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|Education is one of the most important aspects of life - GKS Undergraduate Personal Statement
Undergraduateaijia01 - Jun 15, 2021 / aijia01 - 2 days ago
|My blog - extracurricular activities essay - Undergrad College Application
3 - Merged: Sustainability in the fashion industry - Extracurricular activities essay Please briefly elaborate on one of your...
Undergraduatepeachyfrenchfry - Jun 5, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|"My notebooks" Personal statement for undergrad college application
3 - To me, this essay is really confusing. The different section of your notebooks that you're writing about do not...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 24, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|"The itch to understand" Personal statement college application - a topic of your choice
3 - This is overall a really good essay. The description about you being able to respond to various problems in...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 26, 2021 / peachyfrenchfry - Jun 7, 2021
|"My path to GS from running away from home" - Columbia General Studies Essay
4 - This is overall a really good essay in terms of describing where you come from and what you stand...
Undergraduatemaysol - May 18, 2021 / techmind20 - May 26, 2021
|"Questioning the answer" personal statement for undergrad college application
3 - Merged: "Not settling for the obvious explanation" Personal statement for undergrad college application So basically, I posted...
Undergraduatetechmind20 - May 22, 2021 / techmind20 - May 23, 2021
|Write about an unforgettable experience in your life. Could you give me comments on my paragraph?
6 - "But deep inside [...] elapsed really slow." These lines are really vague and do not properly convey what you...
Undergraduatetuitenkhoi2005 - May 16, 2021 / techmind20 - May 23, 2021
|UMD computer science - TRANSFER ESSAY
2 - You love your commas way too much. You may not think that proper punctuation matters in these essays, but,...
Undergraduateyogi0115 - May 13, 2021 / Holt - May 13, 2021
|Study plan for study permit for software engineering; comprehensive and competitive education system
2 - The study plan you present lacks a study focus based an research purposes in relation to career planning and...
UndergraduateSamantha1 - May 12, 2021 / Holt - May 13, 2021
|"I need to believe that extraordinary is possible." Personal statement about urban life
2 - You did not provide the writing instructions for this personal statement so I cannot be sure about how applicable...
UndergraduateRahim123 - May 8, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|Essay about "How did you get passionate about physics"
UndergraduatePain_4528 - Apr 27, 2021 / Pain_4528 - Apr 28, 2021
|Study plan for Canadian Study permit in Bachelors of Business Management
2 - You do not need to go overboard with information about your current university and other academic history in the...
UndergraduateWeedle18 - Apr 24, 2021 / Holt - Apr 25, 2021
|Essay on your dreams and how u plan on achieving them and future plans (KAIST Application UG)
3 - I suggest you think a bit more practical. First, try to identify the problems or shortcomings you would like...
UndergraduateMuhammad8870 - Apr 19, 2021 / miftahul - Apr 20, 2021
|[KGSP-U] Our Future is Determined by Our Reactions, Not by Our Situations
Undergraduatedmsdryn - Apr 5, 2021 / Holt - Apr 6, 2021
|For a happier tomorrow - The American University in Cairo essay
2 - You described what the university is best known for in relation to Psychology. You have not described how you...
UndergraduateOnoud - Mar 30, 2021 / Holt - Mar 31, 2021
|My Interest in Life Sciences - NUS Personal Statement
NEW - Hi, I need some help in cutting this essay down to 2000 characters and structuring it better. I also...
Undergraduaterebecca02_essays - Mar 29, 2021 / — -
|First time I wrote an essay - Questbridge: An experience that caused you to change your perspective
2 - It is not a "poor me" essay. Rather, it is a self-analysis that shows the reviewer how far you...
UndergraduatePocket Friend - Mar 21, 2021 / Holt - Mar 22, 2021
|Business Management course - STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR UNIVERSITY PROGRAM AND SCHOLARSHIP
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your contribution. But as I am a high school student and I'm applying...
Undergraduatedothinganha - Mar 19, 2021 / dothinganha - Mar 20, 2021
|Ukrainian Student - AN EXCELLENT PARTICIPANT IN THE GLOBAL UGRAD PROGRAM
3 - That's definitely! You need to substantiate more about the effect on changes in the lives of the members of...
Undergraduatevalerija - Mar 9, 2021 / Blackrain - Mar 16, 2021
|I'm able to understand how far I can go and the effort that it requires; UGRAD Program participation
2 - This is the most community relevant aspect of your discussion. Yet, it fails to portray you in a...
UndergraduateDavidaguilark - Mar 13, 2021 / Holt - Mar 14, 2021
|Academic Goal and Study Plan - AMA+ Undergraduate Scholarship 2022
Undergraduatemiriyome - Mar 11, 2021 / miriyome - Mar 12, 2021
|Columbia SHP - interests and background in science and mathematics. Biology & Math is everywhere
2 - The explanation is direct to the point and simplistic in its approach. That, is where I see a problem...
