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|Quality education in a country of innovations. GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT, UNDERGARDUATE - VISUAL DESIGN
NEW - I will really appreciate your feedback on my PS. Thank you in advance for your time and efforts! ...
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|Cite cases in which you thought/attemped in ways different from others & how it affected you.
Undergraduateashes1 - 1 day ago / ashes1 - 12 hrs ago
|Tell us about any hobby you are passionate about and why you think it's important. UWC essay.
Undergraduateaanya_05 - 1 day ago / Holt - 13 hrs ago
|Study plans to learn something new everyday by learning Korean and also about the country
UndergraduateJessica05 - Sep 3, 2021 / nb19 - 2 days ago
|PERSONAL STATEMENT / Global Korea Scholarships (GKS-U) 2022 / Media & Communication
3 - you can try to be more clear and concise in your accomplishments, and don't belittle yourself at any time,...
Undergraduatedearzhongli - Sep 19, 2021 / may4 - Sep 23, 2021
|GKS 2022 undergraduate major in film. "Being a part of something special makes you special, right?"
2 - The language discussion does not belong in this statement. heate a far more intricate language study history in the...
Undergraduatemay4 - Sep 20, 2021 / Holt - Sep 22, 2021
|SCHOLARSHIP PERSONAL STATEMENT // GKS 2022 Undergraduate Architecture
Undergraduatecmdk - Sep 19, 2021 / cmdk - Sep 20, 2021
|Personal Statement/ GKS Undergraduate Scholarship/ Economics and finances
NEW - PERSONAL STATEMENT - Motivations with which you apply for this program - Family and Education background - Significant experiences...
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|Personal Statement/ GKS Undergraduate Scholarship/ Communication and Media Major
UndergraduateEssie Kim - Sep 16, 2021 / Essie Kim - Sep 17, 2021
|Finance and accounting - Personal Statement for NUS/NTU/SMU undergrad
2 - The essay needs to focus on one particular aspect of interest and its development on your part. For this...
UndergraduateVidushi - Sep 16, 2021 / Holt - Sep 17, 2021
|[KGPP] PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR UNDERGRATUATED SCHOLARSHIP - BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION
2 - There is a disconnection between gender discrimination and your ambition. Mostly because, for all the national significance of your...
Undergraduatekaitlyn280123 - Sep 15, 2021 / Holt - Sep 16, 2021
|PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR KGSP/GKS undergraduate Scholarship/ Mass Communication Major
2 - The applicant is applying for the wrong undergraduate course. Rather than Mass communications, he should be applying as a...
Undergraduatehaving100issues - Sep 13, 2021 / Holt - Sep 14, 2021
|What is an effective life?
2 - The essay does not make its intention clear to the reader. Is the point to define an effective life...
Undergraduatesinojisak02 - Sep 11, 2021 / Holt - Sep 13, 2021
|KGSP/GKS-U 2022 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Communication major; Motivations, family, experiences, etc.
5 - @hahaleesunwoo Try to make it shorter and remove hangul words because they clearly said that write it in Korean...
Undergraduatehahaleesunwoo - Aug 20, 2021 / shreyasrivastava - Aug 30, 2021
|GKS Personal Statement-Korean Language and Literature Major
Undergraduateayutian - Aug 25, 2021 / Holt - Aug 28, 2021
|Global Korea Scholarship 2022 PERSONAL STATEMENT - Communication major
3 - You've explain all the must included information, but your essay is still lack in the relationships between the paragraphs....
Undergraduateadeliatiara365 - Aug 23, 2021 / ayutian - Aug 25, 2021
|I am applying for GKS Undergraduate 2022 and this is my Personal Statement (Electrical Engineering)
3 - @Holt Thank you for comment. I have one more question, Do you think the first paragraph is attractive...
Undergraduatemysp2001 - Aug 22, 2021 / mysp2001 - Aug 23, 2021
|Any academic interests that excite you, and how you might use the Open Curriculum to pursue them
2 - Quirky is good. It made an interesting hook. The Betty Crocker reference is a bit overkill though. More attention...
Undergraduatemidnight_storm - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|Global Scientists and Engineers Program Application Essay pt.1
2 - The first paragraph fails to make a clear point. It needs to be better thought out and organized since...
Undergraduatede_doctor - Aug 22, 2021 / Holt - Aug 23, 2021
|Global Korean Scholarship Undergraduate - Food and Nutrition Department
2 - The essay is easy to read but lacking in notable substance. There are no academic achievements of note and...
