GKS Undergraduate)
2 - I really think you're on the right track with this essay but it's missing one crucial detail. You do...
Undergraduateposeidonchild - Sep 15, 2019 / quavius - Sep 17, 2019
|Common App, Singapore's Third-Culture Kid
2 - @ferna9624 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well in your application process....
Undergraduateferna9624 - Sep 15, 2019 / Maria - Sep 16, 2019
|My Study Plan with the schedule of learning Korean and English for KGSP undergraduate Program
2 - Hi there! Glad i found someone that is applying for the same scholarship as me. I hope my advice...
Undergraduategiwang indri - Sep 15, 2019 / alyssa2036 - Sep 15, 2019
|Volunteer - description of your professional background and current work, including accomplishment
Undergraduateizahnelson13 - Sep 13, 2019 / izahnelson13 - Sep 15, 2019
|Computing and Programming - Georgia Tech Supplemental Essay
4 - @Maria Thanks for the feedback. I guess I will pretty much have to write it scratch as it seems...
UndergraduateTheShubhi - Sep 1, 2019 / TheShubhi - Sep 14, 2019
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