Undergraduatevivi0627 - Mar 11, 2021 / Holt - Mar 11, 2021
|My thirst for knowledge - benefitting from study at American University in Cairo
2 - The question is, to me, forward thinking in presentation. How will you benefit from a university education is equivalent...
UndergraduateShazaMamdouh - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|UGRAD - I can resolve Georgia's internal and external problems
3 - @Holt Thanks for the answer,I already started fixing the said points by your advice,it really was dry and missing...
UndergraduateSeenBetterDes - Mar 8, 2021 / SeenBetterDes - Mar 9, 2021
|"Write Down Your Key Achievements"- GIST undergraduate admission. If possible, kindly help me out.
2 - A reviewer will read this presentation and realize that there is nothing special about you. What you consider achievements...
UndergraduateShakerin Aakash - Mar 7, 2021 / Holt - Mar 8, 2021
|Application for the math program of the university of Waterloo - AIF form essay
7 - With a limited number of characters, maybe you can answer more directly to what they ask so that you...
Undergraduateremy - Feb 10, 2021 / Umbu Richy - Mar 5, 2021
|Own glass of lemonade. A REALIZATION THAT SPARKED A PERIOD OF PERSONAL GROWTH OR NEW UNDERSTANDING
2 - You are spreading yourself too thin in this essay. You only need one period of realization. The Lemon and...
Undergraduatenklinh2308 - Mar 4, 2021 / Holt - Mar 5, 2021
|College Supplementary Essay (Computer Science Major)
Undergraduateum2020 - Mar 1, 2021 / um2020 - Mar 1, 2021
|PERSONAL STATEMENT TO UNIVERSITY - BUSINESS AND MANAGEMENT
3 - @Holt The length of the required PS is from 1-3 pages and ahould include ( seft introduction, what motives...
Undergraduatenganhacindy - Feb 28, 2021 / nganhacindy - Mar 1, 2021
|'...feel the sweetness of life after struggling'; GKS Undergraduate application - personal statement
2 - The motivation factor being referred to in this case is not your motivation to study in Korea. Rather, it...
Undergraduatecarlaputri - Feb 28, 2021 / Holt - Feb 28, 2021
|Global UGRAD 2021. Describe a time when you encountered a conflict and how you handled it
3 - @Holt I'm working as a teacher part-time after completing an introductory teaching course provided by an online language school,...
Undergraduatedaryamkvchk - Feb 23, 2021 / daryamkvchk - Feb 25, 2021
|The natural world - Texas A&M College Station transfer essay prompt A
UndergraduateAtrox - Feb 23, 2021 / Atrox - Feb 25, 2021
|Canadian entrepreneurs - Waterloo AIF, first question of Part A
3 - When you're talking about future goals, you need to provide a more solid educational and working experience background to...
UndergraduateOlaMercedes - Feb 19, 2021 / Pradausa - Feb 22, 2021
|REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO - AIF form math (data science) essay
NEW - feel free to give any advices! Question 1: REASONS FOR CHOOSING YOUR PROGRAM AND WATERLOO (*REQUIRED) Please tell...
Undergraduatenasha123 - Feb 18, 2021 / — -
|Math, coop system - AIF-Reasons for Choosing The Programs
2 - You have to allot 300 characters per program. Revise the essay to clearly present your educational goal and Waterloo...
Undergraduateiwillbeaccepted - Feb 17, 2021 / Holt - Feb 17, 2021
|Reasons to choose Waterloo and mechanical engineering- Help with AIF
2 - Summarize your educational goals. It is too long. You should be able to better explain that within 2 sentences...
Undergraduatetroyswack - Feb 16, 2021 / Holt - Feb 17, 2021
|BIOMEDICAL SCIENCES - University of Waterloo AIF
4 - I believe that the reasons you give for the university of Waterloo are not specific enough and still fall...
Undergraduatehat2003 - Feb 14, 2021 / AeroSAE98 - Feb 15, 2021
|Interest in Engineering question for Waterloo
Undergraduateipuga - Feb 13, 2021 / ipuga - Feb 14, 2021
|Application Form: Provide any additional information about your High School science and math
2 - The last sentence is irrelevant. What you should have done was used a few of the word count to...
Undergraduateceleztina - Feb 12, 2021 / Holt - Feb 13, 2021
|Becoming a doctor while my trans girlfriend becomes a woman - transfer essay
2 - You covered most of the required elements in this discussion. While it is all compelling and up to date...
Undergraduatehaileybugj - Feb 10, 2021 / Holt - Feb 10, 2021
|The programming process - Q1 Waterloo AIF - "Why I applied to Waterloo Software Eng and Comp Sci"
2 - Since this is a character limited essay, you should not use irrelevant opening sentences such as the one you...
UndergraduatewannaB - Feb 9, 2021 / Holt - Feb 9, 2021
|Why to become a Sonographer?
