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Please respond to one of the following quotations in an essay of not more than 300 words.
1. "Rigorous reasoning is crucial in mathematics, and insight plays an important secondary role these days. In the natural sciences, I would say that the order of these two virtues is reversed. Rigor is, of course, very important. But the most important value is insight-insight into the workings of the world. It may be because there is another guarantor of correctness in the sciences, namely, the empirical evidence from observation and experiments." Kannan Jagannathan, Professor of Physics, Amherst College
There has been a long time debate over whether the mathematical reasoning or empirical insight is more important to understand the Universe. To fire this argument further, Thomas Edison once said: "I can hire a mathematician but a mathematician cannot hire me." Although, it seemed that Edison downgraded math in its position necessary for Science, in fact I take it as the opposite. In his statement, Edison simply affirmed the need for mathematics in Scientific work.
I see the universe as a book. While reading this book, knowing about the elements in the Universe, their functions, and the harmony among these elements is the key to understanding the meaning of the life and universe. Math and Science are two core tools work collaboratively to reach this ultimate goal.
Take for example photosynthesis, the process that uses three elements: sunlight, carbon dioxide, and water. Science tries to answer the questions like:
"How could plants use these unconnected elements to produce oxygen, the most essential element for life?"
"How everything in the world, from photosynthesis to the water cycle, all work in a harmony?"
But then, to respond to these questions accurately a lot of math concepts and procedures such as "counting, calculating, measuring and analyzing" are being used to make sense out of collected data from observation and experiments.
Science goes with evidence; Math goes with proof. Science uses proven mathematical methods to reach its scientific evidence. Therefore, math and science always work together in harmony to understand the harmony in the universe.
Please respond to one of the following quotations in an essay of not more than 300 words.
1. "Rigorous reasoning is crucial in mathematics, and insight plays an important secondary role these days. In the natural sciences, I would say that the order of these two virtues is reversed. Rigor is, of course, very important. But the most important value is insight-insight into the workings of the world. It may be because there is another guarantor of correctness in the sciences, namely, the empirical evidence from observation and experiments." Kannan Jagannathan, Professor of Physics, Amherst College
the need for mathematics in the Scientific work
There has been a long time debate over whether the mathematical reasoning or empirical insight is more important to understand the Universe. To fire this argument further, Thomas Edison once said: "I can hire a mathematician but a mathematician cannot hire me." Although, it seemed that Edison downgraded math in its position necessary for Science, in fact I take it as the opposite. In his statement, Edison simply affirmed the need for mathematics in Scientific work.
I see the universe as a book. While reading this book, knowing about the elements in the Universe, their functions, and the harmony among these elements is the key to understanding the meaning of the life and universe. Math and Science are two core tools work collaboratively to reach this ultimate goal.
Take for example photosynthesis, the process that uses three elements: sunlight, carbon dioxide, and water. Science tries to answer the questions like:
"How could plants use these unconnected elements to produce oxygen, the most essential element for life?"
"How everything in the world, from photosynthesis to the water cycle, all work in a harmony?"
But then, to respond to these questions accurately a lot of math concepts and procedures such as "counting, calculating, measuring and analyzing" are being used to make sense out of collected data from observation and experiments.
Science goes with evidence; Math goes with proof. Science uses proven mathematical methods to reach its scientific evidence. Therefore, math and science always work together in harmony to understand the harmony in the universe.