Undergraduateasnwflks - Jul 24, 2021 / Holt - Jul 25, 2021
|Education from Poverty - PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR GLOBAL KOREA SCHOLARSHIP (GKS), BBA
3 - I can literally see your great efforts.Great work!! I would suggest you to follow up the above mentioned suggestions....
Undergraduateshazia112 - Jul 7, 2021 / simranmavi03 - Jul 18, 2021
|Critical Thinking is the key to success
3 - There are a lot of grammatical errors in this essay. It almost feels as if you haven't been bothered...
Undergraduatengocngoc1234 - Jul 8, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jul 16, 2021
|Winning a Competition and Getting Involved in Organizations; NUS Achievements Personal Statement
3 - If your intended major is computer science, why would you throw it off by mentioning other subjects that you're...
Undergraduatefredkh - Jul 9, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jul 16, 2021
|Farm work - MIT undergrad application essay
NEW - Prompt: We know you lead a busy life, full of activities, many of which are required of you. Tell...
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|GKS PERSONAL STATEMENT FOR BUSINESS ADMINISTRATION
NEW - After spending 18 years of my life in poverty, I realized that how much important is the money to...
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|"Is he going to be a theater major?" - Common App Personal Essay
3 - In my opinion, this makes a great essay. However, the quick cut-off to the point that you don't want...
UndergraduateDexterity - Jun 28, 2021 / techmind20 - Jun 29, 2021
|"A discussion that has meant the most to me" Undergrad college application essay
3 - The prompt implies that the experience has to be intellectual. You mentioning that it was an academic discussion cuts...
Undergraduatepeachyfrenchfry - Jun 24, 2021 / techmind20 - Jun 29, 2021
|Life in Poverty - Personal statement for BBA GKS.
2 - There is too much focus on the family background and parental information. The essay limits its personal motivation in...
UndergraduateSyra - Jun 26, 2021 / Holt - Jun 27, 2021
|My blog - extracurricular activities essay - Undergrad College Application
3 - Merged: Sustainability in the fashion industry - Extracurricular activities essay Please briefly elaborate on one of your...
Undergraduatepeachyfrenchfry - Jun 5, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|"My notebooks" Personal statement for undergrad college application
3 - To me, this essay is really confusing. The different section of your notebooks that you're writing about do not...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 24, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|"The itch to understand" Personal statement college application - a topic of your choice
3 - This is overall a really good essay. The description about you being able to respond to various problems in...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 26, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|"My path to GS from running away from home" - Columbia General Studies Essay
4 - This is overall a really good essay in terms of describing where you come from and what you stand...
Undergraduatemaysol - May 18, 2021 / techmind20 - May 26, 2021
|"Questioning the answer" personal statement for undergrad college application
3 - Merged: "Not settling for the obvious explanation" Personal statement for undergrad college application So basically, I posted this...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 22, 2021 / techmind20 - May 23, 2021
|Write about an unforgettable experience in your life. Could you give me comments on my paragraph?
6 - "But deep inside [...] elapsed really slow." These lines are really vague and do not properly convey what you...
Undergraduatetuitenkhoi2005 - May 16, 2021 / techmind20 - May 23, 2021
|UMD computer science - TRANSFER ESSAY
2 - You love your commas way too much. You may not think that proper punctuation matters in these essays, but,...
Undergraduateyogi0115 - May 13, 2021 / Holt - May 13, 2021
|Study plan for study permit for software engineering; comprehensive and competitive education system
2 - The study plan you present lacks a study focus based an research purposes in relation to career planning and...
UndergraduateSamantha1 - May 12, 2021 / Holt - May 13, 2021
|"I need to believe that extraordinary is possible." Personal statement about urban life
2 - You did not provide the writing instructions for this personal statement so I cannot be sure about how applicable...
UndergraduateRahim123 - May 8, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|Essay about "How did you get passionate about physics"
UndergraduatePain_4528 - Apr 27, 2021 / Pain_4528 - Apr 28, 2021
|Study plan for Canadian Study permit in Bachelors of Business Management
2 - You do not need to go overboard with information about your current university and other academic history in the...
UndergraduateWeedle18 - Apr 24, 2021 / Holt - Apr 25, 2021
|Essay on your dreams and how u plan on achieving them and future plans (KAIST Application UG)
3 - I suggest you think a bit more practical. First, try to identify the problems or shortcomings you would like...
UndergraduateMuhammad8870 - Apr 19, 2021 / miftahul - Apr 20, 2021
|[KGSP-U] Our Future is Determined by Our Reactions, Not by Our Situations
Undergraduatedmsdryn - Apr 5, 2021 / Holt - Apr 6, 2021
|For a happier tomorrow - The American University in Cairo essay
2 - You described what the university is best known for in relation to Psychology. You have not described how you...