2 - The first paragraph doesn't really focus on the needed content. The reviewer will not be interested in reading that...
Undergraduateelisalopezp01 - Feb 3, 2021 / Holt - Feb 3, 2021
|Maths/Comp Sci Waterloo AIF; discuss your interest in your chosen program(s)
2 - Your educational goals are quite impressive. However, your decision to enroll in Waterloo is commonplace. It does not carry...
UndergraduateBlazeKush - Jan 31, 2021 / Holt - Feb 1, 2021
|Second Bachelor's Statement for Linguistics - Flow and Cohesion
3 - @Holt, thank you very much for your feedback. I've reworked my essay using this as my base and am...
UndergraduateSchwa - Jan 27, 2021 / Schwa - Jan 31, 2021
|Educational Goals & Interests; Digital Media & Computer Science
2 - The presentation is clear and shows a definite interest in the individual programs as both individual courses and, a...
Undergraduatefreshmango - Jan 27, 2021 / Holt - Jan 27, 2021
|My Application Essay for Fashion School in New York
2 - You should definitely write more since you still have the space to do so. The essay was fantastic in...
Undergraduatefashionista28 - Jan 26, 2021 / Holt - Jan 26, 2021
|[PERSONAL STATEMENT KGSP-U] - I wonder if I'm being sentimental
4 - @Holt and @nhunggngu Thank you for taking the time to give some advices. I'm glad that I started early...
Undergraduateagusaefulloh - Jan 17, 2021 / agusaefulloh - Jan 23, 2021
|My education - Trinity College Supplemental Essay: How would you contribute?
3 - Hi @Holt, these are fantastic suggestions! I shall get working on them right away. Thank you for your help!...
UndergraduateRAJVEERSODHI - Jan 19, 2021 / RAJVEERSODHI - Jan 19, 2021
|Entering a software engineering programme but have no relevant background whatsoever.
2 - There is no exceptional achievement or impressive lesson learned in this presentation. These are normal and average on the...
Undergraduateimsmooth - Jan 19, 2021 / Holt - Jan 19, 2021
|Motivation Letter for Stipendium Hungaricum in Engineering field - Education is the key
3 - Hi there! Nice to know you. Dear @Holt, please excuse me, I'd like to add more feedbacks on this...
Undergraduateswitnaura - Jan 14, 2021 / yesayagm - Jan 15, 2021
|UBC PERSONAL PROFILE, WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU AND WHY? "Effort"
3 - Hi! I believe you have written a highly impressive response which is sure to reflect well on your application....
Undergraduatehighschoolstuden - Jan 14, 2021 / RAJVEERSODHI - Jan 15, 2021
|Academic objectives and indicate how these are appropriate to your long-range goals.
2 - Start off with the actual topic sentence. Reverse the presentation to kick - off with, "Being an avid technophile..."...
Undergraduatebetheguy - Jan 14, 2021 / Holt - Jan 15, 2021
|Health Studies Program [AIF] -University Of Waterloo Entrance
UndergraduateRosie Do - Jan 12, 2021 / Rosie Do - Jan 15, 2021
|Both my parents - UBC Draft - What is important to you?
6 - I think your short paragraph is really nice but you have to concentrate on the Subject. It requires "skill"...
Undergraduateparinitashetty - Dec 30, 2020 / chaodendinhmo128 - Jan 14, 2021
|Waterloo AIF Advice - What could I improve? Question about educational goals, interest in program...
2 - This is what they call a non-answer. At first glance, it appears that you are responding to the prompt....
Undergraduatepnksociety - Jan 13, 2021 / Holt - Jan 14, 2021
|Overcoming a static mindset
2 - You are 15 words over the limit without addressing any aspect of the prompt requirement. There is no reference...
Undergraduateavery33 - Jan 12, 2021 / Holt - Jan 13, 2021
|My independence and ability to materialize goals - Tell us about who you are
2 - You are focused only on your proudest achievement. You have not focused on the way that various people, based...
Undergraduatepantheraleo - Jan 12, 2021 / Holt - Jan 12, 2021
|"West Point caught my attention" - Transfer Essay Help
3 - This feels close to a question you'd get in a job interview. Advice I've always received was to answer...
UndergraduateADHopeful - Jan 9, 2021 / Callipyge - Jan 12, 2021
|The jigsaw puzzle of my dreams. Motivation letter to Stipendium Hungaricum Scholarship Program
UndergraduateMarinaJoan14 - Jan 9, 2021 / MarinaJoan14 - Jan 11, 2021
|DESCRIBE UP TO FIVE ACTIVITIES THAT YOU HAVE PURSUED OR ACCOMPLISHMENT ACHIEVED
2 - The first activity is something that falls under the "Achievement" classification of the prompt. This shows your potential as...
Undergraduateschoola - Jan 9, 2021 / Holt - Jan 10, 2021
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