UndergraduateOnoud - Mar 30, 2021 / Holt - Mar 31, 2021
|My Interest in Life Sciences - NUS Personal Statement
NEW - Hi, I need some help in cutting this essay down to 2000 characters and structuring it better. I also...
Undergraduaterebecca02_essays - Mar 29, 2021 / — -
|First time I wrote an essay - Questbridge: An experience that caused you to change your perspective
2 - It is not a "poor me" essay. Rather, it is a self-analysis that shows the reviewer how far you...
UndergraduatePocket Friend - Mar 21, 2021 / Holt - Mar 22, 2021
|Business Management course - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR UNIVERSITY PROGRAM AND SCHOLARSHIP
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your contribution. But as I am a high school student and I'm applying...
Undergraduatedothinganha - Mar 19, 2021 / dothinganha - Mar 20, 2021
|Ukrainian Student - AN EXCELLENT PARTICIPANT IN THE GLOBAL UGRAD PROGRAM
3 - That's definitely! You need to substantiate more about the effect on changes in the lives of the members of...
Undergraduatevalerija - Mar 9, 2021 / Blackrain - Mar 16, 2021
|I'm able to understand how far I can go and the effort that it requires; UGRAD Program participation
2 - This is the most community relevant aspect of your discussion. Yet, it fails to portray you in a...
UndergraduateDavidaguilark - Mar 13, 2021 / Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|Academic Goal and Study Plan - AMA+ Undergraduate Scholarship 2022
Undergraduatemiriyome - Mar 11, 2021 / miriyome - Mar 12, 2021
|Columbia SHP - interests and background in science and mathematics. Biology & Math is everywhere
2 - The explanation is direct to the point and simplistic in its approach. That, is where I see a problem...
Undergraduatevivi0627 - Mar 11, 2021 / Holt - Mar 11, 2021
|My thirst for knowledge - benefitting from study at American University in Cairo
2 - The question is, to me, forward thinking in presentation. How will you benefit from a university education is equivalent...
UndergraduateShazaMamdouh - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|UGRAD - I can resolve Georgia's internal and external problems
3 - @Holt Thanks for the answer,I already started fixing the said points by your advice,it really was dry and missing...
UndergraduateSeenBetterDes - Mar 8, 2021 / SeenBetterDes - Mar 9, 2021
|"Write Down Your Key Achievements"- GIST undergraduate admission. If possible, kindly help me out.
2 - A reviewer will read this presentation and realize that there is nothing special about you. What you consider achievements...
UndergraduateShakerin Aakash - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay
7 - With a limited number of characters, maybe you can answer more directly to what they ask so that you...
Undergraduateremy - Feb 10, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 5, 2021
|Own glass of lemonade. A REALIZATION THAT SPARKED A PERIOD OF PERSONAL GROWTH OR NEW UNDERSTANDING
2 - You are spreading yourself too thin in this essay. You only need one period of realization. The Lemon and...
Undergraduatenklinh2308 - Mar 4, 2021 / Holt - Mar 5, 2021
|College Supplementary Essay (Computer Science Major)
Undergraduateum2020 - Mar 1, 2021 / um2020 - Mar 1, 2021
|PERSONAL STATEMENT TO UNIVERSITY - BUSINESS AND MANAGEMENT
3 - @Holt The length of the required PS is from 1-3 pages and ahould include ( seft introduction, what motives...
Undergraduatenganhacindy - Feb 28, 2021 / nganhacindy - Mar 1, 2021
|'...feel the sweetness of life after struggling'; GKS Undergraduate application - personal statement
2 - The motivation factor being referred to in this case is not your motivation to study in Korea. Rather, it...
Undergraduatecarlaputri - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|Global UGRAD 2021. Describe a time when you encountered a conflict and how you handled it
3 - @Holt I'm working as a teacher part-time after completing an introductory teaching course provided by an online language school,...
Undergraduatedaryamkvchk - Feb 23, 2021 / daryamkvchk - Feb 25, 2021
|The natural world - Texas A&M College Station transfer essay prompt A
UndergraduateAtrox - Feb 23, 2021 / Atrox - Feb 25, 2021
|Canadian entrepreneurs - Waterloo AIF, first question of Part A
3 - When you're talking about future goals, you need to provide a more solid educational and working experience background to...
UndergraduateOlaMercedes - Feb 19, 2021 / Pradausa - Feb 22, 2021
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